中考英语二轮书面表达话题作文—— 学习方法分享（含参考范文+解析）

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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
学习方法分享
1．（2024上·江苏扬州·九年级统考期末） 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受，并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习（或生活）经历，根据以下提示和要求，用英语完成一篇短文。
Have a Meaningful School Life
你三年的学习生活感受。 你的收获： 学习上； 课外生活。 你的建议： 1.保持身心健康； 2.（补充 1—2 点）
要求：
(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end.
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I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【答案】例文：
How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end. In the last three years, I have made great progress.
Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates. I have fallen in love with playing basketball since I was in Grade Seven. I often play basketball with my classmates when I am free. So I’ve made a lot of friends. I’ve been a member of the basketball club for three years.
Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble. Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own. 　　
I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时，现在完成时；
③提示：结合表格所列出的要点提示，完成短文，注意避免语法错误，不要遗漏写作要点，可适当增加细节，确保上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总体介绍初中三年的感受—— 取得了很大进步；
第二步：介绍你在学习上和课外生活上的收获；
第三步：介绍你给学弟学妹的建议；
第四步：书写结语——希望大家都能实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress 取得很大进步
②fall in love with... 爱上……
③on one’s own 独自
[高分句型]
①Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates. (although引导的让步状语从句)
②Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．（2024上·北京·九年级统考期末）好的习惯有着无穷的力量，它如同种子在日复一日的坚持中生根发芽，茁壮成长。
学校英文网站开展“好习惯伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一个好习惯是什么，你是如何保持的以及它带给你的收获。
不少于50 词；文中已给出内容不计入总词数；所给提示词语仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：reading, keep doing, free time, improve, knowledge
提示问题：
● What is your good habit
● How do you keep your good habit
● What can you get from your good habit
Good habits can change our whole life.
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【答案】范文
Good habits can change our whole life. One of my good habits is taking notes in class.
In class, I take down what my teachers write on the blackboard and other important points about my lessons. I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. Before I do my homework and take exams, I review my notes carefully.
The habit of taking notes helps me become a successful student. It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades.
A good habit really helps me in my study and daily life. I’ll keep it lifelong.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，介绍的好习惯是什么；
第二步，介绍你是如何保持你的好习惯的；
第三步，介绍你从这个好习惯中得到了什么；
第四步，书写总结。
［亮点词汇］
① take down 记录，记下
② get good grades 取得好成绩
［高分句型］
① I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. (so that引导目的状语从句)
② It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades. (not only…but also…引导并列句)
3．（2023下·重庆渝中·九年级重庆巴蜀中学校考开学考试）新学期开始了，这学期是初中生活的最后一学期，合理利用时间，高效地学习对于每位同学来说显得尤为重要。为此你所在的班级准备开展一次班会，请你写一篇发言稿，号召全班同学调整自己的学习方法、珍惜时间、提高学习效率，为迎接中考做好充分的准备。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
参考信息：
1. 谈一谈好的学习方法的重要性；
2. 怎么建立好的学习方法；
3.……
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【答案】例文
As a student in Grade 9, I think we should try our best to enter a good high school. We’d better study harder than we used to. During the class, we must listen to the teachers carefully and take good notes. We should also finish our homework on time. As we know, failure is the mother of success, so we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes, instead. We need to learn from our mistakes. It is important to ask more questions and think more. Besides, we must develop good learning skills.
To fight for our dream, we should make study plans first, then keep going on and never give up. I sincerely hope we all can enter our dream school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何建立好的学习方法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好的学习方法的重要性；
第二步，介绍怎么建立好的学习方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①As we know, failure is the mother of success, so we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes, instead. (so连接的并列句)
②To fight for our dream, we should make study plans first, then keep going on and never give up. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级校联考期末）学校举办”My Homework, My Idea”的英语演讲比赛，号召同学们畅想自己喜欢的英语课后作业。假定你是李华，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇演讲稿参赛。词数80左右。
Content Purpose Advantage
Leam an English song To sing it in class Learn more words
Draw a mind map To review one’s English notes …
… … …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. I have many good ideas about creative English homework because English is my favorite subject.
