2016广西贺州市高考英语二轮：短文改错借鉴选编（3）及答案
短文改错
We had guests last night who have not stayed 1. _______
in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 2. _______
because that they were going out early in the 3. _______
morning. They came back lately and had some 4. _______
tea. I came into the living room and saw one of 5. _______
them just go through the kitchen door but turn 6. _______
on the light. He was looking for a glass the 7. _______
cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 8. _______
not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, 9. _______
“What can I do We are guests after all.” 10. ______
答案
1. have → had
2. ago → before
3. 删除that
4. lately → late
5. 此行无错误
6. but → and
7. glass后添加in
8. ideas → idea
9. me → myself
10. We → They
短文改错。
My cousin Xi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s 76. _____________
last Sunday. We were r ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _____________
some big stones ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _________
Xiao Hong’s legs got ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) serious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _____________
couldn’t move a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. ____________
Waving our ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. ____________
us, they run to th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e spot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82___________
their help, we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) were all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. ____________
medical treatment in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )time. Although we do not know about their 84. ________
names, we fell ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _______
【参考答案】
76.on︿ a 77. t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hen →when 78 were去掉 79 serious → seriously 80.正确 81. hand→hands 82.run→ran 83.all→both 84.about 去掉 85.they︿are
短文改错
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________
She was my close f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )riend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________
on a phone, the f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________
burnt. I quickly turn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed off the gas, opening all the 81．_______________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________
surprise, two fir ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________
was rather worried. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I told about the firemen that it 84．_______________
was my careless ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________
【参考答案】
76．as→When 77．answer后加it 78．She→It
79．a→the 80． room后加was
81．opening→opened 82．With→To 83．√
84．去掉about 85．which→that
短文改错。
Dear sir,
Thank you very muc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )h for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________
about your ho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )liday and the people you meet in Rome. It 77. _____________
sounded great fun and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )how I wish I could have been with 78. _____________
you. Thank you also ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________
for my collection. Mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st of them were those what I had 80. _____________
been expecting for lon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g. You said by your letter that 81. _____________
you wish to have so ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________
I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________
Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________
write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________
your college life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Jason
【参考答案】76.I后加am 77. meet→met 78.√
79.去掉them 80.what→that或去掉those
81. by→in 82.wish→wished 83.little→few
84.your→my 84.what→how
短文改错
There is a t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old days ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ho was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personality th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our mon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )itor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we di ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错。
One day I happened t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o find a chatting room in
my QQ，there people were chatting in English．I tried
to chat with some o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f them．T0 my surprised，I found
the oral English of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) some junior students were better
than me．I asked the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I
would spend one ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hour practise my oral English on QQ．
Day by day I lea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rned from many useful words and
expressions ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )．With time went by．I found that I could
even communicate some college students freely．
【参考答案】
76.√ 77.there-where 78.surprised-surprise
79.were-was 80.me-mine 81.But-So
82.praltise-prsltising 83.from 84.with-Aswent-going 85.with
短文改错。
Now I have taken mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re than ten years at school. As 63. ________
a child，I regarded my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) school a beautiful garden. I 64. ________
went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag.
Time flew very fast. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Now I’m studying at a senior 65. ________
middle school. Ever ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y day morning I go to school early. 66. ________
In the evening， I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) do a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. ________
working hard， expect ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a good harvest. During breaks 68. ________
between class ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )， I often go out to enjoy myself. I’m 69. ________
sure I’ll never ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) forget wonderful time I spent at school. 70. ________
【参考答案】63.taken→been 64.school后加as
65.flew→flies 66.去掉day
67.√ 68. expect→expecting 69. class→classes 70. wonderful后加the
短文改错。
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late af ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _____
Otherwise we may feel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )both physically or mentally tired. 78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. ______
instead of getti ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng even tired. So don’t do anything that 81. _______
will make you too e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )xcited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. ______
I usually do som ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. ______
with my classmate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s or just take a walk during the break. 84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 85. ______
【参考答案】
take---taking. 77.class—classes. 78.or—and.
79. did—do. 80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired. 82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正确。 85. freshly---fresh.
76.
77.
78.
79.
80.
81.
82.
83.
84.
