2016四川省高考英语二轮练习：短文改错（4）答案
短文改错
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and
watched the 90- ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )minute football match. Usually I just 1. _______
checked the resul ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts because I thought that was dull 2. _______
to watch a gam ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e in which players kicked a ball each 3. _______
other. Therefore ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), my father loves football. During the 4. _______
World Cup i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch 5. _______
his favorite sport. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Seeing his strong interest in this 6. _______
game of 22 men ru ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n after a ball, I decided to sit down 7. _______
to watch the game. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I found the game excited, and my 8. _______
dad explained for th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e rules. We shared our joy. Football 9. _______
is not too badly ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as long as I watch it with my dad! 10. _______
答案及解析
1. watched ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改为watch。“and”连接两个并列的不定式“to sit down”和“(to)watch”， 所以要用动词原形。
2. that改为it。it作形式主语， “that”不行。
3. each之前添加to。“把球互相踢来踢去”， 要在“kick a ball”后加上介词to。
4. Therefore改为How ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ever。由上下文可知“therefore(因此)”与句义不符， 应改为 “however(然而)”。
5. stays改为stayed。考查时态一致， 时间状语“in 2002”， 应用一般过去时。
6. 此行无错误。
7. run改为running。running为现在分词作定语， 修饰“22 men”， 相当于定语从句“who run”。
8. excited改为exciting。要用“exciting”修饰“the game”， 表示
“令人兴奋的”， “excited”用来修饰人。
9. 删除for。“explain”是及物动词， 直接跟宾语， 无须加介词。
10. badly改为bad。be动词后用形容词作表语， 不能用副词。
【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
If you par ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )k your car in a wrong place, traffic 76.
policeman wi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ll soon find it. You will be very unlucky 77.
if he lets m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e go without a ticket. But this does not 78.
always happen. Traffic ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) police is sometimes very 79.
polite. During a ho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )liday in Sweden, I find this 80.
note in my car, "Sir, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )we welcome you to our city. 81.
This is a 'No ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Parking' area. You will enjoy you your 82.
stay here whe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ther you pay attention to our street signs. 83.
This note is simple a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )reminder." If you receive a 84.
request like this, yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )u can fail to obey it! 85.
改错76．traffic前加a 77．unlucky--lucky
78．me—you 79．is--are 80．find--found 81．in—on
82．去掉you 83．whether--if 84．simple—simply
85．can--can't/can后加not或never
)(2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
答案：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeyi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
答案：
It's reported ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others.
In word, obeying ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
(2013·齐齐哈尔市二模)
Dear David，
I have recently felt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can't stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self confidence. It's time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
答案：
Dear David，
I have recently felt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )guilty, sleepless at night. You may wonder . To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I cheat in exams and I just can't stop . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for . Besides, I sometimes referred to my notebooks copied something. As you know, cheating much harm to our learning and self confidence. It's time that I action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!2016四川省高考英语二轮练习：短文改错（5）答案
短文改错
It is bad manners i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n the classroom to look for what our 1. _______
neighbor had writt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en, or try to see what mark he has received 2. _______
without bein ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g permitted. It is good manners for them to help 3. _______
each other ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it. 4. _______
In examina ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tions and in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest 5. _______
and foolishly to he ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lp or to ask help from others. When one student 6. _______
does so, much large ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r values are destroying. One may not agree 7. _______
to examination ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) system, but at present it is basically the only 8. _______
measure that the te ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )acher and the rest of the world can depend to 9. _______
decide if or not e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ach of us meets the requirement. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. for改为at。在教室看邻座所写的是不礼貌的， look for为寻找， 通常指失去的找回来。
2. had改为has。此处主从时态应一致。
3. them改为us。考查代词一致。由本句后文“if we have...”可判断。
4. 删除to。考查动词allow为及物动词， 后面的介词to应删去。
5. 此行无错误。
6. foolishly改为foolish。and 连接的两个形容词在形式上应该保持一致。
7. destroying改为destroyed。考查动词语态，“much larger values”应被摧毁。
8. examination sy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )stem之前添加the。“examination system”此处特指下文中的“the only measure”。
9. depend后添加on。 “depend on”为固定短语， 指依赖、 依靠。
10. if 改为whether。考查if和whether在表“是否”时用法的区别。if不能与or not连用。
短文改错。
Jack has regarded as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
答案：
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
短文改错。
I still remember ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
答案：
I still remember my mi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ddle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for from Wenchuan. As we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
短文改错。
Many teachers wor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.
