重庆渝中区2016高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（1）
2016年高考英语专项---改错题
题型解读：短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )正文章错误的能力，进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。
命题特点：1）错误类型相对稳定（错词、多词、缺词三种类型）2）考点覆盖面广、分布合理3）难度保持平稳。
考查类型：错词、多词、缺词
考点分布
近三年高考短文改错考点分布表
冠词 名词 代词 形容词或副词 介词 连词 动词及时态 非谓语动词 主谓一致
2015年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 1 2 1 1 3 0 0
2015年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1 1 2 2 1 0 2 1 0
2014年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 0 4 1 2 1 0 0
2014年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1 1 1 2 2 0 2 0 1
2013年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 1 2 1 2 1 1 0
2013年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1 2 1 1 2 0 2 1 0
应试技巧：通读全文，掌握大意；分句阅读，整句找错；反复通读，复查验证。
解题注意要点：
1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。
2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。
3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。
2012模拟短文改错A
If someone asks you how you can make you always 1. ________
happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 2. ________
a proper answer．Did you remember the old saying“No 3. ________
human being can really happy who is not giving or trying 4. ________
to give happiness to others” If you will always think of 5. ________
taking more from others and give them less，you won’t be 6. ________
able to have ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )happiness in your life even you are very rich. 7. ________
Here’s an article f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or you. If each of you follow it, there 8. ________
will be all end o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f many unhappy days of yours．So you should 9. ________
learn to give up ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )your own interests when necessarily to do so. 10. ________
【参考答案及解析】
1. 将always 前的you 改为you ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rself 考查反身代词的用法。此处需掌握短语make oneself happy使自己高兴。
2. find 后加it 考查it作形式宾语。此处it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式短语。
3. Did-Do考查动词时态。根据文意应用一般现在时。
4. really 前加 be 考查谓语动词。此处形容词happy前缺谓语动词be。
5. 删除 will 考查动词时态。在条件状语从句中用一般现在时代替一般将来时。
6. give—giving 考查动名词。此处and前后为并列关系，故改为动名词。
7. even 后加 if ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) / though; 或者 even—though / although 考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意应改为even if或even though。
8. follow—follows 考查主谓一致。此句的主语是each故用单数形式。
9. 正确 经分析此句正确。
10. necessarily—necessary考查be necessary to do的结构。
2012模拟短文改错C
Good health ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )is the most valuable possession a person can have, 1. ______
so one can not rega ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rd good health as certain to happen. It’s 2.
important to rememb ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er that body needs proper care in order 3. _______
to be healthy. Th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere are three things that a person can do stay 4.
in good shape. First ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ly, eat the right foods is good for health. 5.
Vegetables and fru ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )its are specially important. Enough sleep 6. _______
is also important. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Finally, get plenty of exercises. Sports are 7. ________
not only good f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or one’s body, but it can also help build 8. ________
friendship with oth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ers people. If everyone were to do the three, 9. _______
the world would be a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )happier and healthy place. 10. _______
【参考答案及解析】
1、正确 经分析正确。
2、so—but考查句间逻辑。根据谓文意此处为转折意义故改为but。
3、body前加a / the / our考查名词的用法。可数名词前需加冠词或修饰语。
4、do后加to 考查不定式的用法。两个动词连用第二个用不定式的形式。
5、eat---eating考查动名词短语作主语。
6、specially--- ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )-especially 考查副词词义辨析。此处especially尤其，特别地；specially专门地，特意地。
7、exercises----exercise考查名词词义。此处exercise意为“锻炼”，故用单数形式。
8、it---they考查代词指代一致。根据文意此处they指sports。
9、却掉people或others---other 考查代词的用法。其他人可用other people或others。
10、heathy---heathier 考查形容词的比较级。此处and前后并列关系，故改为heathier。
2012模拟短文改错B
Angela works a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t a university as adviser. Students can 1.
come and see her for many problems if they need help 2.
or advices. Most of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) them are worried about their studies 3.
and exams. Some of them have problems connect with 4.
renting flats, thoug ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )h the biggest problem was loneliness. 5.
