2023-2024学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练-期末复习之书面表达15篇(福建名校真题)(仁爱版,含答案)

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期末复习之书面表达15篇
1.(22-23八年级下·福建宁德·期末)假定你是李华,你校将举办艺术节。请你根据以下内容提示,写一封邮件,邀请你的笔友Peter参加。
注意:词数80左右,信的格式和开头已给,不计入总词数。
语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥,语法正确,书写规范。
请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Our school will hold a school art festival in the school hall next Sunday. It will last from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m.
There will be different kinds of programs during the school art festival. Some students will have a fashion show to model the clothes. Others will tell interesting stories in English. What’s more, you can also enjoy wonderful songs, instrument performances and so on. They are really worth watching.
Welcome to our school art festival. I’m sure you’ll add color and fun to our festival. Write back to me as soon as you receive it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出邀请对方参加艺术节的目的;
第二步,介绍不同种类的节目;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be worth doing值得做某事
②write back回复
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①There will be different kinds of programs during the school art festival. (There be句型)
②I’m sure you’ll add color and fun to our festival. (宾语从句)
2.(22-23八年级下·福建泉州·期末)假定你是李华,本学期你们学校开设了烹饪课。请你结合以下表格,用英语给笔友 John 写一封信,分享你们上课的过程和感受。词数80左右。
Time on Friday afternoon
Place in the school dinning hall
Course Content (课程内容) design recipes (食谱) wash...and cut... learn to cook dishes
Feelings learn more life skills develop labor habits
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Are you interested in cooking Come and join us!
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
How is everything going
We have a cooking course every Friday afternoon in the school dinning hall. We design our own recipes. We wash and cut the vegetables ourselves. We learn how to cook dishes. Then we taste it for ourselves. So we know how to improve and do better next time. By taking cooking classes, we not only learn more life skills, we also develop labor habits. I like cooking classes very much. I believe I will cook more delicious dishes in the future. I also want to be a cook in the future.
Are you interested in cooking Come and join us!
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,询问对方的近况;
第二步,从时间、地点、课程内容及上课感受等方面介绍烹饪课;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①next time下一次
②in the future在未来
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I believe I will cook more delicious dishes in the future.(省略that的宾语从句)
3.(22-23八年级下·福建泉州·期末)随着时代不断发展和科技的迅速腾飞,线上线下融合教学已经是常态。尤其是疫情过后, 同学们都有“上网课”的经历。我们不难发现,线上课和线下课各有各自的优缺点。你更喜欢哪种学习方式呢?请同学们根据下图,就线上和线下教学谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。
注意:
1. 必须包含所有要点信息,可适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:高效的 high-efficiency 学习资料 learning materials
With the development of science and technology, we can not only study at school but also on the Internet. I
prefer…
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文一
With the development of science and technology, we can not only study at school but also on the Internet. I prefer online classes.
Firstly, there are all kinds of learning materials online, such as colorful pictures and e-books, lively videos and so on. We can study anywhere at anytime. What’s more, studying online also saves us a lot of time. We can have more time to have a good rest or do more things. Most importantly, if we can’t understand what the teacher says, we can play the video again and again.
All in all, online classes are interesting and high-efficiency. I like them a lot.
例文二
With the development of science and technology, we can not only study at school but also on the Internet. I prefer having classes at school.
Firstly, we can communicate with our classmates face to face at school. We will feel much happier during school. Secondly, if we meet problems, we can ask questions in class at once, then the teacher will explain to us face to face. In this way, we learn in a high-efficiency way. Last but not least, teachers can help us pay more attention to our study.
Therefore, having classes at school is the best way for most of middle school students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括思维导图中的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍随着科技的发展,线上线下融合教学已经是常态,表达自己的偏爱:喜欢上线上课;
第二步,依据导图内容,逐一阐述线上课的优点,适当拓展;
第三步,书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
① all kinds of 各种各样的
② what’s more 另外
[高分句型]
① What’s more, studying online also saves us a lot of time. (动名词作主语)
② Most importantly, if we can’t understand what the teacher says, we can play the video again and again. (if引导条件状语从句、宾语从句)
4.(22-23八年级下·福建泉州·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Eric对你们学校去年假期组织的研学旅行非常感兴趣。请你结合以下图表信息,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次研学之旅并谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。
Time July 13, 2022
Palace West Hill Farm
Activities learn to grow rice, grow vegetables, cook lunch together...
