通用版英语中考复习——提纲作文之观点看法类学习案（学生版+教师版）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
提纲作文之观点看法类
年份 地区 话题 命题形式
2023年 山东聊城 介绍一下平时用电脑做什么，并谈谈对玩电脑游戏的看法。 提纲作文
辽宁辽阳 从毕业旅行的地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面，谈谈你的想法 提纲作文
湖南株洲 谈谈对“朋友”主题的看法 提纲作文
2022年 江苏常州 谈谈对所给英文材料的看法 提纲作文
黑龙江牡丹江 如何看待“双减”政策 提纲作文
江苏苏州 对“Practice makes perfect”的理解 提纲作文
湖北十堰 你对学校的一些看法 提纲作文
2021年 山东东营 如何看待say “yes”和say “no” 提纲作文
湖北十堰 谈谈对珍惜粮食，节约资源，杜绝浪费的看法 提纲作文
湖南长沙 对“What Are Good Parents Like ”的看法 提纲作文
观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英语基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示＂启＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示＂承＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示＂转＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于＂合＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, in summary等。
观点选择类作文模板
　　There are some differences among people as to the view of (________).The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (_______).A case in point is that (________).
　　However, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (________). The most typical example is that (_________).
　　Weighing the adcantages and disadvantages of these arguments, I tend to agree with (________). Obviously, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but (________) is more 　　convincing.
　　
观点论证型作文模板
　　When asked about (________),some people hold the idea that (________).As far as they are concerned, (________).But I could not agree with them in several points. In my opinion, (________).The reason for my choice are listed as follows.
　　First of all, (_________).What is more, (_________).Last but not the least,(_________). For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that (_________).
一、开头句型
As far as ...is concerned
It goes without saying that...
As the proverb says ...
It has to be noticed that...
It’s generally recognized that...
It’s likely that ...
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
Further, we hold opinion that...
Similarly, we should pay attention to... not (that)...but (that)... 不是……而是……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……
三、结尾句型
All things considered 总而言之
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、引出不同观点的句型
① People’s view on ________ vary from person to person. Some hold tha ________. However, others believe that ________.
② When asked ________ some people think ________ while some prefer
③ At present, some people think ________ while others agree ________. Both sides have their merits.
④ About this issue, some people take a different attitude towards ________.
五、总结个人观点的句型
① As far as I am concerned, I stand on the side of the latter view.
② Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the latter one.
③ In my opinion, I prefer that ________.
（2023·山东聊城·统考中考真题）
假设你家有一台电脑，由你和父亲共同使用。你父亲是位公司经理，你是个中学生。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你们平时用电脑做什么，并谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
提示：
1. 你父亲经常用电脑跟顾客交谈、上网查看火车信息，等等。
2. 你在周末用电脑听音乐、看电影，但很少玩电脑游戏。
3. 你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80 左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it. My father is a manager of a company, so he often talks to his customers on the computer. He also goes on the Internet to check the times of trains, make travel plans, and buy tickets.
I often listen to music or watch movies on it at weekends. But I seldom play computer games on the Internet. In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示，介绍你和爸爸平时用电脑做什么，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go on the Internet上网
②make travel plans制订旅游计划
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.（动名词短语作主语）
（2023·辽宁辽阳·统考中考真题）
同学们，我们的班级将开启一次愉快的毕业之旅，每名同学都可以参与这次旅行的策划。假如你是王海，请用英文给班主任吴老师写一封电子邮件，从旅行地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面，谈谈你的想法。词数：80～100词。
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中包括所提示内容，可适当发挥，但不得出现真实姓名和校名。
（3）邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Wu,
I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Hai
【答案】例文：
Dear Ms. Wu,
I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip. It must be very relaxing and fun. I hope to climb Pingding Mountain. It’s our favorite place and we can have fun there. It’s a good idea to take some food and drinks to have a picnic. We can also put up a tent and cook outside. We can even take the mobile phones to take some photos. As for the activities, let’s play some guessing games, sing songs, dance and so on. We can also have a climbing race. The winner will get some prizes. I’m sure we will have a great time!
Yours,
Wang Hai
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，具体从旅行地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面谈谈自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun玩得开心
②have a picnic去野餐
③put up搭建
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s a good idea to take some food and drinks to have a picnic.（it固定句型）
②We can even take the mobile phones to take some photos. （动词不定式作目的状语）
（2023·湖南株洲·统考中考真题）
学校英语角即将开展一次以“朋友”为主题的演讲活动，请你写一篇演讲稿参加活动，包括以下内容：
1.你最好的朋友是什么样的？
2.你的朋友曾给予过你什么？
3.你准备为你的朋友做什么？
词数90左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文
What’s the meaning of a friend to you Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will listen to you when you’re sad. Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will give you a gift on your birthday. But to me, a friend is someone I can depend on and I love.
