2025译林版高中英语必修第一册同步练习题--Unit 4 Part 4 Writing（含答案与解析）
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2025译林版高中英语必修第一册
Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
Part 4 Writing
对整形手术发表看法
写作题目
最近,社会上的整形医院越来越多,一些人,尤其是年轻人,热衷于整形手术。请你对此现象发表看法,并对自己的观点加以论证。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should young people have plastic surgery
Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society.
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.美,美丽;美人,美好的东西
2. n.影响
3. 整形手术
4. 此外
答案 1.beauty 2.effect 3.plastic surgery 4.in addition
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段: 引出整形手术的话题
(1)Some people, especially young people, (渴望接受) plastic surgery.
(2)In this regard, I want to (表达我的观点).
第二段:发表看法并对自己的观点加以论证
(3)I don t (赞同这一社会趋势) that young people go for plastic surgery.
(4)Plastic surgery deepens the bad effect of (以貌取人).
(5)The beautiful appearance of a person cannot (弥补)the lack of inner beauty.
第三段:表达希望
(6) I hope young people can (做慎重的决定) on plastic surgery.
答案 (1)are eager to have (2)express my views (3)agree with the social trend
(4)judging people by appearance (5)make up for (6)make a careful decision
2.句式升级
(7)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含原因状语从句的句子
(8)用no matter how将句(5)改写为主从复合句
答案 (7)I don t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance.
(8)No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
连句成篇
Should young people have plastic surgery
Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. Some people, especially young people, are eager to have plastic surgery. In this regard, I want to express my views.
I don t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance. In addition, according to the news about the death caused by plastic surgery in recent years, a large number of irregular plastic surgery hospitals in the society cannot guarantee the life safety. I think true beauty comes from the heart. No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
Therefore, I hope young people can make a careful decision on plastic surgery.
写作积累
表达观点的增分佳句
1.引出话题
①Recently the problem of...has been brought into focus. 最近……问题引起了关注。
②Recently our class has had a heated discussion about... 最近,我们班就……展开了热烈的讨论。
③Nowadays...has become a problem we have to face.现在……已成为我们不得不面对的问题。
2.发表看法并加以论证
①Every coin has two sides and...is no exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.事物都有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
②As the old saying goes,...老话说,……
③There are different opinions among people as to...Some people think that...关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
④Today...have brought a lot of harm to our daily life. First,... Second,... What makes things worse is that...现在……给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……其次,……使事情更为糟糕的是……
3.总结
①From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上讨论,我们可以有把握地得出结论……
②From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来,如果……会更好。
③In a word, it is not a good way to judge a person by appearance.总之,以貌取人不是一个好方法。
④In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, a person s appearance does not always reflect his character.在我看来/就我而言,一个人的外表并不总是反映他的性格。
实战演练1
(2023江苏苏州期中)
现如今,整形手术越来越受年轻人的欢迎。他们认为改善外表可以使他们增加自信。但是,整形手术有很多弊端:手术费用高、存在健康风险、整形效果不一定令人满意等。结论:年轻人没有必要接受整形手术,内在美比外在美更重要。
注意:
1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.
“Something is wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What s that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It s alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.
“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It s a killer whale—it s hurt. There s blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.
Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.
Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.
“Jack!Get in quickly,” shouted Tonya.
Jack swam to the boat as fast as he could. “I m going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.
As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.
Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let s go.”
The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.
“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ... She s not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She s in the water.”
They looked into the cold, dark water for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.
The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can t do any more. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let s sail to the town.”
Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha lay on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea.
Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.alive adj.活着的
2.get away from(得以)离开,脱身
3.wave n.波浪 v.挥手
4.be full of...充满……
5.think of想到;考虑到;关心
障碍词汇
1.sail v.(人)乘船航行
2.net n.网
3.fin n.(鱼的)鳍
4.cut n.伤口
5.life jacket救生衣
6.hit v.到达(某地);撞击
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:那时,Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一个人,十分恐惧,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鲸群救了→Tonya被虎鲸群带到近岸处。
第二段:Jack正沿着海滩走着,这时他突然看到有人向他挥手→Jack发现向他挥手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack说明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感谢→“Lucky”和其他虎鲸游向大海。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) vt.包围
(2) adj.害怕的
(3) 启程;出发
(4) 踏上
答案 (1)surround (2)frightened (3)set off/out (4)set foot on
2.完成句子
(5)Tonya (被冰冷的海水包围着), and she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(6)Tonya (发现自己正在升起) out of the sea.
(7) (令人惊讶的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and (有) some killer whales around her.
(8)Tonya set foot on the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and (紧紧地抱住她).
(9)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, (真诚地说), “Thank you, Lucky!”
答案
(5)was surrounded by the cold seawater
(6)found herself rising
(7)Surprisingly;there were
(8)hugged her tightly
(9)saying sincerely
3.句式升级
(10)用非谓语动词作状语改写句(5)
(11)用with的复合结构改写句(7)
(12)用the moment引导的时间状语从句改写句(8)
答案
(10)Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(11)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her.
(12)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.
连句成篇
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few moments ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat.
Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don t worry. I m fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.
写作积累
心理描写——乐观情绪
一、词汇
1.happy/glad/cheerful/delighted/pleased/joyful adj.高兴的,快乐的
2.positive adj.积极的
3.content/satisfied adj.满足的,满意的
4.optimistic adj.乐观的
5.excited adj.激动的,兴奋的
6.thrilled adj.非常兴奋的
7.pleasure/joy/delight n.愉快,快乐
8.be in a good mood 心情好
9.be over the moon 欣喜若狂
10.cheer up(使)振作起来,(使)高兴起来
二、句子
1.He brightened up and his face broke into a wide smile.
他高兴起来,脸上绽开灿烂的笑容。
2.All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.
在场的所有人都沉浸在欢乐的气氛中。
3.The sight filled her with childlike excitement.
这种情景令她像孩子般兴奋起来。
4.He was so excited that he could hardly contain himself.
他十分激动,几乎控制不住自己。
5.He rushed into the room, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.
他冲进房间,狂笑着,高兴地拍着手。
实战演练2
(2024湖南长沙第一中学入学考试)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the first and second grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but I just couldn t be very outgoing, even if I knew someone well. I was even quieter with strangers, so I wasn t very good at meeting new people. I was afraid that I would do or say something wrong.
So in our school s annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded(僻静的) corner to watch the performance alone. I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes.
One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me into her office and said, “Oh, Mary, you re great at memorizing things, and you have such a sweet personality. Perfect for Jenny!” But I bowed my head and dared not speak. The teacher saw this and then said, “Of course, plenty of girls would love the role, and I could find somebody else. But I hope you could try it for me. I had you in mind for Jenny while writing the play! If you really don t want to, I won t force you. It s your choice.”
My mind was spinning(快速旋转) faster than the windmill(风车) on the school playground. Mrs. Sally, whom I loved and admired, wanted me to play this role. She believed in me. My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before. It showed a shooting star and read, “If you reach for the stars, you might at least grab a piece of the moon.” I looked into Mrs. Sally s shining blue eyes and said, “Okay, I ll try.” I realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was.
In the following five months, the teacher taught me how to put on make-up, memorize lines, create costumes and so on. Gradually, I mastered(掌握) my lines and songs.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
The big day came at last.
At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
Part 4 Writing
实战演练1
One possible version:
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
Nowadays,plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people,because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.
However,there is no doubt that it has many disadvantages. First of all, plastic surgery is very expensive. In addition,any kind of surgery carries potential health risk. Plastic surgery is no exception. Finally, people might not get satisfactory results from it. After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
In conclusion,there is no need for young people to have plastic surgery. Inner beauty is more important than external beauty.