Meaning walk out of schools, learn about the society and nature...
注意事项:
1)必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Eric,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about our school study trip last year.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about our school study trip last year.
We went to the West Hill Farm on July 13, 2022. It was a sunny day. At the beginning of the activity, we did different kinds of activities. For example, some learnt how to grow rice with the farmers, others learnt how to grow vegetables. At last, we cooked lunch together.
I think this activity is very meaningful. We can walk out of schools and learn about the society and nature. I hope the school can have more activities like this.
I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对你的研学之旅的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“请你结合以下图表信息,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次研学之旅并谈谈你的看法”来引出中重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、活动、意义等”几个方面重点介绍你的研学之旅的具体情况
第三步,书写结语,表达“希望能尽快收到你的邮件”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①school study trip研学之旅;
②for example例如;
③at last最后;
④wish to do sth希望做某事。
[高分句型]
① For example, some learnt how to grow rice with the farmers, others learnt how to grow vegetables. (疑问词+to do作宾语)
②I think this activity is very meaningful. (I think接宾语从句)
5.(22-23八年级下·福建福州·期末)假定你是李华,为迎接国际慈善日(the International Day of Charity) 的到来,上周你校开展了以“传递爱(Pass the Love)”为主题的慈善义卖活动(a charity sale)来帮助社区有困难的人。请你结合以下表格,用英语给笔友John写一封信,分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。
A Charity Sale
Time 9.00 a. m-11.00 a. m June 20th, 2023
Place school playground
Purpose to help people in trouble
Activities Sell and Buy (义卖活动); The Loving Cooks (爱心厨艺秀); The Talent Show (才艺秀)
Feeling(s) ……
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going The International Day of Charity is coming. Last week _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
How is everything going The International Day of Charity is coming. Last week my school held a love charity sale on the school playground from 9.00 a.m to 11.00 a.m. on June 20th, 2023. The purpose of this event is to help people in trouble. I will share some activities with you.
First of all, there was an activity called Sell and Buy. Students brought some of their favorite things, then they tried their best to sell them to others. The money they earned would be donated. Another interesting activity was The Loving Cooks. Some students cooked for competition, and other students acted as judges. There were many funny things during the competition. What’s more, there was another activity called The Talent Show. Some skillful students stood on the stage to give performances, such as singing and dancing.
I’ve had much fun from the charity sale and realized that every small love could make a big difference.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中提到的关键信息,写信分享此次义卖活动的过程及感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明信件主题是分享义卖活动;
第二步,具体介绍义卖活动的过程;
第三步,谈谈自己的感受;
第四步,期待收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①in trouble陷入麻烦
②First of all首先
③What’s more此外
④tried their best尽他们最大的努力
[高分句型]
①There were many funny things during the competition.(there be句型)
②I’ve had much fun from the charity sale and realized that every small love could make a big difference.(and连接并列谓语;that引导宾语从句)
6.(22-23八年级下·福建福州·期末)假如你是李华,你校近期举办了研学活动(social practice)。你的外国笔友Michael想了解此次研学情况,请根据以下提示给他写封信,介绍你的活动经历及收获。
参考词汇:social practice(研学)
注意事项:
1.必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,日记开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Michael:
I’d like to tell you something about my social practice. _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
I’d like to tell you something about my social practice. We went to Hongying Base on May 25th and stayed
there for only one day.
During that time, I had great fun. The weather was sunny but not hot. I grounded soy milk with the help of the teachers. I also played games in teams. The most exciting thing was to barbecue. We all thought it was more delicious than before.
