Unit 1 How can we become good learners
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作 素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的人与自我之“生活与学习”,涉及子主题“恰当的学习方法与策略”。
典例研磨——示范引领
假如你是李华,已升入高中,现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语的学习方法。请以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
参考词语:ability, challenge
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:以第一人称为主
2.定时态:以一般现在时为主
3.定核心:介绍学习英语的方法
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 润色成篇
To Be a Successful English Learner Dear schoolmates, I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be invited here to share my ideas about how to learn English well.① To be a successful English learner, we should have a good study habit. We can keep diaries every day to improve our English.② We should also make full use of learning resources③, such as reading newspapers, listening to English songs and so on. We should improve our ability to listen, speak, read and write④. ①开篇点题,引出介绍学习英语的方法这一话题。 ②运用话题词汇keep diaries介绍学习方法,学以致用。 ③also的运用使上下文之间衔接更紧密。 ④从能力提升和文化素养方面提出建议,丰富写作内容。
When we study English, we’re sure to meet all kinds of different problems. We should try our best to solve these difficulties and face the challenges.⑤ In my opinion⑥, we should read and write in English every day. To practice, we can also speak to our friends and classmates in English. Thanks for your listening. ⑤运用try our best介绍在英语学习中如何面对困难和挑战,用词贴切,具有号召力。 ⑥用in my opinion引出自己的观点,衔接自然。
实战写作——迁移创新
为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,某英语报社正在举办以“How to Be a Good Learner”为题的征文比赛。请你根据下列提示,写一篇英语征文稿。
提示:1.拥有良好的学习习惯;
2.经常参加学习小组;
3.参加体育锻炼 ……
要求:1.必须包括全部要点,可以适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:good habits(好习惯), get ready for(准备好), go over(复习)
How to Be a Good Learner
If you want to be a good learner, having good habits is important.
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【参考范文】
How to Be a Good Learner
If you want to be a good learner, having good habits is important.
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class.After class,we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.It ’s good to study in groups and help each other.As a student, working hard is important,but don ’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.Because doing sports can make our mind active.It ’s good for getting good grades.We should do more reading in our free time.If we have any problems, we ’d better ask others for help.I hope all these will be helpful to us.