2025高考英语二轮复习图表作文素材

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名称 2025高考英语二轮复习图表作文素材
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应用文:图表作文
(2024年茂名市普通高中高一年级教学质量监测英语试卷)
假定你是李华,上周你校英语俱乐部开展了以“Are You For Or Against Space Exploration ”为题的调查。请你使用图表中的调查报告写一篇英文报道。内容包括:
1.调查时间、主题、对象;
2.调查结果描述和分析;
3.简单评价。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Last week,our schools English club conducted a survey on “are you for all against the space is inspiration?”. The survey involved 1300 students from Senior 1.
The results that 62 % of the students support space inspirations,while 38%are against it. Those in favor believe that space exploration leads to scientific important improvements and future opportunities. However, those against it argued that the resources could be better spent addressing issues on Earth.
In conclusion, the survey has raised interests and concerns over space exploration among students. What's more, it provides a good chance for the students to improve their critical thinking.(108W)
1.词汇积累:主题:topic→theme 实施:conduct→carry out
总之:in conclusion→in short 培养:foster→develop
2.句式拓展
原句:The results were intriguing, revealing a clear majority in favor of space exploration.
拓展句:The results were intriguing, which revealed a clear majority in favor of space exploration.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The results were intriguing, revealing a clear majority in favor of space exploration. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, the survey has sparked a lively discussion among students, which fostered critical thinking and awareness of the complexities surrounding space exploration. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
介绍:
一、图表类书面表达往往提供统计图表或表格和简单的文字说明,让学生根据提供的数据信息,结合文字提示及试题的注意事项或要求,写一篇说明一个事实或反映一种现象的短文(如上)。常以下列形式进行考查,一种是文字表格式,另一种是柱形(如上)或饼形图表式。还有另一种形式的图表作文:文字表格+人物图像。
二、柱形或饼形图表式
柱形或饼形图表式作文的体裁多为议论文、说明文和应用文,内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。通过数据、文字内容分析,系统准确地表达出突变含义,并得出令人信服的结论。
图表作文要注意遵循以下步骤:
1) 认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系。
柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系,要求通过柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势,应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。
饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系,旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体,部分与部分之间的相互关系,这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。
写好此类作文,要从图表的整体着手,认真分析数据,抓住主题特征,弄懂所揭示的规律;然后归纳出主题。有时,试题给出了短文的题目,等于点明了主题。掌握图表中提供的信息及每一栏上面的小标题的标注,由此弄清制图者想通过图表反映出的信息、问题或现象。
图表往往提供大量的数据,应仔细观察分析,从中选择能支持观点的有效信息。图表中的资料、数据的描述可以采用对比或对照性的文字,不能把各种数据都写出来。对于数据表格,要对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析,从中找出其变化规律;对于平面图解,要仔细观察,正确理解意义,按照一定的顺序,逐一表述,力求层次清楚,一目了然。
分析信息或数据后找出不同点和相似点,常采用三段式方式。
1. 第一段:开门见山,概述图表反映主题。常用的句型有:
As is shown in the graph ...
As is shown in the table ...
It can be seen from the table that ...
It can be concluded from the graph that ...
Compared with ...
According to the survey, about ...
2第二段:分析数据中的主要差异及趋势,可通过分类或对比来表现主题,并阐明必要的理由。
切忌反复使用同一句型或反复出现图表中的数据,要注意改换叙述的方式,使用不同的词语及句式。
如恰当的使用转折,对比及比较的词汇:
while, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to, the same as, be similar to, differences between, among, more than, less than
使用趋势变化的词汇:
increase, rise, go up, reduce, go down, fall, reach, remain, by/ to, slowly, slightly, gradually, rapidly, the number of, from…to, 比较级,倍数等。
还有常用句型:表Facts:
There was a great /slight increase in…
There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall in…
It is 20% lower/higher than…
The number /rate has nearly doubled, as
against that of last year.
The number is …times as much as that of….
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by…
By comparison with…, it decreased/
increased/ fell from…to…
常用句型: 表Reasons:
The reason for…is that…
One may think of the change as a result of…
The change in… largely results from the fact that…
There are several causes for this significant growth in… First,… Second,…
3.第三段:展望未来或提出办法或建议。
常用的短语及句式:
in a word; in short; generally speaking
It’s clear from the ...that ...
Based on the description above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is important…
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that…
Obviously, if we want to…,it is necessary…
There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
写作模板
利弊型
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether 主题. Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.
Some people think it necessary to 正方观点. For one thing, 理由一. For another, 理由二.
On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view, 反方理由一. What's more, 理由二.
In my opinion, I support/oppose that idea that作文主题, 理由.
观点对比型
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether 作文主题.
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 持有第一种观点的人数. The reasons are as follows. First, 第一种理由. Besides, 第二种理由.
On the contrary, others say 他们的观点. They think 第一种理由. What's more, 第二种理由.
As far as I'm concerned, we should自己的观点. Only in this way 美好前景预测.
多图型
Recently, a survey has been done to find out 主题. As is shown in the pie chart,表中内容1, 表中内容2, 表中内容3 and 表中内容4.
In conclusion, the survey shows that总体规律、趋势或呈现的问题. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.
In my opinion, 自己的观点, 如何解决问题.
