广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（6）参考范文
【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：
时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50％ (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关
[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：
1．采访的时间、对象和主题；
2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数；
3．专家解读。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作：
Last weekend, I had ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an interview with an eye-doctor, Professor Wang, about the primary and middle student's short-sightedness in our country. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks No. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that we should avoid overusing our eyes and do more outdoor exercise. What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.
【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The “Clean Your Plate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )” campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table. The campaign, launched on Weibo, was soon joined by millions of netizens across China to fight against food waste.
The estimated annual ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )waste of grain in China reaches 50 million tons, enough to feed about 200 million people for a year.
People from a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cross China support the campaign. The Central Government has promised to take measures to reduce food waste, take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style.
More and more Chine ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )se are saying “No” to food waste. Staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in Qingdao, Shandong province, Jan. 24. “Did you empty the dishes today ” has become the most popular question in China. Showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among Chinese netizens.
In some restauran ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food. Some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food, as part of the campaign to reduce waste. More and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词就“光盘行动”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
(1) “光盘行动”产生的背景；
(2) “光盘行动”的作用；
(3) 你对“光盘行动”的看法和诉求。
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务：
When some people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )started the “Clean Your Plate” campaign in an effort to reduce food waste, millions of netizens joined in it and more and more people are taking real action to stop food waste.
As many people are sti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ll living in poverty around us, I’m quite delighted by this campaign. As far as I know, while people in advanced countries don’t have to worry about their meals, millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day. Though most Chinese have enough food to eat, there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach. Unfortunately, I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste. It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food, which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year. What an alarming waste it is! We should feel guilty to waste so much food.
It is high ti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me that we took action to stop such waste without delay. There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals. If all people cut down food waste, a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed.
The “Clean Y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )our Plate” campaign is really good and useful. Let’s join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food.
【广东省东莞市2013届高三上期末调研测试】
读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A little boy w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as playing in his sandbox. He had with him his box of toy cars and trucks and a red plastic shovel(铲). In the process of creating roads in the soft sand, he discovered a large rock in the middle of the sandbox.
The boy dug ar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ound the rock, managing to get it out from the dirt. With a little bit of struggle, he pushed the rock across the sandbox by using his feet.When the boy got the rock to the edge of the sandbox, however, he found that he couldn't roll it up and move it to the wall.
Determined, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the little boy tried again, pushed, and shoveled, but every time he thought he had made some progress the rock rolled and then fell back into the sandbox. The little boy struggled, pushed, and pulled; but failed.
Finally he bur ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st into tears. The boy's father watched him from his living room window all the time. At the moment the tears fell, a large shadow fell across the boy and the sandbox. It was the boy's father. Gently but firmly he said, "Son, why didn't you use all the strength available " Defeated, the boy sobbed back, "But I did, Daddy, I did! I used all the strength that I had!" "No, son," corrected the father kindly. "You didn't use all the strength you had. You didn' t ask me." With these words the father picked up the rock and removed it from the sandbox.
[写作内容]
1．以大约30个词概括短文要点；
2．以约120个词就人生需要帮助的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
(1)你读完文章的感受；
(2)以你的亲身经历谈谈帮助的重要性；
(3)今后你是否也会帮助别人，为什么
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
A little boy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )had some difficulty in removing a big rock from the sandbox. Though he tried hard, he still couldn't move it. Finally his father helped him and he managed.
After reading ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )this passage, I think highly of the father's words. He helped his son realize the importance of help. Similar things also occurred to me. I still remember last summer holiday when I travelled in Beijing on my own. Unfortunately, I lost my baggage, I was penniless and I couldn't go home. It was with the help of the local police that I was able to return home safely. What I experienced has taught me a lot. Help is very important for us, and we will benefit from other's help.
There is n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o doubt that I will offer help as much as possible if I find someone who is in trouble. Help is a good virtue, which will make problems solved more easily, make people feel the warmth of others, and make our lives better and better.
【广东省惠州4月模拟】
基础写作（共1小题.满分15分）
你接受了一项写作任务，用英语写一篇简短的报道。
【写作内容】
上周末，义工组织“绿色家园”在滨江公园开展了回收利用的宣传活动。活动内容如下,
回收的必要性： 日常生活中，找们常过度消费资源，如：各类包装袋的使用
回收的途径 包装袋可多次使用等
回收的作用： 减少资源的消耗，保护环境
【写作要求】
只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
参考词汇：绿色家园Green Home 过度消耗overconsumption
【参考范文】基础写作：（One possible version）
In Binjiang Park la ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st weekend, a voluntary organization called “Green Home” launched a campaign to promote recycling. As can be seen in our daily life, overconsumption of resources has become a common practice, making it urgent to arouse people’s awareness of recycling. There exists the popularity of various kinds of packing bags for goods and what we are supposed to do is to reuse them. In this way, we will consume less resource so the environment is protected to some extent. Besides, if we try our utmost to recycle everything reusable in our life, we can also save some money.
【广东省惠州4月模拟】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
Some post-80s graduat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )es have given up the dream of working in a big city, and heading back home has become part of future job consideration. Two of the more common ones are trying to avoid the intense competition and the pressure, and seeing unprecedented opportunities in the growing economies back home.
Changping. a 2 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )2-year-old student from Hainan University, said that if he would decide on starting his business, he’d certainly return to his hometown, Xiangfan ，in Hubei Province. That was because he has his own network of people who could help him in every way. Also, he could get some good business ideas like setting up advanced kindergartens in small cities. If no one was doing that, the chance of being successful seemed higher.
But Chen Haihua ，a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )college student from Guangzhou Medical College, said that she would plan to stick to a big city, Guangzhou, instead of going back to her hometown, Zhanjiang, in Guangdong Province. She wanted to struggle in the big city for a more exciting, better life. She explained that she also could be a role model, letting the kids in her hometown work hard Io go to key universities.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括该短文的内容；
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对就业方向的看法，内容包括：
(1 ) 试分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素；
(2)如果你大学毕业了，你会选择在哪里就业？
(3) 选择的理由。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不 得直接引用原文中的句了
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇迮贯。
【参考范文】读写任务：（One possible version）
Post-80s graduates ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hold different views towards job choices. Some, like Changping, will head back home to avoid the competition and pressure in big cities, while others, like Chen haihua, would prefer to stay in big cities to seek a better job.
Working in a big cit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y is of course an exciting thing, which means better opportunities and more conveniences. It’s easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself. While in a small town, where there are not so many elites to compete with, one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life.
As for me, a girl from ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a remote village, I would rather struggle in a big city like Shenzhen to make a living than go back to my hometown. Though hard, struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business.
Therefore, after g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )raduation, I will choose a big city as the start of my career. Thanks to the intense competition, I can grow into an experienced and competitive person, which does good to my later development.广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（5）参考范文
【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学二模试题】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
When Sam first ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.
He was given uni ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )forms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.
He got sick soon becau ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )se he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：
⑴ 时间、地点和起因；
⑵ 想家给学习和生活带来的影响；
⑶ 你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务：Version 1:
Sam, a student, w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons. (31 words)
In fact, in real l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ife, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city. Right here, I would have to study in school for two years. Although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there. And, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning. Besides, I was new for the students there. As a result, hardly did I have any close friends. Feeling terribly lonely, I couldn’t help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then.
However, as days w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ent on, I slowly adapted myself to the new environment. It was because I actively communicated with my new schoolmates and made friends with them that my homesickness gradually disappeared.（167 words）
【参考范文】读写任务：Version 2:
Sam was sent to a bo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )arding school and tried to adapt himself to it but failed. Consequently he began to feel homesick and lonely and became reluctant with his study. (30 words)
Being homesick is not ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at all strange to anybody. In reality, I had a similar experience. In order to promote our competitive strength in exams, we were only allowed to go home once a month this term. It was the first time that I had had to stay in school for such a long time. So much did I miss my parents that on no account would I meet them without bursting into tears. It was this homesickness that had a bad effect on both my life and study. Missing my family so much, I did find it difficult to have a good meal and fall asleep. I could not concentrate on my study and my study efficiency went down sharply. Worse still, totally lost in the great pressure from study, I didn’t know how to deal with it.