Firstly, we can learn to sing an English song and sing it in class. In this way, we can learn more words. Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. Thirdly, it’s also proud of us to make a video to introduce our traditional Chinese culture in English. We can post it online so that more foreigners can know about our great country. I hope we can have more creative English homework.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出“我的作业，我的想法”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课后作业内容、目的、好处”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达”感谢聆听“。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of骄傲
②make a video制作视频
③introduce介绍
[高分句型]
①Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope we can have more creative English homework.（省略that的宾语从句）
5．（2024上·河南洛阳·九年级统考期末）凡事预则立，不预则废。成功的人生需要规划。作为一名中学生，请你以“My study plan”为题，说说你计划如何提升自己的学习。
要求:
（1）文中不要出现所在学校和学生真实名称；
（2）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。
My study plan
To improve my study grades, I’ve made a study plan.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My study plan
To improve my study grades, I’ve made a study plan. Especially, my poor English.
First, I will do some reading and watch three English movies every week. This will not only help me learn more words and better understand Western culture but also help me develop a good sense of language. Second, keeping an English diary is a good way to improve my English writing. Third, I will learn from others and improve my learning methods. Besides, I’ll make use of every chance to practice speaking English and communicate with others in English.
I believe nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it. With my study plan, I believe I’ll make great progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：学生应注意要详细介绍计划如何提升自己的学习。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明制定学习计划的原因；
第二步，具体阐述自己的学习计划；
第三步，表明自己要全身心投入其中，为了进步而努力。
[亮点词汇]
① do some reading做一些阅读
② develop a good sense of language培养良好的语感
③ learn from others向他人学习
④ practice speaking English 练习说英语
[高分句型]
① This will not only help me learn more words and better understand Western culture but also help me develop a good sense of language.（not only…but also…）
② Second, keeping an English diary is a good way to improve my English writing.（动名词作主语）
③ I believe nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it.（I believe+宾语从句）
6．（2024·福建三明·统考一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友 Anna 的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible versions：
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken by the most people in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，给出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
hear from收到……的信
suggest建议
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
communicate交流
admire欣赏
be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.(省略that的宾语从句)
Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.（动名词作主语）
7．（2024上·云南昭通·九年级统考期末）提示：假如你是Li Lin，你的笔友Mary刚来昆明不久，她的中文不好，在与他人交流的过程中遇到很多问题。Mary下决心学好中文。请你给Mary写封信，给她一些学习中文的建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，给出部分不计入总词数。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble communicating with others in Kunming. I’ll give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you. I’m sure you can make great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Lin
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble communicating with others in Kunming. I’ll give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great importance to be confident about yourself. Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making mistakes. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. Last but not least, sometimes you can use body language. As you know, it is also widely used across cultures and very often it works.
I hope my suggestions can help you. I’m sure you can make great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对对方遇到的问题表达同情，并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍学习中文的一些建议；
第三步，最后书写结尾，希望自己的建议对她有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be confident about yourself对你自己有信心
②be afraid of害怕
③make mistakes犯错
④Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
⑤make yourself understood使自己被理解
[高分句型]
①First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.（祈使句；when引导的时间状语从句）
②As you know, it is also widely used across cultures and very often it works.（as引导的非限制性定语从句；被动语态）
8．（2024上·河北保定·九年级统考期末）李华的表弟小刚是上海的一名九年级学生，下面是小刚给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以李华的名义进行回复。
I failed my English exam last week. I don’t know what to do with the study pressure. I tried some ways to remember English words, but they didn’t work. Can you tell me how to remember English words and deal with study pressure
注意：
（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题，可适当发挥。
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi Xiao Gang,
I’m happy to receive your email from Shanghai.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Hi Xiao Gang,
I’m happy to receive your email from Shanghai. I’m sorry to hear that you failed your English exam last week. Don’t worry. I will help you deal with your problems. Here are some tips to help you remember English words and deal with study pressure.
Firstly, you can learn some spelling rules, such as the rules of letter pronunciation and the rules of letter-combination pronunciation. Secondly, speak the word while memorizing it. Thirdly, never memorize single English words, make as many associations and connections as possible. Finally, you should keep reciting every day and use flashcards to memorize words and test yourself regularly. Talk to your teachers or classmates if you have any pressure or need help. Also you can do sports to relax yourself.
