Unit 2
I think moon cakes are delicious.
Writing Name
Analyze the topic
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问你最喜欢的节日。请你根据来信给他写一封回信。
To：LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How are you these days Today in my Chinese class, my teacher told me that there were many interesting Chinese festivals . I’m very interested in them. Can you tell me something about your favorite festival And why do you like it best
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Mike
写作要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
II. What aspects(方面) can we write in this e-mail
Time
Food
Activities
Feelings
Meanings
Opinions
III. Make an outline
Structure：
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IV. Finish the first draft
I’m really glad that...My favorite Chinese festival is
It falls on ... People always eat.. It is a good time to do sth. The most exciting thing for children is that ...
...is a time of... Everywhere is full of love and joy. l like it so much because l think that ...
V. Finish the second draftMarking ladders
Unit 2 I think moon cakes are delicious.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the e-mail into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para_____:I have introduced the time,food,and activities of the festival. (3 points)
Para.____:I have showed people’s feelings,meanings and my opinions about the festival (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共11张PPT)
Unit 2
I think moon cakes are delicious.
Writing
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问你最喜欢的节日。请你根据来信给他写一封回信。
Pre-writing:Activity1
To：LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How are you these days Today in my Chinese class, my teacher told me that there were many interesting Chinese festivals . I’m very interested in them. Can you tell me something about your favorite festival And why do you like it best
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Mike
要求：
1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pre-writing:Activity 2
Analyze the writing topic
Person
The first/third person
Tense
The simple present tense
Text
An e-mail
Reader
Mike who is interested in Chinese festivals
What can we write
Details
1.introduce your favorite festival
2.80 words
Pre-writing:Activity 3
What aspects(方面) can we write
festivals
3
activities
What do people do
1
time
When is it
2
food
What do people eat
6
opinions
Why do you like it
4
feelings
How do people feel
5
meanings
Why do people celebrate it
Pre-writing:Activity 4
What sentence structure can we use
festivals
3
activities
It’s a good time to.../The most exciting thing for...is that...
1
time
It falls/is on... It is celebrated in/on...
2
food
people always eat...
6
opinions
I like ...so much because I think that...
4
feelings
People feel.../It’s full of love and joy everywhere we go.
5
meanings
It’s a time of reunion.
Beginning
Lead to the topic.(寒暄+引入）
My favorite Chinese festival is ...... is one of the traditional festivals in China.
Body
Time/food/activities
Ending
feelings/meanings/opinions
I like ...so much because I think that...
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2
3
Structure
Pre-writing:Activity 4 Make an outline
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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While-Writing
While-writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content: name/ time/food/activities/meaning/opinions
some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar and language
Post-writing:Activity 1
Post-writing:Activity 1
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing:Activity 2
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Dear Mike,
I’m fine these days.I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival.
It falls on the first day of the first lunar month, ends on the fifteenth day. Before the Spring Festival, people always spend some time cleaning their house as carefully as possible so that they can sweep away bad luck. And people usually prepare all kinds of delicious food. On the eve of the new year, family members always get together and have a big dinner happily. At midnight, lt is a good time to set off fireworks to welcome new year with excitement. During the festival, people visit friends and relatives and wish each other good luck for the new year. The most exciting thing for children is that they can get hongbao from their parents and relatives, which means lucky money.
All in all, Spring Festival is a time of family reunion. Everywhere is full of love and joy. l like it so much because l think that it is a good chance for me to spend time and have communication with my family.
Li Hua
Post-writing:Activity 3