When I was eight years old, I met my best friend, Li Mei. Her personality was different from mine. She’s very active and brave. When I was sad, she would sit next to me and comfort me. When I was happy, she could share my joy. What’s more, she always encourages me. She told me not to give up when I met any difficulty. She advised me to have another try if I wanted to give up halfway.
So far, we have been friends for eight years. Although we were not classmates anymore, I believe that we’ll still be good friends forever. What’s more, I will prepare a birthday party for her to give her a surprise.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“朋友”为主题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友是什么；
第二步，介绍最好的朋友是什么样的以及朋友曾给予过你什么；
第三步，介绍准备为你的朋友做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依靠
②be different from不同于
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①She told me not to give up when I met any difficulty.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②She advised me to have another try if I wanted to give up halfway.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2022·江苏常州·中考真题）
某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
It’s not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Don’t forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2022·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施，学校的作业少了，课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者，你的课余生活发生了哪些变化？你如何看待这一政策？现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏，展开讨论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。
提示词：the“double reduction”policy“双减”政策
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90词，至少含有两个复合句，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly._______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. I used to have much homework. But now I have less homework than before. I had to do homework that was boring in the past. Now I have some creative homework.
As for weekend activities, I had to take after-school classes. I used to be busy and tired. I had too much pressure. But now I have more time to take up my hobbies. On weekends I often play basketball with my friends to improve my skills. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. I read more books to develop my reading abilities. I have more time to do what I like.
All in all, I think the “double reduction” policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称行文；在介绍“双减政策”前的课余生活时用一般过去时，介绍现在的课余生活时用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段承接开头点题；第二段具体讲述课余生活的变化；最后一段讲述作者对“双减政策”的看法。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，除了要含有两个复合句之外，还要正确运用好两个时态。
（2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）
《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对该谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；
3. 你的感悟，
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect” I mean _____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect” I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（（2022·湖北十堰·中考真题）
假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
优点 不足
优秀的老师 课外活动少
友好的同学 休息时间短
美丽的校园 ……
你的建议……
提示词：schoolyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. _______
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life.
There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time to participate in them.
In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2021·山东东营·中考真题）
生活中, 我们常会遇到这样的情况:当有人向你提出请求时, 答应他（say “yes”）, 违背自己的意愿;拒绝他（say “no”）, 又担心伤害感情, 左右为难。你是如何处理这种情况的？ 结合一次自身经历, 谈谈你的经验教训。请先补全题目, 然后写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2 . 照抄试卷内容不得分。
I said “___________”
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I said “no”
Last month, we had a math test. While I was working carefully, my friend Tony wanted to copy my answers. Though it was difficult to refuse him, I said "no". This made him angry.
After the test, I explained the reasons to him. We should get what we want by working hard, not by cheating. And also, getting good grades this way doesn't mean you have got the knowledge. I promised to help him with his study. He was very thankful. Now, he is doing better and better with my help.
I am happy with what I did. Saying "no" may be difficult but it can lead to a better solution.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求自身的经历，并讲述自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般过去时为主；讲述自己拒绝他人的经历叙述完整，条理清晰。
（2021·湖北十堰·中考真题）
“禾下乘凉”是我国“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士的梦想。他孜孜不倦地探究和实践，解决了人民的温饱问题。在物质充沛的今天，我们更应该珍惜粮食，节约资源，杜绝浪费。作为中学生，我们应该怎么做？近日，你班就此话题展开了热烈的讨论。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。
参考词汇：resource 资源；be particular about food 挑食； tap 水龙头
要点：
1. 就餐时，按需点餐，不挑食，光盘行动。
2. 节水、节电。如：随手关灯，关水龙头等。
3. 节约纸张。如：双面用纸等。
4. ……
要求：
1. 必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数 80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on how to save resources in our daily life. Here are some of my views._______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on how to save resources in our daily life. Here are some of my views.
First of all, we should never order more food than we can eat. Eat up everything in your plate and don’t be particular about food. Besides, we are expected to save water and electricity. For example, turn off the light or water tap after using it. What’s more, we are suggested to save every piece of paper and make full use of both sides of it. Last but not the least, low-carbon life is also a good choice such as taking a bus or walking to school if possible.
In a word, everyone can do something to save resources and make a difference.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以为珍惜粮食、节约资源、杜绝浪费主题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍作为中学生我们应该怎么做；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2021·湖南长沙市·中考真题）
最近, 你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like ”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点，并发表你自己的看法，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
(1) 80词左右（标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数）；
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Sam Good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades.