1.重点词汇
①in addition另外 ②satisfactory adj.令人满意的;够好的;可以的 ③after all毕竟,终究 ④make sure确保 ⑤in conclusion总之
2.亮点句型
①Nowadays, plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people, because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.(because引导原因状语从句;动词believe后是宾语从句)如今,整形手术在年轻人中越来越流行,因为他们相信可以通过改善外貌来增加自信。
②After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.(that引导宾语从句;what引导表语从句)毕竟,没有人能保证整形手术的结果正是患者期望的样子。
实战演练2
写作指导
情节线 情感线
故事要素 Time in the first and second grades;one day in the third grade;in the following five months 害羞 胆怯 下定决心 充满信心/紧张 紧张不安 冷静 幸福
Place in Mrs. Sally s office
Character Mrs. Sally and I
情节 Period 1 在一年级和二年级时,作者非常害羞,在学校一年一度的盛大演出中,她通常会独自坐在一个僻静的角落里观看演出。
Period 2 三年级的一天,作者喜爱和钦佩的Sally老师认为作者很适合演一部剧中的Jenny这一角色,希望作者参加演出。作者犹豫过后决定甩掉害羞的面具,向全世界展示真正的自己。
Period 3 在接下来的五个月里,老师教作者化妆、记台词、制作戏装等。渐渐地,她掌握了台词和歌曲。
续写方向 Para. 1 The big day came at last. ①现场是什么样的 ②作者上台之前的心情是如何变化的
Para. 2 At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. ①Sally老师注意到了作者的紧张,她是如何鼓励作者的 ②作者能否成功地完成演出,感受如何
One possible version:
The big day came at last. I jogged all the way to the school hall. The stage was lit by bright spotlights in all directions. Looking back on five months of practice, I seemed to have confidence in myself. I found a new person inside me, a daring and outgoing person who had been hidden all along. However, when I was about to go on stage, my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
At that time,Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. “It doesn t matter how you do tonight,” she said. “You ve already shown how wonderful you are.” Her warm words were like a ray of sunshine. I calmed down and then walked onto the stage. When I finished my performance, the audience burst into applause. The scene made me feel myself floating in an ocean of happiness. I knew that all this was due to the encouragement from my teacher, who helped me find the confidence to succeed.
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2025译林版高中英语必修第一册
Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
Part 4 Writing
对整形手术发表看法
写作题目
最近,社会上的整形医院越来越多,一些人,尤其是年轻人,热衷于整形手术。请你对此现象发表看法,并对自己的观点加以论证。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should young people have plastic surgery
Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society.
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.美,美丽;美人,美好的东西
2. n.影响
3. 整形手术
4. 此外
答案 1.beauty 2.effect 3.plastic surgery 4.in addition
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段: 引出整形手术的话题
(1)Some people, especially young people, (渴望接受) plastic surgery.
(2)In this regard, I want to (表达我的观点).
第二段:发表看法并对自己的观点加以论证
(3)I don t (赞同这一社会趋势) that young people go for plastic surgery.
(4)Plastic surgery deepens the bad effect of (以貌取人).
(5)The beautiful appearance of a person cannot (弥补)the lack of inner beauty.
第三段:表达希望
(6) I hope young people can (做慎重的决定) on plastic surgery.
答案 (1)are eager to have (2)express my views (3)agree with the social trend
(4)judging people by appearance (5)make up for (6)make a careful decision
2.句式升级
(7)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含原因状语从句的句子
(8)用no matter how将句(5)改写为主从复合句
答案 (7)I don t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance.
(8)No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
连句成篇
Should young people have plastic surgery
Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. Some people, especially young people, are eager to have plastic surgery. In this regard, I want to express my views.
I don t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance. In addition, according to the news about the death caused by plastic surgery in recent years, a large number of irregular plastic surgery hospitals in the society cannot guarantee the life safety. I think true beauty comes from the heart. No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
Therefore, I hope young people can make a careful decision on plastic surgery.
