人教版八年级上册Units 5-6写作能力提升

人教版八年级上5-6写作能力提升
UNIT 5 Do you want to watch a game show
写作能力提升练
写作任务
你看了电影《奇迹男孩》(Wonder) 后非常感动，准备写一篇英语影评，推荐这部电影。
剧情：：电影讲述了小男孩Auggie 的故事。Auggie天生有面部缺陷(born with a facial deformity)，他出门前不得不装扮成宇航员(astronaut) 的样子，但是在家人、老师以及朋友的帮助下，他最终变得自信(confident) 起来，成了一个优秀的孩子。
观后感：演员们都演得非常好；电影展现了家人、朋友对Auggie 的爱。
思路点拨
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
介绍一部电影
影片名称、类型 wonderful,educational,touch,unlucky,born with a facial deformity
及总述
剧情简介 dress up,astronaut,laugh at,with the help of, confident,grow up,excellent
观后感 do a good job,show,love
【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点写出句子。
1.《奇迹男孩》是一部精彩、有教育意义的电影。它深深地打动了我。
Wonder is a _wonderful__and _educational__movie. It touches my heart deeply.
2. 奥吉是一个不幸的男孩，他天生有面部缺陷。
Auggie is an _unlucky_boy. He was_born with_a facial deformity.
3. 他出门时不得不装扮成宇航员的样子。
He has to__dress up like an astronaut when he goes out.
4. 然而，在他的家人、老师们和朋友们的帮助下，他变得自信起来。
However, _with the help of his family, teachers and friends, he_becomes confident.
6. 他最终成长为一个优秀的男孩。
He _grows up_ to be an _excellent_ boy at last.
【巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文在叙述剧情时用一些表示时间过渡的词语来体现故事的脉络，比如when, at last 等，以及用however 来表示转折，使文章衔接自然流畅。
【精彩范文】
Wonder is a wonderful and educational movie. It touches my heart deeply. The movie is about Auggie. Auggie is an unlucky boy. He was born with a facial deformity. He has to dress up like an astronaut when he goes out. However, with the help of his family, teachers and friends, he becomes confident. He grows up to be an excellent boy at last. I think all of the actors do a good job. The movie also shows us the love for Auggie from his family, teachers and friends.
写作实践
The Lion King这部电影非常经典、励志，请你对这部电影进行简单的评论，写一篇80词左右的短文，在下节课上分享给大家。
Main character: a little lion named Simba, whose father was a king
Story: His father died. He tried his best to save his mother and other lions. He is a real hero.
提示：1. 这部电影是什么类型的？
2. 这部电影的主要内容是什么？
3. 这部电影的重要意义是什么？
I think The Lion King is a very successful cartoon movie. It tells a story about a little lion named Simba. He lived a happy life at first. His father, the old king, was killed one day, and he lost touch with his family. He tried his best to come back to get his kingdom. At last he saved his mother and other lions. I think he is a real hero. We can learn how to face the dangers in our life from the movie.
UNIT 6 I'm going to study computer science.
写作能力提升练
写作任务
假设你是李明，你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。
提示：get excellent grades focus on（致力于）science classes (Science classes are a must for medical schools.)
improve my physical health
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 不少于80 词。
思路点拨
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
我梦想的职业
梦想是什么 I want to be a doctor when I grow up,not easy,make a plan
如何实现 college,grades,work hard,focus on science classes,get more exercise,improve,long hours,healthy
表明决心 try my best,come true
【遣词造句】根据结构图中的要点写出句子。
1. 当一名医生是不容易的，因此我为此制订一个计划。
It’s not easy _to be a doctor_, so I make a plan_for it.
2. 为了考上最好的医学院，我需要取得优秀的成绩。
To get into the best medical college, I need to get excellent grades.
3. 因此我打算更加努力学习，以取得更好的成绩。
So I’m going to _study harder to_ get better grades.
4. 我计划多做运动来改善我的身体健康状况。
I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health.
5. 我打算尽全力实现自己的梦想。
I’m going to try my best_ to make my dream _come true_.
【巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文中，在叙述如何实现自己的梦想时，可以运用firstly, secondly, thirdly, all in all（总之）来使文章节奏流畅、紧凑。
【精彩范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I want to be a doctor when I grow up. It’s not easy to be a doctor, so I make a plan for it.
Firstly, to get into the best medical college, I need to get excellent grades. So I’m going to study harder to get better grades.
Secondly, I’m going to focus on science classes because they are a must for medical colleges.
Thirdly, I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health. Most doctors work long hours, and it’s bad for health. So I need to have a healthy body.
All in all, I’m going to try my best to make my dream come true.
What are you going to do in the future I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
写作实践
毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job” 为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想及以下提示，写一篇关于职业的英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
提示: 1. What do you want to be when you grow up
2. Why do you want to be a (n)…
3. How are you going to do that
4. Where are you going to work
5. When are you going to start
要求: 1. 文中须包括所有提示内容，可适当发
挥；2. 词数80 左右。
My Dream Job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be an English teacher. I'm good at communicating and like working with children. What's more, I have always been interested in English.
To be an English teacher, I need to take action right now. First, I'm going to study English really hard. Second, I plan to learn how to teach children. And most importantly, I'll read as many books as possible.
If I become an English teacher, I will work in Beijing. I'm going to start when I finish college. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.