Module 1 Wonders of the world
模块话题满分范文必背
1.假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目正在征集稿件,请你根据以下提示,以“One of My Travel Experiences”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示:
1. 旅游方式、时间和地点;
2. 旅游经历;
3. 你的感受。
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
One of My Travel Experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
One of My Travel Experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We travelled there by plane.
After getting off the plane, we took a taxi to the hotel. During the following days, we visited many places of interest. The Great Wall made a deep impression on me. It is an ancient wall with a long history. We walked along the Great Wall and enjoyed the view. Though I was tired, I was happy. I think travelling is relaxing and educational. I can not only enjoy myself, but also learn a lot. It makes me realize China is really great.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍去北京的旅游经历。
[亮点词汇]
①get off下车
②places of interest名胜古迹
③make a deep impression on sb给某人留下了深刻的印象
[高分句型]
①Though I was tired, I was happy.(though引导让步状语从句)
②I think travelling is relaxing and educational.(宾语从句)
2.某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍一次难忘的旅游经历,向该报社投稿。
提示:
1. Where and when did you go
2. How did you go there
3. What did you see and do there
4. What do you think of the trip
参考词汇: scenery (风景), local food, take photos, happy and relaxed, …
要求:
1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。
An Unforgettable Trip
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Trip
I have been to many places and among them, Hainan is my favourite place.
Last summer holiday, my father and I went there. We went there by plane. The sea there was wonderful. The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. First, we went to swim in the sea. Then, we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun. Next, we tried some seafood. It was delicious. We also took lots of photos there. It was a nice trip. I felt very relaxed. I will never forget this experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考查注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,明确旅行的地点。
第二步,介绍旅行的时间、和谁去的、怎么去的、看了什么和做了什么。
第三步,谈谈自己对这次旅行的感受,和题目呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①have been to 曾经去过某地
②by plane 坐飞机
③take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too.(and连接并列句)
3.假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目征集稿件,请你以“One of my travel experiences”为题写一篇短文。
要点如下:
(1)旅游方式、时间和地点;
(2)旅游经历;
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)词数80-100。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
One of my travel experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
One of my travel experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We travelled there by plane.
After getting off the plane, we took a taxi to the hotel. During the following days, we visited many places of interest. The Great Wall made a deep impression on me. It is an ancient wall with a long history. We walked along the Great Wall and enjoyed the view. Though I was tired, I was happy.
I think travelling is relaxing and educational. I can not only enjoy myself, but learn a lot as well. It makes me realize China is really great.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时及一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示信息介绍自己难忘的经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出旅游方式、时间和地点;
第二步,描述自己的经历;
第三步,讲述这次经历对自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②made a deep impression on留下深刻印象
③educational有教育意义的
[高分句型]
①Though I was tired, I was happy.(though引导的让步状语从句)
②I can not only enjoy myself, but learn a lot as well.(not only…but句型)
4.假如你是王洁,你在美国的笔友John想到中国旅行,请根据以下提示给他发一封email。词数100左右,并注意格式。
提示:1.北京是中国的首都,它历史悠久,名胜古迹不胜枚举。这里有万里长城、故宫 (the Forbidden City) 、颐和园 (the Summer Palace)等。夏季和秋季是来北京的最佳时节;
2. 夏季到大连、青岛的海滨冲浪 (go surfing) 是一件乐事;
3. 还可以到海南,那里四季如春,可以旅游潜水,你一定会玩得很开心。
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【答案】例文
Dear John,
I’ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. Summer and autumn is the best time to come here. In summer, you can go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao, and the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan, and the weather is always warm. No matter whether in summer or in winter, you can go scuba diving there. I think you’ll have a good time.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Wang Jie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写电子邮件的缘由;
第二步,具体阐述中国一些旅游的著名城市及景点;
第三步,最后表达对John表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②want to do sth想要做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Summer and autumn is the best time to come here.(动词不定式作后置定语)
②I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.(省略that的宾语从句)
5.你校英语论坛正在开展“My Favorite Trip”的分享与交流活动。请根据以下要求写一篇短文,介绍一次你最喜欢的旅行及收获。
内容:
1. 此次旅行的时间及目的地;
2. 你的所见所闻;
3. 你的收获。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.需涵盖所有内容,并做适当拓展;
3.词数80左右。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone,
I’m very glad to share my favorite trip with all of you.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone,
I’m very glad to share my favorite trip with all of you. Last summer holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin with my family by plane.
Guilin is famous for Li River, so we went there for boating first. We could see fish swimming happily because of the clear water. You can’t imagine what a great time we were having on the river, enjoying the beautiful mountains along. On the second day we went to Shilin which has many strange stones. They were so special that I took a lot of pictures. And I also can’t forget the local food like Guilin rice noodles. They smelt strong but tasted delicious.
Travel broadens the mind! In this trip I not only get relaxed but also learnt a lot about the local culture. It’s the interesting trip I like most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给内容完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,介绍一次你最喜欢的旅行及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②because of因为
③not only…but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
On the second day we went to Shilin which has many strange stones.(which引导定语从句)
6.进入初中以来,你的学校一定组织过很多有意义的外出研学活动,让你和同学们开阔了眼界,体验了快乐,增进了友谊。新学期你的学校现正举办 “My Study Tour ”征文活动,请你根据下面的提示问题,向大家介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动, 说一说你去了哪,做了什么,以及你的收获。
提示词语:historical sites, museums, experience, fantastic, exciting
提示问题:
1.Where did you go on the study tour
2.What did you do on the tour
3.What have you learnt from the study tour
My Study Tour
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【答案】例文
My Study Tour
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates to Xi’an. We first went to visit Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. In the afternoon, we went to watch some shadow plays, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. The following day, we climbed the famous Great Wild Goose Pagoda. Standing on the top of it, we had a great view of the city. After that, we tasted some delicious local food. We also had lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and sharing the study tour report. The trip was both pleasant and educational.