答案：
Many teachers worrie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children want things that they don't need.
短文改错。
Rock climbing is incre ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )asingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
答案：
Rock climbing is inc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )reasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
短文改错。
I am worker at the tap ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If the tap wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ter appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, people do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of wate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should take ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment .There ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ur environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案-----】改错:
I am ∧worker at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the ta ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )p water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telep ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eople do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we should ta ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ke good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them2016四川省高考英语二轮练习：短文改错（2）答案
短文改错
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I’m sure th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ey will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) have few friends. I don’t know that they 6. _______
don’t like to t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )alk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am tryi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Can you tell me about what I should do 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei
答案及解析
1. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。
2. quietly改为
quiet。describe后接名 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词或代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把…描写成什么/什么样子”。
3. well前加as。as well as“跟…(做得)一样好”。
4. to改为at。l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )augh to...意为“对…大笑”。laugh at...意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。
5. 此行无错误。
6. that改为why。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。
7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时， 使其与上下文一致。
8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。
9. since改为but。根据上下文， 前后句之间为转折关系。
10. 删除about。t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ell的结构为：tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”， 表示直接意义； tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”， 表示间接意义。
短文改错。
Dear doctor,
My name is Wang Lin. I’m a middle school student.I have
a problem and I’m writ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing to ask you for some advices. 1._________
I’m just 1.57 mete ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rs high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________
Students oft ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._________
They called ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._________
I’m now worry abou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________
feel rather good. I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._________
much. And I like swe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )et food, either. I often have sugar with 7._________
tea, milk, porridge ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), and even hot water. In the past two months 8._________
I have put off 5 kilos ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________
but I don’t kno ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_________
dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
With best wishes,
Wang Lin
【参考答案】Key 9
1 advices –advice 2 and—but 3of 4 called –call
5 worry—worried 6 good –well 7 either –too 8 right
9 off –on 10 what –how
短文改错。
Women，present and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) ancient， at the home and 1．______
abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few 2．______
people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly． 3．______
It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short 4．______
of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with 5．______
nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in 6．______
too many,that means hair has already used too much 7．______
nourishment which body gives it to the head．As time passes， 8．______
brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______
(头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened． 10．______
【参考答案】Key 10
1．去掉the 2．that─which 3．her─their 4．was─is
5．falls─fall 6．minutes—minute
7．many─much 8．去掉it 9 lead后加to 10．√
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying,
“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people make ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time oversle ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
realized wasting time ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )equal to wasting part of their life. 80．
They always reg ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ret having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we should f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )orm the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
will not only ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84．
of poverty and even death. 85．
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短文改错。
I'm sorry to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.
I want to express ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late If you are available that time, please inform me.
Thank a lot!
答案：
I'm sorry to tell yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )u that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you next weekend, just because my elder sister come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted I should pick up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to what has changed in our city.
I want to express ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) my again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks ？ If you are available that time, please inform me.
a lot!
短文改错。
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When I started ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improvi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
答案：
I'm glad to tell y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou that I have made great progress in my English study since I became senior high school student.
When I started sen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ior English, I found much more difficult than we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the of English, so I got up early every morning, English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways learning English.
Now, I'm improvin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g my English greatly. I'm getting more and more interested learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)
Yesterday, Li Mei ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.
