Unit 3 Could you please clean your room? 写作导学案（含答案）人教版八年级英语下册

unit 3单元写作
写作主题：如何写做家务的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是"家务琐事与许可"。与该话题相关的常见写作有：描述自己做过的家务劳动，写一篇介绍同学做家务情况的报告并表达自己的观点或看法等。
2经典名题
在你校"劳动教育月"期间，校英语报发起了以"A Helper at Home"为主题的征文活动。请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下：
What you often do at home 你在家经常做什么 What you have learned 你学到了什么
◆cook meals ◆wash the dishes ◆take out the rubbish ◆water flowers （浇花） ◆look after pets … life skills responsibility( 责任) ……
注意：
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80 ~ 100,短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数
I have always been a good helper at home.
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 家务劳动
时态 以一般现在时为主 人称 以第一人称为主
段落 布局 介绍"我" take out the rubbish after dinner 做的家务 help to wash the dishes develop my life skills 我的收获 take my responsibility ........
参考词汇：
although 尽管；share 分担;共同承担；at first 起初;起先；for example 例如
ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事；learn... from...从……中学到……
develop 形成;产生；take one’s responsibility 承担某人的责任
参考句子：
1. I did what I can to help my parents.我帮父母做我力所能及的事情。
2. I always take out the rubbish after dinner.我总是在晚饭后扔垃圾。
3.1 often water flowers with my mother.我经常和妈妈一起浇花。
4. I can look after pets well when my parents are away.
当我父母不在家时，我会很好地照顾宠物。
5. I have learned a lot from doing housework.我从做家务中学到很多。
4.高分例文
I have always been a good helper at home.①Although my parents don't ask me to share much housework, I’m still doing what I can to help them.②For example, I often take out the rubbish after dinner. On weekends, I usually help to wash the dishes.③ At first I could not do that very well. Once I even broke a plate and cut my finger. ④But now I am able to clean the dishes quickly.
⑤I've learned a lot from doing housework. It helps to develop my life skills, so I can live better in the future. More importantly, I've learned to take my responsibility in the family.
例文分析：
本文要点齐全、层次清晰、语句通顺，一些词汇和句式运用得恰到好处。
①运用 although 引导的让步状语从句，引出自己做家务这件事；
②运用for example 这一短语,引出自己经常做的第一件家务，过渡自然；
③④两句运用对比的手法，提到了自己经常做的第二件家务；
⑤句总领第二段,使用 learn... from...短语说明自己的收获。
5佳句集锦
1. Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.
不要问你的国家能为你做什么，而要问你能为你的国家做什么。
2. It's our duty to help parents do chores.帮父母做家务是我们的责任。
3. If you wish to get good advice, consult the elders.欲得忠告，请教长者。
6.实战练习
(2019·湘潭中考)哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途。请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。
参考词汇：
Chores take out the rubbish sweep the floor wash the clothes do the dishes water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch...···
Opinions Pros: develop our independence take care of ourselves ··· Cons: a waste of time no need to...
注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I
参考答案
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I usually sweep the floor, take out the rubbish, wash my clothes and do the dishes at home. When I am free, I'd like to water the flowers and cook breakfast. It's interesting to cook food.
However, some students think there is no need to do housework. They think it's a waste of time. In my opinion, it's important for children to do housework. It can develop our independence and help take care of ourselves. The earlier we learn to be independent, the better it is for our future.