中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2025外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
描写动物
写作题目
请以一名中学生的名义写一篇文章呼吁世界各地的中学生加入拯救大熊猫(the giant panda) 的行列。内容包括:
1.大熊猫是中国一种令人惊讶的动物,也是地球上最珍稀的动物之一,为世界人民所喜爱;
2.大熊猫生活在山里,以竹子为食,由于山林遭到破坏,竹子被砍伐,大熊猫寻找食物越来越困难;
3.我国已建立数个自然保护区来保护大熊猫,但需要更多的资金。
注意:
1.词数不少于80个;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.惊人的,了不起的
2. v.破坏,毁掉
3. v.活下来,幸存
4. v.创立,创建
5. n.措施
6. v.寻找,寻求
【答案】 1.amazing 2.destroy 3.survive 4.found 5.measure 6.seek
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段: 引入话题
(1)The giant panda is (一种令人惊讶的动物)in China, and it is also (最珍稀的动物之一)on earth.
第二段:具体介绍大熊猫的情况
(2)The giant panda lives in the mountains. It (以竹子为食).
(3)More and more forests (正遭到破坏)and most of the bamboo (已经被砍伐).
(4)It is becoming (越来越困难)for giant pandas to seek food for themselves.
(5) (为了使大熊猫生存), China (已经建立了)several nature reserves.
第三段:进行总结,呼吁人们保护大熊猫
(6)All in all, it's high time that we should (采取立即的措施)to protect giant pandas.
答案 (1)an amazing animal; one of the rarest animals (2)feeds on bamboo (3)are being destroyed; has been cut down (4)more and more difficult (5)To make giant pandas survive;has founded (6)take immediate measures
2.句式升级
(7)用not only...but also...改写句(1)
(8)把句(2)中的两个简单句合并成含有where引导的定语从句的主从复合句
(9)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有as引导的时间状语从句的主从复合句
答案 (7)The giant panda is not only an amazing animal in China, but also one of the rarest animals on earth. (8)The giant panda lives in the mountains, where it feeds on bamboo. (9)As more and more forests are being destroyed and most of the bamboo has been cut down, it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to seek food for themselves.
连句成篇
The giant panda is not only an amazing animal in China, but also one of the rarest animals on earth. It is loved by people all over the world.
The giant panda lives in the mountains, where it feeds on bamboo. As more and more forests are being destroyed and most of the bamboo has been cut down, it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to seek food for themselves. To make giant pandas survive, China has founded several nature reserves. But more money is needed to carry out this important rescue project.
All in all, it's high time that we should take immediate measures to protect giant pandas.
写作积累
1.It's well-known that a variety of endangered animals are dying out at an alarming rate.众所周知,许多濒危的动物正以惊人的速度消失。
2.With global temperature rising, polar bears' habitat is disappearing gradually.随着全球气温上升,北极熊的栖息地正在逐渐消失。
3.There is no doubt that if we keep cutting down the forests, the habitat of many animals will be destroyed.毫无疑问,如果我们继续砍伐森林,许多动物的栖息地将会被破坏。
4.It's high time that we took/should take action to protect endangered animals.该是我们采取行动保护濒危动物的时候了。
5.We should spare no effort to protect the natural habitats of animals.我们应该不遗余力地保护动物的自然栖息地。
6.Strict laws should be made to forbid people from hunting animals illegally.应该出台严格的法律,禁止人们非法猎杀动物。
实战演练 答案见P136
假设你是李华,英语课上老师要求你们用英语写一篇文章,介绍中国的珍稀保护动物——华南虎。请根据下面的表格,写一篇介绍华南虎的文章。
动物 华南虎(South China tiger)
特征 非常凶猛,雄性体重150千克左右,雌性体重120千克左右,尾部有黑斑
栖息地 中国的华南、华中和华东,但在野外已灭绝
食物 主要捕食野猪(wild boar)、水鹿(sambar)等
野外灭 绝的原因 栖息地的减少,人类的捕杀
现有的数目 还有200多只圈养华南虎
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写微写作
情景导入
请写一个语段,描述你在大雨中,偶然看见毛毛虫变成蝴蝶的过程及感想。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.动作描写
1. v.突然停止,呆住
2. v.凝视,盯着看
3. v.意外地遇见,与……邂逅 n.邂逅
Ⅱ.事物描写
4. n.毛虫(蝴蝶等昆虫的幼虫)
5. n.生物,动物
6. adj.惊人的,了不起的
7. adj.令人惊叹的
Ⅲ.心理描写
8. n.吃惊,震惊
Ⅳ.天气描写
9. 下倾盆大雨
答案 1.freeze 2.stare 3.encounter
4.caterpillar 5.creature 6.amazing
7.breathtaking 8.shock 9.rain cats and dogs
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.当我遇到这个了不起的生物时,正下着倾盆大雨。
It when I .
2.一只毛毛虫趴在一片黄叶上。
On a yellow leaf .
3.我凝视着它,看着它那颤抖的小身体努力脱去旧皮。
I as its small body trembled, fighting to shed its old skin.
4.令我震惊的是,它的皮肤开始一点点地裂开,一只色彩斑斓的蝴蝶从中挣脱而出。
, its skin began to split open little by little, with a colorful butterfly emerging from within.
5.当美丽的蝴蝶展开翅膀,准备第一次飞行进入生命的新篇章时,我呆住了。
I as the beautiful butterfly unfolded its wings, take its first flight into a new chapter of life.
6.这令人惊叹的场景让我联想到大自然的美丽和奇迹。
This the beauty and wonders of nature.
答案 1.was raining cats and dogs;encountered the amazing creature 2.lay a caterpillar
3.stared at it 4.To my shock 5.froze;ready to 6.breathtaking scene reminded me of
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案
It was raining cats and dogs when I encountered the amazing creature. On a yellow leaf lay a caterpillar. Then I stared at it as its small body trembled, fighting to shed its old skin. To my shock, its skin began to split open little by little, with a colorful butterfly emerging from within. I froze as the beautiful butterfly unfolded its wings, ready to take its first flight into a new chapter of life. This breathtaking scene reminded me of the beauty and wonders of nature.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The South China tiger is an endangered animal, whose habitat is in China, exactly speaking, in southern China, central China and eastern China.
The South China tiger is large and fierce. The male tiger can weigh about 150 kilograms and the female tiger about 120 kilograms. One of its main features is that its tail has black spots. They feed mainly on wild boars, sambars and so on. Now, there are just over 200 South China tigers in the reserve and those living in the wild has died out. The reduction of their habitats and people's hunting are the reason for their dying out.
1.重点词汇
①exactly speaking确切地说
②weigh v.有……重;重量为
③feature n.特点
④feed on 以……为食
⑤reduction n.减少,降低
⑥die out灭绝
2.亮点句型
①The South China tiger is an endangered animal, whose habitat is in China, exactly speaking, in southern China, central China and eastern China.(whose引导非限制性定语从句)华南虎是一种濒危动物,其栖息地在中国,确切地说,在华南、华中和华东。
②Now, there are just over 200 South China tigers in the reserve and those living in the wild has died out.(现在分词作后置定语)现在,保护区里只有200多只华南虎,那些生活在野外的已经灭绝了。
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