2024年湖北中考英语真题作文试题分析及范文

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2024年湖北中考英语作文试题分析及范文
一、真题重现：
假设学校开展了“畅享阅读”的征文活动，请结合自身经历和下面的提示写一篇征文。
Enjoy reading
1.Why do you like reading for pleasure,for knowledge...
2.What kind of books do you like story book science book...
3.What are your reading habits take notes,draw mind maps...
I often read books in my free time. _____________
二、题型分析：
1. 作文主题和内容以纯英文的方式出现，体现了英语作为一门语言的实用性。它的主题是“畅享阅读”，设计非常好，符合现在的崇尚阅读的社会理念，每一个学生看到这个主题都能有话可说。
2. 作文的三个问题非常简单，没有生单词，基础较差的同学也几乎能理解。它们涵盖了阅读的原因、书籍的类型和阅读的习惯或方式。这些问题的设计使得学生在动笔时有了明确的方向，减少畏难情绪，就可以有针对性地叙述，写出丰富的内容。
三、高分技巧：
1、书写工整，书面整洁，鲜少涂改痕迹。
2、认真审题，确定时态，对每个问题的参考内容进行适当添加（至少一项），拟定提纲。
3、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。
4、分段合理。全文分段一般三自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。并且要点齐全，一个都不能缺。
5、使用大量的高级词汇和句型。
6、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。
7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、全文中同一个意思，基本不重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等。
9、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。首尾呼应，自然成一体。
四、预测丢分的地方：
1. 把作文的内容写成对话形式：这是一个偏离主题的错误，作文应着重在叙述和讨论，而不是采用对话形式。
2. 直接把作文题目的三个问题的答案照抄一遍：这样做无法展示你的思考和观点，失去了写作的意义。
3. 没有认真审题，就直接以编篱笆的方式写作文，没有任何条理：这是没有遵循写作规范的错误，会影响作文的质量和可读性。
4. 作文句式以中式英语为主，很难找到地道的英语句子：这是由于英语基础不扎实导致的，需要加强英语句式的学习和练习。
5. 没有在试卷和草稿纸上打草稿，直接在答题卡上写作文，出现字迹潦草或多处修改：这是由于没有提前准备和规划导致的，会影响阅卷老师对你的印象，建议在草稿纸上先进行简单的构思和修改。
总的来说，要想在写作中取得好成绩，需要注重基础知识的掌握，加强英语句式的练习，并养成良好的写作习惯。
五、参考作文：
Enjoy reading（一）
I often read books in my free time. Sometimes I read books for pleasure, sometimes I read books for help, but I usually read books for knowledge.
In my study there are more than 200 books including story books, science books and comic books. Among them, I like science books best because I am interested in science. And I think reading science books can improve my imagination. When I read books, I often take notes by writing down beautiful sentences or valuable thoughts. I also draw mind maps after finishing reading a book. I believe this way can help me better understand the book.
What do you think of reading Can you share your opinion.
Enjoy reading（二）
I often read books in my free time.I became a member of the club when I was young. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books.
In my opinion, reading has changed me a lot more than I expected. I am not shy
anymore and I'm willing to try something new. Reading opens up a new world to me. What's more, I was so lucky to make lots of friends who shared the same interest with me.It not only leaves us good memories but also makes us learn a lot.I often read by taking notes and make map minds.
I enjoy reading. I hope I will become better and better.
Enjoy reading（三）
I often read books in my free time.Now I am a middle school student.Reading is playing an important part in my daily life.
When I was a little girl,my mother always read comic stories to me,which made me interested in reading. When 1 was older, I began to read whatever I found interesting including Robinson Crusoe, The Romance of the Three Kingdoms I was moved by the main characters. Sometimes I takes notes .While reading, I feel peaceful. I get all kinds of knowledge from reading.Because I love reading. I become rich in knowledge and I am better at all subjects.It can not only open up our eyes to the world but also make our life colorful.
As Goethe said, "One book,one world."
Now reading makes me a better person. It makes my life colorful.
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