Unit10If you go to the party, you'll have a great time英语写作学会解决问题人教版八年级英语上册

2024年人教版八年级上英语Unit10英语写作-学会解决问题
写 作 任 务一
生活是如此美好,人生有无尽的快乐,但也有诸多的烦恼。作为中学生的你,最大的烦恼是什么 你打算如何去解决 请你以“My Biggest Problem”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求:1.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名; 2.80词左右。
思 路 点 拨
第一步：审题主题：描述最大的烦恼及解决方法要求：文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名
第二步：写作提纲开头：简要介绍生活既有快乐也有烦恼，引出自己的最大烦恼。
主体：详细描述烦恼：具体说明是什么烦恼，为什么觉得它是最大的烦恼。
解决方案：提出你打算如何解决这个烦恼，可以是一步一步的行动计划。
结尾：总结你对解决这个烦恼的信心和期望。第三步：选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释：problem (n.)：问题stress (n.)：压力homework (n.)：作业balance (v.)：平衡relax (v.)：放松
高 分 作 文高分作文一：
My Biggest Problem
Life is full of joy, but it also has many problems. As a middle school student, my biggest problem is too much homework. Every day, I have to spend hours doing homework after school. It gives me a lot of stress and I don't have much time for my hobbies or to relax.
To solve this problem, I plan to make a better schedule. I will divide my time between homework and relaxation. I will also try to do my homework more efficiently so that I can finish it faster. I hope these methods will help me balance my study and free time.
I believe if I follow this plan, I can solve my biggest problem and enjoy life more.
我最大的问题
生活充满了快乐，但它也有许多问题。作为一名中学生，我最大的问题是作业太多。每天，我放学后都要花好几个小时做作业。它给我带来了很多压力，我没有太多时间去做我的爱好或放松。
为了解决这个问题，我计划制定一个更好的时间表。我将把我的时间分配给作业和放松。我也会尽量更有效率地做作业，这样我就可以更快地完成它。我希望这些方法能帮助我平衡我的学习和空闲时间。
我相信如果我按照这个计划去做，我就能解决我最大的问题，更享受生活。
高分作文二：
My Biggest Problem
Everyone has problems in life, and I am no exception. As a middle school student, my biggest problem is managing my time well. I often find myself stressed because I have so many things to do, like homework, extracurricular activities, and spending time with friends.
To solve this problem, I am going to use a planner to organize my time. I will write down all my tasks and assign them to specific times in the day. This way, I can make sure I have time for everything and don't get too stressed. I also plan to learn to prioritize my tasks and do the most important things first.
I am confident that with these strategies, I can overcome my biggest problem and enjoy a more balanced life.
我最大的问题
每个人在生活中都有问题，我也不例外。作为一名中学生，我最大的问题是如何很好地管理我的时间。我经常发现自己压力很大，因为我有太多事情要做，比如作业、课外活动，还有和朋友相处的时间。
为了解决这个问题，我打算使用一个计划本来组织我的时间。我会写下我所有的任务，并为它们分配一天中的特定时间。这样，我就可以确保我有时间做每件事，并且不会感到太压力。我还计划学会对我的任务进行优先排序，先做最重要的事情。
我相信有了这些策略，我就能克服我最大的问题，享受更平衡的生活。
好 句 背 诵
以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达：
1.Life is full of joy, but it also has many problems.（生活充满了快乐，但它也有许多问题。）简洁明了地引出了文章的主题，即生活中既有快乐也有问题。
2.My biggest problem is too much homework.（我最大的问题是作业太多。）直接点明了最大问题，使文章结构清晰。
3.It gives me a lot of stress and I don't have much time for my hobbies or to relax.（它给我带来了很多压力，我没有太多时间去做我的爱好或放松。）详细描述了作业多带来的负面影响，增强了文章的说服力。
4.I plan to make a better schedule.（我计划制定一个更好的时间表。）提出了解决问题的具体方法，使文章更加实用。
5.I will divide my time between homework and relaxation.（我将把我的时间分配给作业和放松。）具体说明了如何制定时间表，使解决方法更加具体可行。
6.I believe if I follow this plan, I can solve my biggest problem and enjoy life more.（我相信如果我按照这个计划去做，我就能解决我最大的问题，更享受生活。）对解决问题的信心和对未来的期望，使文章结尾积极向上。
写作任务二
回顾初中生涯，你一定经历了成长的烦恼，也成就了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下四方格图，以“Growing Pains and Gains”为题写篇短文投稿。
What problem did you have Growing Pains and Gains Who/What either encouraged or helped you （friends/teachers/ heroes/music/films/books…）
How did you solve it What have you learned from it
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据四方格图自拟, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在90个左右，短文的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息：
4. 短文必须写指定的位置上。
【参考范文】
Growing Pains and Gains
How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I had not only pains but also gains.
I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine. I always hated running, but I had no choice because of the sports exam. Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. I just wanted to give up. At that moment, the story about Spud Webb encouraged me. Through hard work, Spud Webb became the shortest player in the NBA. His story gave me courage to solve all kind of problems.
Now, I’m not afraid of 800-meter running any more. I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析］
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料文；
时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
提示：文章应该包括表格中提到的四个方面的要点，注意不要遗漏，可以适当补充；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍成长之路，既有痛苦，也有收获；
第二步，叙述过去的经历：发生了什么问题、受到谁的鼓励、如何解决问题、从中获得了什么；
第三步，表达现在的状况以及感受。
［亮点词汇］
look back 回顾过去 not only…but also… 不但……而且……
give up 放弃 come to an end 结束
［高分句型］
Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam.（Although引导让步状语从句）
I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily.（宾语从句、if引导条件状语从句）