Period 6 写作(Writing)
动物介绍
本单元的写作项目是动物介绍,在介绍动物时我们可以从动物的外形、栖息地、主要特征及习性等方面进行描写。时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
(一)基本框架
开头:总体概括;
主体:具体介绍;
结尾:进行总结(对于濒危动物应呼吁大家进行保护)。
(二)常用表达
1.Blue whale is the world's largest animal,and the body is blue-gray.
蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物,身体呈蓝灰色。
2.The bird has beautiful wings with some black spots on some feathers.
这种鸟有着美丽的翅膀,一些羽毛上有着黑色的斑点。
3.In fact,the animal may travel 50 miles a day to search for food.
实际上,这种动物一天可以行走50英里去觅食。
4.They usually have green,yellow or black skins,which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.
它们通常拥有绿色、黄色或黑色的外皮,这使得它们的天敌很难发现它们。
5.When the weather gets cold,it migrates to east-central China.
当天气变冷时,它会迁徙到中国中东部。
6.Penguins spend about half of their life on land and half in oceans.
企鹅一生中大约有一半时间生活在陆地上,另一半时间生活在海洋里。
7.The red-crowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.
丹顶鹤在中国文化中是长寿和好运的象征。
8.Finally,we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.
最后,我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。
根据下列内容,写一篇短文,介绍濒危动物金丝猴(the golden monkey)。
1.外貌:金黄色或者灰色,尾巴几乎和身体一样长;
2.栖息地:主要在中国,在海拔1 500—3 300米的森林中;
3.生活习性:群居,吃树叶、水果;
4.金丝猴属于濒危动物,呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[审题构思]
1.确定体裁:本文为动物介绍,属于说明文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定内容:
①引入话题;
②具体介绍金丝猴的栖息地及生活习性等;
③呼吁人们保护金丝猴。
[遣词造句]
1.金丝猴是一种可爱的动物。
The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal.
2.它们的毛是金黄色或灰色的。
Their fur is golden or gray.
3.它们居住在森林里,那里海拔在1 500—3 300米。
They live in the forests,where the altitude is 1,500 to 3,300 meters high.
4.它们喜欢群居,吃水果、树叶等等。
They like to live in groups and eat fruit,tree leaves and so on.
5.我们的政府已经采取措施控制这一点。
Our government has taken measures to control this.
6.我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区,而且越来越多的人意识到保护它们的重要性。
Some nature reserves have been set up by our government,and more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.
7.确实到了每个人采取行动保护金丝猴的时候了。
It's time for everyone to take action to preserve golden monkeys.
[句式升级]
1.用whose引导的定语从句合并遣词造句中的句1和句2。
The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal,whose fur is golden or gray.
2.用with复合结构改写遣词造句中的句6。
With some nature reserves set up by our government,more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.
[连句成篇] (注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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[参考范文]
The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal,whose fur is golden or gray.Their tails are almost as long as their bodies.
Golden monkeys mainly live in China.They live in the forests,where the altitude is 1,500 to 3,300 meters high.Besides,they like to live in groups and eat fruit,tree leaves and so on.
Nowadays,the number of the golden monkeys is decreasing.So our government has taken measures to control this.With some nature reserves set up by our government,more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.It's time for everyone to take action to preserve golden monkeys.
动作描写 “肢体”
[词块积累]
1.hold out one's hand 伸出手
2.shrug one's shoulders耸耸肩
3.spread one's hands 摊开双手
4.pace back and forth 来回踱步
5.get down on one knee 单膝跪地
6.look over one's shoulder 惴惴不安;小心提防
7.with trembling hands 用颤抖的双手
8.struggle to one's feet 挣扎着站起来
9.stamp one's feet impatiently 不耐烦地跺着脚
10.raise a warning finger 举起一根手指以示警告
[佳句积累]
1.She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.
当听到这个消息时,她跳了起来。
2.With a finger raised to his lips,the teacher asked for silence.
老师把一根手指举到唇边,要求肃静。
3.She felt exhausted,so she sat by the stream,resting her aching feet.
她感到精疲力竭,于是坐在小溪旁,让自己疼痛的双脚休息一下。
4.With a sinking heart,he dragged his heavy legs back home,tired out.
他垂头丧气,拖着两条沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回到了家。
5.At first,she planted her feet firmly to the ground and refused to move.
一开始她双脚牢牢地钉在地上,不肯动。
6.She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom,barefoot and fast.
她脱下鞋子,光着脚飞快地跑到自己的卧室中。
7.I reached down and cupped the butterfly in my hands as gently as I could.
我俯下身,尽可能轻柔地将蝴蝶捧在手心。
8.He slid to the window of the hut,raised himself on tiptoe and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起脚尖,偷偷看了一眼。
9.My arms aching and knees trembling,I crawled out of the cave and shouted for help.
手臂疼痛,膝盖发抖,我爬出了洞,大喊救命。
10.Standing on the bridge,the two held each others' hands tightly,with tears in their eyes.
两人站在桥上,紧握着彼此的手,眼里含着泪水。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sixty years ago,a 13-year-old boy saw a beautiful hairpin(发卡) in a shop window which set his heart racing.But the price—five dollars—was too high for Jack.Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Jack couldn't ask his father for the money.Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother,Dora.Slim and beautiful,she was the center of the home and struggled to feed and clothe their five children.
Nevertheless,he opened the shop's door and went inside.He told the shopkeeper what he wanted,adding,“But I don't have the money right now.Can you hold it for me for some time?”
“I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled.“People around here don't usually have that kind of money on such things.It should be kept for a while.”
Jack would raise money to buy the hairpin for his mother.Just then Jack suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags.As sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site,Jack knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still stuck to the plan.It was the hairpin in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.After a long time of hard work,he made it eventually.
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[参考范文]
Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin,poured the coins out and began to count them.Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly,Jack rushed for the shop to buy the hairpin.The moment he got the beautiful hairpin,he rushed home and placed it in Dora's hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.It was an unforgettable experience,which all the family members will remember.
课时分层作业(十五)
Ⅰ.阅读理解
A
I work with Volunteers for Wildlife,a rescue and education organisation at Bailey Arboretum in Locust Valley.Trying to help injured,displaced or sick creatures can be heartbreaking; survival is never certain.However,when it works,it is simply beautiful.
I got a rescue call from a woman in Muttontown.She had found a young owl(猫头鹰) on the ground.When I arrived,I saw a 2-to 3-week-old owl.It had already been placed in a carrier for safety.
I examined the chick(雏鸟) and it seemed fine.If I could locate the nest,I might have been able to put it back,but no luck.My next work was to construct a nest and anchor it in a tree.
The homeowner was very helpful.A wire basket was found.I put some pine branches into the basket to make this nest safe and comfortable.I placed the chick in the nest,and it quickly calmed down.
Now all that was needed was the parents,but they were absent.I gave the homeowner a recording of the hunger screams of owl chicks.These advertise the presence of chicks to adults; they might also encourage our chick to start calling as well.I gave the owner as much information as possible and headed home to see what news the night might bring.
A nervous night to be sure,but sometimes the spirits of nature smile on us all! The homeowner called to say that the parents had responded to the recording.I drove over and saw the chick in the nest looking healthy and active.And it was accompanied in the nest by the greatest sight of all—LUNCH! The parents had done their duty and would probably continue to do so.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了作者救助了一只小猫头鹰,给它做新的窝,帮助它回到父母身边的故事。
1.What is unavoidable in the author's rescue work according to paragraph 1
A.Efforts made in vain.
B.Getting injured in his work.
C.Feeling uncertain about his future.
D.Creatures forced out of their homes.
