广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（4）参考答案
短文改错
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young
people. According t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o studies, any children spend more time 1. _______
watching televis ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______
much viewing, ch ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ildren may not be develop the habit of 3. _______
read and th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______
much about the ra ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dio program young people listen to, 5. _______
although radios can ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______
about the effects o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f television commercials. On one year the 7. _______
average child wil ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l see 25,000 television commercials, all 8. _______
plann
ed and written by ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) grown-ups to make children to want 9. _______
things that they d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on’t real need. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. any 改为 m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any/some。根据句意， 此处应表示“一些， 许多”， 而 any 表示“一些”时， 常常用于否定句、 疑问句和条件句中。
2. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词， 故加 of。
3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。
4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。
5. program 改为 programs。program 为可数名词， 且根据句意， 此处应为复数概念。
6. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词， noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。
7. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在一年中”。
8. 此行无错。
9. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“让某人做某事”。
10. real 改为really。此处应用副词修饰谓语动词 don’t need。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
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【答案】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .
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friends short ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. met
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usually talk ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82. families
that Chinese culture ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. and
we are planning a sm ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )all party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. the
will introduce m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e to some of her friends,one of who has been 85. whom
（二）
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he, too, was an Englishman.
(二)
76．∧left → had 77. √
78. In → On 79. 第一个the→ a
80. with → in 81. do → did
82. None → Neither 83. while → when
84. surprising → surprise 85. speak → speaking
（三）
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(三)
76．was → is 77.Not → No
78. has → have 79. when → while
80. should∧→ be 81.slave → slaves
82. 去掉 but 83. √
84. made→ make 85.On → In
短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) tree then, so I'll to say” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.
am
in Friday evening.
on
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than I did. There wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he
wasn't looking ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with
the toy or faced my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late
on, my aunt drove me ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave
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( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（1）参考答案
【2015·陕西】
My soccer coach reti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )red in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
2015年陕西卷【答案】【解析】
试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。
1．【答案】第一段第一句l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ast week前的in去掉【解析】介词误用。以last开头的时间短语前不加介词。第一段第一句：去掉in在last week，next week，this week之前不需要任何介词。句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。 2．【答案】第一段第二句anything→something【解析】不定代词误用。“一些事情”，肯定句中用something。第一段第二句：anything→something 我想为教练做点什么特别的事情，而不是任何事情。句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用something。 3．【答案】第一段第三句better→best【解析】最高级误用。the应用在形容词最高级前。第一段第三句：better→best妈妈做的饼干是世界上最好的。这里用最高级。句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。
4．【答案】第一段第三句decide→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )decided【解析】时态错误。全文讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。第一段第三句：decide→decided 全文是回忆过去的一件事情，用一般过去时态。句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，decide改成decided。 5．【答案】第一段第四句step→steps【解析】名词单复数错误。some后加可数名词复数。第一段第四句：step→steps some basic steps一些基本的步骤。句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。
6．【答案】第一段第六句well→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )good【解析】形容词误用。应用形容词作表语，well作形容词表“身体好”。第一段第六句：well→good be动词后接形容词good, well作形容同时，意为“健康的”。句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词，well改成good。 7．【答案】第一段第七句after→when/while【解析】连词误用。本处意为“当 时候”。第一段第七句：after→when/while在打包的时候掉了一些饼干。句意：我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。after改成when/while
8．【答案】第二段第八句第一个a→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the【解析】冠词误用。特指“那次晚会”，应用定冠词the。第二段：第一个a→the party是第二次出现，应用定冠词。句意：这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。a改为the。
9．【答案】第二段第八句get前加to【解析 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )】不定式符号漏用。本处不定式表目的。第二段：just后面加上to 此处为不定式作目的状语。句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。
10．【答案】第三段第九句 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enjoy→enjoying【解析】非谓语动词错误。根据介词of，应用动名词enjoying，my coach and me是enjoying的逻辑主语。第三段：enjoy→enjoying带逻辑主语的动名词短语作介词of的宾语。句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。of后面接动名词，my coach and me是逻辑主语，enjoy改为enjoying。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
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Morning and was alw ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ays late with work.. His boss wanted to 67.
fire him if he di ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68.
the doctor for a hel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )p. The doctor gave him some 69.
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The man did is told ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and slept.leally will,wake up before 71.
the alam had ev ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en gone off.He had time for a properly 72.
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said ,”that medicine ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74.
it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday ”
【参考答案】
66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so
69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking
72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased
75、√
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
I have been pl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )anning to join in our college basketball team 76. ________________
next year, so now I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) am spending as more time as I can 77. ________________
with other people w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ho likes to play. They are teaching 78. ________________
me the most importan ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t rules and technique of the game, 79. ________________
and I was getting bett ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er all the time. We have a 80. ________________
neighborhood team ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )where plays against other teams in the area. 81. ________________
One of my neighbors ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) is helping rest of us 82. ________________
improved our skills. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Tonight we are playing against 83. ________________
one of the best t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eams in the city, I think we can 84. ________________
beat them if we wo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n't make any mistakes. 85. ________________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely fr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ee then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening. on
Last Sunday afternoon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcas ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her care ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
【答案】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
66. there was 改成there are
67. cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事”
68. can’t改为couldn’t. 短文上下文都是一般过去时
69. try改为tried
70. find前加 to。try one’s best to do sth.