What an exciting trip it was! I learnt a lot from it. It not only developed my love for labor but also improved my labor skills. Besides, I think teamwork is very important.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】总体分析
题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要只写过程而遗漏“收获”这一要点。
写作步骤
第一步,表明写作意图。引出“学校近期举办了研学活动”这一话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从活动经历和收获两方面来介绍这次研学活动的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达对其回信的期待。
亮点词汇
have great fun玩得非常开心
with the help of ...在……帮助下
play games做游戏
not only ... but also ...不但……而且……
高分句型
We all thought it was more delicious than before.(宾语从句)
What an exciting trip it was!(What开头的感叹句)
7.(22-23八年级下·福建福州·期末)坚定文化自信,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Eric对中国文化很感兴趣,他想在暑假来你的家乡——福州旅游,他想提前了解一些有关福州的风俗民情,请你根据以下提示内容给他写一封电子邮件,介绍有福之州。
要求:
(1)必须包含图表中所提示的信息,可适当发挥,字数80左右。
(2)结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰。
(3)文中不得出现任何真实人名、班级、学校等。
Dear Eric,
How are things going I’m very glad that you will come to Fuzhou for a visit during the summer holidays. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will have a good time in Fuzhou.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How are things going I’m very glad that you will come to Fuzhou for a visit during the summer holidays. Located on the southeast coast of China, Fuzhou is the capital city of Fujian Province. Fuzhou is a beautiful and clean city. You know, Fuzhou is very hot in summer. The sun always shines brightly, so you’d better take sunglasses and shorts. Fuzhou Minnan Opera is a unique form of performance art. There are many famous places of interest for you to visit, such as the Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, Mount Gu and so on. You can also enjoy different kinds of delicious food like Sen baks. In Fuzhou, we eat with chopsticks.
I hope you will have a good time in Fuzhou.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,表达欢迎其到来;
第二步,根据所给提示,介绍福州;
第三步,书写结语,表示自己祝愿和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①located on位于
②the capital city省会城市
③brightly明亮地
④performance art行为艺术
⑤places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
There are many famous places of interest for you to visit, such as the Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, Mount Gu and so on.(there be句型)
8.(22-23八年级下·福建厦门·期末)假如你是李华,请根据下列要点提示,用英文写一封邮件,向你的英国笔友Henry介绍你校本学期新开设的劳动课程。
注意事项:
1. 文中必须包含至少两类劳动课程的内容要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于80词,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How is everything going I’m glad to tell you something about our labor courses at school this term. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Henry,
How is everything going I’m glad to tell you something about our labor courses at school this term. I took the cooking courses to learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food like rich Chinese cultures. For example, when learning to make zongzi, we can know about the Dragon Boat Festival and the great poet, Qu Yuan. I also took the planting course this term. My classmates and I planted tomatoes and harvested a lot. We learned and practiced planting skills and got close to nature. I really enjoy these courses as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏题干中的注意事项,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“学校本学期开设的劳动课程”来引出下文中对我选择的课程的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“烹饪课和种植课”两方面入手,重点介绍这两种课程的内容;
③第三步,书写结语。期待亨利的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等,诸如此类
②get close to 接近,靠近
③not only...but also 不但……而且
④look forward to 期待
⑤hear from sb 收到某人的来信
[高分句型]
①For example, when learning to make zongzi, we can know about the Dragon Boat Festival and the great poet, Qu Yuan.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I really enjoy these courses as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.(as引导的原因状语从句)
9.(22-23八年级下·福建福州·期末)近年来,汉服在国内越来越受欢迎。假如你是李菲——汉服爱好者, 你的加拿大朋友Jane对此很感兴趣。请你根据提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向她介绍汉服 (Han Costume) 及你喜欢汉服的原因。词数80左右。
由棉,丝绸等制成,有各种不同的装饰
汉族的传统服装,代表中华文化
有四千多年的历史, 不同的朝代,汉服款式也不一样
不同于西式服装,影响其它亚洲国家的服装
参考词汇:
汉族:Han nationality
注意:
1. 内容必须包含提示的所有要点;可适当发挥;注意语言的多样性;
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整清、书写规范;
3. 文章不能出现真实姓名。
Dear Jane,
How are you these days I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Fei
【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
How are you these days I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it.
Hanfu is made of cotton, silk and so on. It has all kinds of different decorations. It is a traditional costume of the Han nationality and represents Chinese culture. It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties. It is different from Western clothing and influences the clothing of other Asian countries.
Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture. Period dramas have also helped develop the public’s interest in traditional Chinese clothes. In modern China, people in different fields are interested in wearing Hanfu: from history lovers to students and even young workers.
Yours,
Li Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料所给内容不得遗漏,可适当增加细节;注意邮件书写格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明文章主题;
第二步,详细阐述汉服的款式、意义及影响等;
第三步,介绍汉服被人喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②all kinds of各种各样的
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties.(并列复合句)
②Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture.(原因状语从句)
10.(22-23八年级下·福建福州·期末)假如你是李华,你们班就校服问题做了讨论。下面是你对同学们讨论结果的统计表,请根据表格内容,写一篇题为“About Our School Uniforms”的报告。
观点 原因
Some students 支持 展示良好风纪;便宜;……
Other students 反对 丑;单调;不舒服;……
I …… ……
要求:
(1)短文须包含所给内容,省略号处的原因自由发挥;原因处也可适当发挥;
(2)词数90左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
About Our School Uniforms
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【答案】 About Our School Uniforms
I did a survey about our school uniforms in my class. Here are the results.
Some students like them. They think uniforms are nice and cheap. It’s suitable to wear them at school. What’s
more, uniforms can show good discipline. They also say that they can't spend more time on the clothes.So it is good for their study. Other students dislike school uniforms. They think that the uniforms look ugly on them and the styles of uniforms are too simple. The school uniforms may always make them feel uncomfortable.
In my opinion, I think that we should wear school uniforms. We should spend more time on our study than our clothes. And we can design our own uniforms.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一篇调查报告;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据表格中的要点,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍报告内容;
第二步,介绍支持和反对的观点及原因;
第三步,介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①suitable适合的
②What’s more而且
③In my opinion在我看来
[高分句型 ]
They think uniforms are nice and cheap. (省略that的宾语从句)
11.(23-24八年级下·福建南平·期中)没有健康的心理, 就没有健康的人生。保持心理健康是人的一种重要能力, 请你用英语写一篇短文, 向校英语报投稿, 介绍中学生应该如何保持好心情, 要点如下:
要求:80词左右, 文章必须包括提示全部内容, 可适当发挥。
How to keep in a good mood
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【答案】One possible version:
How to keep in a good mood
A good mood is very important to our lives. So what should we do to keep in a good mood?
First, we should do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because health can affect our moods. Second, we’d better keep good habits. For example, going to bed early and getting up early can give us enough energy for the day. Third, it is very important for us to have some healthy hobbies, such as listening to music, playing ball games and so on. What’s more, helping others in need will bring us a sense of happiness.
I hope everyone can live a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏信息提示内容;可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明“好心情”的重要性,并提出如何保持好心情;
第二步,保持好心情的具体建议;
第三步,表达祝愿,希望每个人都能拥有美好心情及生活。
[亮点词汇]
① keep healthy保持健康
② such as例如
③ in need需要
④ a sense of happiness幸福感
[高分句型]
① It is very important for us to have some healthy hobbies. (It作形式主语)
② Helping others in need will bring us a sense of happiness. (动名词作主语)
12.(23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中)假如你是Li Hua,你的美国笔友Bill来信说他近来对骑行很感兴趣,并向你咨询骑行的好处及安全骑行的注意事项,请你根据思维导图的提示给Bill写一封英文回信。
要求:1.文章内容需涵盖思维导图的所有提示,并适当发挥。
2.结构完整,表达条理,用词准确,书写工整。
3.不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Bill,
Glad to receive your letter and learn that you are becoming interested in cycling.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Bill,
Glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you are becoming interested in cycling. Cycling is good exercise. It can make the riders’ hearts and lungs strong. What’s more, it can save energy and doesn’t cause air pollution.
However, if there is an accident, the riders will be badly hurt. So we should know and obey the safety rules. We should pay attention to traffic signals. To protect our heads, we’d better wear helmets while riding. When riding at night, we should wear light-colored clothes and have lights in the front and reflectors on the back of our bicycles. In case of an accident, we should know how to give first aid.