A [细节理解题。根据文章第一段中的“Trying to help injured,...certain.”可知,救助受伤动物是会令人心碎的,因为不知道救助的动物是否能活下去,也就是说为救助动物而花费的努力可能会白费,这是不可避免的。故选A。]
2.Why was the author called to Muttontown
A.To rescue a woman.
B.To take care of a woman.
C.To look at a baby owl.
D.To cure a young owl.
C [细节理解题。根据文章第二段中的“She had found a young owl on the ground”可知,有人给作者打电话是因为有只小猫头鹰掉在地上了,作者赶过去查看情况。故选C。]
3.What made the chick calm down
A.A new nest. B.Some food.
C.A recording. D.Its parents.
A [推理判断题。根据文章第四段中的“I placed the chick in the nest,and it quickly calmed down.”可知,在作者把小猫头鹰放在窝里之后,它很快就平静下来,所以是新搭建的窝让小猫头鹰平静下来的。故选A。]
4.How would the author feel about the outcome of the event
A.It's unexpected. B.It's beautiful.
C.It's humourous. D.It's discouraging.
B [推理判断题。根据前文的描述可知,作者为小猫头鹰做了窝,并且帮助它找回了它的父母。小猫头鹰的父母还为它带回了午餐。作者的救助成功了,说明结局是美好的。再结合第一段中的“However,when it works,it is simply beautiful.”可推测,作者对这件事的结果感到很美好。故选B。]
B
Wild animals seem to have escaped the Indian Ocean tsunami,adding weight to the idea that they have a “sixth sense” for disasters,experts said on Thursday.
Sri Lanka wildlife officials have said the waves that killed over 24,000 people along the Indian Ocean island's coast seemingly missed wild beasts,with no dead animals found.
“No elephants are dead,not even a dead hare or rabbit.I think animals can sense disaster.They have a ‘sixth sense’.They know when things are happening,” H.D.Ratnayake,director of Sri Lanka's Wildlife Department,said on Wednesday.
The waves washed floodwaters up to 3 km(2 miles) inland at Yala National Park in the southeast,Sri Lanka's biggest wildlife reserve and home to hundreds of wild elephants.“There has been a lot of evidence(证据) about dogs barking or birds migrating before volcanic eruptions or earthquakes.But it has not been proved,” said Matthew van Lierop,an animal behaviour specialist at Johannesburg Zoo.“There have been no specific studies because you can't really test it in a lab or field setting,” he said.Other authorities agreed with this conclusion.
“Wildlife seems to be able to pick up certain signs,especially birds.There are many reports of birds detecting the coming disasters,” said Clive Walker,who has written several books on African wildlife.
Animals certainly rely on the known senses such as smell or hearing to avoid danger such as predators(掠食动物).The idea of an animal “sixth sense” is a lasting one that the evidence on Sri Lanka's damaged coast is likely to add to.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇新闻报道。文章介绍了动物可以感知灾难,它们有“第六感”,并给出了人们对此持有的不同的观点。
5.What happened after the Indian Ocean tsunami
A.Many people died but wild animals survived.
B.The “six sense” of wild animals developed.
C.Wild beasts were killed or went missing.
D.The coast was found in good condition.
A [细节理解题。根据第二段内容“Sri Lanka wildlife officials have said the waves that killed over 24,000 people along the Indian Ocean island's coast seemingly missed wild beasts,with no dead animals found.”可知,印度洋海啸之后许多人死了,但野生动物幸存了下来。故选A。]
6.What does H.D.Ratnayake do
A.He is a zoo keeper.
B.He is a wildlife official.
C.He is a movie director.
D.He is an animal behaviour expert.
B [细节理解题。根据第三段的“‘...They know when things are happening,’ H.D.Ratnayake,director of Sri Lanka's Wildlife Department,said on Wednesday.”可知,H.D.Ratnayake是野生动物部门的一名官员。故选B。]
7.Which of the following is closest in meaning to the underlined word “detecting” in paragraph 5
A.Taking up. B.Putting up.