Universities are excit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing places but some students find difficult 6.
to make friends. T ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hey miss their families but feel lost in the 7.
new environment. Th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ey're upset. Angela's job is to listen to and 8.
try to understand wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ether they are feeling. And of course she also 9.
gives practical a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dvice when she is needed. 10.
【参考答案及解析】
1. as后加an 考查冠词的用法。此处adviser是可数名词，主语为单数故其前加an。
2. see改为ask 考查语意的改错。根据语意应为“问问题”。
3. advices改为advice 考查名词的单复数。此处advice是不可数名词，故不加s。
4. problems后加which考查定语从句的关系词。
5. was改为is 考查动词时态。根据文意此处应为一般现在时。
6. find后加it 考查形式宾语it的用法。动词find后应加形式宾语it，后面的不定式是真正的宾语。
7. but改为and 考查上下文的逻辑关系。根据文意前后为递进关系而不是转折关系。
8. 去掉to 考查动词短语的用法。此处没有被听的对象，故去掉to。
9. whether改为what 考查宾语从句的连接词。此处what作feel的宾语。
10. she改为it考查代词的用法。此处改为when it is needed=when needed。
2012模拟短文改错C
It is Sunday.Li ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Ming is busy with working on his lessons 1.
in the afternoon at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) home. During a break, he relaxes in the 2.
Window，expecting enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy 3.
traffic seems ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to remind him of something.Like a Senior 3 4.
student,facin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g with the college entrance exams, he feels time is 5.
more or less limited ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for him.He thinks he must careful plan 6.
anything in order to solve the remaining problems with 7.
his lessons but prepar ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e for the coming exams.Meanwhile, 8.
he has to take good care of him.Li Ming is determined 9.
to try his best so tha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t he would go to a good university. 10.
【参考答案及解析】
1. 去掉with或with改为in 考查固定短语的用法。此处应为be busy doing或be busy in doing。
2.第二个 in改为by 考查介词的含义。此处by the window意为：在窗户旁边。
3. enjoy前加to 考查动词的用法。此处应为expect to do sth。
4. Like改为As 考查介词的含义。此处as a student意为：作为一名学生。
5. faced改为faci ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng或去掉with 考查face作动词的用法。动词face的用法有两种：be faced with或face+宾语。
6. careful改为carefully 考查副词的用法。修饰动词用副词。
7. anything改为everything 考查不定代词的用法。根据文意应为计划好一切事情。
8. but改为 and 考查句间的逻辑关系。此处为递进关系而不是转折关系。
9. him改为himself 考查反身代词的用法。此处意为：他不得不照顾好他自己。
10. would改为will 考查动词时态。此处will表意愿。
2012模拟短文改错D
Animals are close friend of human beings．Their existence 1.
especially that ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the existence of rare animals，makes the whole 2.
world lively and colorful．Unlucky,we have heard such news that 3.
rare animals，even kee ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ping in the zoo，can’t escape being hurt 4.
and killed．You may wonder how this can happen．The reason 5.
is that some people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) lacked understanding about these animals 6.
and care little about them.
However,we should ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) make information about rare animals 7.
known to the pub ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lic．Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals 8.
is duty of everyone．Meanwhile，we should take active and effective 9.
measures．After all， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )protecting animals are protecting ourselves． 10.
