中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题10 书面表达（图表类、应用类）
类型一、 图表类
A.
（2024成都中考真题）
你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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B.
（2024广安中考真题）
生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光；智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂，阅读陪伴成长。阅读是我们一生的旅程，少年正是读书时，让我们一起读书吧！请根据以下图示及要求以“Reading—a Lifelong Journey”为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡导同学们读书。
要求：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
Reading—a Lifelong Journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our life.
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C.
（2024凉山中考真题）
“读万卷书，行万里路”。暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为标题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1．语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2．文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4．词数：80左右文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Liangshan a place that you will never want to leave once you come...
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I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
D.
（2024眉山中考真题）
假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。
注意：
1. 词数 100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
类型二、应用类
A.
（2024达州中考真题）
赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“An Unforgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。
内容提示：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 人物 4. 事件 5. 感受
写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
3. 不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。
An Unforgettable Day
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B.
（2024南充中考真题）
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
From: Eric
To: Li Ming
Subject: Give me a hand!
Dear Li Ming,
You know I’m studying in a new school now and I don’t know anyone here. I find it hard to get on well with my classmates. Would you please give me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Eric
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
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Li Ming
C.
（2024遂宁中考真题）
今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文章语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D.
（2024宜宾中考真题）
假如你是光明中学的李华，准备参加学校举办的以“感恩” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。
内容包括：
1. 做家务的理由；
2. 做家务的过程（扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等）；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇：wipe the furniture 擦家具
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest.
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Thank you for your listening!
E.
（2024自贡中考真题）
学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)；
2. 他/她改变你的事件。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好。
A Person Who Changes Me a Lot
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专题10 书面表达（图表类、应用类）
类型一、 图表类
A.
（2024成都中考真题）
你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Be a Good Team Member
There is an old saying in China, “Unity is strength.” It tells people the importance of teamwork. By discussing with members in the team, we can come up with the better ideas. But how to be a good team member Here are some tips for you.
First, communicate more with each other. There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates. We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Second, work together on projects. When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. Finally, trust your teammates.
All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s work together to build a brighter future.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，细节介绍如何成为一名好团队成员的方法；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with提出
②each other彼此
③plays an important role发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
①When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high.（时间状语从句）
②There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates.（同位语从句）
B.
（2024广安中考真题）
生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光；智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂，阅读陪伴成长。阅读是我们一生的旅程，少年正是读书时，让我们一起读书吧！请根据以下图示及要求以“Reading—a Lifelong Journey”为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡导同学们读书。
要求：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
Reading—a Lifelong Journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our life.
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【答案】例文
Reading—a Lifelong Journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our life. We can get knowledge and learn many skills from books. Besides, we can develop interests through reading and make our life colourful.
There are many kinds of books we can read, such as great books, science books and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time, and it’s a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. How about joining the Reading Club in our school While reading, it’s necessary to take notes and write reviews. We can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see the world in the books. Let’s read together.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容倡导同学们读书，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的好处；
第二步，介绍读什么书；
第三步，介绍如何读书；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②in our free time在我们的空闲时间
③take notes做笔记
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of books we can read. (定语从句)
②We can read books in our free time, and it’s a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. (and连接的并列句)
C.
（2024凉山中考真题）
“读万卷书，行万里路”。暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为标题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1．语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2．文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4．词数：80左右文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Liangshan a place that you will never want to leave once you come...
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I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
【答案】例文：
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. They are hospitable. There are many places of interest, such as Lushan Mountain, Lugu Lake and so on. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is The Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb. Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable experience. I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍那里的人文地理；
第三步，相信这一定会是一个难忘的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①in the southwest of在……东南部
②places of Interest名胜古迹
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句）
②I hope it will be an unforgettable experience.（宾语从句）
D.
（2024眉山中考真题）
假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。
注意：
1. 词数 100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear David
How’s it going
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.
