Period 6 写作(Writing)
写家庭往事
写家庭往事属于记叙文写作，我们可以从人物、时间、过程、结果或感受等方面对事件进行叙述。写作顺序可包括顺序、倒序或者插叙。时态通常使用一般过去时。
(一)基本框架
开头：引入话题；
主体：叙述故事；
结尾：发表感想。
(二)常用表达
1．The old photo reminded me of many happy days in my childhood．
这张旧照片勾起了我童年时代的许多美好回忆。
2．A visit to the museum with my parents is an unforgettable experience．
和父母一起参观博物馆是一段令人难忘的经历。
3．With the encouragement and support of my parents，I have overcome many difficulties in my life．
在父母的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。
4．Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise．
昨晚我正忙着准备我的考试，这时听到一声巨响。
5．With the beautiful moon up in the sky，we sat together and ate moon cakes and fruits，sharing our stories．
皓月当空，我们围坐在一起，吃着月饼和水果，分享着往事。
6．I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in．
我正要把所有东西扔掉，这时妈妈进来了。
7．Then came the grandest dinner time when we shared the home-made dumplings．
然后到了最美好的聚餐时间，我们一起分享家里做的饺子。
8．If the thing flaring in my mother's eyes was tears，it must be happy tears．
如果妈妈眼中闪烁的是泪花，那一定是幸福的眼泪。
假如你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经为了帮助你摆脱压力而写给你的一堆卡片。这些卡片让你开始了快乐的学习。请你写封电子邮件，把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友汤姆。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．书信的格式已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文为家庭回忆，属于记叙文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第三人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
4．确定内容：
①引入话题；
②叙述故事。
[遣词造句]
1．当我正清理我的书架时，发现了一堆卡片。
While I was cleaning up my bookshelf，I found a stack of cards．
2．当我读每张卡片上的话语时，我的眼睛湿润了。
When I read the words on each card，my eyes watered．
3．正是这些鼓舞人心的卡片帮助我经受住了挫折。
It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration．
4．刚上高中时，我感到有压力，害怕落后于别人。
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind others．
5．妈妈很体贴，发现了我的问题。
Mum was very considerate and she found my problem．
6．我每天早上都能在桌子上找到一张特定的卡片。
I could find a special card on my desk every morning．
7．我开始在学习中找到乐趣。
I began to find pleasure in my studies．
8．妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。
Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided．
9．重要的是如何恰当地处理它。
What counts is how to deal with it properly．
[句式升级]
1．用动词-ing形式作状语改写遣词造句中的句2。
Reading the words on each card，my eyes watered．
2．用so...that...句式改写遣词造句中的句5。
Mum was so considerate that she found my problem．
[连句成篇] (注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
Dear Tom，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Tom，
While I was cleaning up my bookshelf，I found a stack of cards．Reading the words on each card，my eyes watered．It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration．
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind others．Mum was so considerate that she found my problem．From then on，I could find a special card on my desk every morning．Gradually，I began to find pleasure in my studies．Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided．What counts is how to deal with it properly．
Yours，
Li Hua
情感描写 “惊”与“怕”
[词块积累]
1．a flash of surprise 一丝惊讶
2．sit on pins and needles 如坐针毡
3．go pale with fright 吓得脸都白了
4．let out a scream of terror 发出一声恐惧的尖叫
5．with one's hair standing on end毛骨悚然
6．shake all over in a cold sweat冒冷汗，直哆嗦
7．shake one's head in disbelief 难以置信地摇头
8．freeze with terror/be struck with horror吓呆了
9．can't believe one's eyes 简直不敢相信自己的眼睛
10．to one's surprise/astonishment/amazement/shock 令某人吃惊的是
[佳句积累]
1．His heart was pounding，and he was frightened．
他的心怦怦跳，被吓坏了。
2．She held her breath，not daring to make a sound．
她屏住呼吸，不敢弄出一点声响。
3．To people's shock，a tornado struck a small town nearby．
使人们震惊的是，龙卷风袭击了附近的一个小镇。
4．My brain is blank．I just want to leave this horrible place．
我的大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。
5．She spoke hurriedly，as if her heart had leaped into her throat．
她讲话急促，好像她的心已跳到了嗓子眼一样。
6．I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak．
我感到如此害怕，以至于嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。
7．I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly because of the terrible sight．
看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都迅速凝固起来。
8．Hearing the bad news，Mary froze with shock，as if rooted on the ground．
得知这个坏消息，玛丽惊呆了，动弹不得。
9．When I looked at the grade on my maths paper my jaw dropped to the ground．
看到数学卷子上的成绩的那一刻，我非常吃惊。
10．A burst of horror held me totally in its power and I was unable to move an inch．
恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ali and his younger sister，Zahra，lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood．Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job，and they had only a little money with which to buy food．As they had not paid the rent for several months，the landlord was breathing down their necks．
