牛津版（深圳·广州）八年级上册（2013秋审查）Module 1 Unit 1 Encyclopaedias 单元话题满分范文

Unit 1 Encyclopaedias
单元话题满分范文必背
1．动物是我们的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己。但是现在有许多野生动物处于危险中。我们应该如何保护野生动物？请你根据下面提供的信息要点，用英语写一篇保护濒危动物的短文。内容包括：
1.现状：世界上许多野生动物处于危险中，例如老虎和熊猫。
2.原因：(1)村庄和农场变得更大，夺走了它们的领地，野生动物没有安全的居所，也没有足够的干净的水。
(2)一些人猎杀野生动物。
3.措施：(1) 我们应该多植树，帮助动物生活在和平环境中。
(2) 可以捐钱帮助保护动物。
(3)必须阻止人们猎杀野生动物。
作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。短文的题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Protecting Animals in Danger
There are many wild animals in danger in the world today, such as ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Protecting Animals in Danger
There are many wild animals in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas.
Now villages and farms are growing bigger and take away their land and forests. Many wild animals don’t have a safe place to live, and also there isn’t enough clean water. Some people even kill wild animals.
Animals are our best friends. To protect the animals is to protect ourselves. It’s very important for us to protect the wild animals. We should plant more trees. We can raise some money to help protect them. We must do something to stop people killing them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述濒危动物的现状；
第二步，分析动物濒危的原因；
第三步，提出保护濒危动物的具体措施。
[亮点词汇]
① take away 夺走
② stop doing 阻止做
[高分句型]
① Many wild animals don’t have a safe place to live. （不定式作后置定语）
② It’s very important for us to protect the wild animals. （It作形式主语）
2．根据内容要点提示用英文写一段文章，简要介绍一下中国的国宝(national treasure)——大熊猫(panda)。
字数：80词左右。首句已给出，但不计入总词数。
产地：中国四川，甘肃等省份（province）；
体貌特征：黑白相间毛皮（black and white fur），大眼睛，圆耳朵，身体虽胖但动作敏捷(move nimbly)，非常招人喜爱；
喜好：最爱吃竹子（bamboo）；会爬树、游泳；
寿命：一般20-25年；
数量：现在野外(wild)生存(survive)的仅有1,000多只，我们必须尽力保护好它们。
Pandas are China’s national treasure. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Pandas are China’s national treasure. They live in Sichuan Province, Shanxi Province, Gansu Province and so on. They have black and white fur, big eyes and round ears. Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. They are very cute and most people love them. They like eating bamboo best. Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. They can climb trees and swim. A panda usually lives twenty to twenty-five years. There are only over 1,000 pandas in the wild. We must try our best to protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍大熊猫的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。展开介绍大熊猫的体貌特征、喜好、寿命、数量；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家保护大熊猫，情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 大量的
②try our best to do尽力去做
③in the wild 在野外
[高分句型]
Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. （although引导的让步状语从句）
3．请以“An animal in danger”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一种处境处于危险中的动物，内容要点如下：
●What is the animal
●Where does it live
●What does it feed on
●Why is it in danger
●How difficult is the situation
●What can we do to save it
要求：
1、短文须包含以上主要内容，80词左右；
2、结构完整，语句通顺正确，上下文连贯，书写认真。
An animal in danger
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An animal in danger
Many animals are in danger because of human’s activities. South China tigers live in the forests and mountains of South China. It feeds on meat and other small animals. Some people are killing them in order to make money. So the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. It is terrible. And too many trees have been cut down. Villages and farms are taking away their forests. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out. Our government should punish the hunters. We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful, not only for human beings but also for animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍一种濒危的动物，注意要点齐全，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍哪种动物处于危险中、它们生活在哪里及它们以什么为食；
第二步，介绍它们为什么处于危险中及它们的处境；
第三步，介绍我们应该怎么做来拯救它们。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食
②the number of……的数量
③take away拿走
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. (where引导定语从句)
4．近来全球环境问题引起了人们对环境保护以及动物保护的思考。作为一名中学生，我们也可以为此做一些事。假如你是Zhang Bing，想申请加入动物保护协会，请用英文写一封加入协会的申请信，要点如下表：
Name Zhang Bing Grade 8
Email 8360922@ School Huaiwen Middle School
Free time 周末
Reasons for protecting animals 1. 有些人不明白保护动物的重要性； 2. 有些人砍伐大量的树木，……（结果） 3. 猎人们为了钱而捕杀动物，……
Ways to protect animals 采取措施保护动物： 1. 应该保护环境，为动物们提供一个良好的生活空间； 2. 建议身边人不要购买动物皮毛做成的衣服。 3. ……（自由发挥1-2句话）
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有要点，并可适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal Protection Society. First, let me introduce myself.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Bing
【答案】例文：
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Animal Protection Society. First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at Huaiwen Middle School. Now, some people don’t understand the importance of protecting animals. They cut plenty of trees for farms and buildings. This lead to less and less space for animals. Hunters kill them just for their fur and fun.
