Period 6 写作(Writing)
招聘广告
招聘广告是日常生活中的一种常见的应用文体。招聘启事的内容要全面,招聘启事一定要涵盖标题、招聘人数、岗位职责描述、任职条件、薪酬福利、公司简介等主要内容,而不能只写其中的一两条。一份完整的招聘启事能给人带来高端、正规等正面印象,容易吸引求职者的兴趣。招聘广告通常有表格式和短文式两种类型。中学生经常遇到的招聘类作文大多是短文式的。因此,此处主要讲解短文式招聘广告的写作。
(一)基本框架
1.开头:广告的目的和招聘的职位。
2.主体:工作职责及应聘者的资格。
3.结尾:联系方式并表达期待。
(二)常用表达
1.We need five good music teachers for our school!
我们学校需要五名优秀的音乐老师!
2.I want an English teacher aged about 30 to teach my son at home.
我想要一名30岁左右的英语老师在家教我的儿子。
3.Our university is looking for a research assistant.
我们大学正在招聘一名研究助理。
4.Our school newspaper is in great need of an English editor.
我们校报急需一位英文编辑。
5.The candidates must have great computing skills.
应聘者必须有高超的计算机技能。
6.If you want to apply for the job, you must have a good knowledge of English.
如果你想申请这份工作,你必须熟练掌握英语。
7.You are welcome to call 8101××× at any time, except at night.
欢迎您随时致电8101×××,晚上除外。
8.If you want to join our club, you can call at this number.
如果你想加入我们的俱乐部,你可以拨打这个号码。
9.Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with Mr Smith.
对这份工作感兴趣的人,请联系史密斯先生。
你校学生会打算招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问。请你写一则招聘启事,内容包括:
1.母语是英语,汉语流利者优先;
2.解答英语学习问题,协助组织英语活动;
3.每周4小时,报酬面议;
4.联系人:李华;
5.Tel: 1301122××××。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节;以使行文连贯;
3.启事标题和结尾已为你写好。
An English Study Advisor Wanted
Students' Union
[审题构思]
写作要求是写招聘启事。写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定体裁:本文为招聘启事,属于应用文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定内容:
①英语学习顾问的主要职责;
②英语学习顾问的要求及工作时长;
③联系方式及报酬。
[遣词造句]
1.我校学生会决定下学期邀请一名留学生担任英语学习顾问。
The Students' Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English study advisor next term.
2.顾问的职责包括帮助学生练习英语口语,回答他们的问题,并帮助组织诸如唱英语歌曲、英语晚会或关于有趣话题的讲座等活动。
The responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English,answering their questions,and helping organize activities,such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.
3.我们将优先考虑母语为英语并且汉语流利的申请人。
We will give preference to the applicant who is a native speaker of English and fluent in Chinese.
4.预计学习顾问每周工作4小时。
It is expected that the advisor will work 4 hours per week.
5.如果你有兴趣,请打1301122××××这个电话号码,与李华联系面试。
If you are interested,please reach Li Hua at 1301122×××× for an interview.
6.服务费用将在面试时讨论。
Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
[句式升级]
1.用被动句改写句3
Preference will be given to the applicant who is a native speaker of English and fluent in Chinese.
2.用be expected to do 改写句4
The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
An English Study Advisor Wanted
[参考范文]
An English Study Advisor Wanted
The Students' Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English study advisor next term.The responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English,answering their questions,and helping organize activities,such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.
Preference will be given to the applicant who is a native speaker of English and fluent in Chinese.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested,please reach Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
Students' Union
景物描写 场景
[词块积累]
1.be full of dark clouds 乌云密布
2.rain cats and dogs 下着倾盆大雨
3.a carpet of fallen leaves 一层落叶
4.burst through the clouds 破云而出
5.people coming and going 人来人往
6.a dark and rainy evening 一个漆黑的雨夜
7.in the rustling leaves 在沙沙作响的树叶中
8.lightening flashes and thunder rumbles 电闪雷鸣
9.in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里
10.in the slight yellow light of street lamps 在微黄的路灯灯光下
[佳句积累]
1.The sun began to rise slowly in the sky, bathing the mountain in golden light.
