中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题09书面表达
1．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. In recent years, we have witnessed remarkable advancements in various modes of transportation.
One such innovation is the shared bicycle, which has revolutionized urban travel. These bicycles are easily accessible and environmentally friendly, encouraging people to adopt a healthier and more sustainable lifestyle. Another significant development is the high-speed rail network. Connecting cities across the country, the high-speed trains offer fast and comfortable travel, significantly reducing travel time. This has greatly enhanced inter-city connectivity and promoted economic development. Moreover, the introduction of new energy vehicles has been a game-changer in the automotive industry. These vehicles run on clean energy, reducing emissions and contributing to a greener environment.
In conclusion, the development of transport in China has brought significant benefits to society, improving convenience, promoting sustainability, and driving economic growth.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文发言稿，要求考生根据所给的三幅关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿，介绍我国公共交通的快速发展。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达需要要点齐全，上下文连贯，还需使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时尽可能运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，以提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。可参考使用下列句型和结构，例如：Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances和Secondly, the high-speed train network has revolutionized long-distance travel, significantly reducing travel time across the country都运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；The public transport in China, which benefits us a great deal, helps us in various ways 运用了非限制性定语从句；Without shared bicycles，high-speed trains and new energy vehicles，not only would our environment be seriously polluted, but also it would bring much inconvenience to us运用了虚拟语气和部分倒装结构。
2．（2024·新高考Ⅱ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park. You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them. Take care and write back soon
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文邮件，要求考生以李华的名义，和英国朋友Chris分享上周五在公园上的一堂美术课，属于提纲类作文。首先，为了开篇明确并吸引读者的兴趣，我们可以直接提及这次特别的美术课活动； 接着，描述自己完成的作品。由于篇幅有限，我们应简洁而具体地介绍作品内容； 然后，表达自己的感想。感想部分可以围绕这次活动的特别之处、自己的收获或情感体验来展开； 最后，按照邮件的格式，以礼貌的结束语结束信件 。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】 这篇范文生动地描绘了在公园上美术课的特殊体验。作者通过具体描述自己的作品——一幅水彩画，展示了公园中小桥与周围盛开花朵的美丽景色，使读者能够直观地感受到现场的氛围。同时，作者还表达了在自然环境中创作时的轻松愉悦和内心的平静，使这段经历更加鲜活和感人。 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park和We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most都运用了定语从句；You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!运用了感叹句充当的宾语从句； Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers运用了非谓语动词作状语。 此外，作者还以一句"How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them."巧妙地过渡到询问对方的情况，增加了邮件的互动性和友好氛围。整体而言，这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，情感真挚，是一篇很好的英语作文。
3．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
【答案】One possible version:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.运用了动名词作宾语； It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.运用了it作形式主语； This exercise is recommended for several reasons.运用了被动语态；Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.运用了非限制性定语从句；So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! 运用了时间状语从句，祈使句；It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.运用了强调句。
4．（2023·新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hold up the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文建议信，格式为：一般开头应该先是DearMr/Miss，然后就是正文，说明具体问题，然后提出建议，感谢并写上署名。要求考生以校李华 的身份写一封邮件给外教Ryan提建议。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。本文的人称是第一、三人称；时态是一般现在时；文章可以分为共分三段：
第一段：开头：写信的目的（将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题）；
第二段：正文：说明问题（可能每组能力不均阻碍进步；可能每组同学间感情不太融洽）；
第三段：结尾：我的建议（可以按口语能力和学生自愿来分组），然后表示感谢。
【点评】书面表达要求要点齐全，上下文连贯，并使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时能够运用一些高级词汇pair up，hold up the progress of students，less motivated， 和固定短语The reasons are as follows，have difficulty communicating with，group students based on their language abilities提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。
5．（2023·全国乙卷）学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
【答案】The arrival of the holiday gave me a brief break from the tense study life. Therefore, I decided to cook dinner for my parents, and they can enjoy a delicious dinner after a hard day's work. But the problem was that I couldn't cook at all.
The first time I cooked, I decided to make a soup by using mushrooms, eggplants and beef. To ensure my success, I first searched for relevant recipes online. After cleaning the materials mentioned above, I cut them into pieces respectively. Next, I put the beef in the boiling water at first and then the mushrooms and eggplants. With the help of the recipes, I finished it within two hours. My parents were greatly surprised when they tried my delicious soup.
I'm proud of myself and confident that I can cook more tasty food in the future. What a perfect holiday!
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 简要描述；2. 体验和感受。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
6．（2022·新高考Ⅱ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1）节目介绍；
2）访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk". Let me inform you of more details.
"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row. In the show, we often invite a special guest to share thoughts about recent events. It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday，during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华的身份， 外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 节目介绍；访谈的时间和话题。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk".我写信邀请你参加我们的广播“谈话和谈话”。运用了不定式作目的状语和宾语补足语； Let me inform you of more details.让我告诉你更多细节。运用了祈使句；"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row.2015年开播的“Talk and Talk”连续5年被评为最受学生欢迎的节目。 运用了被动语态；It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday, during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near. 很荣幸下周一12点15分到12点35分有你的直播，期间你会聊聊高考临近压力的应对之道。运用了it 作形式主语，非限制性定语从句。
7．（2022·北京）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写-封电子邮件，内容包括:
1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2）交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意： 1）词数100左右;
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】略
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 红星中学高三学生李华的身份 写-封电子邮件 。写作背景： 你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2）交流时间和其他相关事项。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
8．（2022·全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）学习活动状况描述：
2）简单评论；
3）你的建议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I'm concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they're more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it's also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇说明文写作，要求考生 使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）学习活动状况描述：2）简单评论；3）你的建议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.运用了主语从句，限制性定语从句； However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.运用了现在分词作定语；For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. 运用了主语从句；Because of their lack of self-discipline, they're more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. 运用了原因状语从句；It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it's also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.运用了并列句。
9．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。
21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题09书面表达
1．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
2．（2024·新高考Ⅱ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
4．（2023·新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
5．（2023·全国乙卷）学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
6．（2022·新高考Ⅱ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1）节目介绍；
2）访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
7．（2022·北京）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写-封电子邮件，内容包括:
1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2）交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意： 1）词数100左右;
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2022·全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）学习活动状况描述：
2）简单评论；
3）你的建议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
9．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
