2016聚焦中考英语(辽宁省)考点聚焦课件+考点跟踪突破:书面表达(3份打包)

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课件28张PPT。辽宁省英语第44讲 书面表达 书面表达旨在考查学生语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力,是中考中重要且难度较大的题型。体裁以应用文、记叙文和议论文为主;取材主要来源于学生熟悉的日常生活;以应用文、图表式作文和话题作文为主要命题形式。
备考时抓住“时间、书写、表达”。对于考生来说,时间是保障,书写是根本,表达是关键。书面表达通常是试卷最后一道题,考生习惯从头开始做,等到书面表达时,时间已经不够用了,潦草的书写、中国式英语、单词拼写错误、语法结构错误都将影响得分。因此平时要进行限时训练,练好英文书写,用地道、流畅的英语来表达内容。小作文
2015年辽宁各地市中考英语试题中除沈阳、大连、阜新、朝阳和鞍山外,其他地市都考查小作文。
此类作文词数以30词左右为主,要求考生能够根据题目要求,确定文体和格式(通常应用文体给出格式、也会给出首尾句),并尽量用简单准确的语言表达题目要求,力求减少错误。
小作文的考查内容涉及以下三种:应用文(招聘、寻物启事、失物招领、感谢信、通知、邀请函、生日卡等),介绍类(好习惯、朋友、喜欢的运动、校园生活等),建议类(保护环境、建设校园、班级聚会、班规等)。1.确定格式。小作文一般都是应用文,而应用文的格式一般比较固定。如书信、留言条及电子邮件一般情况下一开始为称呼(Dear×××,),接下来是正文,最后加上署名[一般先写“Yours (sincerely)”然后另起一行加署名]。
2.确定内容。根据提示内容,列出写作要点,不能错过提示词或参考词汇。不同的文体用语也应有所区别。小作文应注意语言的准确及简练,条理要清晰。
3.确定人称和时态。应用文通常采用第一人称,时态通常以一般现在时为主。
4.检查核实。小作文字数虽少,但却要求语言的精炼,所以在书写完后应再次检查,注意单词拼写、大小写、主谓一致及时态对应等问题,避免因粗心而失分。【例1】根据要求完成小作文,词数:约30词。(2015,本溪)
学校定于7月1日上午9点在操场上举行毕业典礼(the graduation ceremony)。典礼期间,同学们将观看才艺表演(talent show),互赠美好祝愿。
假如你是班长刘涛,请你用英语写一则通知。通知必须包括以上全部内容,并提醒同学们准时参加。
Notice
Boys and girls,
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
Liu Tao【写作指导】本文是一则通知,通知内容应包含:毕业典礼时间、地点、内容。语言应简洁。应使用一般将来时。
One possible version:
Notice
Boys_and_girls,
Our school will hold the graduation ceremony at 9 am on July 1st on the playground.We will watch talent shows and give our best wishes to each other.Please attend on time.
Liu_Tao【例2】根据要求完成小作文,词数:约30词。(2015,辽阳)
假如你是Lucy,你的朋友Vicky的英语书丢了。请你写个QQ留言,将招领启事牌上的信息转告她,并告诉她别着急,明天会和她一起去取回书。
Found:An English book
Tel:51756348
Name:Mike
Class 3,Grade 7
Vicky,
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
Lucy【写作指导】这是一篇应用文,考查学生按照题目要求把句意表达清楚的能力,其中包括姓名,电话,班级等信息。同时,还要安慰朋友别担心,明天会与她一起去取书。学生需要把关键信息表述清楚,同时注意时态、语态的正确使用及语句通顺。
One possible version:
Vicky,
Mike got your English book.He is in Class 3,Grade 7.His telephone number is 51756348.Don't worry.I will go with you and get it back tomorrow.
Lucy假如你是李丽,你的同学王明邀请你这个星期天去参加他的生日聚会,但你因要跟父母去看望生病的姑姑而不能去。请给王明写一个30-40词的便条。
Dear Wang Ming,
Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party.But I am sorry that I can't go to the party because I must visit my aunt with my parents this Sunday.She is ill in hospital.I hope you will have a good time.