I feel lucky to have such a lovely tour in Xian. It was an excellent opportunity to experience the local culture and gain a deeper appreciation of Chinese history.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动;
第二步,具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写你去了哪,做了什么;
第三步,书写结语,谈谈自己参加了此次外出研学活动的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加,加入
②had a great view of 对……看得很清楚
③such as例如
④lots of 许多
[高分句型]
①We first went to visit Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. (where引导的时间状语从句)
② It was an excellent opportunity to experience the local culture and gain a deeper appreciation of Chinese history.(it作形式主语的强调句)
7.假如你是天津的一名中学生李明,刚刚结束五一小长假旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示,以“A Trip to Beijing”为题写一篇短文,向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。
(1)天气晴朗,我和家人开始了两天的旅程。
(2)早上7:30我们出发,车程大约半小时。
(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院,学到了许多历史知识和传统文化。
(4)第二天清晨,我们登上了长城,雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一;下午乘地铁去王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。
(5)我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:王府井大街:Wangfujing Street
故宫:the Palace Museum 北京烤鸭:Peking Roast Duck
During the May Day holiday, I went to
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【答案】例文
During the May Day holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day trip in Beijing.
First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What’s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents.
On early morning of the second day, we went to walkup the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street. At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck.
Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“A Trip to Beijing”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对北京之行的介绍;
第二步,具体介绍在北京做了什么;
第三步,表达自己的旅游感受。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②as soon as一……就……
③At that moment在那一刻
④decide to do决定做
[高分句型]
①First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. (时间状语从句)
②Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.(让步状语从句)
8.假如你是李华,你正在英国牛津大学参加短期语言培训,计划下周末去伦敦旅游。某旅行社在网上发布的一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确。请你根据以下要点提示,给这个旅行社的工作人员发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
询问要点包括:(1)费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐;(2)返程的准确时间;(3)是否有购物的时间。
要求:
(1)可根据要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)90词左右;电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:费用fee
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m from China, but I’m studying at University of Oxford now. I’m writing for more information about the two days’ tour of London.
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Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m from China, but I’m studying at University of Oxford now. I’m writing for more information about the two days’ tour of London.
Firstly, I’d like to know more about the fee. Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit What about lunch Is it included Or do I need to bring my own food Secondly, could you please tell me the exact time when I can expect to be back I have something important to do on that day so I’d like to know it. Thirdly, I wonder if there will be time for shopping. I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”、“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中给这个旅行社的工作人员咨询下周末去伦敦旅游的介绍。咨询内容包括费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐,返程的准确时间以及是否有购物的时间等。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在英国牛津大学参加短期语言培训,计划下周末去伦敦旅游;
第二步,咨询下周末去伦敦旅游的相关情况,咨询内容包括费用是否包括参观景点的门票、午餐,返程的准确时间以及是否有购物的时间等;
第三步,书写结束语。表达“期待得到回复”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① two days’ tour of London两天的伦敦之旅
② know more about更多地了解
③ something important重要的事情
④ looking forward to盼望
[高分句型]
① Secondly, could you please tell me the exact time when I can expect to be back (when引导时间状语从句)
② Thirdly, I wonder if there will be time for shopping.(I wonder+if引导的宾语从句)
9.旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。同学们,在这个暑假里,你和家人或朋友去过哪里旅行呢?请以“An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to” 为题,谈一谈你去过的一个难忘的地方,你在那里做了什么,以及它令人难忘的原因。
要求:
1. 条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整;
2. 字数不少于80词。
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【答案】例文:
I have been to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is Qingdao.
Last summer, my friends and I went to Qingdao. We had a great time there. Qingdao is a beautiful city. We did a lot of things there, such as swimming, boating and climbing mountains. We also visited the trestle. As a landmark landscape of Qingdao, it has its unique charm. Qingdao is also famous for its food. The seafood there is really delicious. Qingdao has a very unique festival—Qingdao Beer Festival. The most exciting thing is to see the sunrise. When the sun rose from the east, we cheered. For the first ray of sunshine in the morning, people always have different emotions. These emotions are the expectation of a new day and the final farewell to yesterday. I took many photos as well.
They can be my best memories.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“最难忘的地方”这一话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,在那里做了哪些事以及它令人难忘的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②be famous for以……而著名
③as well也
[高分句型]
①When the sun rose from the east, we cheered.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②An unforgettable place I have been to is Qingdao.(定语从句)
10.假如你是李晨,你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封电子邮件,简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。词数:80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考要点:
1. 赴宴要准时,见面要微笑、握手;
2. 每次不要吃太多;
3. 当你吃饱了,对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝;
4. 告辞时,要对主人表示感谢。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China for vacation.
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Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Chen
【答案】例文
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China for vacation.
Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if you are invited to dinner, you are supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It is good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth sometimes. When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say:“Thank you. It is delicious, but I am full”. It is polite to say thanks while leaving.
Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Chen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文的时态主要是一般现在时;
③提示:本文的大部分要点已给出,注意衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述很高兴他要来中国;
第二步,详细介绍风俗及餐桌礼仪;
第三步,结束语,表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
be supposed to应该
with your mouth closed 嘴巴闭着
[高分句型]
In China, if you are invited to dinner, you are supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile.(条件状语从句)