(共10张PPT)
Unit 1
How can you become good learners
writing
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From: Li Ming
Dear classmates,
How is it going I am Li Ming from No.2 Middle School. I have difficulties in learning English all the time. However, next year, I will take part in high school entrance examination. Therefore, I am worried about my English and I want to improve my English. Can you help me
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Ling Ming
Pre-writing:Activity1
Please write an e-mail to Li Ming ,give him some suggestions about the best ways to learn English.
提示内容：
1.What are your suggestions(the best ways)
2. Why do you think they’re the best ways
要求：
1.At least 3 ways
2.At least 80 words
Pre-writing:Activity 2
Analyze the writing topic
Person
The second person
Tense
The simple present/future tense
Text
An e-mail
Reader
Li Ming who is poor in English learning
What can we write
Details
1.give some suggestions about how to learn English well and show the reasons.
2.80 words
Pre-writing:Activity 3
Best ways to learn Reasons Examples
Being interested in what you do If you are interested in something. your brain will be more active and .. For example,If you like music,you can learn English by listening to English songs
What aspects(方面) can we write
Pre-writing:Activity 4
Make an outline
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Lead to the topic.(寒暄+共情+点题）
conclusion(总结):show the feelings
topic sentence
I’ m very happy to hear from you.I know that you are worried about your English.Don’t worry.Let me give you some advice about how to learn English well.
The first suggestion
There are ____ best ways/skills to learn English.
Firstly, I think you could...This is because...For example,...
The second suggestion
The third suggestion
Besides, it's also a good idea to ...If you...you will... And you can...
What 's more, why not...By doing..., you can...
All in all,I hope my advice can be helpful to you.
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While-writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content:best ways/reasons/examples
some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar and language
Post-writing:Activity 1
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing:Activity 2
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Dear Li Ming,
I’ m very happy to hear from you.I know that you are worried about your English. Don’t worry.Let me give you some advice about how to learn English well.
First of all, I think you could learn English by being interested in it. This is because if you are interested in something, your brain will be more active and it is also easier to pay attention for a long time. For example, if you like music, you can learn English by listening to English songs.My pronunciation improves a lot in this way. Besides, it's also a good idea to read English books. If you read English books that are well written and show good use of the language, you can learn many new words and see how they are used. You can learn English by reading well-known story books like Harry Potter or simplified versions of famous books like Pride and Prejudice. Reading a lot of English books really helps with my reading speed. I' m not a slow reader anymore.What 's more, why not watch English movies By watching movies, you can practice listening to natural speech and you can use the storyline, body language, actions and facial expressions to improve your understanding. Popular movies like Hunger Games and K'ung Fu Panda are all fun to watch.
All in all,I hope my advice can be helpful to you.
I' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Post-writing:Activity 3Marking ladders
Unit 1 How can you become good learners
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the letter into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para_____:I have given 3 best ways to learn and given reasons and examples. (3 points)
Para.____:I have showed my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time Unit 1 How can you become good learners
Writing Name
Analyze the topic
Please write an e-mail to Li Ming ,give him some suggestions about the best ways to learn English.
Writing Topic
Dear classmates,
How is it going I am Li Ming from No.2 Middle School. I have difficulties in learning English all the time. However, next year, I will take part in high school entrance examination. Therefore I am worried about my English and I want to improve my English. Can you help me
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Ling Ming
提示内容：
1.What are your suggestions(at least 3 best ways)
2. Why do you think they’re the best ways
写作要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
II. What aspects(方面) can we write in this travel article
Best ways to learn Reasons Examples
III. Make an outline
Structure：
________________________________________________________________________________________
IV. Finish the first draft
I’ m very glad to hear from you.You said ...I’d like to give you some advice about how to ...
Topic sentence There are ...best ways/skills to learn English Suggestions:ways to learn 1.Firstly, I think you could...This is because...For example,... 2.Besides, it's also a good idea to ...If you...you will... And you can... 3.What 's more, why not...By doing..., you can... conclusion(总结): In a world,I hope these ways can be helpful .If you take my advice ,there is nothing to worry about.
In a word,... is a beautiful and amazing city to visit and relax. It is worth traveling.
V. Finish the second draft
