(共26张PPT)
Unit 2
Reading
Writing
for
Write to a friend about a travel plan
旅行计划
Learning Goals
02
Know what information a travel plan is included .
知道旅行计划应包含的信息。
01
Master the structure and language features of the email about a travel plan.
掌握旅行计划邮件的结构和语言特点。
03
Write an email about a travel plan.
写一封关于旅行计划的邮件。
Useful words and expressions
over the October holiday 在国庆节期间
plan to do sth. 计划做某事
can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待想做某事
look forward to doing sth. 期盼......
be known as… 作为……而出名
hear from… 收到某人的来信/电邮
guard the tomb of 守卫......的坟墓
sight 景象 statue 雕塑; 雕像 treasure 宝藏
Lead-in
Have you ever traveled
Where have you been to
the Eiffel Tower
Neuschwanstein Castle
Tianshan
Jiuzhaigou
Amazon Rainforest
Machu Pichu
Lead-in
Have you been to Xi’an
Do you know any famous sights in Xi’an
the Terracotta Army
The Bayan Pagoda
[p ɡ d ]
Here is a brochure about Xi’an.
What can you see if you come to the Terracotta Army
More than 8,000 statues.
What amazes you most after you read the brochure
I am amazed by its size. I can’t believe there are more than 8,000 statues in the tomb.
Lead-in
If you take a trip to Xi’an, what kind of traveling style would you like
package tour
independent travel
planned
save time
freer
cheaper
Lead-in
If you want to travel independently, you need to make a travel plan before leaving.
How to make a travel plan
What information will be included in a travel plan
Pre-writing
Here is an email from Richard. (P30)
Skim and guess:
What is the email probably about
A travel plan to Xi’an.
What’s the main idea of each paragraph
Para.1 main purpose for the trip
Para.2 other plans for the trip
Para.3 transport
Para.4 final thoughts
The structure
emotion/feelings
Shaanxi History Museum
Xi’an City Wall
a few other famous sights
(reasons)
- what to do/hope
The structure of an email
收件人邮件地址(To)
主题(Subject):应概括电子邮件的内容
称呼
正文
结尾语:Sincerely yours(你非常真挚的朋友)/ Best regards(诚挚的问候)等
本单元的写作任务是给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。“旅行计划”类书信是就去某地旅游给朋友写的一封书信,时态上应用现在进行时表示将来,或用一般将来时:
1. 首段:开门见山说明旅游目的和想参观的景点
2. 主体段落:介绍具体的计划和安排
3. 尾段:表达自己的想法和对对方的期待
writing
Dear Xiao Li,
My time here in China is going well. I love my new school and classmates. Over the October holiday, my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. I‘ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can‘t wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. It’s amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”! We‘re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
We’re taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins. We‘re arriving at 9: 30 a.m. and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train!
I guess that’s all for now! I‘ll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend,
Richard
现在进行时表示将来
Useful words and expressions
1. It is an amazing sight. 它是个令人惊叹的景点
2. can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待想做某事
3. to sb/for sb 对某人来说
4. be unbelievable 难以置信的,不可思议的
5. 句型:It is amazing that+从句 令人惊奇/惊讶的是...
6. look forword to doing sth 期待做某事
7. be known as... 作为... 而出名
be known for... 因...而出名
8. hear from… 收到某人的来信/电邮
应用文训练----写一篇旅行计划
假定你是李华,你要回复你的英国笔友Richard的电子邮件询问关于你的暑假旅行计划,请你根据以下要求回复邮件:1. 信件开头及结尾2. 回复内容:1. 暑假旅游计划——北京
2. 介绍北京著名景点
Practice
1.我非常高兴能收到你的电子邮件。
(I’m more than glad to...)_________________________________________________________________ 2.我想要告诉你这个暑假我和我的父母打算去北京旅游。
(would like to do..., be planning to do...)_________________________________________________________________3.北京是我们的首都,它非常令人惊叹,我都迫不及待想去了。
(capital city,be amazing, can’t wait to do sth.)_________________________________________________________________
4. 北京有很多著名的旅游景点。
(tourist attractions)
_________________________________________________________________
应用文训练----写一篇北京的旅行计划
4.对我来说,长城是不可思议的,它建造于几千年前,同时也是世界奇迹之一。(the Great Wall, be unbelievable, one of the wonders of the world)___________________________________________________________
5.我和我父母也很期待去参观故宫和颐和园,没参观过这两个地方都算不上到过北京。
(look forword to doing..., Palace Museum and the Summer Palace)
_________________________________________________________________
6.最后,我们还打算去看看北京胡同,它代表了老北京的传统文化。
(Beijing Hutong,stand for, traditional culture)
_________________________________________________________________7.总之,北京非常值得去参观。我很期待你的到来。
(be worth doing...)_________________________________________________________________
1.我非常高兴能收到你的电子邮件。
(I’m more than glad to...)_________________________________________________________________
2.我想要告诉你这个暑假我和我的父母打算去北京旅游。
(would like to do..., be planning to do...)_________________________________________________________________
3.北京是我们的首都,它非常令人惊叹,我都迫不及待想去了。
(capital city,be amazing, can’t wait to do sth.)_________________________________________________________________
应用文训练----写一篇北京的旅行计划
I'm more than glad to receive your e-mail / hear from you.
I would like to tell you that my parents and I are planning to go to Beijing to spend the summer vacation.
Beijing is our capital city, which is so amazing that I can’t wait to go.
4. 北京有很多著名的旅游景点。
(tourist attractions)
_________________________________________________________________
5.对我来说,长城是不可思议的,她建造于几千年前,同时也是世界奇迹之一。(the Great Wall, be unbelievable, one of the wonders of the world)___________________________________________________________
6.我和我父母也很期待去参观故宫和颐和园,没参观过这两个地方都算不上到过北京。(look forword to doing..., Palace Museum and the Summer Palace)
_________________________________________________________________
There are a lot of tourist attractions in Beijing.
To me, the Great Wall is unbelievable. It was built a few thousand years ago and is still one of the wonders of the world.
My parents and I are both looking forward to going to the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace, without visiting which you can never say you’ve been to Beijing.
7.最后,我们还打算去看看北京胡同,它代表了老北京的传统文化。
(Beijing Hutong,stand for, traditional culture)
_________________________________________________________________
8.总之,北京非常值得去参观。我很期待你的到来。
(be worth doing...)_________________________________________________________________
In a word, Beijing is well worth visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming next year.
Finally, we are also going to the famous Beijing Hutong for a visit, which stands for the traditional culture of the Beijing.
Dear Richard,
I'm extremely pleased to receive your e-mail. And I would like to tell you that my parents and I are planning to go to Beijing to spend the summer vacation. Beijing is our capital city, which is so amazing that I can’t wait to go.
There are a lot of tourist attractions in Beijing.To me, the Great Wall is unbelievable. It was built a few thousand years ago and is still one of the wonders of the world. Besides, My parents and I are both looking forward to going to the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace, without visiting which you can never say you’ve been to Beijing. Finally, we are also going to the famous Beijing Hutong for a visit, which stands for the traditional culture of the Beijing.
In a word, Beijing is well worth visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.
Your friend,
Li Hua
范文
假定你是小李,元旦你和家人要去海南岛旅游,请你给Richard写一封回信,告诉他你的安排。
内容包含以下内容:
目的地 中国第二大岛——海南岛
时间 1月1日—1月3日
活动 岛上远足,海上冲浪,岛上宿营
感想 增长知识,拓宽视野
Practice
1)审题:确定写作体裁和主题
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题:给Richard回信,告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。
2)确定时态和人称
时态:一般将来时&一般现在时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
3)明确写作要点
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划(旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等)
③旅游的心得体会
4)布局
第一段:写信目的;
第二段:主体部分,详细介绍旅游计划(时间,交通工具,活动);
第三段:体会+期待回复
写作指导
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my travel plans for the coming holiday.
With the New Year coming, my parents and I are planning to travel to Hainan Island to enjoy its beautiful scenery. We are flying there, leaving the day before the New Year holiday begins and will spend three days there, from Jan. 1st to Jan. 3rd . I have heard that its scenery is so amazing that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we are also planning to take many other activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely Yours,
LiHua
假定你是小李,国庆你和家人要去广州旅游,请你给Richard写一封回信,告诉他你的安排。
内容包含以下内容:
目的地 广州
时间 10月1日—10月7日
活动 白云山,广州塔Conton Tower, 广州博物馆museum,品尝当地美食
感想 增长知识,拓宽视野
Writing task:
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my travel plans for the coming holiday.
With national holiday coming, my parents and I are planning to travel to Guangzhou to enjoy its beautiful scenery and culture. We are flying there, leaving the day before the national holiday begins and will spend seven days there, from October 1st to October 7th. I have heard that Canton Tower is an amazing sight so that I can’t wait to go. Other than visiting Conton Tower, we are also planning to take many other activities like going hiking, visiting Guangzhou museum and tasting local snacks. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also expand my vision. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely Yours,
LiHua