2025年中考英语观点类作文课课件(共19张PPT)

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In my opinion, it's...
In my view(在我看来）, it's...
I think it’s…
Which trip do you want to choose
Why
As for me（对我来说）, I want to have a trip to ...because.... In addition (另外）, …
As for me, I want to have a trip to ...
For one thing(一方面）, …For another（另一方面）,…
In my opinion, I want to have a trip to ... On one hand (一方面）, …On the other hand （另一方面）, …
In my view, I want to have a trip to ... First of all（首先） , … What’s more（而且）,…
As for me（对我来说）, I want to have a trip to ...
because.... In addition (另外）, …
2. As for me, I want to have a trip to ... For one thing(一方面）, …For another（另一方面）,…
4. In my view, I want to have a trip to ... First of all（首先） , … What’s more（而且）,…
3. In my opinion, I want to have a trip to ... On one hand (一方面）, …On the other hand （另一方面）, …
★ ★ ★ Conjunctions(连接词）can help make our composition(作文）better!
Recently Guangtouqiang and the bears have a hot discussion about the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.
Different people have different opinions.
不同的人有不同的观点。
Countryside
relaxing; fresh air…
not easy to take public transportation （交通不方便） …
relaxing
fresh air
not easy to take public transportation.
in the countryside.
the fresh air in the countryside is good for our health.
Guangtouqiang wants to________________________.
have a trip to the countryside
it is very
there is
in the countryside.
it is
For one thing,
For another,
However（然而）,
Countryside
relaxing; fresh air…
not easy to take public transportation （交通不方便） …
Guangtouqiang wants to have a trip to the countryside. For one thing, it’s very relaxing in the countryside. For another, the fresh air is good for our health. However, it’s not easy to take public transportation.
opinion(观点)
reasons(原因)
City
exciting；delicious food
crowded （拥挤的）; expensive （昂贵的）
The bears want to____________________.
it’s very
have a trip to the city
exciting
delicious food
crowded
expensive
in the city
there are many kinds of
the traffic is
and the things are
Yet，
（然而）
On one hand,
On the other hand,
.
.
.
City
exciting；delicious food
crowded （拥挤的）; expensive （昂贵的）
The bears want to have a trip to the city. On one hand, it’s exciting in the city. On the other hand, there are many kinds of delicious food. Yet, the traffic is too crowded and the things are very expensive.
opinion(观点)
reasons(原因)
Check the following parts:
1. Structure (结构： beginning --- body --- ending )
2. Contents (内容：opinions and reasons ;
use all of the key words)
3. Conjunctions (连接词）
4. Grammar and spelling ( 语法和拼写）
5. Write clearly（书写清楚）
Countryside City
relaxing, fresh air…
not easy to take public transportation… Exciting…
crowded, expensive…
在英语课上, 老师组织了 “ A trip to the countryside or to the City”的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你的选择与理由。
注意：（1）短文必须包含表格中的信息，并作适当发挥；（2）文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；（3）80—100词，所给的文章开头供选择，不计入词数。
In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.
Some students want to have a trip to the countryside. For one thing, ... For another, ... However, ....
Some students want to have a trip to the city. On one hand, ... On the other hand, ... Yet, …
All in all / In a word / In short （总而言之）, these are our opinions. Can you tell me about your ideas
（结尾）
Check the following parts:
1. Structure (结构： beginning --- body --- ending )
2. Contents (内容：opinions and reasons )
3. Conjunctions (连接词）
4. Grammar and spelling ( 语法和拼写）
5. Write clearly (书写清楚)
作文满分为20分，其中书写2分，作文分为18分，按四档给分。
档次
分值 评分标准
第四档 15～18 描述了所有的信息，内容合理、丰富；用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误；行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰。
第三档 11～14 描述了大部分的信息，内容比较合理；用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误，但不影响理解；行文基本连贯，连接词使用基本恰当，指代基本清晰。
第二档 6～10 描述了小部分信息，内容不合理；有较多的语言错误，一定程度上影响理解；行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰。
第一档 0～5 交白卷或描述的内容与主题无关；有大量语言错误，影响了理解；没有连贯的意识。
项目 分值 评分标准
书 写 0～2 2分：大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁；
1分：大小写、标点有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚可辨认；
0分：大小写、标点错误较多，词数严重不足，书写难以辨认
Finish the composition and try to polish （润色） it.