【参考答案及解析】
1．friend---friends考查名词的单复数。根据主语animals可知，其后应一致用复数形式。
2. that去掉 考查代词的用法。此处especially后直接接名词即可。
3． Unlucky---Unluckily考查副词的用法。此处副词作评注性状语修饰整个句子，故用unluckily。
4． Keeping---Kept考查分词的用法。根据文意动物被关在动物园里，故用过去分词kept。
5．√经分析本句正确。
6．Lacked---1ack考查动词时态。根据文意此处应用一般现在时。
7．However----Therefore考查副词的用法。此处表结果故用therefore。
8. on---in考查短语的用法。解题关键：掌握短语keek sth in mind。
9．Duty前加the考查冠词的用法。根据文意应用the duty of everyone。
10．Are---Is考查主谓一致。动名词短语作主语谓语动词用单数。
考查点
试卷重庆渝中区2016高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（4）
【河北省唐山一中】
短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
【参考答案】短文改错：
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2012模拟短文改错M
Today we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning 1．______
we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began 2．______
to climb．The hill was ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) high and some of us got tired 3．______
soon, and all of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) us were very excited．We cheered 4．______
happily when we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )got the top．We had our lunch there 5．_______
and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately， 6．________
when we walked down the hill，We were caught by 7．_______
a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 8．_______
raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached 9．_______
the parking lot s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )afely．In spite of the unexpecting rain 10．______
and wind，we had a good time．
【参考答案及解析】
1. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。
2. late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。
3. 正确 经分析本句正确。
4. and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。
5. got后加to或got改为reac ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hed 考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。
6. 去掉had 考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。
7. by改为in 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。。。。
8. calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。
9. both改为all 考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。
10. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。
2012模拟短文改错N
Of all my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me 1_____
most. He is 34, so h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e looks young for his age. And he’s one of 2______
the most popular tea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more 3______
attention to his w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ay of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_______
He tries different wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ys to make his classes actively and lively. 5______
In his opinion, we sh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ould not only know “what”, but understand 6______
“why”. So, instead g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iving us answers immediately, he encourages us 7______
to think by mys ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )elf whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, 8______
we’ve learned fro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m how to settle problems. He leads us to such a 9_____
wonderful world of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_____
【参考答案及解析】
1. impress改为impresses考 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。
2. so改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。
3. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。
4. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。。。相比应用compared with/to。
5. actively改为active 考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。
6. 正确 经分析本句正确。
7. instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。
8. myself改为ourselves 考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。
9. 去掉from 考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。。。学习，此处不合文意。
10. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。。。that。。。句型。
2012模拟短文改错O
Time seem limited ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) for us Senior Three students. 1_________
Therefore, more ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and more student are studying from early 2_______
morning till ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute 3_________
break. In my opinion, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Take a break between classes is 4_________
not necessary. Other ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )wise, we will feel tired both physically 5_________
and mentally. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )During the break, we should do something 6_________
to get rid of tirednes ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s. What they need is to have a real rest, 7_________
instead getting more t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ired. My break is always pleasing. 8_________
Sometimes I t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ake some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free 9_____
chat with my classmate ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s or just take a walk outside. While the 10_____
next class begins, I feel fresh again.
【参考答案及解析】
1. seem→seems 考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。
2.student→students 考查名词的单复数。根据后面的are可知用复数形式。
3.lately→late 考查形容词、副词的用法。修饰名词afternoon应用形容词。