太阳开始在天空中缓缓升起,让山沐浴在一片金辉之中。
2.White clouds flowed in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the broad ocean.
蓝天上白云轻飘,宛如大海里安静的鱼儿在游动。
3.The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village.
太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起,温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。
4.The sky was clear blue and the sun was shining on the meadow and the river bank.
天空晴朗碧蓝,阳光洒在草地和河岸上。
5.The views were surprisingly beautiful—the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clear water.
景色出奇的美——阳光温暖、空气清新、泉水清澈。
6.The grounds were covered with dark green grass, through which stretched a straight stone path.
那儿处处是碧绿的芳草,绿草中延伸出一条笔直的石路。
7.When the darkness enveloped the forest, she felt both cold and frightened when the wind blew.
当黑夜笼罩整个森林,风吹得她又冷又怕。
8.Everything was in silence, only the howling of the wind and the flames of the fire for company.
万籁俱寂,只有呼呼的风声和炉火的火苗相伴。
9.Snowflakes of all shapes and sizes tapped against the windows.More snowflakes were flying in the air.
各种形状和大小的雪花轻拍着窗户。更多的雪花在空中飞舞。
10.That night there came a terrible storm, with driving rain, awful claps of thunder and blinding flashes of lightening.
那天夜里下了一场可怕的暴风雨,大雨滂沱,电闪雷鸣,令人耳鸣目眩。
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Julia always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it.It was a dark,damp tunnel(隧道)made of smooth branches.This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, Stephen, and of terrifying him as well as herself.
One day they found a hole on one side of the walk.Inside there was water, in which they noticed a panting trout(喘息的鳟鱼).They were both so excited that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they bent down and peered at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his silver stoma(气门) going up and down like an engine, otherwise he was motionless.Julia wondered what he ate and thought of his hunger.She found him a worm.He ignored the food, and just went on panting.Bending over him, she thought how he had been there.All the winter, in the dark tunnel, all day, all night, he floated around alone.
Nobody knew how the fish got there.Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the egg.Her father thought that in the winter a small stream might have carried it down there as a baby, and it had been safe until summer came and the water began to dry up.
Before they went to bed, Stephen asked his mummy the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout, but in the story which his mum began to make up for him.Julia in her bed, presented her back to them and read her book.But she kept one ear cocked(竖起耳朵).“And so, in the end, the naughty fish got bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smaller...” Passionately, she turned around and cried, “Mummy, don't make it a horrible old moral story.” Her mum had even brought in a fairy(仙子),who had made it rain and filled the hole,so that the trout could float away down the river below.Staring at the moon, she knew there was no such thing as a fairy and that the trout, down in the tunnel, was panting for his life.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
She sat up in the silent night and Stephen was sound asleep.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.
[参考范文]
She sat up in the silent night and Stephen was sound asleep.She got out of the bedroom and ran to the poor trout with a pot.Although she was scared in the darkness, a sense of responsibility welled up in her heart.“Never can the small hole be your prison,” She murmured to the panting creature, “but how can I rescue you from the deep hole?” Suddenly, it dawned on her that maybe she could fill the hole with water like a fairy.Next three hours witnessed Julia's effort in filling the hole with the water fetched from the river nearby.Finally, she grasped it, put it into the pot and raced out to the river.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.Staring at the disappearing trout, Julia was in great joy, a wave of happiness flooding over her.Without any delay, she ran back home like an arrow(箭)and announced the news to the whole family.Having confirmed what she had done, her parents gave a thumbs up(竖起大拇指) to praise her.“You must be the very fairy,” yelled Stephen, his eyes twinkling like a diamond.The bright smile from everyone lit up The Dark Walk.Hadn't it been for Julia's bravery and Mum's weird(怪诞的) story, the trout couldn't have run through the dark hole towards the light river.
