应用文写作
【2024北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【2023北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【2022年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【2021年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【2020年北京卷】
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
第二节（20分）
【2020年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律 self-discipline
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Writing 01
（2024·北京朝阳·二模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校即将举办以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信，邀请他一起参加。内容包括：
1. 介绍你打算参加的活动;
2. 询问对方意向。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 02
（2024·北京海淀·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近日，应英国好友Jim的请求，你帮助他完成了一项关于你班学生英语泛读（extensive reading）现状的调查（见下图）。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.调查结果描述；
2.你的选择及对英语泛读的认识。
注意: 1. 词数 100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 03
【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 04
【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 05
【2024年北京市东城区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的任务。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 06
【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
LiHua
Writing 07
【2024年北京市海淀区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的答复及理由；
2.提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 08
【2024年北京市西城区高三二模】44．假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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Yours,
Li Hua应用文写作
【2024北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【2023北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【2022年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。
请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
How’s everything
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
【2021年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
麻烦：problem→trouble
怎么样：what about→how about
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I should be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me know what time suits you best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【2020年北京卷】
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，
作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添
彩。
第二节（20分）
【2020年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律 self-discipline
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【答案】One possible version:
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-discipline”. The findings worried me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一篇图画作文，要求考生按以下四幅图的先后顺序，就你开展“自律”调研活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程写一篇英文稿件，向学校英文网站投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明写作主题——“自律”
2. 根据图片描写事件过程：
第一幅图片描写自己对“自律”调研结果很担忧；
第二幅图片描写自己向父母求助解决方法/建议；
第三幅图片描写自己和同学们在网上讨论如何自律；
第四幅图片描写三个月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老师很高兴。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
ask sb. for help；practical advice；an online discussion；do a second survey
第三步：连词成句
1. I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice.
2. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves.
3. I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如which showed great improvements in self-discipline这句话中
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如ask sb. for help，an online discussion，do a second survey等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
Writing 01
（2024·北京朝阳·二模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校即将举办以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信，邀请他一起参加。内容包括：
1. 介绍你打算参加的活动;
2. 询问对方意向。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Jim,
How are you doing Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, so I am writing to invite you to join me.
Of all the activities, I prefer to participate in the tree planting to experience the sourness and sweetness of growth. Those who sign up for it will work together to plant a tree, digging a hole, building soil berms and watering the sapling. The growth of a tree requires patience and persistence, so do we. When the tree flourishes, we’ll become responsible adults, making contributions to the society.
Are you interested in it I believe it’ll be an unforgettable experience. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信，邀请他一起参加以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
参加：participate in→take part in
繁茂：flourishes→thrive
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, so I am writing to invite you to join me.
拓展句：Since our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of growth, I am writing to invite you to join me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those who sign up for it will work together to plant a tree, digging a hole, building soil berms and watering the sapling. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] When the tree flourishes, we’ll become responsible adults, making contributions to the society. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
Writing 02
（2024·北京海淀·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近日，应英国好友Jim的请求，你帮助他完成了一项关于你班学生英语泛读（extensive reading）现状的调查（见下图）。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.调查结果描述；
2.你的选择及对英语泛读的认识。
注意: 1. 词数 100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
In response to your request, I have conducted the survey on English extensive reading. Here are the results:
The majority of the participants (73%) occasionally engage in this practice. Very few (7%) of those surveyed report reading frequently while one fifth (20%) admit they have never done it before.
As a passionate bookworm, I definitely vote for the “frequently” option. Extensive reading deepens my appreciation for English, which in turn increases my language proficiency. Second, the worlds created by the authors, either fictional or not, allow me to know society and myself better, enabling me to see the world anew.
I hope you find the above information useful. If you have any other questions, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给英国好友写一封邮件，描述关于英语泛读现状的调查结果，以及对英语泛读的认识。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
要求：request→ demand
参与：engage in→ involved in
肯定：definitely→ certainly
允许：allow→ permit
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Second, the worlds created by the authors, either fictional or not, allow me to know society and myself better, enabling me to see a new world.
拓展句：Second, the worlds created by the authors, either fictional or not, allow me to know society and myself better, because they enable me to see a new world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Extensive reading deepens my appreciation for English, which in turn increases my language proficiency. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you have any other questions, please let me know. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 03
【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.
In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. Besides, we made brochures concerning the practical tips on dealing with disasters and handed them out on campus to further spread the safety knowledge among students.
I have prepared an English brochure for you. Hope it will help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写邮件，说明“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动的目的和安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣的：be interested in→show interest in
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：besides→furthermore
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies.
拓展句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities that aim to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to
share it with you.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation.（运用了疑问词+to do作宾语和when引导的状语从句，现在分词作状语）
Writing 04
【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Jim,
You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing!
I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus.
Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，欢迎他来北京上大学学习中文，
推荐他上哪所大学，建议他做哪些准备工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
提供：offer→provide
专家：expert→specialist
另外：moreover→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：If you study with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，省略句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 05
【2024年北京市东城区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的任务。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities. These include a lecture on plastic pollution, a workshop on how
to reuse plastics, and a clean-up campaign. I have been assigned to help organize the clean-up campaign. We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find. I’m really looking forward to this opportunity.
I hope you can also participate in similar activities in your area to help protect our planet.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校在今年世界地球日将举办以“Planet vs. Plastics”为主题的活动一事，用英文给他回复，介绍此项活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：be glad to→ be thrilled to
集中精力于：focus on → concentrate on
一系列的：a series of→ a sequence of
帮助：help→ assist
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
拓展句：It gives me immense pleasure to inform you about the forthcoming event scheduled at our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句）
Writing 06
【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
The aim of this activity is to enrich our school life and arouse our interest in science and technology. During the carnival, there will be a variety of activities, including exhibitions of the latest scientific and technological achievements, lectures by famous scientists, and hands-on experiments. In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge.
I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. I look forward to seeing you at the carnival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的“科技嘉年华”活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
目的：aim→ purpose
各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of
著名的：famous → well-known
此外：in addition→ what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival which will be held next week in our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
Writing 07
【2024年北京市海淀区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一
封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的答复及理由；
2.提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Thank you for considering me for such an important cause. I truly appreciate your invitation to join you in donating blood on World Blood Donor Day.
However, due to personal reasons, I won’t be able to participate this time. Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives.
Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward. Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process.
Wishing you a successful and rewarding experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，在京学习的英国好友Jim决定在世界献血者日当天去献血，想要询问你的意愿，按要求考生用英文写一封电子邮件回复Jim。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant/crucial
因为：due to→owing to/because of
完全地：fully→completely/totally
拯救：save→rescue
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward.
拓展句：Before you prepare for the donation, remember to eat a healthy meal, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
Writing 08
【2024年北京市西城区高三二模】44．假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Congratulations on becoming a part of our wonderful school community. At the request of our English teacher, I’m reaching out to offer you some advice on navigating your time here.
First, treasure every moment spent with your teachers and classmates. Your time here will pass quickly, so seize the opportunity to forge meaningful and lasting connections. Secondly, let go of your past achievements or failures. Instead, focus on the tasks at hand. It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future. Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion. Take English learning for instance. Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you.
Wishing you all a fulfilling and rewarding journey ahead filled with joy, growth, and success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写出对高一学弟学妹各方面的建议，最后表达美好的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
珍视：treasure→cherish
抓住：seize → grasp/catch hold of
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
以……为例：take sth. for instance→take sth. for example
2.句式拓展
宾语从句变定语从句
原句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you.
拓展句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find something that genuinely motivates you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future.（运用了强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分+that+其他部分）
【高分句型2】Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