I was about to abando ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n myself when my teachers gave me some advice on how to adapt to this busy school life. As a matter of fact, it was high time that I should study hard and independently. I then turned my homesickness into the motivation to study diligently. Moreover, I made more friends and frequently participated in outdoor activities, through which I was able to relax myself and share my feelings with others. Having seas of interesting things to do, I finally became accustomed to enjoying my school life.
Tough as it w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as to adjust to a brand new school life, I succeeded eventually. The experience of overcoming the difficulties has now become a precious memory and a sum of wealth in my life. (264 words)
【2佛山市普通质量检测（一）】
基础写作 (共1小题，第2节 满分15分)
以下是政府颁布的有关禁止食用野生动物的规定的主要内容。
目的：
（1） 加强野生动物资源保护，维护生态平衡。
（2） 倡导文明的生活方式和健康的饮食习惯。
相关规定和措施：
（1）餐饮业经营者不得加工、出售禁止食用的野生动物及其产品。
（2）对于违反本规定的经营者，将被勒令停业并可能予以罚款。
【写作内容】
根据以上内容写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
1.禁止食用野生动物的目的；
2.规定和措施。
【写作要求】
只能用5句话表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题，第2节 满分15分)
In order to protect wi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ld animals and keep the balance of nature, the government has made a regulation to forbid the eating of wild animals. Meanwhile, the regulation is aimed to encourage people to live a civilized life and keep a healthy diet. According to the ban, all the restaurants are not allowed to process and sell wild animals and their related products. Those who break the regulation will be forced to close their restaurants. What’s more, some of them may even be fined.
【佛山市普通质量检测（一）】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Education does Count（excerpt）—Bill Gates
Hundreds of studen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts send me e-mail each year asking for advice about education. They want to know what to study, or whether it’s OK to drop out of college since that’s what I did.
My basic advice is sim ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ple and heartfelt. “Get the best education you can. Take advantage of high school and college. Learn how to learn.”
It’s true that I dropp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed out of college to start Microsoft, but I was at Harvard for three years before dropping out — and I’d love to have the time to go back. As I’ve said before, nobody should drop out of college unless they believe they face the opportunity of a lifetime. And even then they should reconsider.
In my company’s early ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) years, we had a bright part-time programmer who threatened to drop out of high school to work full-time. We told him no.
Quite a few of o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ut people didn’t finish college, but we discourage dropping out.
Having a diploma ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) certainly helps somebody who is looking to us for a job.
There’s not a per ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )fect correlation between attitudes in high school and success in later life, of course.But it’s a real mistake not to take the opportunity to learn a huge range of subjects, to learn to work with people in high school, and to get the grades that will help you get into a good college.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对教育的看法，内容包括：
(1) 为什么有些学生想中途放弃学业去创业；
(2) 你认为读书与事业之间的关系是怎样的；
(3) 你自己有何打算。
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
The author is often ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )asked to give advice about education due to his successful experience. He thinks it is unwise to drop out and that learning is sure to be beneficial.
Some students ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )want to drop out of school, believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career, because there are many cases where people who don’t finish their schooling are successful, such as Bill Gates. Besides, the high tuition of college education is too much for ordinary families. Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on their parents. Furthermore, experience counts most for a career and no wonder why some would like to accumulate experience by taking a job at an early age.
Knowledge is power. Schools are where people become knowledgeable.
As for me, I will ma ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ke full use of time to complete my schooling and achieve my dream.