写作积累
表达观点的增分佳句
1.引出话题
①Recently the problem of...has been brought into focus. 最近……问题引起了关注。
②Recently our class has had a heated discussion about... 最近,我们班就……展开了热烈的讨论。
③Nowadays...has become a problem we have to face.现在……已成为我们不得不面对的问题。
2.发表看法并加以论证
①Every coin has two sides and...is no exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.事物都有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
②As the old saying goes,...老话说,……
③There are different opinions among people as to...Some people think that...关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
④Today...have brought a lot of harm to our daily life. First,... Second,... What makes things worse is that...现在……给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……其次,……使事情更为糟糕的是……
3.总结
①From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上讨论,我们可以有把握地得出结论……
②From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来,如果……会更好。
③In a word, it is not a good way to judge a person by appearance.总之,以貌取人不是一个好方法。
④In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, a person s appearance does not always reflect his character.在我看来/就我而言,一个人的外表并不总是反映他的性格。
实战演练1
(2023江苏苏州期中)
现如今,整形手术越来越受年轻人的欢迎。他们认为改善外表可以使他们增加自信。但是,整形手术有很多弊端:手术费用高、存在健康风险、整形效果不一定令人满意等。结论:年轻人没有必要接受整形手术,内在美比外在美更重要。
注意:
1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.
“Something is wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What s that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It s alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.
“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It s a killer whale—it s hurt. There s blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.
Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.
Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.
“Jack!Get in quickly,” shouted Tonya.
Jack swam to the boat as fast as he could. “I m going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.
As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.
Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let s go.”
The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.
“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ... She s not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She s in the water.”
They looked into the cold, dark water for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.
The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can t do any more. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let s sail to the town.”
Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha lay on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea.
Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.alive adj.活着的
2.get away from(得以)离开,脱身
3.wave n.波浪 v.挥手
4.be full of...充满……
5.think of想到;考虑到;关心
障碍词汇
1.sail v.(人)乘船航行
2.net n.网
3.fin n.(鱼的)鳍
4.cut n.伤口
5.life jacket救生衣
6.hit v.到达(某地);撞击
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:那时,Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一个人,十分恐惧,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鲸群救了→Tonya被虎鲸群带到近岸处。
第二段:Jack正沿着海滩走着,这时他突然看到有人向他挥手→Jack发现向他挥手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack说明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感谢→“Lucky”和其他虎鲸游向大海。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) vt.包围
(2) adj.害怕的
(3) 启程;出发
(4) 踏上
答案 (1)surround (2)frightened (3)set off/out (4)set foot on
2.完成句子
(5)Tonya (被冰冷的海水包围着), and she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(6)Tonya (发现自己正在升起) out of the sea.
(7) (令人惊讶的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and (有) some killer whales around her.
(8)Tonya set foot on the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and (紧紧地抱住她).
(9)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, (真诚地说), “Thank you, Lucky!”
答案
(5)was surrounded by the cold seawater
(6)found herself rising
(7)Surprisingly;there were
(8)hugged her tightly
(9)saying sincerely
3.句式升级
(10)用非谓语动词作状语改写句(5)
(11)用with的复合结构改写句(7)
(12)用the moment引导的时间状语从句改写句(8)
答案
(10)Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(11)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her.
(12)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.
连句成篇
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few moments ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat.
Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don t worry. I m fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.
写作积累
心理描写——乐观情绪
一、词汇
1.happy/glad/cheerful/delighted/pleased/joyful adj.高兴的,快乐的
2.positive adj.积极的
3.content/satisfied adj.满足的,满意的
4.optimistic adj.乐观的
5.excited adj.激动的,兴奋的
6.thrilled adj.非常兴奋的
7.pleasure/joy/delight n.愉快,快乐
8.be in a good mood 心情好
9.be over the moon 欣喜若狂
10.cheer up(使)振作起来,(使)高兴起来
二、句子
1.He brightened up and his face broke into a wide smile.
他高兴起来,脸上绽开灿烂的笑容。
2.All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.
在场的所有人都沉浸在欢乐的气氛中。
3.The sight filled her with childlike excitement.
这种情景令她像孩子般兴奋起来。
4.He was so excited that he could hardly contain himself.
他十分激动,几乎控制不住自己。
5.He rushed into the room, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.