71. on the same time改成at the same time.
72. careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after.
73. his mother 改成her mother.
74. happily改成happy,是系表结构。
75. with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错误的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot, but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
【答案】
短文改错
76．a 改为the 77．sudden改为suddenly 78．but改为and
79．out后加of 80．it改为them 81．drop改为drops
82．come改为came 83．more改为much或去掉 84．that改为what
85．broke改为broken广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（2）参考答案
短文改错
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sich ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 1. _______
mountain w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ith all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______
was fine. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______
the mountain. Th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e three of them were very excited. As we 4._______
climbed the mount ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______
and told stories. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______
since the scenery ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______
Evening came down. W ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______
the top of th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )head touched the pillow. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。
2. 此行无错。
3. noon 后加 w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hen 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。
4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。
5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。
6. picture 改为 pictures。
7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。
8. 删去 down。
9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。
10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。
短文改错（一）
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riding in the street, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) she saw the man with a knife in his hand and his 77.
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took her handba ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g out of the basket of her bike and ran away before 79.
she could do anything. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) There was no one she could turn for help at 80.
that time, fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r it was very late at night. Lucky, she had her mobile 81.
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done for her.
参考答案-----（一）
76．he → she 77. 第二个the → a
78. covering → covered 79.√
80. turn∧→ to 81. Lucky → luckily
82. 去掉when 83. directions → direction
84. catch → caught 85. for∧→ what
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Editor,
Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that 76. _______
we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 77. _______
in favor of the optional courses. They say interest is best teacher 78. _______
and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students 79. _______
can not only enla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 80. _______
However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses 81. _______
will take up t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oo much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional 82. _______
coruses have som ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ething to do with the College Entrance Examination. They 83. _______
are afraid they’ll ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional 84. _______
courses. I’d like ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to take one or two of the optional coruses, which, I think,
will certain benefit me a lot. 85. _______
Yorus truly,
Li Hua
参考答案：
Dear Editor,
Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that 76. whether
we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 77. are
in favor of the optional courses. They say interest is︿best teacher 78. the
and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students 79. their
can not only enla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 80. knowledge
However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses 81. saying
will take up too m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uch time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional 82. to
coruses have some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )thing to do with the College Entrance Examination. They 83. nothing
are afraid t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hey’ll fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional 84. will
courses. I’d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )like to take one or two of the optional coruses, which, I think,
will certain benefit me a lot. 85. certainly
Yorus truly,
Li Hua
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分；满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原文没有错误不要改。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. 61．_______
Not one can live ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )without money in modern society. People 62．_______
has different opin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ions on it. Some people think one should 63．_______
live to make money, when others make money to live. 64．_______
In my opinion, the latter should reasonable. 65．_______
We should not be the slave of money. Although money 66．_______
means a lot in ou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r life, but it does not mean everything . 67．_______
We can’t exchange i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t for friendship or love. Money indeed could 68．_______
make a person en ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )joying his life for a while but not all his life. 69．_______
On a word, money is something but not everything. 70．_______
【答案】
61, was改为is 62．Not改为No 63．has改为have 64．when改为while
65．should后加be 66．slave后加s 67．but去掉 68.√
69.enjoying改为enjoy 70．On改为In
短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was v ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ery nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely tree then, so I'll say” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.
am
in Friday evening.
on
I was playing at my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys
than I did. Ther ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he
wasn't looking. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with
the toy or f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )aced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late
on, my aunt dro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave
It back. She kn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（3）参考答案
短文改错
What should you do when your parents become 1. _______
angry If ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )your parents got mad, try to have a conversation 2. _______
with them about it . ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Remembering not to shout 3. _______
at them. They ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) usually will try to change, but they will 4. _______
take some time bec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ause they get angry all their life, and that 5. _______
is all they kn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ow . You might have to change for your 6. _______
method a co ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uple of times. Do any nice things for your 7. _______
parents that they don’t expect—like cooking,
doing the dishes ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), washing clothes, or clean 8. _______
the floors. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )If this doesn’t work , bring in friend that you 9. _______
feel comfortable, a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd have him or her help you. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。
3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。
4. they 改为 i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t。they 前为转折连词 but， 表明其后为一个句子， 这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如： Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didn’t help。此处的代词 it， 代替“Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。
5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。
6. 删去 for。因为 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )change 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： Can you change me one yuan note 你能兑换一元零钱给我吗 而 change for作“转换车到……”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin 你在什么地方转车到桂林去
7. any 改为 some。a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ny 一般用于疑问句、 否定句、 条件从句中， 而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式， 故用 some。
8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。
9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。
fortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与……自在/愉快”。例如：
She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。
短文改错。
Today we had a ch ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )emistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me
答案：
Today we had a chemis ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )try test. I found the test ， but I tried to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, me to let her copy my answers. After for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the . We were warned not to cheat again she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why she punish me？
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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So/and it
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had
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anywhere disappointed
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have
he signed his name on my shirt!
