Module 8 Accidents Unit 2 Writing 课件 (共11张PPT) 2024-2025学年英语外研版八年级上册

(共11张PPT)
Module 8 Unit 2
I was trying to pick it up when it bit me again.
Writing
Retell the story.
one day (work)
Suddenly (appear,bite)
then (take…)
when…was(try,hurt,go)
As(check, get worse)
but(not help)
Finally(leave)
(remember)as soon as(know,give)
Review
能根据提示写一个关于事故的短篇故事。
学习目标
目标:根据提示写一个关于事故的短篇故事
Activity 1
Free Talk
Do you know how to tell a story
When
Where
Who
What
the beginning of the story
the details(细节) of the story
a piece of advice
How
Why
Now here are some clues for you.
Activity 2
Task 1: Find these words and expressions in the passage below.
One day...
A few days earlier …
...When...
While...
When...was...
As...
As soon as...
Task 2: Look at how they are used to tell the story.
the sequence of events
Collection
Group
Discussion
Task 3: 四人一组，从体裁、时态、人称等
方面思考要写一篇短篇故事需要注意的方面。
一、定基调
话题:_______________________ 体裁:_________________
人称:_______________________ 时态:_________________
二、定大纲：
1) 开头 →
2) 正文 →
3) 结尾 →
Outline
关于事故的短篇故事
记叙文
以过去进行时为主
发表观点总结:In my opinion,…/I think that…
the sequence of events
开头已给出
第三人称
Task 4: Use the words and expressions to write a new story.
Start with：
Writing
One day, when a woman was getting dinner ready for the animals at a zoo，her hand began to hurt. A few days earlier... ______________
____________________________________
____________________________________
____________________________________
Requirements:
★ 草稿
★ 自检错误
★ 文字推敲、润饰
★ 初步定稿
Task 5.1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并
改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。
Task 5.2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生
习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学
提出修改意见。
Checking
One day when a woman was getting dinner ready for the animals at a zoo, her hand began to hurt. A few days earlier, a box of spiders arrived at the zoo from Asia. When she put the box into the spiders’ display, one of them climbed out and ran across the table. While she was trying to pick up the spider and put it back in the box, it bit her hand.
She forgot about her pain and continued with her work. She finished giving dinner to the animals, but the pain in her hand got worse. So she hurried to hospital. As soon as the doctor got to know what kind of spider it was, he gave the woman the right medicine. She left the hospital that evening.
Show time
Pick out one or two good compositions for class display.