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2025译林版高中英语必修第二册
Part 4 Writing
建议信
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny是一名高一新生,她写信告诉你,她感觉高中生活很累。请你用英语给她回一封邮件,给出建议。内容包括:
1.合理饮食;
2.锻炼身体,积极参加课外活动;
3.调整心态。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to hear that you don’t feel very good as a freshman at senior high school.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.处境;位置;姿势;观点;地位
2. v.没有,缺乏,不足,短缺
3. adv.此外,而且
4. 长期
5. 持续,坚持
6. 弥补,补偿
答案 1.position 2.lack 3.moreover 4.over the long term 5.stick with 6.make up for
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明写信的目的
(1)I am writing to give you some advice on (如何迅速适应你的学校生活).
第二段:提出具体建议
(2)You can do something (来改变这种处境).
(3)I recommend that you (均衡饮食), and it can (弥补你缺少的营养).
(4) (经常锻炼) and (参加) after-school activities can relax your body and mind and keep you healthy. You should (坚持下去).
(5)It is important (保持积极) and over the long term, you will make more friends.
第三段:表达期待
(6)Hopefully, my advice will (对你有帮助).
答案 (1)how to adapt to your school life quickly (2)to change this position (3)should have a balanced diet;make up for the nutrients you lack (4)Working out regularly;taking part in;stick with it (5)to stay positive (6)be helpful to you
2.句式升级
(7)将句(2)改成含定语从句的there be句型
(8)将句(3)改成含非限制性定语从句的句子
(9)将句(6)改成含“be+of+名词”结构的句子
答案 (7)There is something that you can do to change this position.
(8)I recommend that you should have a balanced diet, which can make up for the nutrients you lack.
(9)Hopefully, my advice will be of help to you.
连句成篇
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to hear that you don’t feel very good as a freshman at senior high school. I am writing to give you some advice on how to adapt to your school life quickly.
There is something that you can do to change this position. Firstly, I recommend that you should have a balanced diet, which can make up for the nutrients you lack. Secondly, working out regularly and taking part in after-school activities can relax your body and mind and keep you healthy. You should stick with it. Moreover, it is important to stay positive and over the long term, you will make more friends.
Hopefully, my advice will be of help to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
(一)词汇
regular adj.有规律的,定时的;经常的
energetic adj.精力充沛的
strengthen v.增强
relieve v.解除;减轻
perseverance n.毅力
warm up 热身
speed up 加速
avoid injury 避免受伤
be in good health 健康状况良好
be beneficial to/for...对……有益
keep a healthy diet保持健康饮食
strike a balance between work and rest 劳逸结合
build up one’s body 强身健体
take regular exercise 经常锻炼
stick with physical activity 坚持体育活动
(二)句子
1.Playing sports is one of the best ways to keep us fit.做运动是让我们保持健康的最好的方法之一。
2.Life lies in movement, and sport gives us an opportunity to move.生命在于运动,体育运动给了我们活动的机会。
3.Physical exercise not only builds up our bodies but also helps us study more efficiently.体育锻炼不仅增强我们的体质,而且帮助我们更高效地学习。
4.When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people.当谈到保持健康时,做运动受到人们的普遍欢迎。
5.Only by keeping ourselves healthy can we feel energetic and confident in our study and work.只有通过保持健康,我们才能在我们的学习和工作中感到精力充沛和自信。
实战演练
(2024江苏省梅村高级中学月考)
假如你是李华,你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在汉语学习上遇到了一些困难,心情很沮丧。请你写封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议(不少于两点);
3.给予鼓励。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写微写作
情景导入
迈克是个游泳运动员,他习惯在比赛前吃冰激凌,在第一次、第二次大型比赛前都吃了冰激凌并且都得了第一名,他认为冰激凌是他的“幸运符”。可是他体重增加了,在后来的比赛中成绩一次不如一次,甚至成了最后一名。他妈妈建议他戒掉冰激凌,他的父亲每天陪他去跑步,结果,他的体重回归正常。本赛季的最后一场比赛来临,迈克不确定会发生什么。请根据提示写一个语段,描述迈克减肥后参加比赛的情况。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.情感描写
1. v.呼吸;呼出→ adj.目瞪口呆的
2. n.满意→ adj.满意的
3. v.激励,鼓舞;使产生(感觉或情感)→ adj.鼓舞人心的
Ⅱ.人物描写
4. n.精力;能量
5. v.伸展;伸出
6. n.汗水v.出汗,流汗
7. n.冠军,第一名
答案 1.breathe;breathless 2.satisfaction;satisfied 3.inspire;inspiring 4.energy 5.stretch 6.sweat 7.champion
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.当他跳入水中时,他踢着腿,尽可能地伸展双臂。
Diving into the water, he kicked his legs and as far as he could.
2.他精力充沛,干劲十足。
He and motivation.
3.由于担心落后,他感到紧张。
, he felt nervous.
4.他想起了自己所流的汗水和父亲鼓舞人心的微笑,这让他平静下来。
He thought of , which calmed him down.
5.他使出所有的力量冲向终点线。
He to dash to the finish line.
6.当迈克最终意识到他打破了纪录时,他简直目瞪口呆。
Mike as he finally realized he had broken the record.
7.他对结果感到非常满意。
He with the result./He with the result.
8.他知道他值得冠军的荣誉。
He knew he deserved .
答案 1.stretched his arms 2.was full of energy 3.Fearing/Worried to fall behind 4.his sweat and his father’s inspiring smile 5.gathered all his strength 6.was simply breathless 7.got a strong feeling of satisfaction; was very satisfied 8.the honor of the champion
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案 Diving into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. He was full of energy and motivation. But fearing to fall behind, he felt nervous. Luckily, he thought of his sweat and his father’s inspiring smile, which calmed him down. Quickly he gathered all his strength to dash to the finish line. Mike was simply breathless as he finally realized he had broken the record. He was very satisfied with the result. He knew he deserved the honor of the champion.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I’m sorry to hear you’ve encountered some setbacks in learning Chinese. I can totally relate to your feelings.
In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language. Therefore, Chinese TV series and movies are highly recommended. Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication. What’s more, if you read plenty of good Chinese articles, you will learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves and present information in an excellent way.
Hopefully, the advice will be helpful to you. Cheer up! I’m positive you’ll rise to all the challenges as long as you find the proper ways.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①encounter v.遭遇,遇到(尤指令人不快或困难的事)
②setback n.挫折,阻碍 ③relate to 理解 ④priority n.优先,优先权,重点 ⑤serve as 充当 ⑥motivation n.动力
2.亮点句型
①In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language.(give priority to 优先考虑;which引导非限制性定语从句)根据我的经验,应该优先考虑培养兴趣,这可以充当你学习第二语言的最大动力。
②Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.(“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)次要的是找一个语言伙伴,你可以通过和他的日常交流来提高你的汉语水平。
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