湖北荆门市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错学生版（3）及答案
(2015·甘肃省二诊)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查时态。
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下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。每句最多有两处错误。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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(2015·东北三省三校第二次联合模拟)
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参考答案：
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10．命题立意：考查及物动词用法。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线(___), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
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【参考答案】短文改错
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
短文改错
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(2015·东北三省四市二模)
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1．命题立意：考查不定式作宾语补足语。
解析：list前加to ask sb. to do sth.请某人干某事。
2. 命题立意：考查动词的时态。
解析：write→wrote 根据上文语意，此处应该为发生在过去的动作。
3. 命题立意：考查反意问句。
解析：isn't→doesn't 本句的谓语动词是实义动词passes，故反意问句中用助动词doesn't。
4. 命题立意：考查时间状语从句。
解析：when→since It is＋一段时间＋since...为固定结构。
5. 命题立意：考查名词。
解析：progresses→progress progress为抽象名词，不可数。
6. 命题立意：考查动词。
解析：去掉for appreciate为及物动词，可直接接宾语，不需要介词。
7. 命题立意：考查形容词和副词。
解析：properly→proper 此处应用形容词来修饰名词guidance。
8. 命题立意：考查分词作宾语补足语。
解析：puzzling→puzzled 此处应用过去分词来补充说明“me”自身的感受。
9. 命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：the→a 此处应用不定冠词表示泛指，意为“一所”，而非特指。
10．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：I→me此处应用人称代词的宾格me来作lend的宾语。
【由宁夏银川市第九中学2014一模改编】短文改错:
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。?
增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。?
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。?
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【答案】
【小题1】the改成 an
【小题2】while 改成when
【小题3】stop改成stopped
【小题4】Heard改成 Hearing
【小题5】that 改成who
【小题6】thank改成thanks
【小题7】help改成 helping
【小题8】immorally改成 immoral
【小题9】去掉to
【小题10】made后面加up
【解析】
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )考点：考查短文改错
【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（二）改编】
短文改错。
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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
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they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（一）改编】
短文改错。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的添加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】短文改错
1.第2句第一个a→an; 2.第2句problem→problems; 3.第3句Therefore→However;
4.第3句stress→stressed或would→will; 5.第4句all→both;
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9.第8句us和learn之间加to; 10.第10句successful→successfully.
【由东北三省2014模拟改编】
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出增加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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短文改错：
1. a改为the 2. had 改为has 3. best 改为most 4. In 改为 On
5. which改为where或前面加on
6. so 改为such 7. divided前加being 8. hole 改为holes
9. them改为it 10.去掉but湖北荆门市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错学生版（4）及答案
(2015·甘肃省部分普通高中第一次联考)
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参考答案：
In China, people a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd giant pandas been living together for thousands of years. But China's human population has been growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most result of development has been that it has divided the panda's habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas people live. The result is that the giant pandas connect with one another to mate and have babies.
， to our rel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.
文章大意：文章讲述了随着人类的发展，熊猫的栖息地越来越小，它们的生活和繁衍受到严重影响，但让人欣慰的是人们正在帮大熊猫建保护区。
1．命题立意：考查谓语动词的时态和语态。
解析：had→have 此处指人们和大熊猫到“现在”为止已经生活了几千年了。所以谓语动词应选用现在完成时“have done”。
2．命题立意：考查形容词和副词。
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3．命题立意：考查谓语动词的单复数。
解析：mean→means 根据上下文可知此处应为一般现在时，又因该句主语为“it”，故用第三人称单数。
4．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：live前加to 此处为不定式作宾语补足语，force sb./sth. to do sth.，迫使某人或某物做某事，是固定用法。
5．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：damaged→damaging d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )amaged被破坏了的，damaging有破坏性的，此处为分词作定语，修饰result，表示有破坏性的结果。
6．命题立意：考查名词的单复数。
解析：panda→pandas panda前面由many修饰，故用复数。
7．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：because of去掉of be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cause of后面接名词、动名词或what引导的从句，because后面接除what以外的词引导的从句。
8．命题立意：考查定语从句。
解析：which→where或whic ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )h前加in或live后加in 此处先行词areas在后面的定语从句中作地点状语，故选用关系副词where或in which或在不及物动词live后加in。
举一反三：1.I grew up ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in the small village where I was born. (where引导定语从句，先行词是village，且在从句中作地点状语)
2．I grew up in the s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mall village which I was born in.(which引导定语从句，先行词是village, 且在从句中作in的宾语)
3．I grew up where I was born.(where引导地点状语从句，且在从句中作地点状语)
9．命题立意：考查上下文语境。
解析：can→can't或can后加not 分析上下文可知此处意为“结果就是大熊猫不能够与另外的配偶联系、不能够繁殖”。
10．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：Besides→However 上文在说不好的结果，但下文说“让人欣慰的是……”，表转折。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
短文改错。
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has changed jobs an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much,
but we’ve kept writing to each other.
【参考答案】1.
friend=>friend’s
in=>to
listen=>listened
Li Meng’s parent ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s invited I to spend=> Li Meng’s parents invited me to spend
week=>weeks
beautifully=>beautiful
but=>and
Li Meng came see me=>Li Meng came to see me
her father has changed=> her father changed
we haven’t see each other much=> we haven’t seen each other much
短文改错。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the Su ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mmer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English．
【参考答案】2
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．
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【参考答案】3.