If you follow these tips, I believe you will remember English words so well. Just keep trying and believe yourself, you will improve a lot every day. Come on!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很抱歉听到你英语考试没考好的消息”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——如何记单词、缓解压力均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“努力尝试并相信自己，你会每天有进步”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②learn some spelling rules学习一些拼写规则
③keep reciting坚持背诵
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, never memorize single English words, make as many associations and connections as possible.(祈使句用法)
②Talk to your teachers or classmates if you have any pressure or need help.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9．（2024上·重庆綦江·九年级统考期末）最近，在四川成都大熊猫基地，一位卖水果的孃孃（auntie）用流利英语与外国顾客交流。 路人拍下的视频随即在网上热传。
Auntie: Which one do you want to buy You may choose… Foreign customer: I want to choose… How much is it Auntie: This… half a kilo fifteen yuan. This… half a kilo twenty yuan. I discount for you. Foreign customer: Twelve. Auntie: Okay, one kilo or half kilo One kilo twenty-four yuan. Foreign customer: Wechat pay or Ailpay or cash Auntie: Alipay. … May I ask where you are from Foreign customer: Egypt. Auntie: 哦，埃及。 Foreign customer: She is speaking very good English. Auntie: It’s not important (le). The most importantly… you buy my fruit … Ha ha ha ha ha ~ ~
请以Learning From Her为题写一篇短文，向学校微信公众号的Learners of English板块投稿。
内容提示：
1. What do you think of the auntie
2. Comparing with her, what have you done well or not so well in English learning
3. How will you go with your following English learning
…
要求：
1.必须包含以上提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.80~120词，已经给出的开头几词，不计入总词数。
Learning From Her
In my eyes, the fruit-selling auntie
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【答案】例文
Learning From Her
In my eyes, the fruit-selling auntie is very excellent. Though she is old, she still keeps studying. Since I was eight years old, I have learnt English. My written English is very good and I often get high grades. But my spoken English is not good so I am afraid to speak in front of the public.
I will do something to improve my spoken English. Firstly, I will go to English Corner in our school every week to communicate with our foreign teachers. Secondly, I will keep the habit of retelling whatever I read in my own words, which is an effective way. Thirdly, I will try my best to create English environment. For example, I will imagine being interviewed by a foreigner or making a speech in front of a foreign audience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的英语学习情况以及如何进行接下来的英语学习，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己对这位孃孃的看法；
第二步，介绍自己在英语学习方面哪些做得好，哪些做得不好；
第三步，介绍自己接下来如何学习英语。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
②communicate with和某人交流
③try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①Since I was eight years old, I have learnt English. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②I will keep the habit of retelling whatever I read in my own words, which is an effective way. (which引导的定语从句)
10．（2024上·辽宁丹东·九年级统考期末）随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以“Chinese Learning”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，代表班级参加下个月学校举办的“爱我中华”演讲比赛。要点如下：
（1）学好汉语的必要性；
（2）学好汉语的方法及个人学习汉语经历；
（3）号召全世界人学习汉语。
注意：
（1）文中不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）词数：80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellows,
I’m glad to be here, telling you about____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and fellows,
I’m glad to be here, telling you about learning Chinese. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers, it’s necessary to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in the primary school. At first, I was weak in it, and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on, reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese. I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can.
I hope people all over the world will come to learn Chinese.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学好汉语的必要性；
第二步，介绍个人学习汉语经历以及学习汉语的方法；
第三步，最后号召全世界人学习汉语。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of随着……的发展
②stressed out有压力的
③from then on从那时起
[高分句型]
①Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in the primary school.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I often went to the library which was near my home.（which引导的定语从句）
11．（2024上·北京·九年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你上个月完成了北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。
要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
提示词语：
practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地)
提示问题：
●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English
●What have you achieved
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking
I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. At the same time, I like listening to English songs and watching English movies. Now I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，一封书信。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：学习方法不唯一，言之有理即可，注意前后逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学习方法。
第二步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on doing坚持做某事
②At the same time同时
③communicate with foreigners和外国人交流
[高分句型]
①I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. (动词不定式表目的)
②I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. (宾语从句)
12．（2024上·内蒙古通辽·九年级校联考期末）假如你叫王明，你的好朋友李华写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。
建议包括：上课认真听讲，努力学习各门功课，多阅读科学书籍，多向别人请教……
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇：subject，science，question，keep on
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up. Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common. Here is some advice about how to realize your dream.
First, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class. It may help you be good at your lessons. Second, try to do well in all your subjects, especially science. In your free time. you can also read some science books. It can help develop your interest in science and open your eyes to the world. Finally, don’t feel shy to ask for help from others. Remember: Two heads are always better than one.
I hope your dream will come true.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明自己写信的目的——向对方提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从“上课认真听讲、努力学习各门功课、多阅读科学书籍、多向别人请教”等方面给出具体建议；
第三步，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have something in common有一些相同之处
②be good at擅长
③ask for寻求
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common（though引导的让步状语从句）
②I hope your dream will come true.（宾语从句）