答案：
Yesterday, Li Mei ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back she showed him the receipt. Thinking was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . Many eyes were staring at her, made Li Mei very . Luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.2016四川省高考英语二轮练习：短文改错（1）答案
【2015·四川】
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month si ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nce I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last ti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do If you are me, would you talk to him
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
2015年四川卷 【答案】与【解析】
试题分词：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。
1．【答案】在第一句中的w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ant后加to【解析】want意为“想要”时后面必须接动词不定式作宾语，不能和动词原形连用。第一段：want后加to want to do为固定搭配，故在want后加to。加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。
2．【答案】第二句的tell→told ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )【解析】根据句子的时间状语last time可知谓语动词应该用过去式。第二段第一句：tell→told根据时间状语last time可知，本句时态应为一般过去时，故将tell改为told。tell→told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told.句意为：正如我上次告诉你的那样。
3．【答案】第二句的friend→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )friends【解析】three后接可数复数名词。第二段第一句：friend→friends句中three表示复数概念，后面的名词应为复数形式，故将friend改为friends。考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。
4．【答案】第四句的sing→si ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nging【解析】spend sb+时间或钱+doing sth．花费某人时间或钱做某事。第二段第三句：sing→singing spend some time(in)doing sth．为固定搭配，故将sing改为singing。考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend （in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。
5．【答案】第五句的many→much【解析 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )】many表示可数概念或用来修饰复数可数名词，但是此处cost的宾语应该是钱，而钱是不可数的，所以应该用much指代“很多钱”。第二段第四句：many→much much在此处为代词。表示消费量，为不可数概念，而many为可数概念，故将many改为much。考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为：那真的花费很多。
6．【答案】第七句的so→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )but【解析】so意为“因此”，表结果，显然不合逻辑，因此应该用but表示前后两部分是转折关系。第二段第六句：so→but根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知，此处应为转折关系，故将so改为but。考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
7．【答案】第八句的Ho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w→What【解析】how不能作宾语，因此应该改为what来作动词do的宾语。第二段第七句：How→What在此句中，特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语，故将How改为What。考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。
8．【答案】第九句的are→were【 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )解析】根据would you talk to him可知，本句是一个含有if条件句的虚拟语气。表示与现在或将来事实相反时从句动词应该用过去式。第二段第八句：are→were条件从句与现在事实相反，谓语动词使用过去式，故将are改为were。查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我,…。
9．【答案】第九句的him→them【 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )解析】本题属于代词的指代不明。应该将him改为them这样才与前文的their一致，指代前文的朋友。第二段第八句：him→them根据上文可知，这里指作者的三个新朋友，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them。考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？
10．【答案】第十句去掉help后 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的with【解析】help为及物动词直接加宾语。第三段：去掉with help为及物动词，与me构成动宾结构，因此，with在此处多余，故去掉with。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。考查动词。
短文改错。
My dream is to becom ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave paring with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
参考答案：
My dream is to bec ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ome a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make . There is no doubt teachers play an important role in growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. with other jobs, teaching is and the pay is lower. to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me feel young forever. I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Bob,
I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．
to study Chines ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e. I’ve got some informations about foreigners 77．
learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous 78．
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It reported that su ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch a Chinese training course will satisfy 79．
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短文改错。
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself calli ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。2016四川省高考英语二轮练习：短文改错（3）答案
短文改错
There are advantage for students to work while 1. _______
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _______
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _______
students working to earn money for their own 4. _______
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _______
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _______
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _______
money or for permission to do things by 8. _______
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _______
up for our college or future use. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. advantage改为advantages。应使用可数名词的复数形式。
2. was改为is。时态和整篇文章的时态不一致。
3. 此行无错误。
4. working改为work。此句缺少谓语动词。
5. allow改为allows。主谓不一致， 动名词做主语谓语用单数。
6. 删除if。此处please作不及物动词， 意为“喜欢， 想要”， as引导定语从句， 修饰先行词anything。
7. would 后添加not。上下文逻辑有误。
8. by改为with。by表示“使用”时， 其后不能使用定冠词the， 故改为with。
9. 去掉to。may为情态动词， 其后应使用动词原形。
10. our改为their。代词的指代不一致， 指代第三人称复数形式的物主代词应为their。
)(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
答案：
I'm a senior stu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dent from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious I'm really looking forward to your approval.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week aft ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said good ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums ther ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
another couple of d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ay. However, my father had to return to 82.________
work on Monday s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________
was really a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
短文改错。
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health 这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 这 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them 这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given 这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to 此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√
短文改错。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_____
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3____
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later, 4____
I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5___
encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve ___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china ___
again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9____
and send you the photos we take together 10____
【参考答案】KEY 5
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. for
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I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your is
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had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china a
again sometimes in the future.I will write again sometime
and send you the photos we take together took
短文改错。
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____
see that there is anything on their website 7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___
forward to seeing you again.
【参考答案】KEY 6
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
