中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2025译林版高中英语必修第一册
Unit 1 Back to school
Part 4 Writing
学校俱乐部
写作题目
为了丰富同学们的课外活动,校学生会决定成立一个骑行俱乐部(cycling club)。假如你是学生会主席,请根据以下提示,用英语写一份书面通知。
1.俱乐部提供每周一次的基础训练,有老师指导;
2.参加俱乐部的好处(内容自拟);
3.注意事项:器材自备,活动免费;
4.如何加入俱乐部:9月20日前到5号楼6层602室报名。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.通知应包括以上所有信息;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
NOTICE
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. v.改善
2. n.机会,时机
答案 1.improve 2.opportunity
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍骑行俱乐部的成立及其好处
(1)The students union wants our school life (更加丰富多彩), and therefore has decided to (成立) a cycling club.
(2)The cycling club will
(提供基础训练) once a week under the guidance of teachers.
(3)The ideal opportunity will help you (改善身心健康).
第二段:介绍加入骑行俱乐部的方式和注意事项
(4)So, if you (对我们俱乐部感兴趣), don t hesitate to come to sign up in Room 602, 6th Floor, Building 5 before September 20.
(5)Activities in our club are (免费), but you have to get the equipment ready by yourself.
第三段:呼吁同学们加入骑行俱乐部
(6) (加入我们) now!
答案 (1)to be more colorful;set up
offer basic training (3)improve both physical and mental health
(4)are interested in our club (5)free of charge (6)Join us
2.句式升级
(7)用in order to和make的复合结构改写句(1)
(8)把句(7)和句(2)合并成含有定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (7)In order to make our school life more colorful, the students union has decided to set up a cycling club.
(8)In order to make our school life more colorful, the students union has decided to set up a cycling club, which will offer basic training once a week under the guidance of teachers.
连句成篇
NOTICE
In order to make our school life more colorful, the students union has decided to set up a cycling club, which will offer basic training once a week under the guidance of teachers. The ideal opportunity will help you improve both physical and mental health.
So, if you are interested in our club, don t hesitate to come to sign up in Room 602, 6th Floor, Building 5 before September 20. By the way, activities in our club are free of charge, but you have to get the equipment ready by yourself.
Join us now!
The Students Union
写作积累
关于学校活动通知的增分佳句
1.开头:表明目的
①In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school will organize...旨在鼓励学生进行户外运动,我校将组织……
②Aimed at helping more students get interested in..., our school will...旨在帮助更多的学生对……产生兴趣,我们学校将……
2.主体:活动内容及好处
①The event will be held in the playground from...o clock to...o clock.本次活动将于……点到……点在操场上举行。
②We usually organize activities from eight o clock to ten o clock on Saturday mornings.我们通常在星期六上午8点到10点组织活动。
③Not only can the activity broaden our minds, but it also improves our taste.这次活动不仅可以拓宽我们的思路,而且提高我们的品味。
3.结尾:加入方式并呼吁同学们加入
①If you want to join the club, please fill in the form presented to you and give it to me before...If you need any help, please don t hesitate to contact me.如果你想加入俱乐部,请填写给你的表格,并在……前交给我。如果你需要任何帮助,请尽管与我联系。
②You can visit our school website and sign up online. Meanwhile, you can turn to the students union for the same purpose. The deadline is...So don t miss it.你可以访问我们学校的网站并在线报名。同时,你也可以向学生会求助。截止日期是……所以不要错过它。
③The club is open to whoever is interested in..., but remember to send your application form to the office by...俱乐部对任何对……感兴趣的人开放,但记得把你的申请表在……之前寄到办公室。
实战演练
(2023河北期中)
假定你是太极拳(tai chi)俱乐部的负责人李华,请给对太极拳感兴趣的交换生好友Martin写一封邮件,邀请他加入该俱乐部,内容包括:
1.太极拳和俱乐部简介;
2.练习太极拳的好处;
3.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Martin,
I m writing to invite you to join our school s Tai Chi Club.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 1 Back to school
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Martin,
I m writing to invite you to join our school s Tai Chi Club. It is known that tai chi originates from traditional Chinese culture,which is famous for its graceful movements. Not only is it an ancient martial art but it is also an effective way of keeping fit. In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school set up Tai Chi Club three years ago. We usually organize activities from eight o clock to ten o clock on Saturday mornings. If you want to join the club, please fill in the form presented to you and give it to me before November 27. If you need any help, please don t hesitate to contact me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①originate v.起源 ②movement n.运动,转动;活动;移动 ③effective adj.有效的 ④encourage v.鼓励
⑤hesitate v.犹豫
2.亮点句型
①It is known that tai chi originates from traditional Chinese culture,which is famous for its graceful movements.(that引导主语从句,It作形式主语;which引导非限制性定语从句)众所周知,太极拳起源于中国传统文化,以其优美的动作而闻名。
②Not only is it an ancient martial art but it is also an effective way of keeping fit.(not only...but also...连接两个并列分句,部分倒装)它不仅是一种古老的武术,也是一种保持健康的有效方式。
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