2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：暖心班主任在即将离开学校时为每位学生准备了礼物 课件(共23张PPT)

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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
暖心班主任在即将离开学校时为每位学生准备了礼物
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
What's the saddest moment you can think about in your life right now I know mine. That day was one of the saddest days of my life. It was a Sunday in the year of 2020. I arrived at my class that morning. As soon as I walked in, the mood immediately felt depressing and uncomfortable. I knew exactly why the mood felt this way. The classmates around me were controlling their sadness. Today was the day when our head teacher would leave and move to another school. Mr. Smith was finally leaving our school after five years teaching here.
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续写原文
Mr. Smith was an extremely likable guy. He was very easy to talk with and to have fun with. He was cool, relaxed, and was always friendly when you would see him. He watched us grow up. He taught us knowledge and to love others. I couldn't even imagine how things were going to be without him. These thoughts flooded my mind, and I became discouraged.
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续写原文
“Hey, are you alright ” My friend interrupted my thinking.
“Yeah, I'm alright. I'm just kind of sad that Mr. Smith's leaving,” I replied.
“Yeah, me too. I had so many good times with him when I was younger.”
“I wish he were our teacher forever,” as I sighed, all happy moments flooded my mind.
“Hey, can you stop talking please ” my deskmate politely asked.
My friend quickly leaned back to his spot, and I began to think again.
“Thank you everyone for my times here. I will forever keep these memories and friend-ships I've made in the past five years.” He took a deep breath and announced, “As a gift for my leaving, please look under your seats.”
Confused, I slowly checked under my seat to see a yellow block of wood that read “LOVE” on it. I quickly grabbed it and began to study it. After seconds of analyzing this strange rectangle, I realized that it was a Jenga block (积木块).
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段首句
Para 1: The Jenga block was freshly painted bright yellow.
　　　　
　　　　　　　　　
Para 2：Reflecting on this moment today, maybe that day wasn't the worst day after all.
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Part 2
题目分析
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续写原文分析
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本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的班主任即将离开，去另外一个学校任教，全班沉浸在悲伤的氛围中，作为离开的礼物，班主任给每个人的座位下面放了一个礼物，作者发现自己的礼物是一个积木块。
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
Para 1：The Jenga block was freshly painted bright yellow.
由第一段首句内容“这个积木块是刚被刷成亮黄色。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到礼物后的感受，及老师解释礼物的意义。
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续写思路分析
Para 2：Reflecting on this moment today, maybe that day wasn't the worst day after all.
由第二段首句内容“今天回想起那个时刻，也许那天并不是最糟糕的一天。”可知，第二段可描写这个礼物对于作者的影响。
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续写思路分析
续写线索
悲伤哭泣——瞥见朋友哭泣——环顾周围人的礼物——好奇——班主任解释礼物的意义——保存记那些回忆——理解爱别人很重要
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续写素材
可用词汇：
行为类
①.环顾：look around/look about
②.保存：keep/preserve
③.理解：understand/comprehend
情绪类
①.悲伤：sadness/sorrow
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续写素材
[高分句型1]. Curiosity quickly became my objective as I looked around me to see that everyone's Jenga block was different. （由as引导的时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. I keep these memories to myself, especially the word “LOVE”, which became my ultimate lifestyle and taught me how I lived everyday.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句；由连接副词how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. The more I grew up, the more I understood why loving others was so important.（由连接副词why引导的宾语从句）
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
The Jenga block was freshly painted bright yellow. I immediately felt sadness and I began to tear up. I glanced over to my friend to see him crying and noticed that his Jenga block was very different from mine. Curiosity quickly became my objective as I looked around me to see that everyone's Jenga block was different. Some had different designs, colors, pat-terms, but all had the word “LOVE” written in some way. “This is a reminder to always love others,” Mr. Smith said slowly.
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范文呈现
Reflecting on this moment today, maybe that day wasn't the worst day after all. I keep these memories to myself, especially the word “LOVE”, which became my ultimate lifestyle and taught me how I lived everyday. The more I grew up, the more I understood why loving others was so important. I've gotten most of my friends this way and people respect me more as a person. To this day, the Jenga block sits on the top of my computer desk as a reminder to love others.
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范文译文
延加街区刚刚被漆成亮黄色。我立刻感到悲伤，开始流泪。我瞥了一眼我的朋友，看到他在哭，注意到他的Jenga积木和我的非常不同。好奇心很快成为我的目标，我环顾四周，发现每个人的Jenga街区都不一样。有些有不同的设计、颜色、装饰术语，但所有这些都以某种方式写着“爱”这个词。史密斯先生慢慢地说：“这提醒我们要永远爱别人。”
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范文译文
回想今天的这一刻，也许那天毕竟不是最糟糕的一天。我把这些记忆留给自己，尤其是“爱”这个词，它成为了我的终极生活方式，教会了我如何生活每一天。我越长大，就越明白为什么爱别人如此重要。我以这种方式得到了我的大多数朋友，人们更尊重我作为一个人。直到今天，Jenga积木还放在我的电脑桌上，提醒我要爱别人。
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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