(共18张PPT)
表达技巧 —— 定语从句
初中英语写作微技能
What kind of music do you like
She likes music that she can dance to.
He likes rock music which makes him energetic.
I like music that has great lyrics.
Is there a piece of music that touches you the most
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Which piece of music moved the writer in the concert
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Which piece of music moved the writer in the concert
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Which piece of music moved the writer in the concert
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Can you find any information about Abing
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Can you find any information about Abing
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Can you find any information about Abing
The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me
It was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893.
Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
Attributive Clause (定语从句)
refer to and qualify a noun(or a pronoun) in the main clause
which
that
who
object
person
Have a try:
I like music ____________ I can dance to.
The musician _____________ I respect most is Lang Lang.
His songs are full of energy _____________ can cheer me up.
which/that
who/that
which/that
Last night, one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me. The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain. The piece had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue (Moon Reflected on Second Spring), but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard.
The music was written by Abing, a folk musician who was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893. By the end of his life, he could play 600 pieces of music. Many of these were written by Abing himself. It is a pity that only six pieces of music in total were recorded for the future to hear, but his popularity continues to this day. Today, Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great erhu masters play and praise.
What if change them into simple sentences
One piece of music especially moved me. It was played on the erhu.
It was one of the most moving pieces of music. I’ve never heard this before.
He is a folk musician. He was born in the city of Wuxi in 1893.
Abing’s Erquan Yingyue is wonderful. All the great erhu masters play and
praise it.
Function 1
Jay Chou is a very famous singer who writes his own songs.
Have a try:
My favorite band is the Beatles. The Beatles are famous all around the world.
____________________________________________________________________________________
Jay Chou is a very famous singer. He writes his own songs.
Sentences have variety: make them more interesting to read
Function 1
The song that I like most is called Yesterday Once More.
Have a try:
The musician is extremely talented. He is introduced to me by my friend.
____________________________________________________________________________________
The song is called Yesterday Once More. I like it most.
Sentences have variety: more interesting to read
Function 2
Give more information in one sentence
I love country music.
I love country music which_________________________________________.
brings us back to good old days
Have a try:
I love country music which/that______________________.
My favorite singer is Garth Brooks. He was born in 1962 in the United States. He is a very famous country singer. He has already sold more than 120 million records. He is one of the most successful musicians in American history.
Let’s polish: Try to make a sentence with an attributive clause.
My favorite singer is Garth Brooks who is a very famous country singer.
Choose one question and try to write two to three sentences about it. Don’t forget to use Attributive Clauses.
I like music which has beautiful melodies and lyrics. My favorite band is “Coldplay” who come from England. But in fact, I enjoy all kinds of music that make me happy or inspired.
Don’t use attributive clauses all the time.