他冲进房间,狂笑着,高兴地拍着手。
实战演练2
(2024湖南长沙第一中学入学考试)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the first and second grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but I just couldn t be very outgoing, even if I knew someone well. I was even quieter with strangers, so I wasn t very good at meeting new people. I was afraid that I would do or say something wrong.
So in our school s annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded(僻静的) corner to watch the performance alone. I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes.
One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me into her office and said, “Oh, Mary, you re great at memorizing things, and you have such a sweet personality. Perfect for Jenny!” But I bowed my head and dared not speak. The teacher saw this and then said, “Of course, plenty of girls would love the role, and I could find somebody else. But I hope you could try it for me. I had you in mind for Jenny while writing the play! If you really don t want to, I won t force you. It s your choice.”
My mind was spinning(快速旋转) faster than the windmill(风车) on the school playground. Mrs. Sally, whom I loved and admired, wanted me to play this role. She believed in me. My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before. It showed a shooting star and read, “If you reach for the stars, you might at least grab a piece of the moon.” I looked into Mrs. Sally s shining blue eyes and said, “Okay, I ll try.” I realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was.
In the following five months, the teacher taught me how to put on make-up, memorize lines, create costumes and so on. Gradually, I mastered(掌握) my lines and songs.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
The big day came at last.
At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
Part 4 Writing
实战演练1
One possible version:
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
Nowadays,plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people,because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.
However,there is no doubt that it has many disadvantages. First of all, plastic surgery is very expensive. In addition,any kind of surgery carries potential health risk. Plastic surgery is no exception. Finally, people might not get satisfactory results from it. After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
In conclusion,there is no need for young people to have plastic surgery. Inner beauty is more important than external beauty.
1.重点词汇
①in addition另外 ②satisfactory adj.令人满意的;够好的;可以的 ③after all毕竟,终究 ④make sure确保 ⑤in conclusion总之
2.亮点句型
①Nowadays, plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people, because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.(because引导原因状语从句;动词believe后是宾语从句)如今,整形手术在年轻人中越来越流行,因为他们相信可以通过改善外貌来增加自信。
②After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.(that引导宾语从句;what引导表语从句)毕竟,没有人能保证整形手术的结果正是患者期望的样子。
实战演练2
写作指导
情节线 情感线
故事要素 Time in the first and second grades;one day in the third grade;in the following five months 害羞 胆怯 下定决心 充满信心/紧张 紧张不安 冷静 幸福
Place in Mrs. Sally s office
Character Mrs. Sally and I
情节 Period 1 在一年级和二年级时,作者非常害羞,在学校一年一度的盛大演出中,她通常会独自坐在一个僻静的角落里观看演出。
Period 2 三年级的一天,作者喜爱和钦佩的Sally老师认为作者很适合演一部剧中的Jenny这一角色,希望作者参加演出。作者犹豫过后决定甩掉害羞的面具,向全世界展示真正的自己。
Period 3 在接下来的五个月里,老师教作者化妆、记台词、制作戏装等。渐渐地,她掌握了台词和歌曲。
续写方向 Para. 1 The big day came at last. ①现场是什么样的 ②作者上台之前的心情是如何变化的
Para. 2 At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. ①Sally老师注意到了作者的紧张,她是如何鼓励作者的 ②作者能否成功地完成演出,感受如何
One possible version:
The big day came at last. I jogged all the way to the school hall. The stage was lit by bright spotlights in all directions. Looking back on five months of practice, I seemed to have confidence in myself. I found a new person inside me, a daring and outgoing person who had been hidden all along. However, when I was about to go on stage, my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
At that time,Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. “It doesn t matter how you do tonight,” she said. “You ve already shown how wonderful you are.” Her warm words were like a ray of sunshine. I calmed down and then walked onto the stage. When I finished my performance, the audience burst into applause. The scene made me feel myself floating in an ocean of happiness. I knew that all this was due to the encouragement from my teacher, who helped me find the confidence to succeed.
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