We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍文章的主题，即暑假去北京的旅行计划；
第二步，介绍什么时间出发、旅行的方式、和谁一起去以及计划待几天；
第三步，具体介绍计划在北京做什么活动以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某事
③admire钦佩
[高分句型]
①With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing.（that引导宾语从句）
②Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world.（which引导定语从句）
类型二、应用类
A.
（2024达州中考真题）
赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“An Unforgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。
内容提示：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 人物 4. 事件 5. 感受
写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
3. 不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。
An Unforgettable Day
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Day
As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. Here’s my unforgettable day of helping others.
My classmate Jason was ill last week. He had to be in hospital, so I tried my best to help him. Yesterday was Saturday, and my classmates and I went to see him together. We gave him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Jason asked me some questions about study and I brought him my notebooks. I was patient to answer his questions all the time. I hope he can be better soon.
I like helping others. Firstly, helping others makes me happy. Secondly, helping others is also helping myself. All in all, a helpful person is welcomed everywhere. I will try my best to help others in the future.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍那天的经历；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① in trouble 处困难中
② What’s more 此外
③ all the time 一直
[高分句型]
① So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.（who引导的定语从句）
②We gave him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
B.
（2024南充中考真题）
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
From: Eric
To: Li Ming
Subject: Give me a hand!
Dear Li Ming,
You know I’m studying in a new school now and I don’t know anyone here. I find it hard to get on well with my classmates. Would you please give me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Eric
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
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Li Ming
【答案】参考范文
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates. It is understandable for new students to have such problems
I have some suggestions for you. Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling. It’s a way to show you’re friendly. What’s more, you are supposed to be helpful. Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others. Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest. If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about. Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you. I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给邮件内容完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很抱歉听到这个消息；
第二步，具体给出自己的建议；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
② what’s more而且
③ try to do sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others.（定语从句）
②If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about.（条件状语从句）
C.
（2024遂宁中考真题）
今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文章语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I’ve seen my grandparents’ selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don’t feel lonely. It’s also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it’s important to take action now.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时和一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示信息，结合自己的生活进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，结合自己的生活介绍为什么要关爱及尊敬长辈；
第二步，介绍如何关爱及尊敬长辈；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家采取行动。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on集中于
②spend time doing sth花时间做某事
③in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don’t feel lonely. (动名词作主语)
D.
（2024宜宾中考真题）
假如你是光明中学的李华，准备参加学校举办的以“感恩” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。
内容包括：
1. 做家务的理由；
2. 做家务的过程（扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等）；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇：wipe the furniture 擦家具
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest.
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文：
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest. My special birthday gift for my parents is doing housework.
I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling sorry for them I began to think about what to do to help.
Last Saturday was my mother’s birthday and my parents went out to see a film. It occurred to me that I could give the rooms a thorough cleaning. Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then, I wiped the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floor.
At that moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy. My mother gave me a hug and I could see her tears in her eyes. Tired as I was, I felt so happy!
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要求以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍做家务的理由；
第二步，具体介绍做家务的过程；
第三步，介绍父母的反应和自己的感受；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with 忙于
②think about 考虑
③put...in place 放好
[高分句型]
①It occurred to me that I could give the rooms a thorough cleaning.（It固定句型）
②Tired as I was, I felt so happy!（倒装句）
E.
（2024自贡中考真题）
学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)；
2. 他/她改变你的事件。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好。
A Person Who Changes Me a Lot
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【答案】例文
A Person Who Changes Me a Lot
In the past three years, my English teacher Mrs Xu have played an important role in my life. She changes me a lot.
She is of medium height. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind to us. When I was a seventh-grade student, I was weak in English. I was afraid of speaking English in front of the classmates. Our school held an English speech competition. She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well. She gave me the strength to overcome the difficulty. With her help, I finished the speech successfully and won the third place. From then on, I became interested in English and made great progress.
Thank to her, I realize that I should face the difficulties bravely. As long as I work hard, I will succeed.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；
第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①play a role in在……中扮演角色
②be of medium height中等身材
③be weak in不擅长
④be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
①She encouraged me to take part in it and gave me some advice on how to learn English well.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
②As long as I work hard, I will succeed.（条件状语从句）
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