One day，Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed，but he lost them on the way home．It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes．He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed，so he begged his sister to keep it secret．Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes．Zahra's school hours were in the morning，so she would wear them first．After school，she would rush back and give them to Ali．He could then run to his school，which began in the afternoon．
Although he ran as fast as he could，Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school．
Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city．When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes，he decided to take part in it．He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes．
The day of the race arrived．Ali had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache．_____________________________
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[参考范文]
The day of the race arrived． Ali had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache． Thinking he would not let his sister down，he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could．He stayed right behind the two fastest runners all the way in spite of pain．Finally，he dashed across the finish line and won third prize．Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony，Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister．He could not wait to see his sister and walked home quickly．The moment Zahra saw Ali and the shoes in his hand，her face lit up．
课时分层作业(九)
Ⅰ．阅读理解
A
When I was a little girl，I remember that when my dad was repairing something，he would ask me to hold the hammer，so we would have time for a conversation with each other．I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out．All he did after work was taking care of his family．
I grew up and left home for college and since then，my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning．And when I bought a house several years later，my dad painted it by himself in the fierce summer heat．All he asked was to talk to him，but I was too busy in those days．
Four years ago，my dad visited me．He spent many hours putting together a swing for my daughter．He asked me to have a talk with him，but I had to prepare for a trip that weekend．
One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual．I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things that we discussed lately．I was in a hurry，so our conversation was short．Several hours later that day I received a call．My father was in the hospital．Immediately I bought a plane ticket and on my way I was thinking about all the occasions I missed to have a talk with my dad．By the time I arrived at the hospital，my father had passed away．Now it was he who did not have time for a conversation with me．I realized how little I knew about my dad，his deepest thoughts and his dreams．
After his death I learned much more about him and even more about myself．All he ever wanted was my time．And now he has all my attention every single day．
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者小时候经常与父亲谈话，成年后却总没有时间，直到父亲去世后才意识到父亲想要的是作者有时间与他谈话。
1．When the author was a little girl，she ________．
A．liked playing on the swing
B．often talked with her father
C．was good at repairing things
D．learned to take care of her family
B [细节理解题。根据第一段中的“so we would have time for a conversation with each other”可知，作者小时候经常与父亲谈话，故选B。]
2．When at college，the author________．
A．received a call from her father every Sunday morning
B．phoned her father every Sunday morning
C．asked her father to call her every Sunday
D．asked her father to talk with her
A [细节理解题。根据第二段中的“I grew up and left home for college and since then，my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning．”可知，作者上大学时，父亲每周日早晨都会打电话，故选A。]
3．Why did the author fail to have a talk with her father four years ago
A．She had got tired of talking with him．
B．She was busy painting her house．
C．Her daughter asked her to play．
D．She was busy planning a trip．
D [细节理解题。根据第三段内容可知，四年前，父亲想和作者谈话，但是作者当时忙着准备旅行的事情，故选D。]
4．When did the author begin to regret missing the talks with her father
A．After her father's sudden death．
B．Many years after her father's death．
C．On her way to the hospital to see her father．
D．As soon as she got the news that her father was ill．
C [细节理解题。根据第四段中的“on my way I was thinking about all the occasions I missed to have a talk with my dad”可知，作者在去医院的路上开始想所有错过的与父亲谈话的机会，故选C。]
B
The mental health of children is connected to their parents' mental health．A recent study asked parents to report on their children's mental and physical(身体的) health as well as their own mental health．One in 14 children aged 0－17 years had a parent who reported poor mental health，and those children were more likely to have poor general health and a mental or developmental disability．
Being mentally healthy during childhood includes reaching developmental milestones，learning healthy social skills and how to solve problems．Mentally healthy children are more likely to have a happy life and are more likely to work well at home，in school，and in their communities．