4.Take→taking考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语作主语，故用动名词形式。
5.去掉not 考查语境的理解。根据文意应为肯定意思。
6. √ 经分析本句正确。
7 they.→we 考查代词指代一致。通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情，故用we。
8. instead 后加of 考查固定短语。根据后面的getting可知用instead of。
9.had→have 考查动词时态。根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时。
10.While→When考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意用when“当。。。的时候”。
2012模拟短文改错P
The other day ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) my father called me, that at first made 1._______
me very glad because of he seldom calls me. I was extra 2.______
happy for that day ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )was his birthday and I thought he 3.______
remembered the date. But to my disappoint, our talk was 4._______
so short and ended so ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )soon. My father called only tell me 5.________
that he has put ano ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ther 1,000 yuan to my account, then hung 6.________
up after I coul ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d even tell him that it was my birthday. Tears 7._______
of sadness cam ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e to my eye. Honestly, I understand that he 8._______
loves me just as tru ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e as my mom, but I’d prefer to hear 9.________
him say it out to me on my birthday． 10._________
【参考答案及解析】
1.that改为 which 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。 此处which替代前文整个句子的内容。
2.去掉of 考查状语从句的连接词。根据后面的句子he seldom calls me可知用because。
3. his改为my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意应是“我的生日”。
4. disappoint改为disappointment 考查固定短语的用法。此处to是介词，其后用名词。
5. only后加to 考查不定式作目的状语。父亲给我打电话只是告诉我。。。。
6.has改为had 考查动词时态。根据文意“存钱”在“打电话”之前，故用过去完成时。
7. after改为before 考 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )查句意的理解。我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了。此处before意为：没来得及。。。就。。。
8. eye改为eyes 考查名词的单复数。此处指双眼用eyes。
9. true改为truly 考查副词的用法。修饰动词love用副词。
10. 正确 经分析本句正确。
【2014高考英语四川省绵阳市二模试题】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【2014高考英语四川省成都市一模试题】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】改错
1. 去掉第一行the 2. exact-exactly 3.for-through
4.either-also 5. some-any 6. allow后加to
7. museum-museums 8. without-with 9. Making-Make
10. understood-understand
2012模拟短文改错Q
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but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 9. ________
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 10. ________
【参考答案及解析】
1. and → but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处表转折用but。
2. preciously → precious 考查形容词的用法。修饰不定代词用形容词且放在其后。
3. lucky后加to考查形容词的用法。此处考查短语be lucky to do sth。
4. 去with 考查介词的用法。此处face是及物动词，故不用介词with。
5. tree → trees 考查名词的单复数。根据语境应为多棵树。
6. walked → walking考查现在分词作宾补。此处考查see sb doing sth。
7. 正确 经分析本句
8. their → my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意应为“在我眼前”。
9. 去a 考查冠词的用法。解题关键：free time是不可数名词，其前不能用a。
10. enjoyed → enjoy 考查动词时态。根据语境应为一般现在时。
【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟考试改编】短文改错
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题改编】
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处锗误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【2014高考英语吉林省实验中学一模试题】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】改错：
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【2014四川省资阳市第一次诊断性考试】
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
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1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。
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【2012浙江省宁波市八校联考】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
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【参考答案】改错（共10分）
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2012模拟短文改错I
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【参考答案及解析】
1. 正确 经分析本句正确。
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5. its – your 考查代词指代一致。此处your应与有保持一致。
6. is – be 考查句意理解及并列关系。此处be与know并列。
7. problem – problems 考查名词的单复数。根据句意可知可能的问题不止一个。
8. to – with 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握短语“主语（人）be familiar with ”。
9. 去掉that 考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what是宾语从句的连接词，故去掉that。
10. easily – easy考查形容词的用法。此处look相当于系动词，故用形容词。
2012模拟短文改错J
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【参考答案及解析】
1. how → what考查宾语从句的连接词。此处what作want的宾语。
2. need → needed 考查动词时态。根据文意此处应用一般过去时。
3. name → names 考查名词单复数。根据后文可知应是七个朋友的名字，故用复数形式。
4. his → my 考查代词指代一致。
5. 正确 经分析本句正确。此处my guest list和my new neighbor Tom应一致。
6. And → But 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处表转折。
7. In → On 考查介词的用法。此处指在“生日这天”，故用介词on。
8. quick → quickly考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词become用副词。
9. give → giving 考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语giving others a chance作means的主语。
10. unforgettable → an unforgettable考查冠词的用法。此处birthday是可数名词，故其前加an。
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【参考答案及解析】
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2．enrich→enriches考查主谓一致。因为reading作主语，故谓语动词用单数形式。
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5．去掉the 考查冠词的用法。此处study是抽象名词。
6．were→are 考查动词时态。根据文意用一般现在时。
7．that→what考查固定句型。解题关键：掌握A is to B what C is to D句型。
8．need后加to考查need的用法。此处need是实意动词，其后接不定式作宾语。
9．on→to 考查动词短语。解题关键：掌握短语stick to “坚持”。
10．interested后加in考查固定短语的用法。解题关键：掌握短语be interested in； what作in的宾语。