85.2016广西贺州市高考英语二轮：短文改错借鉴选编（1）及答案
【2015·浙江】
My old classroom was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
2015年浙江卷 【答案】【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。
1．【答案】第一句：side→sides【 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )解析】名词单复数误用。三个“面”应该用复数。第一句：side→sides side是可数名词，前面有three修饰，side要改为sides。
2．【答案】第一句：from→of【解析】 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )介词误用。由制成be made of能看出原材料，用from表示看不出原材料。第一句：from→of be made from由 制成，看不出原材料；be made of由 制成/组成。看得出原材料，所以from要改为of。from→of 考查介词搭配。 make of与make from两者都常用在被动语态中，表示“某物由……构成的”。make of的原材料是看的到的，即平常我们说的物理现象。比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是由木头做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees.纸张是由木材做成的。是一种化学变化，从纸上是看不出一棵树的。
3．【答案】第二句：sit→sitting【解析】动词形式错误。Enjoy后用v-ing形式。第二句：sit→sitting。
4．【答案】第三句：eas ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y→easily【解析】词性错误。此处用副词修饰动词see。第三句：easy→easily修饰动词see应用副词，所以easy改为easily。
5.【答案】第五句：is→was【解析 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )】时态错误。根据上下文，用过去时。第五句：is→was时态误用。全文用的都是过去时，所以要把is改为was。
6．【答案】第六句：them→it ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )【解析】代词误用。此处指代前面提到的park，用单数。第六句：them→it代词误用。这里指代的是park，所以要把them改为it。
7．【答案】第七句：删掉could ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )后的not【解析】从句意判断：从远处能欣赏到雪山美景。第七句：删掉could后的not根据上下文可知这里应该是表肯定，所以把not删掉。
8．【答案】第九句：在hurry前加a【解析 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )】考查固定搭配in a hurry急忙。第九句：在第一个in后加a固定短语in a hurry仓促；匆忙。
9．【答案】第十句：fel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t→feel【解析】词形错误。Make的宾补用动词原形make sb do sth.。第十句：felt→feel make sb．do sth．使某人做某事，所以felt要改为feel。felt→feel 考查使役动词的用法。make sb do sth.是使役动词的用法。
10．【答案】第十一句： ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )if→Although/Though【解析】连词误用。根据上下文逻辑关系，应译成：尽管那个时候我只是个在教室里学习的小孩，但我永远不会忘记的。第十一句：If→Although/Though句意：虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子，但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把If改为Although或Though。If→Although/Though 考查连词的用法。根据句意“尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不会忘记它。”表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。
短文改错
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost 76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry 77.
Experts have fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )und that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one is feeling stressed, it set free, 79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get 80.
rid of the stress ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and you will often feel better before a 81.
good cry. Of course ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sex has nothing to do to crying. 82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more 83.
of this hormone th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )an men. But next time you feel like 84.
bursting into tears ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), go ahead. It won't good to your health. 85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．
(2013·昆明市适应性检测)
We had a discus ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sion on “overnight fame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussion ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) on “overnight fame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as example. Only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is the process in which try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(2013·浙江省五校联考)
A young man called Lo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man ca ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lled Low Carbon Brother a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a life with so many modern around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改错
At Chinese New Year ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days befo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re New Year’s Day, I went out with my 77. ____________
friends from school ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. 78. ____________
It was the noisiest re ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )staurant I had ever been to, and the 79. ____________
food was delicious ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). After that, we went to shopping for new 80. ____________
clothes and found l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ots bargains. I visited my old teacher, 81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my sur ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )prised, he said he didn’t find Chinese 82. ____________
New Year very exc ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) many tests this week, so I have to 84. ____________
start studying hard ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) again now. I wish the holiday were long! 85. ____________
书面表达 （满分30分）
61. bunch 62. praise 63. permission 64. blame 65. consideration
66. differs ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 67. familiar 68. relief 69. delivered 70. gradually
71. misled 72. le ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ngth 73. promoting 74.appointed 75. annoyed
76. have改为had
77. 此行无错。
78. the改为a。
79. and改为but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改为surprise。
83. excited改为exciting。
84. 去掉第二个so。
85. long改为longer。2016广西贺州市高考英语二轮：短文改错借鉴选编（5）及答案
短文改错
There is a publ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ic library in every town in Britain. Anyone 1._______
can borrow books if ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) he or she wish. In some places you 2._______
may borrow as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )more books as you need, but in others 3._______
you are limited in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a certain number of books. You may 4._______
keep the books ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for several weeks so as you can have 5._______
enough time to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )finish it. If the book you want is out 6._______
you may ask it to be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) kept for you. Most public libraries 7._______
also have a rea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ding-room, that you can sit at the desk 8._______
and read the dai ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ly newspapers, magazines and the other 9._______
books, but y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou are not permit to take them out. 10.______
答案
1. *
2. wish → wishes
3. more → many
4. in → to
5. as → that
6. it → them
7. ask → ask for
8. that → where
9. 去掉other前的the
10. permit → permitted
短文改错
Dear Mr. Donforth,
I’m writin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. _______
heard that you hav ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. _______
have been learni ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. _______
Since you ha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. _______
know whether you hav ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e seen the old buildings here. We have 5. _______
learned a lot from ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. _______
experience wil ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. _______
help the wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ole class. Could you share you experiences for 8. _______
us It will be su ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. _______
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. ______
答案
1. you 后添加 to 2. *
3. it’s → its 4. 去掉 so
5. here → there 6. you → your
7. knowledges → knowledge 8. for → with
9. hoped → hope 10. possibly → possible
短文改错。
I took part in a geo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )graphy research study group in last term. Our 76 ________
topic was envi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ronmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )here are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars gi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by som ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways throu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )gh dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we com ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
