unit 1单元写作
写作主题:如何写保持健康与急救话题的相关文章
1.话题分析
本单元的话题是“Health and first aid”学生应该学会 “患病”或“痛的表达方法”,并能用“should/shouldn’t”提出建议。写作时注意语气委婉、内容合理、行文规范、结构完整。
2.经典名题
受新冠肺炎疫情影响,多省市教育局发布了推迟开学的通知。最长寒假,线上教学,这对学生的生活和学习状态都是一种考验。假设你是李刚,请给你班的同学们写一封信,谈谈如何做好防护,如何调节情绪,并就怎样上好网课给出自己的建议。
要点提示:
1.做好个人防护;
2.可以在家做些放松的活动:阅读、听音乐、下棋、做眼保健操等;
3.针对如何在上网课期间取得更大进步给予同学们建议。
参考词汇:wash hands洗手 wear a mask,戴口罩do eye exercises做眼保健操
have classes online, read more books
注意:1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.词数:80左右。(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)
Dear classmates,
How is everything going Because of COVID-19,we have to stay at home for nearly three months.
I hope everyone can be healthy and happy every day.
Yours,
Li Gang
3.写作思维导图:
审题 体裁 应用文(书信) 话题 如何保持健康
时态 一般现在时 人称 以第一人称为主
段落布局 引出话题→ Because of COVID-19, we have to stay at home for nearly three months. First, learn to protect ourselves. 给出建议 Second, live a regular life and have a good rest. Besides, when we are free, we can... 表达祝愿→I hope everyone can be healthy and happy every day.
参考词汇:
wash hands洗手;wear a mask 戴口罩;read more books 多读书
do eye exercises做眼保健操;have classes online 上网课;had better 最好
句子模板:
1. First, learn to protect ourselves.首先,学会保护我们自己。
2. It's important to wash hands often with soap.经常用肥皂洗手很重要。
3. We'd better stay at home instead of going to the party.
我们最好待在家里,不要去参加聚
4. Second, live a regular life and have a good rest.
第二,生活有规律,并好好休息。
5. Besides,we can read more books,listen to music or do eye exercises when we are free.此外,我们可以在空闲的时候读更多的书、听音乐或者做眼保健操。
4.高分例文
Dear classmates,
How is everything going Because of COVID-19,we have to stay at home for nearly there months. What should we do during this time
①First, learn to protect ourselves. Wear a mask when we go out. ②It's important
to wash hands often with soap. Do not go to crowded places like shopping centers.
We'd better stay at home instead of going to the party. ③If we feel nervous and
anxious, we can communicate with friends through telephones, WeChat and other ways.Second, live a regular life and have a good rest. Get up early, have classes online, and go to bed early. Besides, when we are free, we can read more books, listen to music or do eye exercises.They can help us relax.
I hope everyone can be healthy and happy every day.
Yours,
Li Gang
例文分析:
文章层次分明、要点齐全、所给建议合理、语句通顺,是一篇不错的范文。
①First、Second、Besides 的使用,使文章富有层次感;
②t's + adj. +to do sth.句型的使用,丰富了文章句式
③使用含有if引导的条件状语从句的复合句,给出了合理的建议。
5.佳句集锦
1. Diseases come like an avalanche and go away like reeling silk.
病来如山倒,病去如抽丝。
2. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,医生远离我。
3. Health is over wealth.健康胜过财富。
4. Early to bed and early to rise can make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
早睡早起能使人健康、富有和聪明。
5. Happiness lies first of all in health.幸福首先在于健康。
6.实战练习
(2019南充中考)近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效地自我保护,免受伤害呢 我市在举行以"How to Keep Safe"为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,请你根据下表提示,写一篇短文参赛吧。
How to Keep Safe
Traffic traffic lights, electric bikes (电动车)...
Swimming rivers, swimming pool...
Internet ID number, code( 密码), unhealthy websites. .
... ......
要求:
1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容,并适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数:80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not
careful enough As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
参考答案:
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bikes. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID numbers or codes when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents’ permission. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents or teachers, even the police for help.