A child's healthy development depends on their parents who serve as their first sources(来源) of support in becoming independent and leading healthy and successful lives．
The mental health of parents and children is connected in many ways．Parents who have their own mental health challenges，such as dealing with anxiety (fear or worry)，may have more difficulty providing care for their children compared to parents who describe their mental health as good．Caring for children can create challenges for parents，particularly if they lack(缺乏) support，which can have a negative effect on a parent's mental health．Parents and children may also experience shared risks，such as living in unsafe environments，and the like．
Fathers are important for improving children's mental health，although they are not as often included in research studies as mothers．The recent study looked at fathers and found similar connections between their mental health and their children's general and mental health as for mothers．Fathers and mothers need support，which，in turn，can help them support their children's mental health．
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了一项关于亲子心理健康的研究。
5．What does the study mainly focus on
A．Some useful social skills．
B．Children's future life．
C．Parent-child mental health．
D．Communities' influence．
C [细节理解题。根据第一段的内容可知，这项研究聚焦亲子心理健康。故选C。]
6．Which is a challenge for parents according to the text
A．Raising kids without support．
B．Living in a strange place．
C．Sharing a common interest．
D．Communicating with each other．
A [细节理解题。根据第四段中的“Caring for children can create challenges for parents，particularly if they lack support”可知，对父母而言，没有他人支持时，抚养孩子是一个不小的挑战。故选A。]
7．What can we know about fathers from the last paragraph
A．They are often included in studies．
B．They play a more important part．
C．They seldom bear the responsibility．
D．They can influence children's health．
D [细节理解题。根据最后一段中的“Fathers are important for improving children's mental health，although they are not as often included in research studies as mothers．”可知，父亲也会影响孩子的身心健康。故选D。]
8．Where can the text be found
A．In a diary． B．In a book review．
C．In a magazine． D．In a children's story．
C [文章出处题。根据第一段的内容可知，本文主要介绍了近期一项关于亲子心理健康的研究。由此推知，本文可能出自一本杂志。故选C。]
Ⅱ．应用文写作
假如你是李华，昨天无意中在一本书里找到了一张与父亲一起跑步的旧照片，这让你回想起与父亲的过往。请你就此写一篇短文，内容包括：
1．父亲习惯早起慢跑；
2．自己一开始不喜欢和父亲跑步的原因；
3．跑步最终让自己与父亲的关系得到改善。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
I was tidying my room yesterday when I found an old photo in a book，where I was going jogging with my father．The photo reminded me of the past．
My dad got used to going jogging at dawn．And he didn't talk much with me．Two years ago，he made me go jogging with him，which I hated because I was unwilling to get up early and didn't know what to say with him．However，as time went by，he and I began to talk more while going jogging．Later，he even began to tell me jokes!
Now，I am glad that he made me go jogging with him because our relationship has greatly improved．(共25张PPT)
Period 6
Unit 3 Family matters
主题语境
人与自我之家庭生活
写家庭往事属于记叙文写作，我们可以从人物、时间、过程、结果或感受等方面对事件进行叙述。写作顺序可包括顺序、倒序或者插叙。时态通常使用一般过去时。
写家庭往事
课时学案 写作(Writing)
(一)基本框架
开头：引入话题；
主体：叙述故事；
结尾：发表感想。
(二)常用表达
1．The old photo reminded me of many happy days in my childhood．
这张旧照片勾起了我童年时代的许多美好回忆。
2．A visit to the museum with my parents is an unforgettable experience．
和父母一起参观博物馆是一段令人难忘的经历。
3．With the encouragement and support of my parents，I have overcome many difficulties in my life．
在父母的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。
4．Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise．
昨晚我正忙着准备我的考试，这时听到一声巨响。
5．With the beautiful moon up in the sky，we sat together and ate moon cakes and fruits，sharing our stories．
皓月当空，我们围坐在一起，吃着月饼和水果，分享着往事。
6．I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in．
我正要把所有东西扔掉，这时妈妈进来了。
7．Then came the grandest dinner time when we shared the home-made dumplings．
然后到了最美好的聚餐时间，我们一起分享家里做的饺子。
8．If the thing flaring in my mother's eyes was tears，it must be happy tears．
如果妈妈眼中闪烁的是泪花，那一定是幸福的眼泪。
假如你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经为了帮助你摆脱压力而写给你的一堆卡片。这些卡片让你开始了快乐的学习。请你写封电子邮件，把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友汤姆。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．书信的格式已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文为家庭回忆，属于记叙文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第三人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
4．确定内容：
①引入话题；
②叙述故事。
[遣词造句]
1．当我正清理我的书架时，发现了一堆卡片。
While I __________________________，I found a stack of cards．
2．当我读每张卡片上的话语时，我的眼睛湿润了。
When I read the words on each card，_______________．
3．正是这些鼓舞人心的卡片帮助我经受住了挫折。
_____________________________ helped me go through my frustration．
was cleaning up my bookshelf
my eyes watered
It was these encouraging cards that
4．刚上高中时，我感到有压力，害怕落后于别人。
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of ______
____________．
5．妈妈很体贴，发现了我的问题。
Mum __________________ and she found my problem．
6．我每天早上都能在桌子上找到一张特定的卡片。
I _______________________________ every morning．
falling
behind others
was very considerate
could find a special card on my desk
7．我开始在学习中找到乐趣。
I ___________________ in my studies．
8．妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。
Mum makes me understand that ______________________．
9．重要的是如何恰当地处理它。
What counts is _______________________．
began to find pleasure
pressure can't be avoided
how to deal with it properly
[句式升级]
1．用动词-ing形式作状语改写遣词造句中的句2。
___________________________________________________________
2．用so...that...句式改写遣词造句中的句5。
___________________________________________________________
Reading the words on each card，my eyes watered．
Mum was so considerate that she found my problem．
[连句成篇] (注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
Dear Tom，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Tom，
While I was cleaning up my bookshelf，I found a stack of cards．
Reading the words on each card，my eyes watered．It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration．
I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and was afraid of falling behind others．Mum was so considerate that she found my problem．From then on，I could find a special card on my desk every morning．Gradually，I began to find pleasure in my studies．Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided．What counts is how to deal with it properly．
Yours，
Li Hua
[词块积累]
1．a flash of surprise 一丝惊讶
2．sit on pins and needles 如坐针毡
3．go pale with fright 吓得脸都白了
4．let out a scream of terror 发出一声恐惧的尖叫
情感描写 “惊”与“怕”
5．with one's hair standing on end毛骨悚然
6．shake all over in a cold sweat冒冷汗，直哆嗦
7．shake one's head in disbelief 难以置信地摇头
8．freeze with terror/be struck with horror吓呆了
9．can't believe one's eyes 简直不敢相信自己的眼睛
10．to one's surprise/astonishment/amazement/shock 令某人吃惊的是
[佳句积累]
1．His heart was pounding，and he was frightened．
他的心怦怦跳，被吓坏了。
2．She held her breath，not daring to make a sound．
她屏住呼吸，不敢弄出一点声响。
3．To people's shock，a tornado struck a small town nearby．
使人们震惊的是，龙卷风袭击了附近的一个小镇。
4．My brain is blank．I just want to leave this horrible place．
我的大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。
5．She spoke hurriedly，as if her heart had leaped into her throat．
她讲话急促，好像她的心已跳到了嗓子眼一样。
6．I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak．
我感到如此害怕，以至于嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。
7．I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly because of the terrible sight．
看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都迅速凝固起来。
8．Hearing the bad news，Mary froze with shock，as if rooted on the ground．
得知这个坏消息，玛丽惊呆了，动弹不得。
9．When I looked at the grade on my maths paper my jaw dropped to the ground．
看到数学卷子上的成绩的那一刻，我非常吃惊。
10．A burst of horror held me totally in its power and I was unable to move an inch．
恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。
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Ali and his younger sister，Zahra，lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood．Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job，and they had only a little money with which to buy food．As they had not paid the rent for several months，the landlord was breathing down their necks．
One day，Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed，but he lost them on the way home．It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes．He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed，so he begged his sister to keep it secret．Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes．Zahra's school hours were in the morning，so she would wear them first．After school，she would rush back and give them to Ali．He could then run to his school，which began in the afternoon．
Although he ran as fast as he could，Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school．
Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city．When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes，he decided to take part in it．He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes．
The day of the race arrived．Ali had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache．_____
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The day of the race arrived． Ali had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache． Thinking he would not let his sister down，he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could．He stayed right behind the two fastest runners all the way in spite of pain．Finally，he dashed across the finish line and won third prize．Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony，Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister．He could not wait to see his sister and walked home quickly．The moment Zahra saw Ali and the shoes in his hand，her face lit up．
