2025年中考话题写作复习课件(共14张PPT)

(共14张PPT)
78. 龙承载着勇气、智慧等美好寓意，中华儿女一直以龙的传人(the descendants of Loong)而自豪。发生在你自己或他人身上的哪件事，让你瞬间觉得我们就是龙的传人？恰逢龙年，请你以“The Spirit of Loong”为题，根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文向学校英文期刊投稿。
写作训练-真题模拟
内容要点 写作参考
About Loong What do Chinese people think of Loong
A story What you do or see that makes you believe you are the descendants of Loong
Your understanding Which spirit of Loong does the story show Why
注意：（1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考仅提供思路；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Tip 1: Topic exploring is the first step to complete a writing task.(审题是完成写作任务的第一步)
Tip 2: Have a clear structure.(文章要有清晰的结构)
01
03
02
04
定体裁：
定人称：
定时态：
列要点：
01
03
02
04
写作训练-思路点拨：三定一列
narration
(记叙文)
过去时态
第一人称和第三人称
列提纲、
写句子
78. 龙承载着勇气、智慧等美好寓意，中华儿女一直以龙的传人(the descendants of Loong)而自豪。发生在你自己或他人身上的哪件事，让你瞬间觉得我们就是龙的传人？恰逢龙年，请你以“The Spirit of Loong”为题，根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文向学校英文期刊投稿。
写作训练-真题模拟
内容要点 写作参考
About Loong What do Chinese people think of Loong
A story What you do or see that makes you believe you are the descendants of Loong
Your understanding Which spirit of Loong does the story show Why
注意：（1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考仅提供思路；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Tip 3: Make good use of the information that is provided.
(利用好所给信息和提示词)
Loong is seen as a symbol of …
+ n.
courage/bravery
wisdom
Chinese culture …
As descendants of Loong, we are proud of ourselves.
Here comes my story.
Think: What kind of story can we write about
story the spirit of Loong
show positive energy
hard-working, strong-minded
brave, helpful, kind
smart, wise
Tip 4 : Make use of the texts we have learned.
be hard-working,
be strong-minded
be helpful, kind
be united
(the spirit of unity)
Basic linking words
首先：first, firstly, to begin with, first of all
然后：secondly, besides, what’s more, in addition, moreover
最后：at last, finally, last but not least, above all, all in all,
to sum up, on the whole
Tip 5: Use linking words.
得分
So in total, it can get _____ points.
得分
So in total, it can get _____ points.
得分
So in total, it can get _____ points.
Loong is seen as a symbol of courage in China. As descendants of Loong, we’re proud of ourselves. Here comes my story.
Last year, we lost in the final school basketball match. It disappointed us because we trained hard. However, our captain cheered us and we decided to train better as a team. We practiced more carefully every day, even during holidays. Finally, our hard work paid off(得到好结果). We were the winner this year.
In my opinion, those who never give up are true descendants of Loong. Keep the spirit in mind and we can get through all difficulties.
(99 words)
Loong is seen as a symbol of Chinese culture. Chinese people always think Loong is brave and clever. Besides, Chinese people take pride in being the descendants of Loong. For me I think Loong usually sticks to something and never gives up.
Last term, my English was very bad. Every English class was like a bad dream for me. My English teacher told me to keep learning English. Also she told me some useful studying skills like making word cards and watching English movies. After that I became hard-working. I always stayed up late in order to get good grades. I made full use of time and I whenever I have problems with my English, I asked the teacher for help. Because of my hard work and my teacher's help, I have made great progress in English.
Never give up! That’s the spirit of Loong. I believe I am the descendants of Loong.
Beginning: __________________________
Body: ______________________________
Ending: ____________________________
① where/when/who/what/why/how
② linking words
Polish your writing.
Checklist 采分点 分值 Items 自评 互评
1. 内容充实， 覆盖要点 7☆ * Cover all key points(要点). * Add details(细节). __☆ __☆
2. 用词适切， 语法正确， 句型多样 7☆ * Use different sentence patterns & advanced(高级的) vocabulary. __☆ __☆
3. 结构紧凑， 意思连贯 4☆ * Have a clear structure(结构). * Use proper linking words(连词). __☆ __☆
4. 书写规范， 词数适宜 2☆ * Have a clear and beautiful handwriting. * Have proper words (80-100). __☆ __☆
Let’s practice.
宁波2022
homework
Level A: Polish your writing The Spirit of Loong.
Level B: Finish the new writing Let’s Enjoy Working!