2025届高考英语复习 应用文写作之求助信课件（共22张PPT）
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(共22张PPT)
求助信
高考应用文
整体结构
二、整体结构
必备句型
三、首段：写信目的—请求帮助（+背景）
Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
Sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I’m in desperate need of your help.
很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难迫切需要您的帮助。
I have some difficulties in doing ...， which bothers me a lot. I am wondering whether you could do me a favor.
我在做......方面有困难，这很困扰我。我想知道您能否帮助我。
Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
I wonder if you can offer me some tips on the following problems.
我想知道你是否能就下面的问题给我一些建议。
练习
假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
提示词汇Charming China(魅力中国)
Dear John，
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I’ll participate in an English speech contest with the title “Charming China”. I’ve finished my speech draft, but I find it far from satisfactory.
四、中间段：描述具体困难
Some problems trouble me a lot. First and foremost,…. What’s more,…. In addition,…
有一些问题让我很困扰。第一····第二····第三····
There are several problems I’m faced with now. First, …..
我现在面临着一些问题。第一····
I have been in … for a long time, but I still find it hard to adapt myself to … To begin with, …What’s more, … What trouble me most is …
我已经····很长时间了，但我仍然很难适应……。首先……。而且……。最让我困扰的是……
拓展：常见困难
【生活方面】
“与人相处 ”
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
“把握时间 ”
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
“明确目标”
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
【学习方面】
“不懂语法”
觉得掌握高级语法并应用于口语和写作很难
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
练习
假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
提示词汇Charming China(魅力中国)
Firstly, I’m not sure of some proper expressions in English and not aware of the mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you please go through the attachment to this email and then help me correct the mistakes and polish the speech draft Besides, I am pretty nervous about the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some presentation skills, which can improve my performance.
五、结尾段：重申目的--希望得到帮助
I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
I would appreciate it if you could spare time to give me a hand.
如果你能抽时间来帮助我，我将不胜感激。
练习
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.
I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
求助信
高考应用文
整体结构
二、整体结构
必备句型
三、首段：写信目的—请求帮助（+背景）
Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
Sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I’m in desperate need of your help.
很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难迫切需要您的帮助。
I have some difficulties in doing ...， which bothers me a lot. I am wondering whether you could do me a favor.
我在做......方面有困难，这很困扰我。我想知道您能否帮助我。
Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
I wonder if you can offer me some tips on the following problems.
我想知道你是否能就下面的问题给我一些建议。
练习
假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
提示词汇Charming China(魅力中国)
Dear John，
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I’ll participate in an English speech contest with the title “Charming China”. I’ve finished my speech draft, but I find it far from satisfactory.
四、中间段：描述具体困难
Some problems trouble me a lot. First and foremost,…. What’s more,…. In addition,…
有一些问题让我很困扰。第一····第二····第三····
There are several problems I’m faced with now. First, …..
我现在面临着一些问题。第一····
I have been in … for a long time, but I still find it hard to adapt myself to … To begin with, …What’s more, … What trouble me most is …
我已经····很长时间了，但我仍然很难适应……。首先……。而且……。最让我困扰的是……
拓展：常见困难
【生活方面】
“与人相处 ”
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
“把握时间 ”
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
“明确目标”
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
【学习方面】
“不懂语法”
觉得掌握高级语法并应用于口语和写作很难
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
练习
假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
提示词汇Charming China(魅力中国)
Firstly, I’m not sure of some proper expressions in English and not aware of the mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you please go through the attachment to this email and then help me correct the mistakes and polish the speech draft Besides, I am pretty nervous about the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some presentation skills, which can improve my performance.
五、结尾段：重申目的--希望得到帮助
I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
I would appreciate it if you could spare time to give me a hand.
如果你能抽时间来帮助我，我将不胜感激。
练习
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.
I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua