北师大版（2019）选择性必修第四册Unit 10 Connections Writing workshop 课件（共17张PPT）

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Unit 10 Connections
Writing Workshop
A News Report
Task1
Suppose you are a reporter, how will you write a news report on it
Activate and Share
Read for Contents
1. What event is the report about
2. When and where did the event happen
3. Who attended the event and what did they do
4. What did the event bring to the community
Activity 1. Read the news report and answer the questions.
Read for Contents
1. What event is the report about
2. When and where did the
event happen
3. Who attended the event and what did they do
4. What did the event bring to the community
Focus on Structure
Body 主体
Round-up 结语
Title 标题
Lead 导语
Activity 2. Label each paragraph with a function to find out the structure of the news report.
1
3
A News Report
attractive, brief, grab the reader's attention
Title
the 5Ws (and H): who, what, where, when, why, and how , the weather
Lead
2
4
the detailed information and vivid description about the event
Body
Round-up
the summary of the event, the meaning or the feedback of the event
Detailed reading
Focus on Structure
Focus On Language
People attending the event were mainly families.
The acts appealing to children were particularly popular.
There were also many outlets serving food and drink.
Use what you can see in the classroom to make sentences.
Grammar
Sentence
Post – attributive(后置定语)
Participle(分词)
Focus On Language
Use what you can see in the classroom to make sentences.
Grammar
Sentence
The festival was successful …
The performers were good …
People attending the event were families .
The acts appealing to children were popular .
The festival was highly successful …
The performers were rather good …
People attending the event were mainly families .
The acts appealing to children were particularly popular .
Adverbs of Degree(程度副词)
Example
just , only , little , much , very , rather , so , too , quite , enough , almost , even ,
perfectly , extremely , entirely , slightly , fairly , nearly , pretty , fully , absolutely , barely , completely , hardly , really , scarcely...
Activity 5. Group Work ---Write a report news
As a campus reporter, you will write a news report to cover the Oracle Exercises Competition in your school. Please do it in cooperation.
Compose Your Writing
Step Ⅰ Outlining
Round-up
title
lead
Part 1
Part 2
Last Friday afternoon, on the playground of our school, 20 classes from Grade 2,
the Oracle Exercises Competition
…
How did the students perform
How did the audience react
What about the result
…
What did the students think of this event
What ’s the meaning of it
…
The Oracle Exercises Competition in our School
…
Part 3
body
Compose Your Writing
Step Ⅱ Drafting
It’s important to:
have an attractive title and a brief lead,
include the“5 W&H” ---who, when, where, what, why and how of the event,
use formal and clear language and excellent expressions.
Writing Help
Compose Your Writing
Step Ⅲ Editing
Items Evaluation Yes or No
Structure Is the structure of the report clear and appropriate
Content Does the news report include the key information
Does the news report include the expressions showing the event was a success
language Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes
Are there any excellent expressions
Handwriting Is the writing neat and clear
Peer Editing Sheet
Compose Your Writing
Self Assessment
Excellent Good To Be Improved
Structure Can I figure out the structure of a news report
Content Can I cover all the aspects of the outline
Language Can I use the grammar to make sentence
Teaching--Learning-- Assessment
Homework
Finish Ex. 7& 8 on page 19.
Compose your writing.
THANK YOU