Yours,
Li_Li大作文
辽宁各地市中考大作文话题以学生的学习生活为主,涉及的类型主要包括以下六种:
①介绍类:介绍某事物的相关情况。如介绍学校活动、最喜欢的趣味课、学校变化、校规;写邮件介绍初三学习生活、交换生的住宿、在他国的学习情况,写信介绍学习中文的方法;介绍空闲活动、家乡等。
②建议类:针对解决某事物提出自己的建议。如学习建议、旅游建议、给校长写信提建议;倡导低碳生活、倡导珍惜生命等。
③观点类:针对某事物发表个人观点。如连环画是________、读报纸是________、学英语很________、写信感恩父母、毕业留言等。④做法类:针对某要求提出具体行动做法。如:如何做到举止优雅、文明旅游、保持健康、自我保护等。
⑤叙事类:详细叙述相关事件及感受。如:回忆初中生活、快乐周末、以某种感受写难忘的事、假期故事及体会、帮助别人等。
⑥计划类:针对某行动作出安排。如暑期计划等。
中考试题中的大作文通常给出提示、开头和结尾,要求考生能够根据要点,运用自己所掌握的词汇和句型,写出行文连贯、表达清晰的文章。
但是无独有偶,2015年辽宁各地市的作文内容有个共同特点,都是回顾初中三年的校园生活及展望未来的高中生活。该话题已成为热点话题,应多加关注。书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力;同时,还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。
一、常见的书面表达题型
1.根据文体归类:日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体,形成复合型的写作。
2.根据所提供的材料形式归类:图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性,又有一定的开放性,为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥想象和拓展思维的空间。二、如何写出优美的文章
1.选准词语。
①语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语,切忌使用生僻的词汇。
②选词要达意,英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语,切忌混淆用法。
③用词要简明扼要,在不确定的情况下,宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。2.写好句子。
①运用所学词汇、短语,结合一定的语法知识,按照句子的结构特点,直接用英语写出相应的句子。
②运用固定句式表达信息,把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的简单句子,减少写错句的几率。
③把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来,这样可提高文章的可读性。但在没有把握的情况下慎用。
④遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时,可以在保持原意的基础上,用不同的表达方式写出来。3.设计段落。
一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。
4.书写规范、卷面整洁。
三、如何提升写作
1.熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。
2.收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。
3.坚持常规练习。即:词——词组——句子——段落——篇章。切记:简单句是主菜,要做到运用自如;复杂句是佐料,有之增色,缺之乏味,但不可舍本逐末,以免弄巧成拙。
4.仔细审题,要点齐全,人称及时态运用正确。【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营,其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。
提示词语:climb mountains;go fishing;pick fruits;have a campfire (篝火晚会)
要求:1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动,并给出理由;
2.提示词语仅供参考,可增减内容;
3.词数80~100。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。We are going for a camp this summer.I'm glad to make a plan for our group.__________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
解析:第一步:认真仔细地阅读提示,思考所提供的信息,计划文章大致内容。第二步:根据信息要求遣词造句,连句成文。第三步:通读全文,纠正错误,书写整洁。
写作要点:1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。
注意:此文是计划打算,应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。【参考范文】
We_are_going_for_a_camp_this_summer.I'm_glad_to_make_a_plan_for_our_group.
First of all,we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that,we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls,which will help us know each other better.What's more,there will be a campfire.We can enjoy ourselves by singing,dancing and telling stories.Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school,and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.精彩再现:
①文章内容完整,叙述清楚,要点一目了然。
②使用了first of all,after that,what's more表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰,更流畅。
③经典句型:?we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.?Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends??I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.【例2】 由于父母的溺爱,现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情,导致独立生活能力不强。请你根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。(2015,海南)要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包括表格中所有内容,并做适当发挥;
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数70左右。(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
注意:须把已给出的短文开头和结尾抄到答题卡的相应位置。
As middle school students,it's very important for us to be independent.What should we do to make us independent?First,...
...I think if we keep on doing these,we'll become more and more independent.