2012模拟短文改错L
Mother’s Day was around the corner. My good friend 1. _____
Alice, Jenny and I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )get together, discussing what we should do to 2. ______
our respect for. A ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lice was planning to buy some flowers with 3. ______
his pocket mone ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy 4. ______
vegetables to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because 5. _____
she wanted to experie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nce how many her mother does for her family 6. ______
every day. As for me, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I’d like to make a greeting card, said 7. ______
“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother 8. ______
to pay attention to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )health or promise her to study harder. 9. ______
We are looking forward to Mother’s Day. 10. ______
【参考答案及解析】
1．friend --- friends 考查名词的单复数。根据后为可知应是两人，故用复数形式。
2．get --- got 考查动词时态。根据上文可知事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
3．去掉for 考查介词的用法。此处what作do的宾语，for是多余的。
4．his --- her 考查代词指代一致。根据文意Alice是女名，故用her。
5 cook 后加 a 考查冠词的用法。此处dinner是可数名词，其前应加a。
6．many --- much 考查词义的区别。此处do much for为。。。做得多。
7．said --- say ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing 考查现在分词作定语。此处相当于定语从句which says “Happy Mother’s Day”
8．in --- on考查介词的用法。此处on which相当于on the card。
9．or --- and 考查句意理解。此处and表并列。
10．V经分析本句正确。重庆渝中区2016高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（2）
【2014中原名校联盟一模】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加—个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mother is a teac ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )her work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall itl if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.
【参考答案】改错：
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【2014唐山一中调研考试（二）】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（此部分试题请在答题卡上作答）
I used to be a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed. I have started to think about other people after I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming the different person.
I think my change star ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ted when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was real a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.
【参考答案】短文改错
I used to be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I have really changed. I have started to think about other people before I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming a different person.
I think my ch ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ange started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just wanted to get my degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. It seemed as if everyone but/except me had made friends and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and if/when they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was really a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, and two of them are still my best friends today. (最后一处3种改法：1.加and，2.去掉are, 3.them 改为whom)
2012模拟短文改错E
Dear Xiao Wang,
Learned that y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou are going to visit me during the 1.______
holiday, I’m so happ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y that I have shared the good news 2.______
with your parents ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). They look forward to seeing you, too. 3.______
My hometown locat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed in a mountainous region. The 4.______
mountains here ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) are all covered up with trees of all kinds 5.______
or are worth tou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ring. The first thing we may do after 6.______
you arrive are goi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng to the woods, which are a good place 7.______
for bird. After th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at, we can go fishing in a river nearby. 8.______
Phone me before y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou set off and let me know exact 9.______
when you will get ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )there. I will meet you at station. 10.______
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Zhang Ying
【参考答案及解析】
1. Learned----Learning 考查现在分词作状语。此处I和learn之间为主动关系，故用现在分词。
2. 正确 经分析本句正确。
3. your---my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意我和我的父母分享这一好消息。
4. located前面加is 考查固定短语的用法。表示位于用be located in/at。
5. 去掉up考查动词短语的用法。为。。。覆盖be covered with。
6. or ----and 考查句间的逻辑关系。此处表递进而不是选择。
7. 第一个are----is 考查主谓一致。本句the first thing是主语，故用单数形式。
8. bird—birds 考查名词的单复数。根据句意此处应为复数形式。
9. exact—exactly 考查副词的用法。修饰动词know用副词。
10. at后面加the 考查冠词的用法。此处指双方都知道的 “station”。
2012模拟短文改错F
A few days ago I saw an instructive program on TV．
It was about what ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the traffic problem in cities. It seems 1.
that a great deal of damages is done by traffic．All our 2.
cities are ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )suffering from this. Some buildings are actual 3.
falling to pi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ece. It's often fast to walk than to go by car 4.
and by bus. The problem has been getting worse day by 5.