【广东省东莞市2013届高三上期末调研测试】
基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
校运会下周要开始了，你接受一项任务，要为英语校报写一篇运动喝水注意事项。
[写作内容]
1．原因：运动后身体会缺水。
2．作用：有利于保持体能，恢复体力。
3．补水方法：运动前：两三个小时可以适当喝水，不宜太多。
运动中：适当喝运动饮料或盐水。
运动后：最好少量慢喝。
特别提醒：运动后禁止喝茶、咖啡或酒。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
It is obvious th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at our body will lack water( because of sweat streaming) after exercise, so it is necessary to increase water for our body, which will keep our body energetic, making us refresh quickly. It is better to drink suitable water two or three hours before exercise, but not too much. Meanwhile we should choose a certain sports drinking or salty water during the exercise. Besides, after exercise, we'd better add water in time properly and slowly for it's good for our health. Special attention: strong tea, coffee and wines are also prohibited after exercise(此句也可用一个句子来表达: eg: What we should pay more attention to is that------).广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（4）参考范文
【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】
读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Right after the Se ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cond World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still, there were bills for them to pay—four children to care for and food to buy. Life was hard for them at that time.
After the intervie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.
“Do you think the Germans could rebuild their homeland ”
“Absolutely.”
“But I can’t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )see any hope for the country at all. How can you be so certain about that ”
“Have you noticed w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat they put on the table in the basement There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at such moment, hasn’t forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can create miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？
(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；
(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Two American journali ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sts interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.
As is often the case ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. Therefore，I agree that dreams can change one’s life. Lisa is my friend and former classmate. She was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. However, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. There is no denying that actresses are usually much taller than her. However, she didn’t lose heart. With great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. The show was a success.
As far as I am conc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. Please hold fast to your dreams.
读写任务评分说明
读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。
在评分时，应注意以下几方面：
1． 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；
2． 概括的要点包括：Two Am ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erican journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.
二、读写任务评分标准
项目 分值 评分标准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。
0-1 没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。
写作 18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14-17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7-10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。
4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。
0 以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容
【广东省广州市调研测试】
读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In recent years educ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ators and parents have become concerned about the poor performance of boys in school. The so-called “boy crisis (危机)” in education refers to both their academic performance and their behaviour. In both areas boys’ results are much worse than girls’.
USA data show ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s that boys rank behind girls in almost all areas of schooling. They earn lower grades overall in primary school and high school. They are behind girls in reading and writing, and 30 percent of them are in the bottom quarter of standardized tests, compared with 19 percent of girls. Boys are also more likely to have behavioural problems, to repeat a grade and to drop out of school altogether. Studies in China have found similar trends.
Although the ca ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uses of the “boy crisis” are not fully understood, some experts believe that same-sex (boys-only and girls-only) classrooms and schools may help solve the problem. The idea is to remove some of the distractions caused by the opposite sex, in order to improve students’ concentration and hopefully their grades. The first Chinese school to experiment with this idea is the Shanghai No. 8 Middle School, which began “boys-only” classes in September, 2012. Although it is too early to tell if the reform has made a difference, its supporters argue that the results are promising.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词就“学校按性别分班”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）你认为按性别分班有何优、缺点；
（2）你是否赞成学校按性别分班；
（3）你赞成或反对按性别分班的理由。
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
【读写任务评分说明：】
读写任务是有材料作文；要求学生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查学生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。
本试题要求考生阅读一篇关 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )于“男孩危机”的英语短文之后就“学校按性别分班”这一话题进行议论，内容包括：（1）按性别分班的优、缺点；（2）是否赞成学校按性别分班；（3）赞成或反对的理由。
在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：
1．按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分。
2. 概括部分要求能抓住文章所含的大意，即：“男孩危机”的现象、一些调查研究的证明、专家提出的可能的解决措施。概括应包含以下要点：
(1) 现象：“boy crisis” --- boys tend to perform worse than girls.
(2) 例证：study data.
(3) （之一）措施：same-sex classrooms and schools.
