9上 Unit 12 Life is full of unexpected. Writing
写作:一次难忘的经历
【话题概述】
本单元的话题是“难以预料的事情”,与此相关的写作通常是根据图画、文字提示或自身经历,描述一次难忘的经历。这类作文通常为记叙文,写作时,通常先简单介绍事情发生的时间、地点和人物,再详细叙述事情发生的经过和结果,并适当抒发自己的感情。
引入话题
【经典例题】
假如你是林凯,请你根据下表中的内容提示,合理发挥想象,写一篇100词左右的英语桓文,描述一下发生在你身上的这些意外事件。
意外事件 结果
没听见闹钟响 睡过了头
到公共汽车站,车已经开走 上学迟到
忘带作业 回家取的路上被摩托车撞伤
【审题】
时态:以一般过去时和过去完成时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
段落布局:第一段:引入话题 第二段:描述经历 第三段:表达感受
【短语积累】
go off(闹钟)发出响声
rush out(of)冲出(……)
wake up 醒;把……弄醒
as...as one can/could尽可能…….
on one's way home 在某人回家的路上
by the time...在……以前
stay up 熬夜
as a result因此
no more不再
even though虽然;即使
run away from回避;逃离;从……逃脱
【句型积累】
开头句:
It was a/an... day for me. 它对于我来说是……一天
Life is full of the unexpected. 生活充满了意外。
This was the luckiest/funniest/…. day of my life.这是我一生中最幸运/最有趣/……的一天。
中间句:
By the time I..., ... had... 当我……时,……已经……
When I..,I found/realized that... 当我……时,我发现/意识到……
As a result,I... 因此,我……
I was so...that I... 我太……了,以至于我……
I couldn't believe..我无法相信……
结尾句:
What a/an..day!多么……一天啊!
I will always remember...我会永远记得……
【范文欣赏】
I will never forget what happened today. It was an unlucky day for me.
I stayed up late last night. I was so sleepy that I didn't hear the alarm go off. I overslept. I didn't have breakfast and rushed out as quickly as I could. But when I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. As a result, I was late for school. What was worse, by the time I walked into the classroom, I realized I had left my homework at home. I had to get it. Unluckily, on my way home, I was hit by a motorbike.I had a great pain in my arms and had to go to the hospital.
What an unlucky day I had today! I will always remember the special day.
【译文】
我永远不会忘记今天发生的事情。这对我来说是不吉利的一天。
我昨晚熬夜了。我困得连闹钟都没响。我睡过头了。我没有吃早饭,就以最快的速度冲了出去。但是当我到达公共汽车站时,公共汽车已经开走了。结果,我上学迟到了。更糟糕的是,当我走进教室时,我意识到我把作业忘在家里了。我不得不去拿。不幸的是,在回家的路上,我被一辆摩托车撞了。我的手臂非常疼痛,不得不去医院。
我今天真倒霉!我将永远记得那个特殊的日子。
【实战演练1】
根据文字提示或自身情况,谈论过去的事情或经历。
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【范文欣赏】
My Unlucky Day
Life is like a box of chocolates; full of uncertainty. This one day turned out to be my unlucky day.
It started with waking up late and missing the bus. I rushed to school, forgetting my homework and feeling flustered. During class, I stumbled over my words when called on to answer a question. At lunch, I spilled food all over myself, causing laughter.On the way home, heavy rain drenched me as I had forgotten my umbrella. To make matters worse, I received a low grade on a test I had studied hard for. It felt like everything was going wrong. However, despite the unlucky day, I learned valuable lessons. I realized the importance of preparation and organization. I also learned to find humor in unfortunate situations and not take myself too seriously. Most importantly, I understood that one bad day doesn't define me; tomorrow is a new opportunity for better luck.
My unlucky day reminded me that life is unpredictable, but our reaction to setbacks truly matters.
【文章结构】
开头(1-2句):引出话题
中间(8-10句):具体描述自己不幸地经历及经验教训
结尾(1-2句):自己从不幸中得到的感悟
【译文】
我倒霉的一天
生活就像一盒巧克力,充满了不确定性。这一天成了我倒霉的一天。
一开始就睡过了,错过了公交车。我匆忙赶到学校,忘记带家庭作业,感到慌乱不安。在课堂上,被点名回答一个我没有准备的问题,我结结巴巴地回答。午餐时,我不小心把食物洒了一身,引来大家嘲笑。下午,突然下起了大雨,我忘记了带伞。回家路上,我被淋透了。更糟糕的是,我努力学习的一门考试,得了低分。似乎一切都不顺利。然而,尽管是倒霉的一天,我学到了宝贵的经验。我意识到准备和组织的重要性。我也学会在不幸的情况下找到幽默,不把自己太当回事。最重要的是,我明白了一天的不顺并不能定义我,明天是重新获得好运的机会。
这个倒霉的一天提醒我生活是不可预测的,但我们对挫折的反应才是最重要的。