1.disappointing—disappointed 2． find—found
3.However—Besides或Also 4． for—of
5.hardly—hard 6． teachers 前加my或the
7.student—students 8． what—which
9.去掉but后的that 10． determine—determines
此题要求改正所给短文 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上萄一个勾(、／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多—个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线(、)划掉·
此行缺—个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前(后)词·此行话一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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worry my ner ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vous eyes because everything I wanted to say 7.
was sent by letter. I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) found myself often tell small lies. I wrote 8.
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And at weekends, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.” 10.
【参考答案】4.
1.a honest child改为an honest child 2.because of改为because
3.hard改为hardly 4.To let改为let 5.√
6.have to 改为had to 7.worry改为worry about
8.tell改为telling 9.selling改为sold 10.chickens改为chicken湖北荆门市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错学生版（5）及答案
(2015·广西南宁市二模)
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答案：
I threw my magazines ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) into a waste basket and to join in Malaysian life. Then everything came alive. I stared at everything as if I were looking at it the first time. The day passed fast. I looked at my watch was surprised that it was 3?00 pm. Soon the train pulled up at Butterworth. I looked at the people all around me. They all looked . When my uncle arrived at with a smile, I threw my around him to give him a warm hug. I had never done this . He seemed and then his weather beaten face warmed up with huge smile. We walked arm in arm to car.
1．命题立意：考查时态用法。
解析：decide→decided 根据前文的threw说明应用一般过去时，故decide→decided。
2．命题立意：考查固定短语。
解析：the first前加for for the first time第一次，故the first前加for。
3．命题立意：考查连词用法。
解析：but→and 根据but前后分句是并列关系，故将but改为and。
4．命题立意：考查形容词用法。
解析：beautifully→beautiful 文中look是系动词，应用形容词，判断应将beautifully改为beautiful。
5．命题立意：考查介词用法。
解析：arrived后的at去掉 at为介词，没宾语，应省去介词。故去掉at。
6．命题立意：考查名词用法。
解析：arm→arms 根据下文arm应用复数形式，故arm改为arms。
7．命题立意：考查副词用法。
解析：ago→before ag ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o应用在表示时间段的名词后，表示从现在算起的时间段之前；before可独立使用，也可用在时间段的名词后，表示从过去的时间算起的过去，故ago改为before。
8．命题立意：考查形容词用法。
解析：surprising→surprised 根据前文应是感到吃惊的，故此处将surprising改为surprised。
9．命题立意：考查冠词用法。
解析：the→a a huge smile一个大大的微笑，故the改为a。
10．命题立意：考查代词用法。
解析：her→his 根据前文的his uncle和he判断此处应用his，故将her改为his。
短文改错
In 1972, the Uni ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ted Nations hold a meeting in Sweden 1__________
to share ideas about ways to take better care of for the 2__________
earth．At the summit, people from more than one hundreds 3__________
countries discussed some of the important problems faced 4__________
our planet．Since then, several Earth Summits had been held. 5__________
In 2002, the Earth Summit was held in Johannesburg. 6__________
One of the main theme was “sustainable development”, or 7__________
the question what we can continue developing the world 8__________
without damage the environment．Most of the speakers 9__________
talked the three biggest killers in the world. 10__________
【参考答案】5.
1.hold—held 2. 去掉for
3. hundreds---hundred 4. faced---facing
5.had ----have 6. 正确
7.theme----themes 8. what---how
9. damage---damaging 10. talk后加 about
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词，把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词，在错词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
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【参考答案】6.
1．that—which 2．a ^ better 3．√
4．interesting—interested 5．go—went
6．model—models 7．drive—driving
8．删“was” 9．This—It
10．regarded ^ as或considered
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Miss Li is our En ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )glish teacher. One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，“Our English teacher is going to have a operation today. It has not decided yet who will take his place. ”The class all turned silently at his words. Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door. She looked tiring and pale. “I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don’t want you to miss a single class. ” she said at a low voice， “A new teacher will take my place and I hope you’ll get on well with her. I’ll return back as soon as I’m well. ”Heard this，all of us were moved to tears. What a good teacher we have!
【参考答案】1.
1. a—an
2. not∧decided 加been
3. his—her
4. silently-silent
5. appears—appeared
6. tiring—tired
7. at—in
8. return back 删除back
9. well—better
10. heard—hearing
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Five years before m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y brother and I ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. One day he visited the city that I was living in to see our mother. I thought for nights about what to react to his visit. Since I had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. Finally, I went to my friends for advice. He suggested I offered my apology. When I did it, I felt relieving. Today I am so grateful to my friend. Without his advice, we wouldn’t enjoy the loving relationship with my brother. I have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. In short, I feel I have grown since.
【参考答案】2.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day，a bli ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read：“I am blind，please help me. ” A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign，noticed only a few coin in the man's hat. He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat. And then he turned the sign over again, wrote a new message and left. Several hours later，the gentleman returned. To his happy, he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does work，which read: “It’s spring now, and I can't see it.”
【参考答案】3.
1.on后加the 2.through---by 3.noticed---noticing
4.coin—coins 5.it—them
6.去掉again 7.happy---happiness
8.hat后加was 9.does—did 10.and ---but