3. 写作的内容应该包括：
（1）按性别分班的优、缺点；
（2）是否赞成学校按性别分班；
（3）赞成或反对的理由。
4. 其它要求见评分标准。
读写任务【评分标准】
[评分说明] 读写任务的评分建议采用综合法，即：根据总体影响给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。
项目 赋分 评分标准
概 括 5 按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。
0-1 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。
写 作 18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14-17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有一定的用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7-10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。
4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。
0 以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容
【参考范文】读写任务：
The passage shows ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that nowadays boys tend to perform worse than girls in all aspects in school, which is known as the “boy crisis”. Experts suggest that same-sex schooling may be a possible solution to the problem.
From my pers ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )pective, the merits of single sex education are as follows. Firstly, kids feel more comfortable being themselves in this environment. Secondly, it is easier for teachers to design learning tasks because boys and girls process information differently. When it comes to its disadvantages, the lack of socialization is my primary concern. If kids lack the opportunity to communicate with the opposite sex, their psychological development and their communication skills may be harmed.
As for me, I'm opposed to the same-sex education. One reason is because it's not practical to be carried out on a large scale at present. Moreover, same-sex schools could encourage inequality and unfairness between boys and girls. But most importantly, if kids can encounter the opposite sex, they will have more appreciation, understanding and sympathy for others. This will help them be more mature and open-minded and contribute to their well-being in later life.
【2014安徽省屯溪一中月考卷】
书面表达(满分25分)
现在,学生的零花钱越来越多,但是 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )乱花钱现象很严重。下面是你应某晚报教育在线栏目之约针对学生的零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向,对某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行问卷调查所得出数据。请你用英文写一篇调查报告,反映调查结果,并呼吁中学生应树立正确的消费观。
注意:1、书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要抓住主要问题和数据说明的问题即可;
2、开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3、词数120左右。
【参考范文】书面表达
Dear Editor,
Rece ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ntly a survey has been carried out to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.
In this survey, bot ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )h junior students and senior students spend most their money on books , snacks and playing games , still some money goes to clothes , banks , sports , and so on. The survey shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books to snacks (37% )and playing games (31% ). On the other hand, only 32% of juniors spend their pocket money buying books, while over a half buy snacks and 44% spend in playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money on clothes or put it in banks.
I think a lot of snacks will not only make us put on weight but also do harm to our health. In addition , if we play games without limit, we ' 11 lose much precious time , which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（1）参考范文
书面表达训练
假如你是校学生会主席李华，学校安排你下 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )周末作为导游带领外籍教师Mr.Smith进行一次近郊游。请你用英语给Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：
1．自我介绍；
2．出游的时间、目的地等信息；
3．需要提前做的准备工作。
要求：1．词数100左右；
2．为使行文连贯，可根据内容要点适当增加细节。
Dear Mr. Smith,
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It is my honor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to introduce myself to you. I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of our school. And I was asked to act as a tourist guide for you on next weekend. The schedule and details are as follows：
We’ll ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve a wonderful and well-organized trip, not far from the downtown. Since you are new here, you will be amazed at the scenery and surroundings there. In terms of the meeting time, 8 o’clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine. And at that time, I will be waiting for you at the school gate. Remember not to take too many things. Just a bottle of water, some pieces of bread or other kinds of food, a cap or a pair of sunglasses will be enough. Also, you'd better wear a pair of sports shoes.
Looking forward to seeing you. I believe we'll have a good day.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
书面表达训练
假如你是李华，你在美国的朋友Mandy给你写了一封信征求意见。请根据这封信的内容给他回一封信。
Hi Li Hua, As an ordinary ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) middle school student, I plan to study abroad some day, but when is the properer time, before or after graduation from college And what should I prepare before I go abroad Best wishes. Mandy
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear Mandy,
I am delight ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed to receive your letter. And I am willing to share my opinions with you about the time to study abroad. My advice is staying in the USA to get your bachelor’s degree and then going abroad for your master’s, because this means you will be a little older and more able to appreciate the differences between life in your country and life overseas. The older you are, the greater your experience is, the more you will understand the differences and be able to form opinions about what you’re seeing.
You should concen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )trate on your language if you hope to go to a non-English-speaking country and there are no specific preparations except to have spirit of adventure and to be ready for new experiences.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
【广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分)
【写作内容】
目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演（talent shows）。对此，中学生的看法各不相同。
赞 同 不 赞 同
1、丰富社会经验；2、增强自信；3、全面发展。 1、模仿多，原创少；2、沉迷于“明星梦”；3、不利于学习。
【写作要求】
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
At present an in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )creasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence. What’s more, it’s good for their overall development.
However, other st ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )udents hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original. Besides, some are such “star dream” followers that they can’t put their heart and soul into their study, thus affecting their study badly.
【广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A poor boy ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d one penny left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. A lovely young woman opened the door. She thought he looked hungry and brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You don't owe me anything.” She replied. “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically and mentally.
Years later the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) young woman became critically ill and was sent to a big hospital. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the consultation (咨询). He recognized her at once and he was determined to do his best to save her life.
After a long struggle, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on it. The bill was sent to her room. She opened it, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention: “Paid in full with a glass of milk, (signed) Dr. Howard Kelly.”
【写作内容】
1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容；
2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：
(1) 你从这个故事领悟到什么道理？
(2) 举一个例子说明当你遇到困难时，你的朋友是怎么做的？
(3) 同时，你是如何报答你朋友的帮助的？
【写作要求】
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
When a poor boy wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s hungry, a young woman gave him a glass of milk. Years later, as a famous doctor, he saved the woman's life and returned the final bill to her in return for her help.
Greatly insp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ired by the story, I learn that once helped by others, we should be grateful. If my friend is in need of help, I will comfort him and spare no effort to help him out.
It occurred ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to me that once I was about to go home when it started to rain heavily. Having left my umbrella at home, I could do nothing but stay in the classroom. At this moment, my classmate Henry gave me his umbrella. His kindness and willingness to help greatly impressed me.
Several days befor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e an important exam, Henry fell seriously ill. Every day after school, I went to the hospital to accompany him, helping him catch up with his lessons. Eventually, he got a good mark.
【广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )icroblog）的一名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影《阿甘正传》（Forrest Gump），觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。
观看影片：《阿甘正传》；出品年份：1994年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖
内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难
推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义；
2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。
建议： 博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流
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【写作内容】
根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：
1. 向大家推荐这部制作于1994年的经典影片；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 向博友们建议。
参考词汇： 奥斯卡Oscar
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
Dear bloggers，
I am glad to share o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you. The film Forest Gump, made in 1994, was starred by a famous actor Tom Hanks and finally won six Oscar prizes. In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in English and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（2）参考范文
书面表达训练
某英语报社向大众征稿，谈谈个人的爱好，假如你是李华，请你依据下图提示，介绍自己的爱好：
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注意：1词数：100左右（开头巳写好，不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
I'm glad to share ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) my hobby with you.____________________________________________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
书面表达训练
请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Good communicati ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on can help wipe out misunderstanding and build a good relationship.
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人的姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120字，如引用提示语，则不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
As is universally ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )acknowledged, good communication is what it takes to build a harmonious relationship.
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【广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。
My Mother’s Hands
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Rest in peace, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Mother, you are still very much alive in us. Happy Mother's Day
【写作内容】
有人说, 因为上帝不能无处不在 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), 所以他创造了“母亲”。你的母亲是一位怎样的女性 请以“母亲”为主题写一篇记叙文, 结合自身的经历讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响。内容要点包括：
1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。
2. 然后以约120个词讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响, 并包括以下要点：
（1）描述你的母亲;
（2）简述她对你的影响;
（3）你准备怎样表达对她的感激之情
【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
参考范文:1
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参考范文：2
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The passage r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eminds me of my mother, from whom I learn to be a better person.