数据变化型
1)As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentage in the table (graph/pie chart), 题目议题 has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具体数据. Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 结论.
There are at least two reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因一 . On the other hand, 原因二. In addition, 原因三 is also responsible for it.
It is high time that we 倡议. We should 解决问题的方法.
2) The chart gives us an overall picture of the 主题. The first thing we notice is that 最大特点. This means that as 进一步说明.
We can see from the statistics given that 细节一. After细节一中的第一变化, the 紧跟着的变化. The figures also tell us that 细节二. 数据位置(In the second column), we can see that 进一步描述 accounts for 问题.
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that 结论. The reason for this, as far as I am concerned, is that 原因. /It is high time that we 倡议.
学以致用:
1 据一项调查显示,有85.8%的中学生说自己的字不好看,而他们又不想改善它,其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文,说明该现象并发表看法。
注意:词数120左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting._______________________
第一步:
审题目:确定体裁、人称及时态。
此表达体裁为______________。(图表类作文)
主题为学生不要改进书写的原因。
人称应为______人称;时态为_____________。(第三,一般现在时)
第二步:
列提纲:理清要点、分段落与层次。
英语作文宜用______式。(三段)
第一段应开门见山,提出问题。
第二段陈述学生不愿改进书写的理由。
第三段发表个人看法。
第三步:翻译句子:营造亮点,增色文章。
根据最近的一项调查,大约85.8%的中学生认为他们的字不好看。
A recent survey shows that about 85.8 percent of middle school students hold the idea that their handwriting is poor.
OR:According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.
2. 由于各种各样的原因,许多学生不想改善书法。
For various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting.
OR:It is for various reasons that a great many students are unwilling to improve their handwriting.
51.5%的学生认为他们只用电脑,因此没有必要浪费时间改进书法,32.3%的学生认为他们太忙了以至于没有时间练习。
51.5% of them think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting by using a computer and 32.3% believe that they have no time to practise because they are very busy.
OR:51.5%of them think that they can just use a computer so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3% believe that they are so busy with the study that they don’t have time to practise.
漂亮整洁的书法是有益的,尤其对中学生来说。
It’s beneficial for students, especially for middle school students, to have beautiful and neat handwriting.
OR: Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.
第四步:注重衔接:确保行文自然流畅。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.
连句成文:
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless. The rest have other reasons.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
2.下图反映的是我校2021年与2024年学生健康状况调查的部分数据。请写一份100字左右的报告,反映我校近3年间学生健康状况的变化,分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施(不少于2条). (开头已给出不计入总词数.)
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.
第一步:审题目:确定体裁、人称及时态。
此表达体裁为____________。
主题为2021年与2024年学生健康状况调查,
人称应为______人称;
时态为_______________________。
第二步:列提纲:理清要点、分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写(在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由)。
注意层次。 即 facts and reasons
作文宜用_______式。
第一段应开门见山,提出问题。
第二段数据分析与整合。
第三段分析原因、提出解决方案。
第三步:翻译句子:营造亮点,增色文章。
1. 2024年,有52.4%的学生过胖,相比2021年上升了16.4%。
In 2024, 52.4% of the students are overweight, which has increased by 16.4% compared with that of 2021.
OR:And 52.4% of the students are overweight in 2024, with an increase by 16.4% compared with that of 2021.
2021年不到三分之一的学生精神方面有问题,而在2024年,数字上升到47.5%。
In 2021, there were less than one third of the students who had mental problems while the number of it has increase to 47.5% in 2024.
OR:In 2021 less than one third of the students were mentally unhealthy but the number has gone up to 47.5% in 2024.
第四步:注重衔接:确保行文自然流畅。
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.
The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2021 to 92.5% in 2024. They have to wear glasses, which is not only inconvenient but also a great economic burden. And 52.4% of the students are overweight in 2024, with an increase of 16.4% compared with that of 2021.
There were 80.5% students lacking sleep in 2021 and now nearly 10% more students can’t have enough sleep because they have more homework to do. In 2021 less than one third of the students were mentally unhealthy but the number has gone up to 47.5%.
To improve students’health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.
真题演练:(23届江苏南通三模)
学校英文报正在开展以Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学生近视率状况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world
The health of children’s vision is facing a growing threat. Data show that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted. The rate is 35.6 percent for primary school students, 71.1 percent for junior high school pupils and 80.5 percent for senior high school students.
The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger. Meanwhile, there is the rapid progression of shortsightedness during the middle school.
To tackle the growing problem, schools should reduce the academic burden of students and increase the time of outdoor activities. What’s more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.
2.(2024深圳二模 组合型=感谢、图表说明、建议)
假定你是李华,你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖,外教James打算为此庆祝,并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果,给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表达感谢;
2.提出个人建议;3.说明理由。
I hope this email finds you well. We are grateful for your invaluable guidance and support in our journey to take the lead at the English Drama Festival. Your encouragement has meant a great deal to us.
The survey shows that an exciting 88% of us are enthusiastic about a weekend outing over an English movie night (59%) or snacks(32%), respectively. As for me, I prefer a nature hike for a memorable celebration of our achievement, which is a perfect way for us to take a break from study routines, and offers both physical and mental refreshment.
Your thoughtfulness is much appreciated; So excited for our celebration! (107词)
3.【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
范文:
本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.(134W)