C.Picking up. D.Bringing up.
C [词义猜测题。根据画线词的上文“Wildlife seems to be able to pick up certain signs,especially birds.”可推测下文指的是有许多关于鸟类发现即将到来的灾难的报道,故detecting意为“发现”,和上文的“pick up”同义。故选C。]
8.What is the text mainly about
A.Why animals can save themselves from natural disasters.
B.The different opinions about animals' natural power.
C.How to protect wildlife when disasters happen.
D.The serious damage of the Indian Ocean tsunami.
B [主旨大意题。通读全文,尤其是第一段可知,文章主要介绍了动物可以感知灾难,它们有“第六感”,并给出了人们对此持有的不同的观点。故选B。]
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你班下周将举办主题为“Protect Wildlife”的英文主题班会,请你用英文拟写一份发言稿,内容包括:
1.野生动物的现状;
2.保护野生动物的意义;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Hello,everyone! I'd like to share my views on protecting wildlife.
The number of many wild animals is declining because they are hunted illegally and their habitats are destroyed.
Actually,living on the planet,all of us are responsible for protecting wild animals.That's because saving animals is saving ourselves.Therefore,some measures should be taken.For example,more nature reserves should be set up to keep them safe and more laws should be made.Only when these measures work can the planet be a better place to live on.
That's all,thank you!(共26张PPT)
Period 6
Unit 5 Into the wild
主题语境
人与自然之人与动植物
本单元的写作项目是动物介绍,在介绍动物时我们可以从动物的外形、栖息地、主要特征及习性等方面进行描写。时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
动物介绍
课时学案 写作(Writing)
(一)基本框架
开头:总体概括;
主体:具体介绍;
结尾:进行总结(对于濒危动物应呼吁大家进行保护)。
(二)常用表达
1.Blue whale is the world's largest animal,and the body is blue-gray.
蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物,身体呈蓝灰色。
2.The bird has beautiful wings with some black spots on some feathers.
这种鸟有着美丽的翅膀,一些羽毛上有着黑色的斑点。
3.In fact,the animal may travel 50 miles a day to search for food.
实际上,这种动物一天可以行走50英里去觅食。
4.They usually have green,yellow or black skins,which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.
它们通常拥有绿色、黄色或黑色的外皮,这使得它们的天敌很难发现它们。
5.When the weather gets cold,it migrates to east-central China.
当天气变冷时,它会迁徙到中国中东部。
6.Penguins spend about half of their life on land and half in oceans.
企鹅一生中大约有一半时间生活在陆地上,另一半时间生活在海洋里。
7.The red-crowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.
丹顶鹤在中国文化中是长寿和好运的象征。
8.Finally,we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.
最后,我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。
根据下列内容,写一篇短文,介绍濒危动物金丝猴(the golden monkey)。
1.外貌:金黄色或者灰色,尾巴几乎和身体一样长;
2.栖息地:主要在中国,在海拔1 500—3 300米的森林中;
3.生活习性:群居,吃树叶、水果;
4.金丝猴属于濒危动物,呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[审题构思]
1.确定体裁:本文为动物介绍,属于说明文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定内容:
①引入话题;
②具体介绍金丝猴的栖息地及生活习性等;
③呼吁人们保护金丝猴。
[遣词造句]
1.金丝猴是一种可爱的动物。
The golden monkey is ___________________.
2.它们的毛是金黄色或灰色的。
Their fur is ____________.
3.它们居住在森林里,那里海拔在1 500—3 300米。
They live in the forests,where the altitude is __________________________________.
a kind of lovely animal
golden or gray
1,500 to 3,300
meters high
4.它们喜欢群居,吃水果、树叶等等。
They like to ____________ and eat fruit,tree leaves and so on.
5.我们的政府已经采取措施控制这一点。
Our government ________________ to control this.