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【2014安徽省皖南八校第一次联考】
书面表达（满分25分)
据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted " 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1. 造成学生近视的原因；
2. 如何保护视力？
注意: 1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 近视率 rate of myopia
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted
It is reported th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version:
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted
It is reported t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.
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Realizing the reason ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s of this result, it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. I think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.
【广东深圳市第二次调研考试】
基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇你校开展“光盘”活动的报道。
[写作内容]
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
At 4 pm on Mar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch 4th, Monday, 2013, in front of the Student Canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “Fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the Students’ Union. First, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. After that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. Therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. And then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our good habit, save food and refuse waste.
第一节：
一、基础写作评分原则
1、本题总分为15分，按3个方面给分。
2、评分时，首先根据文章 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性, 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
4、评分时，应注意信息内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点：（可以有不同的组合）
1．2013年3月4日星期一下午4：00, 学生食堂门口；
2．学生会, 900多师生；反对浪费，鼓励光盘；
3．利用展板，展示我校的浪费现象, 播放录像，了解现状：
全球每年1000万死于饥荒;
4．如果每天减少浪费5%，可救活400多万人;
5．大家签名以示自己的决心:培养习惯，节约粮食，杜绝浪费。
三、评分标准
语言 言 言 7-8 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。
5-6 具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
3-4 语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。
1-2 语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。
0 语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。
备注 每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。
内 容 5 包括了所有信息内容。
4 包括了大部分信息内容。
3 包括了基本信息内容。
2 包括了小部分信息内容。
1 包括了少许信息内容。
0 没有包括所提供的信息内容。
连 贯 2 内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。
1.5 内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。
1 内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。
0 内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。
备注 文不对题，给0分。广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：书面表达选训（3）参考范文
【2014高考英语安徽省六校联考】
书面表达 (满分25分)
手机和我们的生活越来越密切， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )让我们的联系变得更加方便，可有人认为手机并不利于真正的交流。校报英文版正在开展征文活动，发起对这一话题的讨论，你认为手机对人与人之间沟通的影响是利大于弊还是弊大于利？请你以“Mobile phones, good or bad for communication ”为题写篇短文向校报投稿，表达你的看法。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 短文题目已拟好，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不可出现与本人相关的信息。
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Mobile phones, good or bad for communication
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【参考范文】One possible version
Mobile phones, good or bad for communication
The technology ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. Someone can reach us or we can call someone wherever we are. However, people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.
Due to the conveni ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ence of mobile phones, many people have started to engage in social interaction in person less than before. In addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expressions and body language, without which communication becomes less personal. Consequently, some people get confused and nervous while talking to a person face to face because they mostly talk to people on mobile phones. They even do not know the manners of communication.
As far as I am co ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ncerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid depending too much on them.
【广东深圳市第二次调研考试】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面微博上的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Designed by our monitor, we has a story telling contest at the class meeting. All of us were very active, and everybody said that the most touching story was the one told by Zhang Hua, which won the first prize and made the meeting more meaningful So, here, I would like to share:
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My focus changed a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t that moment, For a whole day I’d been doubting my body, but now I knew it was the will that would help me reach my goal.
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。
2．以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括：
（1）为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？
（2）举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响；
（3）你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。
[写作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用文中的内容。
2．作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
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Once I was addicted ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to computer games, and I was so involved in it that it influenced my school work terribly. Then at a class meeting, my head teacher organized many activities to let us know the bad effects of being addictive. I was shocked and realized my danger! If it had not been because of that valuable class meeting, I would have been another person.
So, class meetings ar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e our expectations, because they are an effective form of school moral education and the important way to convert the students’ thought. Therefore, a good head teacher often attaches great importance to a weekly class meeting.
第二节：
一、读写任务评分原则
1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。
2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1. 以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括：
(1) 为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？
(2) 举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响;
(3) 你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求：
项目 分值 评分标准
概括 5 按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。
0-1 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。
写作 18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14-17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7-10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。
4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。
0 以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容