课时分层作业(十八)
Ⅰ.阅读理解
A
“Where I grew up,there were not a lot of plants outside,”said Yolanda Palmer.“Some people had them; some people didn't.”
Palmer,who is from Southwest Philadelphia,discovered her love for plants at the age of 10.Growing up,she developed great skills in growing plants and learned more about nature each and every day.
“As I got a little older,one block in my neighborhood would be filled with flowers and things in the yard,”she said.“But in another block there would be none.”
Since then,Palmer had wanted to share her love of plants with the community.But the dream remained just a seed while she worked an ordinary day job.Sitting in the company she often thought she had to do something else.Palmer then planted the seed.She started small,selling at a local outdoor market in Southwest Philadelphia and then coming to shows and festivals in Chestnut Hill.
By December 2021,she had her store on German town Avenue,“Foliage”.There,she sells common plants,rare plants,small plants,and large plants.“The goal is to sell them to homeowners to beautify their home and also to clean the air,”she said.
Palmer's home is in Chestnut Hill,a central gardening center in the city.She hopes her message will be able to reach other communities in the Philadelphia area.“Everyone should buy houseplants.Everyone should want cleaner air,”she said.“And that way,in the future when our children grow up,we can make it better.”
Palmer plans on continuing to work hard to support not only her store,but her boys,four dogs,one cat and 128 plants at home.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了爱好种植植物的帕尔默通过努力将自己的爱好变为工作,并希望能够影响更多人去种植植物的故事。
1.What did Palmer find when she was young
A.Her neighbors disliked plants.
B.People knew little about plants.
C.There were few kinds of plants.
D.Plants were not seen everywhere.
D [细节理解题。根据第一段内容可知,帕尔默小时候发现她长大的地方植物并非随处可见。故选D。]
2.What is Palmer doing now
A.Managing a gardening center.
B.Running her own plant store.
C.Beautifying her block with plants.
D.Teaching communities about plants.
B [细节理解题。根据倒数第三段中的“By December 2021,she had her store on German town Avenue,‘Foliage’.There,she sells common plants,rare plants,small plants,and large plants.”可知,现在帕尔默经营着自己的植物商店。故选B。]
3.What does Palmer hope
A.Everyone can protect the plants.
B.More locals will have houseplants.
C.Children can learn more about plants.
D.She will have an outdoor market for plants.
B [细节理解题。根据倒数第二段中的“She hopes her message will be able to reach other communities in the Philadelphia area.‘Everyone should buy houseplants.Everyone should want cleaner air,’she said.”可知,帕尔默希望更多当地人有室内植物。故选B。]
4.What is the best title for the text
A.From Hobby to Job:Palmer Has Made It
B.From Class to Work:Palmer's Happy Habit
C.From Village to City:Palmer Is on the Road
D.From Seed to Flower:Palmer's Future Dream
A [标题归纳题。文章主要讲述了爱好种植植物的帕尔默通过努力将自己的爱好变为工作,并希望能够影响更多人去种植植物的故事。故A项“从爱好到工作:帕尔默成功了”可以作为本文的最佳标题。故选A。]
B
They say everything is bigger in Texas.While that may be true, some of the best things in Texas are quite small.A case in point: tiny Mount Vernon, a town of just under 3,000 people.But if you do come across Mount Vernon, you might just get an intention to stay.That happens a lot around here, and it's worth noting how remarkable that is.
Tom Wilkinson was born in Mount Vernon 87 years ago and moved back after he retired from his career as a college English professor in Dallas.Like many of his neighbors, Wilkinson can track his ancestors back to the pioneers who settled here in the 1870s.And like many, he values the simple life you can't easily find in big cities.“People are still polite.They hold the door open for you,” he says. “We grow strong roots here!”
