中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题32 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类（第01期）
（2024·四川南充·中考真题）
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
From: Eric
To: Li Ming
Subject: Give me a hand!
Dear Li Ming,
You know I’m studying in a new school now and I don’t know anyone here. I find it hard to get on well with my classmates. Would you please give me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Eric
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ming
（2024·四川遂宁·中考真题）
今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文章语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·吉林·中考真题）
当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性；
（2）寻求帮助的益处；
（3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例；
（4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Asking for Help
There might be some problems or worries in life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·黑龙江绥化·中考真题）
当毕业的歌声再次响起，即将离校的你一定有许多心里话要说……假如你是李华，请假据你初中四年的经历，给学弟、学妹写一封信，对他们的学习和生活提几点建议。
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 词数不少于80词。（信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·甘肃临夏·中考真题）
阅读使人快乐，让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书，你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈你的阅读收获。
写作要求：
1．内容包含提示中所有要点；
2．条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·山东烟台·中考真题）
假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。
主要内容包括：
1.演出时间、地点；
2.课本剧内容简介及意义；
3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your attention!
（2024·四川乐山·中考真题）
学校正开展“我运动我健康”主题周活动，旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加，增强健康意识。为此，校报面向全校同学开展“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并在文中希望大家积极参加体育运动。内容包括：
1．最喜爱乒乓球；
2．强身健体，对眼睛有益；
3．减少压力，放松心情；
4．面对困难，绝不放弃。
注意：
1．词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．根据提示要点，并适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名及学校。
参考词汇：stress (n.) 压力
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named “Sports and Health Week”. I’ve got great benefits from sports. So I’d like to share my favourite sport here.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题32 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类（第01期）
（2024·四川南充·中考真题）
假如你是李明，最近你的英国笔友Eric发来求助邮件。请你根据下面邮件的内容给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
From: Eric
To: Li Ming
Subject: Give me a hand!
Dear Li Ming,
You know I’m studying in a new school now and I don’t know anyone here. I find it hard to get on well with my classmates. Would you please give me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Eric
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
To: Eric
From: Li Ming
Subject: Re: Give me a hand!
Dear Eric,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ming
【答案】参考范文
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting on with your classmates. It is understandable for new students to have such problems
I have some suggestions for you. Firstly, I strongly advise you to keep smiling. It’s a way to show you’re friendly. What’s more, you are supposed to be helpful. Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others. Finally, try to find someone who has the same interest. If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about. Then you will be friends soon.
Above are my suggestions for you. I really hope you will get on well with your classmates and live a happy school life.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给邮件内容完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很抱歉听到这个消息；
第二步，具体给出自己的建议；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
② what’s more而且
③ try to do sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①Everybody wants to make friends with people who always help others.（定语从句）
②If you have the same hobbies, you will have more to talk about.（条件状语从句）
（2024·四川遂宁·中考真题）
今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥；
3. 文章语句通顺，行文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：virtue (n. 美德) accompany (v. 陪伴) raise (v. 养育) educate (v. 教育)
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Growing up, I’ve seen my grandparents’ selfless love and dedication to our family. They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders.
To achieve this, we can help our elders with their chores. Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don’t feel lonely. It’s also necessary to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it’s important to take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时和一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示信息，结合自己的生活进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，结合自己的生活介绍为什么要关爱及尊敬长辈；
第二步，介绍如何关爱及尊敬长辈；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家采取行动。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on集中于
②spend time doing sth花时间做某事
③in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①They helped to look after me and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Spending time communicating with our elders is important so that they don’t feel lonely. (动名词作主语)
（2024·吉林·中考真题）
当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性；
（2）寻求帮助的益处；
（3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例；
（4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Asking for Help
There might be some problems or worries in life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Asking for Help
There might be some problems or worries in life. When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others. It’s important to ask for help, and it will help you relax.
Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because of this problem, my English was not good. So I went to ask my English teacher for help. With the help of my teacher and my own efforts, my English score has gradually improved. Now I’ve really learned how to learn lessons myself.