In a word, be careful to be safe. Follow the safety rules and enjoy your cycling.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,点明骑行的好处;
第二步,具体阐述安全骑行的注意事项;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more此外
②pay attention to注意
③In case of万一
[高分句型]
①However, if there is an accident, the riders will be badly hurt. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②When riding at night, we should wear light-colored clothes and have lights in the front and reflectors on the back of our bicycles. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13.(23-24八年级下·福建厦门·期中)“服务为民,助人为乐”。2024年是学雷锋纪念日61周年,学校将举办以”My Volunteering Experience”为题的英语演讲比赛。假定你是李华,请根据以下图示,结合自身经历,写一篇演讲稿,并谈谈如何传递雷锋精神,词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥:
2.意思清楚,表达通顺:
3.行文连贯,书写规范:
4.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Volunteering Experience
Dear teachers and students,
It’s my great honor to stand here to share my volunteering experience with you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Volunteering ExperienceDear teachers and students,
It’s my great honor to stand here to share my volunteering experience with you. Volunteering has profound meaning, not only for the beneficiaries but also for the volunteers themselves. I had the opportunity to volunteer at a local community center, assisting in various activities and events last weekend. Through this experience, I witnessed the transformative power of selflessness and kindness. Helping others brought me immense joy and fulfillment, and it also broadened my perspective on life. I learned that volunteering is not just about serving others, but also about growing as an individual and making a positive impact in society.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸站在这里与大家分享我的志愿者经历。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——做志愿的时间、地址、活动、感觉等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“谢谢你的聆听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①profound meaning深远的意义
②immense joy无尽的快乐
③serving others服务他人
[高分句型]
①Volunteering has profound meaning, not only for the beneficiaries but also for the volunteers themselves. (not only...but also的用法)
②Helping others brought me immense joy and fulfillment, and it also broadened my perspective on life. (动名词作主语)
14.(23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中)读万卷书,行万里路。旅行不仅能开拓我们的视野,而且还能丰富我们的生活。你校校刊英语专栏以“Travel” 为主题举办了一场征文比赛。请你根据右边的图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。词数80词左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Travel is good for us in many ways.
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【答案】例文:
Travel is good for us in many ways.
First, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of different places by travelling. We can see many places with our own eyes. We can visit some famous cities and scenic spots. Second, we will meet people with different interests and see different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people, taste different foods and local flavors if we like. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live.
Third, travel will not only help us get knowledge of geography, history and other knowledge, but also help us keep healthy and enjoy nature. Finally, travel can help us keep fit and get relaxed.
With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has become more popular than ever in China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述旅游在很多方面对我们有好处;
第二步,结合图示,具体介绍旅游的好处;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for 对……有益
②in this way 以这种方式
③keep fit 保持健康
[高分句型]
①Third, travel will not only help us get knowledge of geography, history and other knowledge, but also help us keep healthy and enjoy nature(not only ... but also 不仅……而且……)
②With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has become more popular than ever in China.(it is no wonder that 难怪……)
15.(23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中)假如你是李华,你们班将召开“如何做一个快乐的学生”主题班会。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇90词左右的英语发言稿。
注意:请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
How Can You Be a Happy Student
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【答案】One possible version:
How Can You Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As a student, what can we do to be happy Here is my advice.
To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball. It’s necessary for us to have good hobbies. We can develop good hobbies such as reading, traveling or listening to music. The most important thing for us is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. In spare time, we should read more books. We should be active and be friendly to others. We need to make more friends. Besides, good habits are also important. On the one hand, we should have a balanced diet. On the other hand, we should have enough sleep.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作的提示信息已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,注意正确用词,避免出现语法错误及单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点题,说明本文的主旨大意——如何做一个快乐的学生;
第二步,从运动、爱好、交友及习惯这几个方面来介绍具体的建议;
第三步;书写结语,呼吁大家采纳上述的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① do more exercise 多做运动
② such as 例如
③ stay in a good mood 保持好心情
④ in good spirits 心情愉快
⑤ be friendly to 对……友好
⑥ make more friends 多交朋友
⑦ on the one hand...on the other hand... 一方面……另一方面……
[高分句型]
① To be healthy is to be happy. (不定式作主语和表语)
② It’s necessary for us to have good hobbies. (it作形式主语)
③ If we are in good spirits, we can study better. (if引导条件状语从句)
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