My parents are supportive. They always bring out the best in me. Bob
Amy Good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
What Are Good Parents Like
Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas.________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
What Are Good Parents Like
Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas. Sam thinks good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades. Bob says good parents always bring out the best in us. Amy agrees that good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
In my opinion, good parents should be good teachers as well as good friends of us. They should also set good examples for us.
【详解】
1.题干解读：文章要求以“What Are Good Parents Like ”为题写一篇作文，谈谈好父母是什么样的，综合已给出的同学们的观点并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第一人称相结合，使用一般现在时讲述大家的观点，要做到概括全面、语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2023·上海普陀·期中）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Should school breaks be longer ” according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，以“课间休息是否应该被延长？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
目前大多数学校的课间休息时间为10分钟，可以让学生进行适当放松，为下节课做必要准备，有些学生认为十分钟课间休息过短，建议延长，还有些学生认为10分钟课间休息对他们来说是足够的。你认为课间休息时间是否应该延长？为什么？
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
Should school breaks be longer
Some students think 10 minutes seems to be so limited for us middle school students. In my opinion, taking a ten-minute break between classes is enough.
During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作角度已给出，考生应注意适当添加细节，表达自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。给出自己的观点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己观点、课间活动”等角度具体论证。
[亮点词汇]
①be limited for对于某人很少
②instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. （动词不定式表示目的）
②When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.（时间状语从句）
（2023·河南南阳·期中）
在我们的学习生活中，难免会用到手机、电脑等发明。有人认为它们为我们带来了极大的便利，也有人认为它们危害无穷。我们应该如何看待和使用这些发明呢？
内容包括：
（1）请你从以上提示中选择某个观点；
（2）围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；
（3）这个事带给你的感受。
写作要求：
1．条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
2．文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There’s no doubt that inventions play an important part in our everyday lives. __________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
There’s no doubt that inventions play an important part in our everyday lives. They’ve made our lives more and more convenient. However, it’s necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides. Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And since I seldom played sports with friends, I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that though the phone is a great invention, I shouldn’t let it influence my schoolwork and health. So I made a decision to break the bad habit.
Now, I’m one of the top students in class and I’m much fitter. As you can see, though the phone is a great invention, we shouldn’t spend too much time on it.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章的主题；
第二步，介绍自己的经历，阐述发明对自己的影响；
第三步，阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make good use of好好利用
②kind of有点
③pay attention注意
[高分句型]
①And since I seldom played sports with friends, I got heavier and heavier. （since引导的原因状语从句）
②Finally, I realized that though the phone is a great invention, I shouldn’t let it influence my schoolwork and health.（宾语从句）
（2023·上海杨浦·期中）
Write a paragraph in at least 80 words to give your opinion according to the given information. (根据以下内容，写一段不少于80个单词的文字发表你的观点)
第2单元的主阅读Fishing with birds介绍了一种中国的传统技艺——鸬鹚捕鱼。文章结尾写道：In 50 years, perhaps there will be no more cormorant fishermen in the world. 你觉得鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺会消失吗？给出你的观点，提供至少两个理由，并进行适当的论证。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Cormorant fishing is a traditional skill in China. I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear. Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition. The technique of cormorant fishing is common in some rivers and scenic lakes. It is not only a way for fishermen to make money, but also promotes the development of tourism. It also protects, inherits and develops the achievements of intangible cultural heritage, making the characteristics of water towns a beautiful landscape that has been followed for thousands of years.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，点出鸬鹚捕鱼这项传统技艺不应消失的观点；
第二步，具体阐述论点，并加以论证；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②a symbol of……的象征
③thousands of成千上万的
[高分句型]
①I don’t think the traditional skill of cormorant fishing will disappear.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Cormorant fishing, a unique historical heritage, requires courage, skills, and close cooperation between man and eagle, which is a symbol of wildness, strength and tradition.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中）
假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作要点：
1. 得知他的情况，你感到很遗憾。
2. 你的看法：
（1）遵守规则是重要的。
（2）遵守规则使人受欢迎：
3. 告诉他如何做一名遵守规则（obey the rules）的中学生。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going ___________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m sorry to hear that you feel upset these days because you have too many rules to obey. Some of them are from your family and some from your school. I would like to give you some advice for your problems. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary. More often than not, obeying rules will make us popular among our classmates.
Since rules are important, what can you do to obey the rules The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart. Rules may limit your freedom, but they do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. In the school, you’d better not run after others, because it is dangerous. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them.
So much for my advice and wait for your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为书信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一名遵守规则的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“感受、看法、建议等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一名遵守规则的中学生的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我的建议到此为止，等待你的好消息”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as long as只要
②for example例如
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. (动词不定式作表语)
②When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them (when引导时间状语从句)