(共32张PPT)
B4 U2
Integrated skills
①Thinking (审题)
②Outlining(列提纲,写要点)
③Expanding(扩词成句)
④Linking(连句成篇)
⑤Polishing(润色定稿)
How to Write a composition
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter给你写信问你最喜欢的音乐家是谁。请你用英文回复邮件,内容包括:
1.音乐家的简介;
2.喜欢他/她的原因;
3.他/她的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
Para.1 开头
Para.2 正文
Para.3 结尾
Outlining (列出提纲,写要点)
Step 2
要点二
要点一
写作背景+写作目的
简介和贡献
影响
我最欣赏的音乐家是贝多芬。知道你想了解他,我迫不及待地写信向你详细介绍他。
Para 1(Beginning)
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
The musician who I admire most is Beethoven. Knowing that you want to learn about him, I’m eagerly writing to introduce him to you in detail.
1.贝多芬出生于一个音乐世家,从小就展现出独特的才华。
Beethoven, born into a family of musicians, displayed unique talent from a young age.
Para2:简介及贡献
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
2.然而,他的生活发生了急剧的转折,因为他开始失去听力。
However, his life took a sharp turn because he started to lose his losing.
3.尽管面临如此巨大的挑战,他从未放弃希望。
In spite of facing such a big challenge, he never abandoned his hope.
Para2:简介及贡献
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
4.正是他尽了最大努力,继续过着音乐的生活,为世界呈现了伟大的作品。
It was he who tried his best to continue living a life of music, presenting the world with great works.
Para2:简介及贡献
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
Para. 3 影响
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
我钦佩他,是因为他的努力和毅力激励我不畏艰难去追求梦想,对我的学习和生活都产生了巨大的影响。
I admire him because his efforts and perseverance inspire me to pursue my dreams despite various challenges, making a big difference to my study and life.
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter给你写信问你最喜欢的音乐家是谁。请你用英文回复邮件,内容包括:
1.音乐家的简介;
2.喜欢他/她的原因;
3.他/她的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
Dear Peter,
Beethoven, born into a family of musicians, displayed unique talent from a young age. However, his life took a sharp turn because he started to lose his hearing. In spite of facing such a big challenge, he never abandoned his hope. It was he who tried his best to continue living a life of music, presenting the world with great works.
I admire him because his efforts and perseverance inspire me to pursue my dreams despite various challenges, making a big difference to my study and life.
Your,
Li Hua
Polishing(润色定稿)
Step 5
The musician who I admire most is Beethoven. Knowing that you want to learn about him, I’m eagerly writing to introduce him to you in detail.
亲爱的皮特,
我最欣赏的音乐家是贝多芬。知道你想了解他的情况,我迫不及待地写信向你详细介绍他。
贝多芬出生于一个音乐世家,从小就展现出独特的才华。然而,他的生活发生了急剧的转折,因为他开始失去听力。尽管面临如此巨大的挑战,他从未放弃希望。正是他尽了最大努力,继续过着音乐的生活,为世界呈现了伟大的作品。
我很钦佩他,因为他的努力和毅力激励我在各种挑战中追求梦想,给我的学习和生活带来了巨大的改变。
你的,
李华
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球,每天花很多时间打球,结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满,要他放弃这个爱好,他很生气。根据以下提示,请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。
1.认真计划好自己的时间;
2.不要放弃自己的爱好,也不要忘记学习;
3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
Dear Simon,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Simon,
Firstly, I think you should plan your time carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. This will tell you how much free time you can have to play basketball. Secondly, don’t give up your hobbies and do not forget about your study, either. Thirdly/Last but not least, you should keep a balance between your study and hobbies.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Polishing(润色定稿)
Step 5
Thank you for your letter. You say you spend much time playing basketball, so you don’t have enough time to do your homework. I am writing to give some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助,说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒,睡眼问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.提出至少2条建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep as a result of stress from exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you'd better have a balanced lifestyle with the right attitude. Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea. Secondly, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not the least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰:不适应新的学习环境,很孤独。请给她回复邮件,内容包括:
表示理解给予安慰;2.提出建议并给出理由
注意: 1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
1、交换生an exchange student;
2、做某事很困难:have trouble doing sth./have problems doing sth;
3、适应新的学习环境:adapt to the new learning environment;
4、很孤独:You feel lonely.(You are alone你很孤单)
Dear Lily,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Lily,
Knowing that you have trouble adapting to the new learning environment, I am writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time/ take advantage of/ make the most of your time so that you will adapt to the new learning environment easily. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. After quickly finishing your homework, you will have time to do what you want to do. Secondly, you need to make some friends, with whom you can share your feelings. Don’t be afraid to talk to others. They are friendly and willing to help you. What’s more, you are supposed to use a dictionary that can help you understand some unfamiliar words. Last but not least, ask your teachers and classmates for help, go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food, which will help me suit to the new environment quickly.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友San发来Email说,考试临近时,他总会感到焦虑,请你给他回复, 内容主要包括:
1. 向Sam表示问候和安慰。
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear San,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear San,
Knowing that you feel anxious before exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time. Only in this way can you arrange time efficiently and know how long a single reviewing task will take. If you can review all the knowledge, you won’t be so concerned. Secondly, you need to keep a positive attitude. That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively. Thirdly, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps you to get rid of pressure. In addition, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
读后续写
好难
不想写
看不懂
不会写
无从下手
看到读后续写的你
“两个读,一个写”
一读前文理情节
二读段首续发展
三写后文重表达
“读”什么?
(5W1H)
When it happened
Where it happened
Who is involved
What happened
Why it happened?
How to solve the problem
The vendor reached them just before the taxi could take off. He knocked on the door of the taxi constantly. Seema tried to ignore him, but something caught her attention. When she looked at the vendor, she saw that he was holding a bracelet, and she immediately recognized it. It was her daughter's bracelet. Seema rolled down the window of the taxi, and immediately, that vendor handed over the bracelet to Seema through that window and said, “Madam, your daughter lost her bracelet. It is valuable.” Seema took the bracelet automatically.
Having got back her daughter's bracelet, Seema didn't feel happy but sorry. Before she could say anything, the vendor had left. Seema realized her mistake and learned an important lesson for life. She felt sorry for thinking wrongly of that vendor just because of his poor appearance. Seema asked the taxi driver to wait a moment and made her way back to the vendor. She said sorry to the vendor for wronging him and bought some snacks from him her to express her thanks.
Homework
1、背诵模板,今晚,明早,后早抽背,没背出来的同学,抄10遍;
2、复习单词和固学案。
THANKS