Preserving and honoring the past has been key to helping Mount Vernon survive.The residents have restored and reopened some of the empty stores, including the old barbershop, built more than 100 years ago.An old general store was turned into a combination space.Wander in on any given day and you might find a book club discussion, a Coffee Ladies meetup, or a work session for the local genealogy(家谱) group among the tables of people chatting over cups of coffee and plates of food.
Mount Vernon has the kind of big hearts you tend to find in a small town.For instance, when a local policeman was diagnosed with cancer last year, ten-year-old Lola McKellar set up a lemonade stand to raise money for his treatments.In 2015, when a 350-year flood sent water rushing into local homes, an army of volunteers showed up to get a wheelchair-bound neighbor and his wife to higher ground, and then came back to help rebuild.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了居住在得克萨斯州Mount Vernon小镇的人们返璞归真的生活方式。
5.What does the author think of Mount Vernon
A.Remote. B.Wealthy.
C.Primitive. D.Attractive.
D [推理判断题。根据第一段中的“But if you do come across Mount Vernon, you might just get an intention to stay.”可知,作者认为Mount Vernon很吸引人。故选D项。]
6.Why did Tom Wilkinson come back to Mount Vernon
A.He preferred the simple and natural life.
B.He could continue his language teaching.
C.He could live together with his ancestors.
D.He could meet more neighbors of his age.
A [细节理解题。根据第二段中的“And like many, he values the simple life you can't easily find in big cities.”可知,Tom Wilkinson退休后回到故乡,是因为他喜欢那里的生活方式。故选A项。]
7.What can we infer about people's way of life in Mount Vernon from paragraph 3
A.It is in danger of extinction.
B.It is quickly changing over time.
C.It is conservative but harmonious.
D.It is being disturbed by the outside world.
C [推理判断题。根据第三段中的“Preserving and honoring the past has been key to helping Mount Vernon survive.”及“Wander in on any given day and you might find a book club discussion, a Coffee Ladies meetup, or a work session for the local genealogy group among the tables of people chatting over cups of coffee and plates of food.”可知,Mount Vernon小镇的人们的生活保守而和谐。故选C项。]
8.What is the last paragraph mainly about
A.The history of Mount Vernon.
B.The humanity of Mount Vernon.
C.The volunteers of Mount Vernon.
D.The reconstruction of Mount Vernon.
B [段落大意题。根据最后一段的首句“Mount Vernon has the kind of big hearts you tend to find in a small town.”及本段的两个例子可知,本段主要说明了Mount Vernon小镇的人情味。故选B项。]
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是正在新西兰留学的李华,你校将和当地动物保护组织合作绘制一系列墙上宣传画。请你写一则招聘广告,在你校招聘一批志愿者帮助完成这项工作,内容包括:
1.宣传主题:提高公众的野生动物保护意识;
2.志愿者的条件;
3.活动时间;
4.报名方式和截止时间。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Volunteers needed!
In order to raise public awareness of wildlife protection,our school will cooperate with the local animal protection organisation to create a series of posters on the walls.Some volunteers who are good at painting and calligraphy are needed to help complete the work.The project will take place on weekends.It's not only a good chance to sharpen your skills but also a way to show your concern and love for wildlife!If you are interested in it,please sign up at the Students' Union before July 11th.
Take action at once!We are looking forward to your participation.
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)(共29张PPT)
Period 6
Unit 6 Nurturing nature
主题语境
人与自然—— 自然环境,自然遗产保护
招聘广告是日常生活中的一种常见的应用文体。招聘启事的内容要全面,招聘启事一定要涵盖标题、招聘人数、岗位职责描述、任职条件、薪酬福利、公司简介等主要内容,而不能只写其中的一两条。一份完整的招聘启事能给人带来高端、正规等正面印象,容易吸引求职者的兴趣。招聘广告通常有表格式和短文式两种类型。中学生经常遇到的招聘类作文大多是短文式的。因此,此处主要讲解短文式招聘广告的写作。
招聘广告
课时学案 写作(Writing)
(一)基本框架
1.开头:广告的目的和招聘的职位。
2.主体:工作职责及应聘者的资格。
3.结尾:联系方式并表达期待。
(二)常用表达
1.We need five good music teachers for our school!