I think it is important for people to protect animals because animals are our friends. We should do something to protect the environment. So we can provide a good place for animals to live. We should not buy clothes that are made of fur. Moreover, our government should made laws to prevent people from killing animals.
I can take part in activities at weekends. I will be happy if I can be a member of Animal Protection Society. You can email me at 8360922@.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Bing
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想要加入动物保护协会的意愿，并进行自我介绍；
第二步，介绍保护动物的原因；
第三步，介绍保护动物的方法；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① prevent...from阻止
② take part in参加
[高分句型]
① I think it is important for people to protect animals because animals are our friends.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I will be happy if I can be a member of Animal Protection Society.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊 Teens将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。
注意：
1.词数90左右，需包括所有要点；
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and animals as well.
【答案】例文
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People often cut down trees and forests for money. What’s worse, people kill animals for their fur or bones. So many animals are in danger.
It’s time for us to save the earth and the wild animals. If we take action to protect our earth and animals right away, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and animals can live happily. Otherwise, terrible things will happen.
First, as students, we can try to be volunteers and do little things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy fur coats any more. Last but not least, we should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and loving the animals.
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and animals as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“地球是我们的家园”来引出下文中对三个问题的回答；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物面临的问题、为什么要保护动物和我们能做什么”三方面入手，重点介绍如何保护环境；
③第三步，书写结语。要立刻采取行动。
[亮点词汇]
①because of 因为
②cut down 砍
③what’s worse 更糟的事
④in danger 处于危险之中
⑤take action 采取行动
⑥right away 立刻
⑦what’s more 此外
⑧last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
[高分句型]
①If we take action to protect our earth and animals right away, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and animals can live happily.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．动物是人类的朋友，我们应该和动物和谐相处。令人悲哀的是，由于人类的过度砍伐和猎杀，越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。校保护野生动物社团针对这一问题开展征文活动。请你选取一种濒危动物，说明其现状和濒危的原因并发出保护动物的倡议。
内容提示：
1. What animal is in danger Why
2. What can we do to help them
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）词数在70词左右。
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【答案】例文：
Animals are our best friends, they are also an important part of nature, we can’t live without them. However, most of them are in danger, such as the pandas. The situation is becoming more and more difficult.
It’s hard to believe that there are only about 1600 pandas left in the wild and about 340 pandas in zoos and research centers. Why is the situation becoming so serious On the one hand, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. On the other hand, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller in these years. So it’s time for us to take actions to protect them. Why not plant more bamboo to make sure they have enough food What’s more, it’s also a good idea for us to give money to set enough natural parks to protect them in peace. Last but not least, don’t pollute the water and leaving them more forests can also help them a lot.
All in all, I believe that if everyone starts to do something to protect the animals, we all will live happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述动物的重要性，点题说明文章介绍的濒危动物为熊猫；
第二步，介绍熊猫的现状以及濒危的原因；
第三步，提出保护熊猫的合理化建议，并发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②such as例如
③on the one hand, on the other hand一方面，另一方面
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it’s also a good idea for us to give money to set enough natural parks to protect them in peace.（不定式作目的状语）
②I believe that if everyone starts to do something to protect the animals, we all will live happier.（宾语从句；条件状语从句）
7．假如你们学校正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动，请从图片中选择一种野生动物，并根据思维导图的提示，以校学生会名义写一封80词左右的英文倡议书，号召更多的人加入保护野生动物队伍。
写作要求：
1. 倡议书须包括思维导图中所提示内容，省略号部分作适当发挥；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet earth. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black strips. Tigers like living in groups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals for food, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on. However, these big cats are in great danger now. They don’t have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let’s take action now!
Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点提示，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；短文开头已经给出，注意内容的衔接；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，野生动物很重要，但面临着困境，表达写倡议书的目的；
第二步，介绍最喜欢的动物名称，按照思维导图介绍该动物的相关情况；
第三步，表达自己的观点，呼吁大家保护野生动物。
［亮点词汇］
① call on 号召
② in great danger 处于巨大的危险之中
［高分句型］
① I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. (宾语从句)
② They don’t have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. (and连接并列句)
8．野生动物是生态系统里重要的成员，跟大自然关系非常密切。保护野生动物就是保护人类自己。请从所给图片中选择一种野生动物 (或另选一种)，并根据所给提示，以“Protecting ________ (动物名称)”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，在你校英语俱乐部正在举办的以“保护野生动物”为主题的活动中作专题演讲。
提示：
（1）Could you please say something about their looks, food, qualities and abilities.
