(共18张PPT)
Unit 3
Family Matters
Period 5
Developing ideas
Writing about a family memory
Brainstorming
homesick
parents
delicious meal
your warm bed
dogs/cats
old photos
What do you miss most when you feel homesick
...
2006
Memories may fade away as time goes by.
Why don’t we write down those special memories
1. What brought back the author’s lovely memory
2. What happened in the
author’s memory
3. Why is it a lovely memory
who
when
what
how
where
Read the journal entry
and answer the questions.
1. What brought back the author’s lovely memory
ten years ago, mother’s birthday
An old photo.
2. What happened
in the author’s
memory
who
when
what
how
where
basic
elements
Read the journal entry
and answer the questions.
mother and I
cooked eggs
at home
eggs were burnt, ate them all
It was the author’s mother’s birthday. She wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
3. Why is it a lovely memory
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
impressive
interesting
lovely
Read the journal entry
and answer the questions.
What do you think of the story
Let’s appreciate some sentences
and learn about the author’s way of writing.
1
1. As I was looking at it, the lovely memory of that day came back to me.
personification 拟人
used for the beginning
2. I think love is indeed a magical ingredient (原料) .
metaphor 暗喻
Love is a magical ingredient.
3. I woke up really early and tiptoed to the kitchen.
2. I think love is indeed a magical ingredient(原料).
1. As I was looking at it, the lovely memory of that day came back to me.
vivid
Let’s appreciate some sentences
and learn about the author’s way of writing.
language feature
past tenses
real
It was my mother’s birthday ten years ago, and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled- eggs. I woke up really and tiptoed to the kitchen.
I had never cooked anything before, so I tried to copy how she did it. But somehow they ended up burnt.
... I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient. In fact, we ended up laughing and ate them all.
It was Spring Festival. I got a lot hongbao.
Gently and smilingly, mum came and said, “Honey, I will keep the money for you. ”
Heartbroken and mad, I burst into tears and cried, “It’s unfair!”
Work in groups. Try to make the description more vivid.
2006~2021
Think of a special family memory of your own.
Who was in the memory
When did it happen
Where did it take place
What happened
Why is it special or memorable
Write a short story about the memory. 15’
Useful expressions
Last summer,…/In 2015,…
/Many years ago,…
I was at…
It made me feel so…
I remember this because…
I learnt that…
Share your story with the class.
cheerful
warm
relaxing
sad
Evaluation
项目 basic elements & language 标准 real (真实) vivid (生动充实) thought-provoking
(发人深省) tenses
(时态正确)
互评
师评
Listen carefully and make some comments on your classmates’ writing.
Memories bring back those lovely, touching, funny, precious, and even sad moments to us. It is these memories that will remind us how family matters to all of us.
Summary
Finish and polish your writing.
Don’t forget to share the precious memory with your family.
Thank you!