Module 9 Population Unit 2 Writing 课件 (共16张PPT) 2024-2025学年英语外研版八年级上册

(共16张PPT)
Module 9 Unit 2
Arnwick was a city with 200,000 people.
Writing
Retell the passage with the help of Mind-map.
Parkville (a ___________ village)
People____________ Arnwick, and they
needed places to live.
Parkville became ___________ Arnwick.
Arnwick became larger and the population increased.
New problems: __________________________________
More things needed: ______________________________
____________________________________
quiet
moved to
part of
rubbish, traffic and pollution
school, buses, hospitals,
fresh air, clean water, police, more money
Review
1
2
能谈论自己家乡存在的问题。
能写一篇短文表达解决家乡问题的建议。
目标:谈论自己家乡存在的问题并书写建议
Activity 1
Free Talk
What is problem that exists
in your home town
Activity 2
5
Read and check the problems that exist in your home town.
( ) 1. Many young people want to leave the countryside
because they want to find jobs in the city.
( ) 2. There are not enough schools and hospitals.
( ) 3. Too much traffic brings air pollution.
( ) 4. There is too much rubbish in the streets.
( ) 5. There are not enough police in the city.
( ) 6. It is difficult to get enough clean water.
What do you think of the city problems
Why do these problems exist
How do we solve them
1. Many young people want to leave the countryside
because they want to find jobs in the city.
2. There are not enough schools and hospitals.
3. Too much traffic brings air pollution.
4. There is too much rubbish in the streets.
5. There are not enough police in the city.
6. It is difficult to get enough clean water.
What do you think of the city problems
Free Talk
Positive
Negative
Both of them
1. Many young people want to leave the countryside
because they want to find jobs in the city.
2. There are not enough schools and hospitals.
3. Too much traffic brings air pollution.
4. There is too much rubbish in the streets.
5. There are not enough police in the city.
6. It is difficult to get enough clean water.
Why do these city problems exist
Free Talk
The new needs
1. Many young people want to leave the countryside
because they want to find jobs in the city.
2. There are not enough schools and hospitals.
3. Too much traffic brings air pollution.
4. There is too much rubbish in the streets.
5. There are not enough police in the city.
6. It is difficult to get enough clean water.
Free Talk
How do we solve the city problems
1. build more universities and create more jobs in smaller towns in the countryside.
2. build more schools and hospitals.
3. walk to work or school.
4. don’t throw rubbish everywhere.
5. learn more laws and follow them.
6. tell people how to protect the environment.
the government
the students
the citizen
(市民)
Activity 3
6
Write down your suggestions to solve the problems
in your home town.
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Writing Steps: → → → →
beautify
think
list
add
connect
审→列→加→连→美
How to write a short
passage about it
Think（审题）
Group Discussion
List（用简单句列出文章的要点）
话题:_________________________
人称:________________ 时态:_______________
列出要点：
第一、三人称
一般现在时态
就家乡存在的问题表达建议
What - Problems
How/Why - Opinions and reasons
How - Solutions
Add (将要点合理加在不同部分使文章完整)
Group Discussion
正文
How/Why - Opinions and reasons
How - Solutions
开头
What - Problems
结尾
In a word, ...
审→列→加→连→美
Group Discussion
连词:
过渡词：
表示列举的词：
总结性的短语、句子：
as (everyone knows), before, after, when, if, because…
therefore (因此), besides, also, what’s more...
First, ...Second,...
in my opinion, in a word, in short,
in general, I think…
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time to write
Activity 4
6
Write down your suggestions to solve the problems in your home town.
Requirements:
★ 草稿
★ 自检错误
★ 文字推敲、润饰
★ 初步定稿
Activity 5
Task 1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并
改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。
Task 2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生
习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学
提出修改意见。
XXX is a beautiful city, but now the environment is getting worse and worse. Why First, the population increases so fast. In fact, it is very crowded in the city. Second, some people like to drive to work and it causes air pollution. Third, some people like to throw rubbish everywhere.
So it is important for us to solve these problems. First, the government should control the population. Second, we had better walk to work instead of driving. Last but not least, we should put the rubbish into the dustbin.
In a word, let’s try our best to make the environment better and better.
Show time
Pick out one or two good compositions for class display.