6.我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区,而且越来越多的人意识到保护它们的重要性。
Some nature reserves ______________________________,and more and more people ____________________________________.
7.确实到了每个人采取行动保护金丝猴的时候了。
________________________________ to preserve golden monkeys.
live in groups
has taken measures
have been set up by our government
realize the importance of protecting them
It's time for everyone to take action
[句式升级]
1.用whose引导的定语从句合并遣词造句中的句1和句2。
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2.用with复合结构改写遣词造句中的句6。
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The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal,whose fur is golden or gray.
With some nature reserves set up by our government,more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.
[连句成篇] (注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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[参考范文]
The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal,whose fur is golden or gray.Their tails are almost as long as their bodies.
Golden monkeys mainly live in China.They live in the forests,where the altitude is 1,500 to 3,300 meters high.Besides,they like to live in groups and eat fruit,tree leaves and so on.
Nowadays,the number of the golden monkeys is decreasing.So our government has taken measures to control this.With some nature reserves set up by our government,more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.It's time for everyone to take action to preserve golden monkeys.
[词块积累]
1.hold out one's hand 伸出手
2.shrug one's shoulders耸耸肩
3.spread one's hands 摊开双手
4.pace back and forth 来回踱步
动作描写 “肢体”
5.get down on one knee 单膝跪地
6.look over one's shoulder 惴惴不安;小心提防
7.with trembling hands 用颤抖的双手
8.struggle to one's feet 挣扎着站起来
9.stamp one's feet impatiently 不耐烦地跺着脚
10.raise a warning finger 举起一根手指以示警告
[佳句积累]
1.She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.
当听到这个消息时,她跳了起来。
2.With a finger raised to his lips,the teacher asked for silence.
老师把一根手指举到唇边,要求肃静。
3.She felt exhausted,so she sat by the stream,resting her aching feet.
她感到精疲力竭,于是坐在小溪旁,让自己疼痛的双脚休息一下。
4.With a sinking heart,he dragged his heavy legs back home,tired out.
他垂头丧气,拖着两条沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回到了家。
5.At first,she planted her feet firmly to the ground and refused to move.
一开始她双脚牢牢地钉在地上,不肯动。
6.She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom,barefoot and fast.
她脱下鞋子,光着脚飞快地跑到自己的卧室中。
7.I reached down and cupped the butterfly in my hands as gently as I could.
我俯下身,尽可能轻柔地将蝴蝶捧在手心。
8.He slid to the window of the hut,raised himself on tiptoe and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起脚尖,偷偷看了一眼。
9.My arms aching and knees trembling,I crawled out of the cave and shouted for help.
手臂疼痛,膝盖发抖,我爬出了洞,大喊救命。
10.Standing on the bridge,the two held each others' hands tightly,with tears in their eyes.
两人站在桥上,紧握着彼此的手,眼里含着泪水。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sixty years ago,a 13-year-old boy saw a beautiful hairpin(发卡) in a shop window which set his heart racing.But the price—five dollars—was too high for Jack.Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Jack couldn't ask his father for the money.Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother,Dora.Slim and beautiful,she was the center of the home and struggled to feed and clothe their five children.
Nevertheless,he opened the shop's door and went inside.He told the shopkeeper what he wanted,adding,“But I don't have the money right now.Can you hold it for me for some time?”
“I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled.“People around here don't usually have that kind of money on such things.It should be kept for a while.”
Jack would raise money to buy the hairpin for his mother.Just then Jack suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags.As sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site,Jack knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still stuck to the plan.It was the hairpin in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile.After a long time of hard work,he made it eventually.
Finally the time came!___________________________________
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[参考范文]
Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin,poured the coins out and began to count them.Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly,Jack rushed for the shop to buy the hairpin.The moment he got the beautiful hairpin,he rushed home and placed it in Dora's hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.It was an unforgettable experience,which all the family members will remember.