In a word, it is normal to have problems. When we meet problems, we can ask people around us for help, such as teachers, classmates or parents. In addition, we can also search the Internet for solutions.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处；
第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例；
第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① ask for help寻求帮助
② because of因为
③ in a word总之
[高分句型]
When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句）
（2024·黑龙江绥化·中考真题）
当毕业的歌声再次响起，即将离校的你一定有许多心里话要说……假如你是李华，请假据你初中四年的经历，给学弟、学妹写一封信，对他们的学习和生活提几点建议。
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 词数不少于80词。（信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
How is it going It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you.
First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school. You must listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework carefully after school. Second, it’s also important to keep healthy. To keep healthy, you can exercise often and eat regularly. Third, you must follow rules both in and out of school. For example, following the rules at school can make you behave well.
Following the traffic rules can make you safe. Last, you can develop a hobby. It can make your life interesting and full.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给学弟学妹们的建议”来引出下文中对具体建议的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“努力学习、保持健康和遵守规则”三方面入手，给出具体的建议；
③第三步，书写结语。希望学弟学妹们的生活能有趣充实。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②both...and 两者都
[高分句型]
①First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school.（it作形式主语）
（2024·甘肃临夏·中考真题）
阅读使人快乐，让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书，你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈你的阅读收获。
写作要求：
1．内容包含提示中所有要点；
2．条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Books are our best friends. Reading books can increase our knowledge and make us wiser. It can broaden our horizons and we can improve ourselves by reading.
We should read different kinds of books, such as science books, novels, history books and so on. Second, it’s important for us to have a proper reading plan. We can read five days a week and one hour a day. Keeping a good reading habit helps us manage our time and have a better understanding of books. Reading in a quiet and comfortable place is also important.
Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明阅读的好处；
第二步，具体针对阅读给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①improve ourselves 提升我们自己
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③have a better understanding of 对……有了更好的了解
[高分句型]
①It can broaden our horizons and we can improve ourselves by reading.（并列句）
②Keeping a good reading habit helps us manage our time and have a better understanding of books.（并列结构）
（2024·山东烟台·中考真题）
假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。
主要内容包括：
1.演出时间、地点；
2.课本剧内容简介及意义；
3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your attention!
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend. It is a story about an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Yu Gong decided to move the mountains with his family. Many people laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
After watching the drama, you are welcome to give your opinions and suggestions on it.
Thanks for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍课本剧表演的时间和地点；
第二步，讲述《愚公移山》的故事以及从这个故事中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
②give up放弃
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend.（一般将来时被动语态）
②He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died.（宾语从句）
（2024·四川乐山·中考真题）
学校正开展“我运动我健康”主题周活动，旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加，增强健康意识。为此，校报面向全校同学开展“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并在文中希望大家积极参加体育运动。内容包括：
1．最喜爱乒乓球；
2．强身健体，对眼睛有益；
3．减少压力，放松心情；
4．面对困难，绝不放弃。
注意：
1．词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．根据提示要点，并适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名及学校。
参考词汇：stress (n.) 压力
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named “Sports and Health Week”. I’ve got great benefits from sports. So I’d like to share my favourite sport here.
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【答案】参考范文
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named “Sports and Health Week”. I’ve got great benefits from sports. So I’d like to share my favourite sport here.
My favourite sport is table tennis, which has brought more than pleasure for me. Playing table tennis makes me strong and healthy. Especially, it is good for my eyes. It also helps me reduce my daily stress and relax myself. What’s more, I’m brave enough through playing this game, so I never give up when I face difficulties.
Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us take an active part in sports. Let’s enjoy the real fun that sports bring in!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍最爱的运动；
第二步，具体阐述这项运动带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①more than不仅仅
②give up放弃
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①My favourite sport is table tennis, which has brought more than pleasure for me.（which引导定语从句）
②What’s more, I’m brave enough through playing this game, so I never give up when I face difficulties.（when引导时间状语从句）
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