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________解析:第一步:认真阅读题目要求,仔细观察表格中的内容。第二步:根据提示内容,把握好文章的中心,适度发挥。选用合适的副词使文章条理清晰。第三步:通读全文,检查要点是否遗漏,纠正错误,书写要整洁。
注意:表达培养独立性的方法时,多用祈使句;描述可以做的事情时,可用到can,should,need等情态动词;写作时,时态应用一般现在时,人称采用第一人称,给出的要点不能遗漏,并且注意词数要求。【参考范文】
As_middle_school_students,it's_very_important_for_us_to_be_independent.What_should_we_do_to_make_us_independent?First,let's begin with our own things.It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds.Second,help with housework.We can help cook or clean the house in our free time.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.Third,learn actively.We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time.Finally,think about things by ourselves.We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone.Don't always depend on others.
I_think_if_we_keep_on_doing_these,we'll_become_more_and_more_independent.精彩再现:
①整篇文章结构完整,内容详尽,要点清晰。
②层次清晰。先表明自己的观点,后用first,second,third,finally表顺序的副词把观点一一陈列,清楚明了,条理分明。
③经典句型:?It's our job to...?Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.?Don't always depend on others.你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My Special ________”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求:1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象,如grandma,teacher或friend等;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右。My Special Grandma
My grandma is special to me because we're like friends.She always help me out whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us.
When I am with my grandma,we spend a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.One thing she's best at is cooking.She often cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.考点跟踪突破44 书面表达
训练一 小作文
(一)难忘的老师(2015,葫芦岛)
根据要求完成小作文,词数约30。
请你简单介绍一下你印象比较深刻的一位老师,至少要写出外貌、性格和爱好三个方面。短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
My_English_teacher_is_a_tall_woman/man_with_glasses.She/He_is_very_outgoing.Her/His_class_is_very_interesting.She/He_likes_sports.She/He_often_plays_volleyball_with_us.We_love_her/him_very_much.
【写作指导】要求介绍自己印象深刻的一位老师,基本要点已给出,可以以例子的形式适当发挥,拓展语言,展示写作能力。注意在描述老师的性格、外貌和爱好时,所用时态为一般现在时。
(二)绿色生活(2015,铁岭)
根据要求完成小作文,词数:约30词。
“用脚步丈量快乐,用环保诠释明天”,在倡导绿色生活的今天,你平时是怎样从点滴小事做起的?(至少写出三点)
In_my_daily_life,I_walk_to_school_instead_of_taking_the_car.When_I_leave_the_room,I_always_remember_to_turn_off_the_lights.I_never_throw_rubbish_everywhere.
【写作指导】本文是有关环境保护的小短文,描述自己是如何做到绿色生活的,至少列出三条绿色生活的做法,可以是资源节约、环保等方面。全文用一般现在时即可。
(三)初中生活的收获(2015,锦州)
根据要求完成小作文。
get on with
work together with
make progress in
have confidence in
be thankful to
三年初中生活就要结束了,你一定收获很多。请根据方框提示对自己进行简要总结,写出五点收获。
要求:1.词数不少于50词。
2.条理清晰,语言连贯,可适当发挥。
1.I'm very happy I can get on well with my classmates,
and they're friendly to me.
2.It's helpful for me to learn to work together with friends.I have so many good memories.
3.With the teachers' help,I've made progress in every subject.
4.Now,I have confidence in myself.I like communicating with others and taking part in activities.
5.I'm thankful to everyone around me.I love them forever.
【写作指导】这篇小作文要求学生于毕业之际写一写自己初中生活的收获。
可以运用的短语:get on well with sb.,be friendly to sb.,it's+形容词+for sb. to do sth.,learn to do sth.,work together with friends,made progress in,have confidence in,communicating with others,take part in activities,be thankful等。
(四)感谢信(2015,营口)
根据要求完成小作文,词数30词左右。
假如你是Linda,你收到了一份生日礼物,是转学到杭州的同学Cindy寄给你的一本书。请你写封电子邮件表示感谢,并祝她在新学校过得愉快。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
Thank_you_for_sending_me_the_book_as_my_birthday_gift.It's_very_interesting.I_like_it_very_much.It's_my_favorite_gift.I_hope_you_can_have_a_good_time_at_your_new_school.