我们学校需要五名优秀的音乐老师!
2.I want an English teacher aged about 30 to teach my son at home.
我想要一名30岁左右的英语老师在家教我的儿子。
3.Our university is looking for a research assistant.
我们大学正在招聘一名研究助理。
4.Our school newspaper is in great need of an English editor.
我们校报急需一位英文编辑。
5.The candidates must have great computing skills.
应聘者必须有高超的计算机技能。
6.If you want to apply for the job, you must have a good knowledge of English.
如果你想申请这份工作,你必须熟练掌握英语。
7.You are welcome to call 8101××× at any time, except at night.
欢迎您随时致电8101×××,晚上除外。
8.If you want to join our club, you can call at this number.
如果你想加入我们的俱乐部,你可以拨打这个号码。
9.Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with Mr Smith.
对这份工作感兴趣的人,请联系史密斯先生。
你校学生会打算招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问。请你写一则招聘启事,内容包括:
1.母语是英语,汉语流利者优先;
2.解答英语学习问题,协助组织英语活动;
3.每周4小时,报酬面议;
4.联系人:李华;
5.Tel: 1301122××××。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节;以使行文连贯;
3.启事标题和结尾已为你写好。
An English Study Advisor Wanted
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Students' Union
[审题构思]
写作要求是写招聘启事。写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定体裁:本文为招聘启事,属于应用文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定内容:
①英语学习顾问的主要职责;
②英语学习顾问的要求及工作时长;
③联系方式及报酬。
[遣词造句]
1.我校学生会决定下学期邀请一名留学生担任英语学习顾问。
The Students' Union of our school decides to invite an international student to _______ an English study advisor next term.
2.顾问的职责包括帮助学生练习英语口语,回答他们的问题,并帮助组织诸如唱英语歌曲、英语晚会或关于有趣话题的讲座等活动。
The responsibilities of the advisor include _______ students to practice their oral English,_________ their questions,and _______ organize activities,_______ singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.
work as
helping
answering
helping
such as
3.我们将优先考虑母语为英语并且汉语流利的申请人。
We will give preference to the applicant who is ________________ of English and fluent in Chinese.
4.预计学习顾问每周工作4小时。
_______________that the advisor will work 4 hours per week.
a native speaker
It is expected
5.如果你有兴趣,请打1301122××××这个电话号码,与李华联系面试。
If you are interested,please ____________at 1301122×××× _____
_________.
6.服务费用将在面试时讨论。
_______________________ will be discussed during the interview.
reach Li Hua
for an
interview
Payment for the service
[句式升级]
1.用被动句改写句3
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用be expected to do 改写句4
___________________________________________________________
Preference will be given to the applicant who is a native speaker of English and fluent in Chinese.
The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
An English Study Advisor Wanted
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
An English Study Advisor Wanted
The Students' Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English study advisor next term.The responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English,answering their questions,and helping organize activities,such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.
Preference will be given to the applicant who is a native speaker of English and fluent in Chinese.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested,please reach Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
Students' Union
[词块积累]
1.be full of dark clouds 乌云密布
2.rain cats and dogs 下着倾盆大雨
3.a carpet of fallen leaves 一层落叶
4.burst through the clouds 破云而出
景物描写 场景
5.people coming and going 人来人往
6.a dark and rainy evening 一个漆黑的雨夜
7.in the rustling leaves 在沙沙作响的树叶中
8.lightening flashes and thunder rumbles 电闪雷鸣
9.in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里
10.in the slight yellow light of street lamps 在微黄的路灯灯光下
[佳句积累]
1.The sun began to rise slowly in the sky, bathing the mountain in golden light.
