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2025译林版高中英语必修第一册
Unit 3 Getting along with others
Part 4 Writing
描述好朋友的品质
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的笔友Jack来信询问你“什么是好朋友”,请你给他回一封信,内容包括:
1.你对好朋友的看法;
2.好朋友应具备的品质。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.素质,品德
2. adv.实际上;真正地
3. 不顾艰难险阻,同甘共苦
4. 在某人看来
答案 1.quality 2.indeed 3.through thick and thin 4.in one s opinion
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:对好朋友的看法
(1)To make friends is easy, but (交到好朋友)is not easy.
(2)The concept of a good friend (因人而异).
(3) (依我看), a good friend should have the following (基本品质).
第二段:好朋友应具备的品质
(4)Good friends should (对……坦诚) each other.
(5)Good friends should (互相帮助) if they are in trouble.
(6) (正如谚语所说), a friend in need is a friend indeed.
(7)Anyone (能与你一起的)through thick and thin must be your good friend.
答案 (1)to make good ones (2)varies from person to person (3)In my opinion; basic qualities (4)be honest with (5)help each other (6)As the saying goes (7)who can be with you
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)改为含形式主语it的句子
(9)用whoever引导主语从句改写句(7)
答案 (8)It is easy to make friends, but not easy to make good ones.
(9) Whoever can be with you through thick and thin must be your good friend.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
It is easy to make friends, but not easy to make good ones. Of course, the concept of a good friend varies from person to person. In my opinion, a good friend should have the following basic qualities.
First, good friends should be honest with each other. Second, good friends should help each other if they are in trouble. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Third, whoever can be with you through thick and thin must be your good friend.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于描写好朋友的增分素材
一、描写好朋友的词汇
①considerate adj.体贴的
②benefit v.使受益;得益于n.益处;好处
③harmonious adj.和谐的;和睦的
④trust each other相互信任
⑤take...seriously认真对待……
⑥turn to sb. for help求助于某人
⑦think highly/much of...对……评价高
⑧share joys and sorrows分享快乐与悲伤
二、描写好朋友的句子
1.对好朋友的看法
①A good friend is one of the most important parts of everyone s life.好朋友是每个人一生中最重要的部分之一。
②A good friend is like the sun in the sky, and it lights up our life.好朋友就像天上的太阳,它照亮了我们的生命。
③We need friends to share our joys and sorrows, otherwise we would feel lonely.我们需要朋友分享我们的欢乐和悲伤,否则我们会感到孤独。
④As far as I am concerned, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other, which can stand the test of time.就我而言,真正的友谊很大程度上是以相互支持为基础的,这可以经得起时间的考验。
⑤We should lend a helping hand when our friends are in need, and only in this way can we maintain friendships.当我们的朋友需要帮助时,我们应该伸出援助之手,只有这样我们才能保持友谊。
2.好朋友应具备的品质
①A good friend is someone who respects us and who we respect.好朋友是尊重我们和我们尊重的人。
②True friends are those who never desert us even when we are in trouble.真正的朋友是那些即使我们有困难也决不会抛弃我们的人。
③True friends offer us sincere and selfless help, even at the cost of their own interests.真正的朋友真诚无私地帮助我们,甚至不惜牺牲自己的利益。
实战演练
(2022黑龙江漠河市高级中学月考)
进入高中,你是否想结交好朋友 你认为好朋友应该具有什么样的品质 如何才能和同学成为好朋友 请以“What Makes A Good Friend ”为题,写一篇文章,阐述你的观点。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
What Makes A Good Friend
读后续写微写作
情景导入
你因没有守时而准备向朋友李萍当面道歉,请根据提示写一个语段,描述你当时忐忑不安的心情。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.情感描写
1. adj.紧张的;令人尴尬的
Ⅱ.人物描写
2. adj.宽宏大量的,仁慈的
Ⅲ.动作描写
3. n.看见;视野;视力
4. v.道歉
5. n.安慰 v.宽慰,安慰
6. v.承认,意识到
答案 1.awkward 2.generous 3.sight 4.apologize 5.comfort 6.recognize
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.我双手放在胸前,默默地等待着。
I waited with my hands on my chest.
2.我已经意识到我该为不守时向她道歉,但我不知道她是否会原谅我。
I have recognized I should not being punctual, but I wondered if she would forgive me.
3.我觉得有点紧张,(心里)充满了愧疚。
I , filled with guilt.
4.就在那时,李萍微笑着朝我走来。
At that moment, Li Ping .
5.一看见她,我松了口气。
, I breathed a sigh of relief.
6.她很宽容,这对我来说是极大的安慰。
for me that she was generous.
答案 1.in silence 2.apologize to her for 3.felt a little awkward 4.walked towards me with a smile 5.At the sight of her 6.It was a great comfort
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案 I waited in silence with my hands on my chest. I recognized I should apologize to her for not being punctual, but I wondered if she would forgive me. I felt a little awkward, filled with guilt. At that moment, Li Ping walked towards me with a smile and at the sight of her, I breathed a sigh of relief. It was a great comfort for me that she was generous.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 3 Getting along with others
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
What Makes A Good Friend
A good friend is like the sun, without which our life would be dark and cold. How can we develop deep friendships with others
In my opinion, what matters most in making good friends are honesty and trust. If you share your secret with a friend who will tell it to others, I can t imagine you can be friends with such a person for long. In addition, understanding also plays an important role in keeping a deep friendship. Last but not least, tolerance is also of great importance. When our good friends make mistakes, we should be generous, because saints are not perfect, let alone ordinary people.
Keep these in mind, and you will find yourself surrounded by good friends wherever you go.
1.重点词汇
①in addition另外 ②play an important role in在……方面起重要作用 ③be of great importance很重要 ④let alone更不用说 ⑤keep in mind记住
2.亮点句型
①A good friend is like the sun, without which our life would be dark and cold.(without which引导非限制性定语从句)好朋友就像太阳,没有它,我们的生活将变得黑暗和寒冷。
②In my opinion, what matters most in making good friends are honesty and trust. (what引导主语从句)在我看来,交好朋友最重要的是诚实和信任。
③When our good friends make mistakes, we should be generous, because saints are not perfect, let alone ordinary people. (When引导时间状语从句;because引导原因状语从句)当我们的好朋友犯错时,我们应该宽宏大量,因为圣人都不是完美的,更不用说普通人了。
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