Yours,
Linda
【写作指导】这篇小作文要求以Linda的名义给转学到杭州的同学写一封电子邮件,感谢她寄给你的生日礼物,并祝她在新学校过得愉快。可能运用的短语:thanks for doing,send sth. as...,send sth. to sb.,have a good time等。
(五)改善交通
根据要求完成小作文,词数:约30。
越来越多的汽车给我们的生活带来便捷的同时也带来了很多交通问题,增加了我们出行的不安全因素。为此我们应该怎么做呢?请写出5~6条改善交通问题的小贴士。
First,we_should_always_pay_attention.Second,we_must_not_play_on_the_road.Third,we_should_obey_the_traffic_rules.Fourth,we_must_walk_on_the_sidewalk.Finally,we_must_be_careful_when_crossing_the_roads.
【写作指导】这篇作文是对交通问题提出几条建议。可针对生活中出现的出行不安全因素提出几点即可。应注意要有条理,可使用“First...second...”和情态动词“should”、“must”。
(六)戒烟方法
根据要求完成小作文。
be harmful to
the people around you
give up smoking
lung cancer (肺癌)
take more exercise
我们经常看到身边的亲人或者朋友吸烟。请根据方框提示给他/她写封信,谈谈吸烟的危害,劝其为了自己和家人的健康戒烟,并简单向他/她介绍戒烟的方法。
要求:1.词数不少于50词;信的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2.条理清晰,语言连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear ××,
I'm writing to ask you to give up smoking.We all know that smoking is bad for our health.It's also harmful to the people around you.If you smoke for a long time,it's easy to get lung cancer.So you have to give up smoking.When you want to smoke,you can do something else like taking some exercise or playing chess.
Good luck.
Yours,
Bob
【写作指导】本文是有关戒烟的小短文,描述吸烟的危害并提出戒烟的方法。全文用一般现在时。
训练二 大作文
(一)应用作文
A 良好的行为(2015,阜新)
根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。
良好的行为对于中学生的成长是非常重要的。假如你是Ted,请参考下面提示,给学校英文报编辑写一封信,谈谈我们应该如何从自己做起,从身边的小事做起,成为一名合格的中学生。词数:60~80词。
内容提示:
1.家里:帮助父母做家务;和父母多交流。
2.学校:遵守(不违反)学校的规章制度;帮助其他同学。
3.社会:不要在公共场所大声讲话;保护环境。
写作要求:
1.不能出现真实的姓名、班级和学校。
2.书写规范,语句通顺。
3.可做适当的发挥。
参考词汇:talk with,obey the school rules,society,in public (places),environment
Dear editor,
As a student,it's important for us to do well in our family,school and society.
At home,it's necessary to help our parents with some housework.It's also good for us to talk with them,because sometimes we can't understand each other.
At school,we aren't allowed to break the school rules.I often help the classmates in trouble,and it makes me happy.I never waste food in the dining hall.I think we shouldn't draw on the desk or on the wall.
In society,I think we shouldn't shout in public places.I never cut in line when I wait for the bus.We shouldn't throw the rubbish out.
Yours,
Ted
【写作指导】这是一封关于“中学生的良好行为”的书信,要求以Ted的名义给学校英文报编辑写一封信,谈谈如何从自己做起,从身边的小事做起,成为一名合格的中学生。
短文可以分为以下三部分:
1.谈谈在家里应该怎么做:和父母多交流;帮助父母做家务等。
2.谈谈在学校应该怎么做:遵守学校的规章制度;尽可能地帮助其他同学等;
3.谈谈在社会应该怎么做:保护环境;遵守秩序;不要在公共场所大声喧哗等。
可以运用的短语或句型有:It's+形容词+for sb. to do sth.,do well in,help sb. with sth.,talk with sb. about sth.,communicate with,understand each other,be allowed to do sth.,break the rules,obey the rules,try one's best to do sth.,help sb. in trouble,in society,in public places,cut in line,wait for the bus,throw the rubbish等。
B 阅读的重要性(2015,衡阳)
你喜欢阅读吗?阅读能使人明智,使人充实。请你以“Reading is Very Important”为题,写一篇有关阅读的短文。
要求:1.阅读的益处;
2.你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间、地点、购书方式等);
3.你的阅读体会;
4.你的阅读计划;
5.号召大家多阅读。
提示:1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
2.短文中应包含至少3个要点;
3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80。
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading is Very Important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
I like reading a lot.In my spare time,I often read newspaper and magazines,from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books,novels and so on,which make me relax and happy.On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.Now I usually buy my favorite books online.
Summer vacation is coming.I plan to read more
English books to improve my English abilities.
I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's important and necessary for us.Let's do more reading together.
C 改正不良习惯(2015,长沙)
假设你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory)规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声接打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求:(1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(2)字数:60~80词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.You know we are supposed to clean up after ourselves to keep our room tidy every day.It isn't a hard job to make the bed,is it?If you do need to make or answer a phone call,lower voice won't trouble others.Everybody knows that it's impolite to take others' things without permission/asking.Besides,would you please turn off the lights when you leave the room?It's also a good way to save energy.
Anyhow,the dormitory is a place where we have a rest and relax ourselves.I believe if we respect each other,we can create a pleasant and comfortable environment.Let's follow the rules and try to be great roommates.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
(二)话题类
A 发表观点(2015,锦州模拟)
2015年4月13日,河南一位名叫顾少强的中学女教师向学校领导递交了一封只有10个字的辞职信:“世界那么大,我想去看看。”她的这封信引起广泛关注。请你就此事给你的英国笔友写一封邮件,向他(她)简单介绍一下顾少强及她的决定,并谈谈你对此事的看法。
Gu Shaoqiang is a woman teacher in Henan Province.On April 13,2015,she wrote a letter to her headmaster.She wanted to give up her teaching work to look around the outside world.
I think everyone has different ways of life.As an adult,it's normal for her to choose her own way of life.The world is very beautiful,and it's well worth appreciating.If I were her,maybe I would also do like that.I agree to her decision.
【写作指导】1.本文是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。先要简介一下事实,再发表自己的观点。2.本文的话题是要针对一封女教师的辞职信:“世界那么大,我想去看看”发表观点。观点要谱写。3.提示语中的内容要表达完整。
B 难忘的校园生活(2015,盘锦)
根据要求完成下面的内容。
“轻轻地我走了,正如我轻轻地来”。初中的时光已悄然过去,有悲伤、有快乐、有失败、有成功……,请以“My Unforgettable School Life”为题写一篇难忘校园生活的作文。
要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,词数60~80。
2.书写工整、规范,文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My Unforgettable School Life
Although my school life is over,I still can't forget the happy time that I've spent with my classmates and teachers.I usually get on well with my classmates,so I've made many friends who always give me a hand when I am in trouble.My teachers are also kind and patient.In my school life,I have developed a lot of good habits,such as reading books,playing sports and so on.In this way,I've got more knowledge and improved my life.
I really learn a lot in my meaningful and colorful school life.I will never forget this good time.
【写作指导】本文是一篇以My unforgettable school life为题的记叙文,叙述自己难忘的校园生活。基本要点已给出,学生可以适当发挥。
C 暑假计划(2015,葫芦岛模拟)
紧张而忙碌的初中学习生活即将结束,我们将迎来一个轻松而快乐的暑假,请你以“My Holiday Plans”为题,介绍你的暑假计划。
主要内容:1.看望亲人或朋友;2.去海边;3.做自己喜欢的事,例如:打乒乓球、读书等。
要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范;语法正确,语义连贯;
2.文章中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和校名;
3.词数:60~80。
My Holiday Plans
We've been working in the past three years.The summer holiday is coming and I want to do something interesting and relaxing.
First of all,I'm going to visit my grandparents because I haven't been with them for a long time.Next,I plan to go to the seaside,swim in the sea and lie on the beach.Then,I'll practice playing table tennis which is my favorite sport.Finally,I'll read some interesting books.
I'm sure I can enjoy myself during the holiday.I'm looking forward to it.
【写作指导】本文以“暑假计划”为话题,属记叙文。主要内容提示已给出,学生可以根据提示自由发挥,也可作适当拓展。
D 自我保护(2015,抚顺模拟)
Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”.(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。
提示:自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中是怎样进行自我保护的(可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例,如:面对灾难如何自救,如何预防受骗或侵害,如何避免生活中的意外,等等)。
Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考):ask...for help calm down in danger prevent...from
(注意:文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分)。
How to Protect Myself
A_terrible_explosion_in_Tianjin_took_many_people's_lives_recently_and_brought_endless_and_pains_to_a_large_number_of_families.So_if_I_am_caught_in_a_fire,I_will_try_my_best_to_protect_myself.First,I_will_stay_calm.A_cool_head_can_prevent_me_from_taking_rash_action_and_help_to_pick_out_a_right_solution.Then,I_will_call_119_and_tell_them_my_exact_location_and_the_situation.Most_importantly,I_will_cover_myself_with_wet_clothes_and_make_my_way_to_the_secure_channel_instead_of_jumping_out_of_the_window.With_above_tips,I_will_surely_be_able_to_protect_myself_from_fires.
【写作指导】1.本文属于夹叙夹议的文章;2.介绍一件事情引出自我保护话题;3.介绍如何保护自己;4.总结语;5.参考词汇:protect oneself自我保护;prevent sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事;jump out of跳出。
(三)图表类
A 拒绝做“低头族”(2015,烟台)
随着互联网的发展,智能手机(smart-phone)已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示,结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to Be Phubbers”为题写一篇120词左右的短文。
要求:1.短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2.题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
现象
弊端
影响与家人、朋友的关系(relationship);容易引发交通事故;对身心健康有害,不利于学习和工作。
观点
正确使用手机;面对面交流胜过网上聊天……
参考词汇:1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of
Refuse to Be Phubbers
With the development of the Internet,smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.
While eating with family members or getting together with friends,some are always busy playing with their mobile phones.It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends.Even worse,when some people cross the street,they still concentrate on their mobile phones,which can easily cause traffic accidents.It's too dangerous.And others stay up playing games.I think it really does great harm to their health,study and work.
In my opinion,we'd better make good use of smartphones.Don't depend on them too much.And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online.Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!
【写作指导】本文针对“低头族”这一现象提出其存在的弊端,并发表自己的观点,属夹叙夹议的文章。学生可根据提示内容适当发挥,要注意在文章最后应说出自己的想法。
B 解决学习中的困难(2015,泉州)
在学习生活中,每个人都要面对各种困难。如何应对这些困难呢?请你根据以下思维导图所提供的信息,以“How to deal with difficulties in learning”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
参考词汇:参考书reference book
How to Deal with
Difficulties is Learning
温馨提示:短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点和所在学校名称。
How to Deal with Difficulties in Learning
As students,we may meet all kinds of difficulties in learning.Everyone has his or her own way to deal with them.Here I'd like to share mine.
Whenever I meet a difficulty,I'll look up in reference books or search for an answer online.However,when it's something too hard for me,I usually turn to my classmates or teachers,and sometimes I ask my parents for advice.As a result,I have made great progress in my studies.By doing these,I can not only improve my studies but also develop my ability to overcome difficulties.
【写作指导】1.本文的中心话题是如何处理学习生活中的各种困难。2.要点:图表中给出的信息要表达完整、即引出话题,自己做法(查阅参考书、网上搜寻,向老师、同学求助……)及心得体会。
C 多读书(2015,连云港)
为促进全民阅读,某校对全体学生的课外阅读情况做了个问卷调查。请根据下列调查数据和相关文字提示,以“Let's Read More!”为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明课外阅读的现状和意义,并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的建议。
要点
内容
调查数据
某校学生每天的课外阅读时间
阅读的意义
1.增长知识;
2.提高解决问题的能力;
3.培养良好的习惯,使生活丰富多彩。
你的建议
?(至少两点)
注意:1.词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Let's Read More!
To go with the Civil Reading,our school has done a survey and found that 56% of the students spend less than one hour reading after class each day,while 33% read for 1 to 2 hours,and only 11% read for more than 3 hours.
This is not satisfying.As we all know,reading makes a full man.Reading not only increases our knowledge,improves our ability to solve problems,but also helps us form a good habit and makes our life colourful.
As students,it's time for us to read more.Let's join reading clubs,set classroom bookshelves and organize reading competitions so that we can do better in our study.
【写作指导】1.本文主体时态为一般现在时。
2.确定要点:
(1)描述图表内容:
①56%的学生每天花在阅读上的时间不到1个小时;
②33%的学生每天花在阅读上的时间为1~2个小时;
③11%的学生每天花在阅读上的时间超过3个小时;
(2)阅读的意义:
①增长知识;
②提高解决问题的能力;
③培养良好的习惯,使生活丰富多彩;
(3)你的建议(至少两点)。
3.参考词汇:increase our knowledge增长我们的知识