（2）What problems do they face
（3）What can we do to help protect them
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发展；
（3）词数100字左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Protecting _______________
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report on protecting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you very much!
【答案】例文：
Protecting Tigers
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report on protecting tigers. Tigers are the kings of the animal world. They are big and strong. They have very bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark strips. They can run very fast, but only for a short while. They are able to swim and climb. Tigers like to live alone. They live on animals like deer, sheep.
Sadly, there are not many tigers left in the wild now. They are in danger because hunters catch tigers for their fur, bones or other parts of the body. Also, some people want to make the forests smaller and smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less space for tigers.
Moreover, So we should take action to protect tigers. If we do nothing, soon there will be none left. We should encourage the government to make laws to provide cover and food for them. What’s more, We should also prevent the hungers from hunting them. Last but not least, we should build more reserves to protect the forests so that tigers can have enough living space. Wild animals are our friends. It’s our duty to help them live a happy life in the wild.
That’s all. Thank you very much!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生需要补全题目并且根据“要点提示”中的问题给出相应的回答，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先选择熟悉的动物，补全标题，根据要点的提示描述老虎的特征，如相貌，食物，品质，能力等；
第二步，阐述具体面临的问题。主要从“猎人狩猎老虎”以及“老虎生存环境”两个方面来阐述面临的问题；
第三步，书写具体保护措施。主要从政府层面出台保护文件、防止猎人过度捕杀以及保护森林三个方面提出措施。
[亮点词汇]
①prevent sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
②encouraged sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③moreover而且
④what’s more更重要的
[高分句型]
①They are in danger because hunters catch tigers for their fur, bones or other parts of the body.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If we do nothing, soon there will be none left. （if引导条件状语从句，there be句型）
③Last but not least, we should build more reserves to protect the forests so that tigers can have enough living space.（so that引导状语从句）
9．假如你是Andy，你校Wildlife Protection Club正在招募新成员，请你根据提示，用英语写一封申请信。
1.八年级学生，乐于助人，喜爱冬季，可以堆雪人、打雪仗；
2.热爱大自然，想要更多地了解动物，保护它们；
3.人类砍伐森林导致自然灾害多发，动物处境危险，……
4.每周日下午可以参加活动，联系方式 0510—53574589 或者Andy@.
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，词数90词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.必须包括所有要点，结构合理，字迹工整，并适当发挥；
3.不要出现学校和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Wildlife Protection Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Andy
【答案】例文：
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Wildlife Protection Club. My name is Andy. I’m an eighth grade student. I am ready to help others. I love winter because I can make snowmen and have snowball fights. I love nature. I want to know more about animals and protect them. Human deforestation leads to frequent natural disasters, and animals are in danger. So that their number is getting smaller and smaller. I can take part in activities every Sunday afternoon. My phone number is 0510—53574589 or my email address is Andy@.
Yours sincerely,
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，为应用文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已经给出，需要细化，且可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达想要进入俱乐部的意愿；
第二步，介绍自己并说明想要加入俱乐部的原因；
第三步，留下自己的联系方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to...准备好做某事
②lead to导致
③take part in参加，加入
[高分句型]
①I love winter because I can make snowmen and have snowball fights. （原因状语从句）
②Human deforestation leads to frequent natural disasters, and animals are in danger. （并列句）
10．动物是人类的朋友，我们应该善待动物。请根据下表中的提示“Let’s help animals”为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文，呼吁人们热爱动物，保护动物。开头已给出，但不计入字数。
动物数量减 少的原因 1. 人们捕杀（kill）动物，为了得到它们的肉或皮毛（fur）； 2. 人们乱砍滥伐（cut down）树木，夺走（take away）了它们赖以生存的家园。
保护动物的 措施和建议 1. 禁止捕杀动物； 2. 禁止乱砍滥伐树木： 3. ……
Let’s help animals
Animals are our friends. We should be kind to them.
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【答案】写作范文：
Animals are our friends. We should be kind to them. But now people kill many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Many animals have no place to live in, so they are becoming fewer and fewer.
It is not right to kill animals. People should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. Our government should plant more and more trees. We also need to work hard to set up the nature park.
In a word, let’s find out what else we can do to save as many animals as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍动物数量减少的原因
第二步，提出保护动物的建议；
第三步，呼吁大家行动起来保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down 砍倒
②take away 带走
③set up 建立
[高分句型]
①Many animals have no place to live in, so they are becoming fewer and fewer.（比较级+and+比较级）
②In a word, let’s find out what else we can do to save as many animals as possible.（宾语从句）