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cities. All sort ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s of terrible things were happening to our 7.
cities.The questi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on is how can we do about it．0ur 8.
roads were never d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )esigned for such heavy traffic．It 9.
is time the government does something about therse problems．10.
【参考答案及解析】
1.去掉what考查介词宾语。此处about后直接接名词或名词名词短语。
2.damages—damage考查名词的单复数。此处damage为不可数名词。 w.w.^21世纪教育网
3.actual—actually考查副词的用法。修饰动词用副词故用actually。
4.fast—faster考查形容词的比较级。根据句中的than可知用比较级。
5.and—or考查句意理解。根据句意此处表选择关系。
6.thousands后加of考查短语的表达法。“数以千计”表示为“thousands of”。
7.were—are考查动词时态。根据句意应用选择进行时。
8.How—What考查表语从句的连接词。此处what在表语从句中作do的宾语。
9.V经分析本句正确。
10．Does—did考查动词时态。在it is time that句型中，应用虚拟语气故用一般过去时。
2012模拟短文改错G
Last Sunday, Tom and I were walking down the street while we 1．
saw an old man fell off his bike. Many people crowded 2．
around him. Someone suggested carrying an old 3．
man to hospital, but Tom did not agree. He has learnt 4．
first aid, so she ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) said that they mustn’t move him. They ought to leave 5．
him where he was an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d checked him first. At this time the old man 6．
wasn’t breathing ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). I called in first aid center at once and he began 7．
to start the old man’s breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. 8．
Soon the old man began to move a little and doctors also 9．
arrived. They said that we had done was right. 10．
【参考答案及解析】
1．while-when考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意此处为“这时，突然”之意，故用when。
2．fell-fall考查非谓语动词的用法。根据see sb do sth可知用fall。
3．an-the考查冠词的用法。第二次提到那位老人应用定冠词the。
4．has-had考查动词时态。根据文意他在上个星期六之前他就学会了急救，故用过去完成时。
5．she-he考查代词指代一致。此处指Tom故用he。
6．checked-check考查并列关系。此处check和leave并列。
7．去掉in考查动词的用法。打电话应用call sb。
8．use-using考查现在分词作状语。此处using the mouth-to-mouth way作方式状语。
9．V经分析本句正确。
10．that-what考查主语从句的连接词。此处what作do的宾语。
2012模拟短文改错H
When we talk ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) about city life, we’ll think tall 1．_________
buildings, busy stre ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ets and comfortable live 2．_________
conditions．Besid ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )es, there is much pollution in 3．_________
the city now．Peo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ple have to put up with noisy 4．_________
and harmful smoke．How about country life The 5．_________
first feelin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )gs come into our minds are peace and quiet． 6．_________
We can enjoy th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e blue sky, golden crop and fresh air． 7．_________
But life in the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) country is not so easy as it in the city． 8．_________
In my opinion, if ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we pay attention to protect the 9．_________
environment and deve ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )loping the country, and we’ll enjoy 10．_________
a modern and peaceful life．
【参考答案及解析】
1．think后加of / about 考查动词的用法。此处think不能直接带宾语，故改成think of的形式。
2．live改为living 考查分词作定语。此处living conditions生活条件。
3．Besides改为However 考查副词的用法。根据文意前面为优势后为劣势，故表转折用however。
4．noisy改为noise / noises 考查形容词和名词的用法区别。此处名词作with的宾语，故用noise。
5．正确 经分析本句正确。
6．come前加that或com ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e改为coming 考查句子结构的分析。本句的谓语动词是are，所以come需以分词作定语或作定语从句的谓语的形式出现。
7．crop改为crops 考查名词的单复数。根据语意应用复数形式。
8．it改为that 考查代词的用法。此处that用于比较句型，因其后有定语in the city。
9．protect改为protecting 考查介词的用法。因为pay attention to中的to是介词，故用动名词。
10．去掉第二个and考查句子结构的分析。本句前面是if引导的条件句，后面是主句，所以去掉and。
