9上 Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are Writing
写作:询问函
【话题概述】
本单元的话题是“礼貌地询问信息”和“指引方向”,写作任务是能够有礼貌地向别人询问信息,描述地理位置,给他人指路或提供帮助。大多数作文会与路线图相结合,所以所写的内容应与图片相吻合,表达简洁、准确。
【经典例题】
假如你是Linda,你即将到纽约上学,对那里的一切还不是很熟悉,于是你想写一封电子邮件向居住在那里的好友Mike求助。请根据下面的提示内容,完成邮件。80词左右,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:1. where to borrow books;
2. how to ask for help politely;
3. how to greet(问候)others in America.
【审题】
体裁:应用文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时为主
【素材积累---短语】
素材积累---短语:
go straight 直走
at the+序数词+corner 在....个拐角处
on one's left/right 在某入的左/右边
in front of...... 在....的前面
next to...在……的旁边
go past...经过……
【素材积累---句型】:
开头句:
Excuse me, could you tell me... : 打扰一下,你能告诉我……吗?
I'm writing to you to ask for... 我写信给你是想问……
中间句:
First.....Then....Next.....last.....
Could you please tell me......
I wonder....../ I would like to know.....
I want to get some information about something about... 请问你能告诉我一些关于……的事情吗?
Would you mink telling me..... 你介意告诉我....吗
Go/Walk along/down 沿着......走
It's next to /across from/behind the ..它紧挨着……/在……对面/....的后面
take the+序数词+turning on the left/right.在第……拐弯处向左/右转
It's (not) far from here.它离这儿不远。。
You can take the bus.. 你可以乘·……公共汽车。
The No. 5 bus can take you... 5 路公共汽车可以带你…
结尾句:
1. I’d like to thank you for..... 我想因为.....而感谢你
2. I’m looking forward to your reply. 我期待你的回复。
3. Would you like to give me some suggestions about... 你愿意给我一些关于……的建议吗?
【范文】:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that I can meet you soon, because I'm going to study in New York next week. However, I'm kind of nervous. Now I'm writing to ask you for help. I wonder if you can help me with the following things.First, I love reading. Could you please tell me where I can borrow books Next, I'd like to know how I can ask strangers for help politely if I am in trouble. Last, I may meet many people when l get to America, so I wonder if you could tell me how to greet them.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Linda
【实战演练1】:
假设你叫王宁,下周日是你的生日。你准备在家开一个生日晚会,并且邀请你的一些同学和朋友参加。晚会6:00开始。你家住在新华路107号。乘坐33路或者78 路公共汽车在新华路下车,你家紧挨着公交车站,房子是红色的,门是白色的。请根据以上信息,给你的朋友李辉写一封80词左右的信。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Lihui,
Next Sunday is my birthday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Wang
【实战演练2】:
假设你是李可,暑假期间你将去伦敦学习一个月,到时你将寄宿于Mr.Hudson的家中。为了更好地与Mr.Hudson一家人友好相处,你在动身前决定给Mr.Hudson 发一封90词左右的邮件,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。请根据以下要点提示完成该邮件;
要点提示:1.感谢对方同意你寄信;2.请求对方向你企经从机场去他家的最好方式;
五老说萌你将要到达的时间,询问对方这个时荷是舍方便。
参考词汇airport 机场;whole month 整个月;nervous 紧张的;London伦敦
Dear Mr. Hudson,
I'm writing to tell you something about myself.
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Ke
【实战演练1例文】:
Dear Li Hui,
Next Sunday is my birthday. I'm going to have a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 6:00.Would you like to come?I have also asked some other classmates of ours and some of my friends. I live at 107 Xintua Road. You can take No. 33 bus or No. 78 bus and get off at the bus Stop. It's a red house with a white door. You can't miss it. I hope you will come.
Yours,
Wang Ning
【实战演练2例文】:
Dear Mr. Hudson,
I'm writing to tell you something about myself. My name is Li Ke and I'm from China. I think you've heard about me already. Thank you very much for having me stay with you for a whole month. I'm really excited about the trip. Since I'm going to London for the first time, I feel a little nervous about my stay there. Could you please tell me the best way to get to your house from the airport My plane will arrive at 2:30 p.m. on July 10th. Then I plan to go directly to your home. Is it the right time for me to visit you
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ke