短文改错。
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2．but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3．删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4．spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6．what→that/which或删 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7．them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10．√
短文改错。
Dear Anish，
Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________
It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________
has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________
or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________
I'm sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________
are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________
see that there is anything on their website(网址).7.________
I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________
when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________
has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________
forward to seeing you again.
See you soon.
Peter
答案与解析：
1．are→is information是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。
2．去掉far far通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。
3．√
4．course→courses 根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。
5．去掉it “(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。
6．particular→particularly interested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。
7．that→if/whether 根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。
8．meet前加to 此处是不定式表示目的。
9．arrived→arrive 如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。
10．or→and 此处是“both...and...”结构，表示“两者都”。广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（5）参考答案
短文改错
When I first learned ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to write in English， I ran into 1. _______
many difficulti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )es. The main problem was in that I 2. _______
always thought in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
into English. My tea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______
I followed her ad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
or so each da ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
paper as I w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______
One day I wrote a l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ittle story and showed to my 8. _______
teacher. She liked ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______
They all said ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the story was a good one. Their word were 10. ______
a great encouragement to me.
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。
3. anything 改为 ever ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。
4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。
5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。
7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。
9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
10. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。
短文改错。
Uncle Marion ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
答案：
Uncle Marion was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one of my mother's younger . He has been for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the New Jersey woods the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I learned to be brave and through the experience.
【短文改错】
My wife and I go to the theatre whenever we
have time. But ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )before we buy ticket, we would 76. __________
like to know whet ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )her the play is good and bad. 77. __________
When a new play open, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )we usually read the 78. __________
reviews on ou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r local newspapers to get information 79. __________
about it. Last week ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a new comedy opened at the 80. __________
theatre. The ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )newspaper story said it was very amused, 81. __________
so we decided to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )go on the Saturday night. It took 82. __________
my wife a long time t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o make her mind what to wear 83. __________
and we left a li ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ttle later. By the time we got there, 84. __________
the first act alread ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y begun. We were sorry we missed 85. __________
part of the play, because the rest of it was very funny.
【参考答案】
76.ticket 改为tickets 77. and改为or 78.open改为opens
79. on改in 80. √
81. amused 改amusing 82. 去掉the 83.make后加up
84. later改late 85. act后加had
【短文改错】
Today I attended ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a meeting holding by our school 76．______
At the meeting mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re than thirty students praised 77．_____
For our happiness, Bru ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ce, monitor of our class, 78．____
who was among the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m . We all felt proud of him． 79．______
Then the headmaste ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r gave them a talk. He wanted 80．______
us to learn th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ese model students and hoped that 81．______
more and mor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e students will be praised at the 82．_____
next school meeting. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I was great encouraged and 83．_______
made up my mind to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) work harder. Next week 84．______
there will be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an English exam. I’ll try to get good mark. 85．______
【参考答案】
76．holding→ held 77．praised前加were
78．For→ To 79．去掉who 80．them→ us
81．Learn后加from 82 .will→ would
83. great→ greatly 84．√ 85． mark→ marks
短文改错。
I still remember my m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iddle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.
in a school for stude ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nts from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.
at early age , w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.
had to do the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.
we seldom felt lone ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ly or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.
At weekends , we wo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uld play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
or go for a pi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.
each other as brothers ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
difficulty in ou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r life and study , the other would help him out . 84.
It has been five ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
are as sweet as ever before .
【参考答案】
I still reme ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mber my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet
in a school f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were
at ∧early age , ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an
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are as sweet as ever before .
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Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______
to spend hours , ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) even days play games . One of the reasons why people 79. _______
like to play is tha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t sports help them to live happily . In other words, 80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______
playing games, they ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______
big cities, tho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )usands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______
【参考答案】
76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had
79. play- playing
80． 正确 81. feel-feeling 82. how-why
83. make-makes
84.去掉the 85. sell-buy
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a shop this morning. I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t costs fifty pounds.” “Fifty pounds to 78.
a cotton dress That i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s very much!” But every evening Mrs. 79.
Smith spoke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )only the dress, and at last, after a week, 80.
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he said. “We ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ll, it is still in the window of the shop in a 84.
week. I think, nob ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ody else want this dress, so I don’t 85.
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A person’s age no long ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er tells you something about 76. _______
his social positio ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer 77. ________
a particular year wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ich one goes to school or goes to 78. ________
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that kept us ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________
a job, or st ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )op working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81. ________
It doesn’t surprise u ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________
president or a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________
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all know, pu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )blic’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________
【参考答案】
76. something → anything 77. healthy → health 78. which → when
（或 year∧ in） 79. start → starts 80. when∧ to 81. was
82．√ 83.or ∧ a 84. What →As 85. public’s → public
