中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2025译林版高中英语必修第一册
Unit 2 Let s talk teens
Part 4 Writing
亲子关系
写作题目
假设你是中学生李华,你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.提出建议并说明理由;
3.表达美好的祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Rebecca,
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.忧虑的,担心的
2. n.担心,忧虑,关心
3. 与某人看法一致
4. 从某人的角度、观点出发
答案 1.anxious 2.concern 3.see eye to eye with sb. 4.from one s point of view
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明写信的目的
(1)I (为你担心) when receiving your letter.
(2)The letter says that you re suffering from (紧张的关系) with your parents.
第二段:提出建议并给出理由
(3)You d better (经常和你的父母交谈), explaining your actions and feelings calmly, listening carefully and (设法解决他们的担忧).
(4)When you can t (与他们看法一致), remember to put yourself in your parents shoes.
(5)It will help you understand the situation (从他们的角度).
第三段:表达美好的祝愿
(6)I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will (结果都会好的) in the end.
答案 (1)am anxious for you (2)a tense relationship (3)talk to your parents regularly;addressing their concerns (4)see eye to eye with them (5)from their point of view (6)turn out all right
2.句式升级
(7)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有现在分词短语的句子
(8)用非限制性定语从句合并句(4)和句(5)
答案
(7) I m anxious for you when receiving your letter saying that you re suffering from a tense relationship with your parents.
(8)When you can t see eye to eye with them, remember to put yourself in your parents shoes, which will help you understand the situation from their point of view.
连句成篇
Dear Rebecca,
I m anxious for you when receiving your letter saying that you re suffering from a tense relationship with your parents. Here is my personal advice on how to improve it.
Firstly, you d better talk to your parents regularly, explaining your actions and feelings calmly, listening carefully and addressing their concerns. Besides, when you can t see eye to eye with them, remember to put yourself in your parents shoes, which will help you understand the situation from their point of view.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于建议信的增分佳句
1.开头:写信的目的
①I m sorry to hear that...because they are concerned that it will influence your study.However, this problem can be solved with the following tips.听到……我很难过,因为他们担心这会影响你的学习。然而,这个问题可以通过以下建议来解决。
②I m really sorry to hear that you...The following tips might help you.听到你……我真的很难过。下面的建议可能会对你有所帮助。
③Here is my opinion on...以下是我对……的观点。
2.主体:提出建议并说明理由
①To begin with, tell them you will do the voluntary work in your spare time, which won t affect your study.首先,告诉他们你会在业余时间做志愿工作,这不会影响你的学习。
②Besides, it s a good chance to communicate with more people, thus helping you...此外,这是一个与更多的人交流的好机会,从而帮助你……
③Frankly speaking, the greatest problem is...To resolve the problem, never should you...坦率地说,最大的问题是……为了解决这个问题,你永远不应该……
④You do need the support and love from your parents—after all, you are still a teenager.你确实需要父母的支持和爱,毕竟你还是个青少年。
⑤Talk to your parents sincerely and tell them you are in need of their love, which can help you get rid of loneliness and stress.真诚地和你的父母交谈,告诉他们你需要他们的爱,这可以帮助你摆脱孤独和压力。
3.结尾:表达美好的祝愿
①I hope my advice will be of some help to you.我希望我的建议能对你有些帮助。
②I hope everything goes well with you.我希望你一切顺利。
③All in all, I hope you can understand that the process of growing up will eventually end in a good way!总而言之,我希望你能理解,成长的过程最终会以一个好的方式结束!
实战演练
(2024江苏南京市金陵中学河西分校月考)
假定你是李华,最近你的朋友Sean在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不好,来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.安慰朋友;
2.提出改善家庭关系的建议。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写微写作
情景导入
你和父亲因为毕业旅行的问题起了争执,你离家出走,请根据提示写一个语段,描述你当时从气愤到冷静的心情转变过程。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.情感描写
1. adj.忧虑的,担心的
2. n.怒气,怒火
3. n.& vt.渴望,希望
4. n.担心,忧虑;关心
5. (使)平静,镇静,安静
Ⅱ.动作描写
6. n.争吵,争论
7. vi.& vt.奋斗;斗争;搏斗
8. 从某人的角度、观点出发
9. 充分考虑,全盘考虑,想透
答案 1.anxious 2.anger 3.desire
4.concern 5.calm down 6.argument
7.struggle 8.from one s point of view
9.think sth. through
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.昨天,我和父亲就我去毕业旅行的梦想进行了一次激烈的争论。
I with my father about my dream of going on a graduation trip yesterday.
2.被愤怒蒙蔽了双眼,我冲出房子,想尽可能远离父亲。
, I rushed out of the house and to keep away from my father as far as possible.
3.我在街上漫无目的地走着,努力使自己平静下来。
I walked aimlessly in the street and .
4.我仔细考虑了一下这件事,从我父亲的角度来看,也许他为我的安全担心。
I ; , perhaps he my safety.
5.我应该回家和他开诚布公地谈一谈,解决他的担忧。
I should go back home and have an open and honest conversation with him, .
答案 1.had a heated argument 2.Blind with anger; had a desire 3.struggled to calm myself down 4.thought it through; from my father s point of view;was anxious about
5.addressing his concerns
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案
I had a heated argument with my father about my dream of going on a graduation trip yesterday. Blind with anger, I rushed out of the house and had a desire to keep away from my father as far as possible. I walked aimlessly in the street and struggled to calm myself down. After a while,I thought it through; from my father s point of view, perhaps he was anxious about my safety. I should go back home and have an open and honest conversation with him, addressing his concerns.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 2 Let s talk teens
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Sean,
I m sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents. I know how you feel since I once had similar problems. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.
First, let s put ourselves in their shoes, because parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often need a listening ear and an open heart, not a solution. So, what you need to do is tell them about these differences and put your trust in them.
I hope these suggestions will help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①put oneself in one s shoes设身处地 ②obvious adj.明显的,显然的 ③solution n.解决办法
2.亮点句型
①First, let s put ourselves in their shoes, because parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.(because引导原因状语从句;that引导定语从句)首先,让我们设身处地从他们的角度想想,因为父母爱我们,经常试图不让我们犯在他们看来似乎显而易见的错误。
②So,what you need to do is tell them about these differences and put your trust in them.(what引导主语从句)所以,你要做的就是告诉他们这些区别,并相信他们。
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