短文改错
There is a tea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________
was in my old da ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ys whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teac ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hers who were very strict to us except 78.________
one female who w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )as young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very har ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________
her own personal ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ity that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________
us to elect our mon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )itor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________
an outing. She didn’ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________
school. It was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________
because we did ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
[2013·新课标II]短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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1.【答案】of---去掉
2. 【答案】have—having
3. 【答案】that—which
4. 【答案】becomes—became
5. 【答案】在day前加the
6. 【答案】interesting---interestingly
7. 【答案】by---with/to
8. 【答案】drank---drunk
9. 【答案】cup—cups
【答案】grow-growth
短文改错。
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
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【参考答案】
I am ∧worker at the t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, people d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ater resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
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and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
[2013·新课标I] 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Ever2016广西贺州市高考英语二轮：短文改错借鉴选编（2）及答案
短文改错
Not all people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 1. _______
the world men a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since 2. _______
long ago, m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any adults and children called their friends together 3. _______
to spend hour ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s, even days play games. One of the reasons people 4. _______
like to play is that ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) sports help them to live happily. In other words, 5. _______
they help to kee ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )p people strong and feel good. When people are 6. _______
playing ga ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mes, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 7. _______
for their ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )health. Having fun with their friends make them happy. 8. _______
many people enjo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y sports by watching the others play. In American 9. _______
big cities, thous ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. and改为but。前文说并非所有的人都喜欢工作， 下文说每个人都喜欢玩， 是转折关系。
2. woman改为women。并列的四个名词均为复数。
3. 在 called前加have。根据句意， 应使用现在完成时。
4. play改为playing。固定搭配， spend hours (in) playing games。
5. 此行无错误。
6. feel改为feeling。固定搭配keep sb. feeling good， 使人们感觉良好。
7. how改为why。how不符合句意。
8. make改为makes。分词短语作主句， 谓语动词用单数。
9. 把others前的冠词the去掉。许多人喜欢观看别人运动， others前加冠词意为“其余的人”， 与文意不符。
10. sell改为buy。在大城市里人们买票观看体育比赛。
短文改错
I was a high school ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) student then, from low-income 76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. A ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )more important as what I earned. 85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was to c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember goin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
短文改错---1
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答案及解析
Choose 改为 Choosing 。动名词作主语
have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语
3.Tradition 改为Traditional
4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数
5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事
6.choose 后面加from
7.正确
8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语
9.little改为 less 。 less 和后面的more构成对应关系
10.a去掉 。 health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康
短文改错
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5.
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答案及解析：
which改为as ， 非限制定语从句放于句首用as，再说as we all know 众所周知
into去掉， form healthyeating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
we 改为us
with改为about ，be particular about为固定词组
many改为much
health改为 healthy
vegetable改为vegetables ，vegetable是可数名词
Beside 改为Besides ， Beside 是在…旁边，而Besides是“除此之外”
正确
study 前面加to表目的
短文改错
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we should wait ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
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答案及解析
1. worked 前面加who，这里因该是who引导的定语从句修饰前面的farmer
2. 正确
3. lie 改为lying
4. him 改为 himself
5. get前面加to ， 这里用不定式做真正的主语
6. dreamed 改为dreaming ，用动名词做伴随状语
7. foolish 改为foolishness
8. are 改为were ，时态要前后一致
9. should 后面加not
10. reward 改为rewards2016广西贺州市高考英语二轮：短文改错借鉴选编（4）及答案
短文改错
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It was very nice to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) hear from you for such a long time. I’m 1._______
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Yours,
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答案
1. for → after
2. 去掉been
3. ways→way
4. at与school之间插入the
5. are→is
6. in→on
7. another→other
8. planning→planned
9.free前添加be
10. older→old
[2013·新课标I] 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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scared my classm ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
I hardly remembe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
hold
old songs. I was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
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and
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when
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Ever
【2013·四川卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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61. 【答案】difficulty--- difficult
62. 【答案】hardly--- hard。
63. 【答案】asking--- asked.
64. 【答案】第二个to去掉。
65. 【答案】think--- thinking.
66. 【答案】all---both.
【答案】same前加the.
【答案】tests--- test.
【答案】so---or.
70. 【答案】does---did.
短文改错。
In England, afterno ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on tea, taken between four or five, 76_________
is the most informal ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )meal of the day. If you are a friend 77_________
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been invited. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Very often it is not served at a table. 79_________
The member and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) visitors take tea in the sitting room. 80__________
Each person had a cup ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and saucer, a spoon and a 81 __________
small plate for bread ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )-and-butter and cake. On the way, 82___________
do not help you ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to cake first; bread-and butter first, 83__________
then cake if there is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any. Other piece of advice is: do not put 84__________
more than one piece of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) bread or cake at same time. 85___________
【参考答案】
76, or----and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 77.right 78.drop ----drop in 79.been---being
80.member----members ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 81.had----has 82.On ----By 83.you---yourself
84.Other---Another 85.at ---at the
【2013·陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
（第二段）第一句go→went。
第二句ours→our。
第三句so去掉。
第四句Before→After。
第四句impatiently→impatient。
第五句中and→but。
第六句were→was。
第六句中and ∧fish-a。
第七句minute→minutes。
第八句Felt→Feeling。
