2025届高考英语作文复习专项 建议信写作评讲 课件（共13张PPT）
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| 名称 | 2025届高考英语作文复习专项 建议信写作评讲 课件（共13张PPT） |  | |
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(共13张PPT)
Topic:
How to write A letter of advice
How to make a good composition
Lead-in
Basic structure and content of a letter of advice
建议信的基本结构和内容
一、“Front”开头 (para.1):
1. Background information（背景信息）
2. Writing purpose写作目的
二、“Body”正文(para.2):
suggestions and reasons建议及理由
三、“Ending”结尾(para.3):
expectations and wishes期待和愿望
1. communicate with teachers
2. be active, listen attentively and take down notes carefully.
3. finish homework on time and consolidate(巩固) what you have learned
Pre-writing
1. Using transition sentence(过渡句), topic sentence(主题句)and transition words to make your composition clear(清晰的), logical(有逻辑的) and coherent(连贯的).
开头：First of all, to begin with, first and foremost...
另外：In addition, besides, moreover,additionally,furthermore
最后：last but not least...
Pre-writing
Language Points
常见的表达方式：
Problem(问题方面的描述):
1. have trouble/ difficulty/problems doing
2. be worried/anxious about..
3. be confused about...
4. be upset about...
Purpose(表示目的方面的表达方式):
1.with the intention/ aim of...
2.in an effort to do...
3.with the hope of
Pre-writing
Having known that you are worried about your high school life, I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions, hoping they can be helpful.
2. I know you are worried about your high school life. I’ll give you some suggestions. I hope they can help you.(用非谓语改写)
1. I’m writing to give you some suggestions. They will help you.(用定语从句改写)
I'm writing to give you some suggestions, which will help you.
Rewrite the sentences改写句子
Pre-writing
表示建议的表达方式
1.为什么不...
2.如果我是你的话，我会毫不犹豫去做...
3.做...对你是有帮助/重要的的。
1.Why not do...
2.If I were you, I would not hesitate to do...
3.It is of help/ importance/significance for you to do sth
Pre-writing
结尾的表达方式: expectations and wishes 期待与愿望
1. I do hope my suggestions will be of great help.
2. Hopefully, my suggestions would be helpful for you.I am looking forward to your good news.
3. It’s my sincere hope that you will take my advice into consideration/ account.
4. I hope these suggestions will give you a relief and help you solve your problems.
5. I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Common sentence patterns 常见的句式
Pre-writing
While-writing
假设你是李华，你的好友Tom 上学期随父母去了另外一个城市，写信告诉你他很不适应新的校园生活，感到很孤独并希望你给出建议。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
1. 多交一些朋友;
2. 积极参加各种活动;
注意：80词左右
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: adapt to 适应。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that
you have trouble adapting to
your new school life.
I understand
how lonely it can be
to be in a new place.
I’m writing
with the intention of
offering some practical suggestions to you.
Firstly,
I strongly suggest that
you should try to make more friends
who can always bring you happiness
and make you feel more at home.
Secondly,
actively participate in various activities,
which will not only help you make friends
but also give you a chance
showcase your talents.
Yours,
Li Hua
Remember that making a change is always difficult at first,
but it will become better finally.
I believe that you can
adapt to the new life soon.
Finally, I hope that my suggestions
would be helpful for you.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
While-writing
A good composition
1.structure结构
a.3 paragraphs
b. topic sentence
c.transition sentence
d.transition words
Group discusssion:
Post-writing:Summary
all the points in the requirements should be covered.
2.Content内容
3.Language语言
a. 从句的使用 clause
b. 非谓语形式 non -predicate
c. it作形式主语
d. 倒装句 inverted sentence
e. 副词 adverbs, 短语 phrases
4.appearance书写
a.good handwriting
b.tidy and neat
c.appropriate number of words
Write an essay about your school life to your friend
写一篇关于你学校生活的书信给你的朋友
Homework:
Topic:
How to write A letter of advice
How to make a good composition
Lead-in
Basic structure and content of a letter of advice
建议信的基本结构和内容
一、“Front”开头 (para.1):
1. Background information（背景信息）
2. Writing purpose写作目的
二、“Body”正文(para.2):
suggestions and reasons建议及理由
三、“Ending”结尾(para.3):
expectations and wishes期待和愿望
1. communicate with teachers
2. be active, listen attentively and take down notes carefully.
3. finish homework on time and consolidate(巩固) what you have learned
Pre-writing
1. Using transition sentence(过渡句), topic sentence(主题句)and transition words to make your composition clear(清晰的), logical(有逻辑的) and coherent(连贯的).
开头：First of all, to begin with, first and foremost...
另外：In addition, besides, moreover,additionally,furthermore
最后：last but not least...
Pre-writing
Language Points
常见的表达方式：
Problem(问题方面的描述):
1. have trouble/ difficulty/problems doing
2. be worried/anxious about..
3. be confused about...
4. be upset about...
Purpose(表示目的方面的表达方式):
1.with the intention/ aim of...
2.in an effort to do...
3.with the hope of
Pre-writing
Having known that you are worried about your high school life, I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions, hoping they can be helpful.
2. I know you are worried about your high school life. I’ll give you some suggestions. I hope they can help you.(用非谓语改写)
1. I’m writing to give you some suggestions. They will help you.(用定语从句改写)
I'm writing to give you some suggestions, which will help you.
Rewrite the sentences改写句子
Pre-writing
表示建议的表达方式
1.为什么不...
2.如果我是你的话，我会毫不犹豫去做...
3.做...对你是有帮助/重要的的。
1.Why not do...
2.If I were you, I would not hesitate to do...
3.It is of help/ importance/significance for you to do sth
Pre-writing
结尾的表达方式: expectations and wishes 期待与愿望
1. I do hope my suggestions will be of great help.
2. Hopefully, my suggestions would be helpful for you.I am looking forward to your good news.
3. It’s my sincere hope that you will take my advice into consideration/ account.
4. I hope these suggestions will give you a relief and help you solve your problems.
5. I will be more than delighted if you find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Common sentence patterns 常见的句式
Pre-writing
While-writing
假设你是李华，你的好友Tom 上学期随父母去了另外一个城市，写信告诉你他很不适应新的校园生活，感到很孤独并希望你给出建议。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
1. 多交一些朋友;
2. 积极参加各种活动;
注意：80词左右
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: adapt to 适应。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that
you have trouble adapting to
your new school life.
I understand
how lonely it can be
to be in a new place.
I’m writing
with the intention of
offering some practical suggestions to you.
Firstly,
I strongly suggest that
you should try to make more friends
who can always bring you happiness
and make you feel more at home.
Secondly,
actively participate in various activities,
which will not only help you make friends
but also give you a chance
showcase your talents.
Yours,
Li Hua
Remember that making a change is always difficult at first,
but it will become better finally.
I believe that you can
adapt to the new life soon.
Finally, I hope that my suggestions
would be helpful for you.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
While-writing
A good composition
1.structure结构
a.3 paragraphs
b. topic sentence
c.transition sentence
d.transition words
Group discusssion:
Post-writing:Summary
all the points in the requirements should be covered.
2.Content内容
3.Language语言
a. 从句的使用 clause
b. 非谓语形式 non -predicate
c. it作形式主语
d. 倒装句 inverted sentence
e. 副词 adverbs, 短语 phrases
4.appearance书写
a.good handwriting
b.tidy and neat
c.appropriate number of words
Write an essay about your school life to your friend
写一篇关于你学校生活的书信给你的朋友
Homework: