2025届高考英语二轮复习 作文专项 读后续写 人与自我 课件（共27张ppt）
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(共27张PPT)
读后续写
人 与 自我
1. 双膝跪地 2. 匆匆下楼
3. 屏住呼吸 4. 站起身
5. 瞥了某人一眼 6. 相视一笑
7. 拥抱某人 8. 站着/坐着一动不动
fall / sink / drop to one’s knees
fall to the ground on one’s knees
race / rush / tear down the stairs
hold one’s breath
rise to one’s feet
shoot / throw / cast a glance at sb
exchange smiles
hug sb / give sb a hug / throw one’s arms around sb / fold sb in one’s arms
stand / sit still
Review
人物的动作描写：
1. 放声大哭 2. 吃惊地瞪大眼睛
3.（吓得）心提到了嗓子眼
4. 强忍住泪水
burst into tears
be wide-eyed with shock / with one’s eyes wide open in shock
one’s heart is in one’s mouth / have one’s heart in one’s mouth
hold / fight back one’s tears
Review
人物的情绪描写
【拓展】
tears roll / run / stream / flow down sb’s cheeks 潸然泪下
tears well up in sb’s eyes 泪如泉涌
sb’s heart is / was pounding. 某人的心砰砰直跳。
sb’s brain is blank. 某人的头脑一片空白。
A wave of fear swept over me. 一阵恐惧传遍我的全身。
Review
人物的情绪描写
Step 1 read about the passage
part1 reading
重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，真正读懂文章。
Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
part1 reading
［输出词块］找出；找到
［合成词］-pounder：重……磅的东西
Para 1 介绍万圣节的家庭传统
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
part1 reading
With 复合结构，表示伴随
［动作描写］把头硬塞进南瓜里
［输出词块］完全合理
Para 2 讲述今年的比赛过程
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
part1 reading
［动作描写］弯下腰
［动作描写］把头靠在洞口
［动作描写］卡住
［动作描写］直起身来
Para 3 讲述“我”为了证明自己的
南瓜最大，把头硬塞进南瓜的过程
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
part1 reading
Para 4 头被卡住拔不出来
［合成词］adj 短暂的
［动作描写］支撑它的重量
［动作描写］把头取出来
［动作描写］使劲拔
［动作描写］用力地抵住
［动作描写］把头转来转去
独立主格结构
Step2 梳理情节
part1 reading
圈出关键信息
找出情节线索
分析人物情感变化
把握文章主旨
圈出关键信息（5W+1H）
where/
when
at home
a day in October before Halloween
who
I, dad, mom, three brothers (including Jason), sister
what
My head was stuck inside a pumpkin, and I was trying to pull it out.
why/
how
We forgot to weigh our pumpkins. To prove my pumpkin was bigger, I forced my head inside it.
I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin ...
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point …
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 1
我和兄弟姐妹们比赛找最大的南瓜,却忘了在去瓤前称重。我想证明自己的南瓜最大。
I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter
Finally I managed to put my whole head into it
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 2
我认为把头伸进南瓜里能解决问题。经过一番努力，我成功把头塞进了南瓜。
“I can’t get it out!”
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 3
当我想把头拔出来时，却发现头卡住了。
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry.
Step 2 梳理情节
I：competitive
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
Step 2 梳理情节
I：excitement → panic
Part2
Writing
part1 reading
Para 1：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
阅读续写两段开头，你能得到什么信息？
Para 2：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
细读首句
“我” 的内心十分焦急、恐慌
家人把“我” 头卡南瓜的过程录了下来，并传到了网上
构思情节
把握续写原则：
Conflict — Solution（找出问题或冲突，构思解决办法）
Action — Response（根据人物言行，推断其他人的反应）
Negative — Positive （结合情感线索，突出人物的情感变化）
Para 1：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
Para 2：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
Conflict
Solution
With Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table …
（Para 4）
All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event.（Para 2）
“I can’t get it out!” I shouted.
（Para 4）
What did Jason do next
→ to keep trying？
→ to ask for help？
→ ……
Mom filmed my silly behavior and posted it online.
How did I get out eventually
→ cut the pumpkin in half
构思情节
伏笔1：
伏笔2：
伏笔3：
……
女孩伤心极了，再也抑制不住悲伤，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。
The girl was so heartbroken that she could no longer hold back her sorrow, her tears running / streaming / flowing down her cheeks.
参考句式：He was lying on the grass, his hands crossed under his head. 他躺在草地上，双手交叉枕在头下。
独立结构作状语
独立结构作状语
so ... that
写作素材
2. 经过几次尝试，他们终于成功地将南瓜从我的头上拽下来，露出了我凌乱的头发和满脸的惊恐。
I slipped on the glassy floor and broke my arm.
句式升级：现在分词作状语
I slipped on the glassy floor, breaking my arm.
【示例】
2. 经过几次尝试，他们终于成功地将南瓜从我的头上拽下来，露出了我凌乱的头发和满脸的惊恐。
After several attempts, they finally succeeded in pulling the pumpkin off my head, revealing my messy hair and horrified expression.
现在分词作状语
succeed in doing sth 成功做某事
3. 我尴尬地看了他俩一眼，他们对视了一下，大笑起来。
I shot a glance at both of them embarrassedly, who exchanged looks and burst into laughter.
参考句式：非限制性定语从句
主旨升华
Down deep in my heart, it was the happiest time I had ever had. 在我内心深处，那是我曾有过的最快乐的时光。
I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family. 我很幸运能成为这个喜欢恶作剧但充满爱的家庭的一员。
Things will work out. 船到桥头自然直。
Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
Live and learn. / A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Feeling more panic, I burst into tears. Fortunately, hearing me crying, Dad rushed to helped me lay my head on the table so that my neck could rest for a while. Then he said to me gently, “Listen, honey. I have to cut this pumpkin in half.” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed, listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin, with my heart in my mouth. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then Mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.
Example
That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually, my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet, because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I agreed to her proposal with a slight nod. To our surprise, people liked and forwarded the video crazily on the Internet. “Wow, you’ve become an Internet celebrity!” Jason screamed, with his eyes wide open. What a unique experience!
Example
读后续写
人 与 自我
1. 双膝跪地 2. 匆匆下楼
3. 屏住呼吸 4. 站起身
5. 瞥了某人一眼 6. 相视一笑
7. 拥抱某人 8. 站着/坐着一动不动
fall / sink / drop to one’s knees
fall to the ground on one’s knees
race / rush / tear down the stairs
hold one’s breath
rise to one’s feet
shoot / throw / cast a glance at sb
exchange smiles
hug sb / give sb a hug / throw one’s arms around sb / fold sb in one’s arms
stand / sit still
Review
人物的动作描写：
1. 放声大哭 2. 吃惊地瞪大眼睛
3.（吓得）心提到了嗓子眼
4. 强忍住泪水
burst into tears
be wide-eyed with shock / with one’s eyes wide open in shock
one’s heart is in one’s mouth / have one’s heart in one’s mouth
hold / fight back one’s tears
Review
人物的情绪描写
【拓展】
tears roll / run / stream / flow down sb’s cheeks 潸然泪下
tears well up in sb’s eyes 泪如泉涌
sb’s heart is / was pounding. 某人的心砰砰直跳。
sb’s brain is blank. 某人的头脑一片空白。
A wave of fear swept over me. 一阵恐惧传遍我的全身。
Review
人物的情绪描写
Step 1 read about the passage
part1 reading
重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，真正读懂文章。
Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
part1 reading
［输出词块］找出；找到
［合成词］-pounder：重……磅的东西
Para 1 介绍万圣节的家庭传统
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
part1 reading
With 复合结构，表示伴随
［动作描写］把头硬塞进南瓜里
［输出词块］完全合理
Para 2 讲述今年的比赛过程
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
part1 reading
［动作描写］弯下腰
［动作描写］把头靠在洞口
［动作描写］卡住
［动作描写］直起身来
Para 3 讲述“我”为了证明自己的
南瓜最大，把头硬塞进南瓜的过程
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
part1 reading
Para 4 头被卡住拔不出来
［合成词］adj 短暂的
［动作描写］支撑它的重量
［动作描写］把头取出来
［动作描写］使劲拔
［动作描写］用力地抵住
［动作描写］把头转来转去
独立主格结构
Step2 梳理情节
part1 reading
圈出关键信息
找出情节线索
分析人物情感变化
把握文章主旨
圈出关键信息（5W+1H）
where/
when
at home
a day in October before Halloween
who
I, dad, mom, three brothers (including Jason), sister
what
My head was stuck inside a pumpkin, and I was trying to pull it out.
why/
how
We forgot to weigh our pumpkins. To prove my pumpkin was bigger, I forced my head inside it.
I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin ...
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point …
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 1
我和兄弟姐妹们比赛找最大的南瓜,却忘了在去瓤前称重。我想证明自己的南瓜最大。
I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter
Finally I managed to put my whole head into it
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 2
我认为把头伸进南瓜里能解决问题。经过一番努力，我成功把头塞进了南瓜。
“I can’t get it out!”
Step 2 梳理情节
These are the clue 3
当我想把头拔出来时，却发现头卡住了。
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry.
Step 2 梳理情节
I：competitive
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
Step 2 梳理情节
I：excitement → panic
Part2
Writing
part1 reading
Para 1：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
阅读续写两段开头，你能得到什么信息？
Para 2：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
细读首句
“我” 的内心十分焦急、恐慌
家人把“我” 头卡南瓜的过程录了下来，并传到了网上
构思情节
把握续写原则：
Conflict — Solution（找出问题或冲突，构思解决办法）
Action — Response（根据人物言行，推断其他人的反应）
Negative — Positive （结合情感线索，突出人物的情感变化）
Para 1：
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
Para 2：
That video was posted the day before Halloween.
Conflict
Solution
With Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table …
（Para 4）
All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event.（Para 2）
“I can’t get it out!” I shouted.
（Para 4）
What did Jason do next
→ to keep trying？
→ to ask for help？
→ ……
Mom filmed my silly behavior and posted it online.
How did I get out eventually
→ cut the pumpkin in half
构思情节
伏笔1：
伏笔2：
伏笔3：
……
女孩伤心极了，再也抑制不住悲伤，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。
The girl was so heartbroken that she could no longer hold back her sorrow, her tears running / streaming / flowing down her cheeks.
参考句式：He was lying on the grass, his hands crossed under his head. 他躺在草地上，双手交叉枕在头下。
独立结构作状语
独立结构作状语
so ... that
写作素材
2. 经过几次尝试，他们终于成功地将南瓜从我的头上拽下来，露出了我凌乱的头发和满脸的惊恐。
I slipped on the glassy floor and broke my arm.
句式升级：现在分词作状语
I slipped on the glassy floor, breaking my arm.
【示例】
2. 经过几次尝试，他们终于成功地将南瓜从我的头上拽下来，露出了我凌乱的头发和满脸的惊恐。
After several attempts, they finally succeeded in pulling the pumpkin off my head, revealing my messy hair and horrified expression.
现在分词作状语
succeed in doing sth 成功做某事
3. 我尴尬地看了他俩一眼，他们对视了一下，大笑起来。
I shot a glance at both of them embarrassedly, who exchanged looks and burst into laughter.
参考句式：非限制性定语从句
主旨升华
Down deep in my heart, it was the happiest time I had ever had. 在我内心深处，那是我曾有过的最快乐的时光。
I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family. 我很幸运能成为这个喜欢恶作剧但充满爱的家庭的一员。
Things will work out. 船到桥头自然直。
Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
Live and learn. / A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Feeling more panic, I burst into tears. Fortunately, hearing me crying, Dad rushed to helped me lay my head on the table so that my neck could rest for a while. Then he said to me gently, “Listen, honey. I have to cut this pumpkin in half.” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed, listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin, with my heart in my mouth. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then Mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.
Example
That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually, my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet, because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I agreed to her proposal with a slight nod. To our surprise, people liked and forwarded the video crazily on the Internet. “Wow, you’ve become an Internet celebrity!” Jason screamed, with his eyes wide open. What a unique experience!
Example