太阳开始在天空中缓缓升起,让山沐浴在一片金辉之中。
2.White clouds flowed in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the broad ocean.
蓝天上白云轻飘,宛如大海里安静的鱼儿在游动。
3.The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village.
太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起,温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。
4.The sky was clear blue and the sun was shining on the meadow and the river bank.
天空晴朗碧蓝,阳光洒在草地和河岸上。
5.The views were surprisingly beautiful—the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clear water.
景色出奇的美——阳光温暖、空气清新、泉水清澈。
6.The grounds were covered with dark green grass, through which stretched a straight stone path.
那儿处处是碧绿的芳草,绿草中延伸出一条笔直的石路。
7.When the darkness enveloped the forest, she felt both cold and frightened when the wind blew.
当黑夜笼罩整个森林,风吹得她又冷又怕。
8.Everything was in silence, only the howling of the wind and the flames of the fire for company.
万籁俱寂,只有呼呼的风声和炉火的火苗相伴。
9.Snowflakes of all shapes and sizes tapped against the windows.More snowflakes were flying in the air.
各种形状和大小的雪花轻拍着窗户。更多的雪花在空中飞舞。
10.That night there came a terrible storm, with driving rain, awful claps of thunder and blinding flashes of lightening.
那天夜里下了一场可怕的暴风雨,大雨滂沱,电闪雷鸣,令人耳鸣目眩。
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Julia always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it.It was a dark,damp tunnel(隧道)made of smooth branches.This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, Stephen, and of terrifying him as well as herself.
One day they found a hole on one side of the walk.Inside there was water, in which they noticed a panting trout(喘息的鳟鱼).They were both so excited that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they bent down and peered at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his silver stoma(气门) going up and down like an engine, otherwise he was motionless.Julia wondered what he ate and thought of his hunger.She found him a worm.He ignored the food, and just went on panting.Bending over him, she thought how he had been there.All the winter, in the dark tunnel, all day, all night, he floated around alone.
Nobody knew how the fish got there.Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the egg.Her father thought that in the winter a small stream might have carried it down there as a baby, and it had been safe until summer came and the water began to dry up.
Before they went to bed, Stephen asked his mummy the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout, but in the story which his mum began to make up for him.Julia in her bed, presented her back to them and read her book.But she kept one ear cocked(竖起耳朵).
“And so, in the end, the naughty fish got bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smaller...” Passionately, she turned around and cried, “Mummy, don't make it a horrible old moral story.” Her mum had even brought in a fairy(仙子),who had made it rain and filled the hole,so that the trout could float away down the river below.Staring at the moon, she knew there was no such thing as a fairy and that the trout, down in the tunnel, was panting for his life.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
She sat up in the silent night and Stephen was sound asleep._____
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Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river._____________
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[参考范文]
She sat up in the silent night and Stephen was sound asleep.She got out of the bedroom and ran to the poor trout with a pot.Although she was scared in the darkness, a sense of responsibility welled up in her heart.“Never can the small hole be your prison,” She murmured to the panting creature, “but how can I rescue you from the deep hole?” Suddenly, it dawned on her that maybe she could fill the hole with water like a fairy.Next three hours witnessed Julia's effort in filling the hole with the water fetched from the river nearby.Finally, she grasped it, put it into the pot and raced out to the river.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.Staring at the disappearing trout, Julia was in great joy, a wave of happiness flooding over her.Without any delay, she ran back home like an arrow(箭)and announced the news to the whole family.Having confirmed what she had done, her parents gave a thumbs up(竖起大拇指) to praise her.“You must be the very fairy,” yelled Stephen, his eyes twinkling like a diamond.The bright smile from everyone lit up The Dark Walk.Hadn't it been for Julia's bravery and Mum's weird(怪诞的) story, the trout couldn't have run through the dark hole towards the light river.