中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
6年(2019-2024)中考英语真题9套模拟试题分项汇编(北京专用)
专题05 文段表达(原卷版)
一、2024年
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给的中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
38. 假设你是李华,你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访,届时举办一次交流活动,为此在校内征集师生的建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言,提供一个交流活动设计并说明理由。
提示词语:visit, performance, make, opportunity, culture
内容提示:
·What do you suggest for the activity
·Why do you suggest doing that
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。
提示词语:kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support
内容提示:
·Who is your best friend Please describe him/ her.
·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、2023年
六、电子邮件
38.假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事,如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语:invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library
提示问题:What activity do you plan to do
Why do you want to organize this activity
When and where will you have this activity
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
七、材料作文
39.同学们参加过各种各样的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。
假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿,介绍一个你参加过的社团,谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。
提示词语:take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress
提示问题:What club did you join
What did you do in the club
What have you learned from the experience
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三、2022年
五、电子邮件
39.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题:· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的,取得了什么效果。
提示词语:plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题:· How do you increase your efficiency(效率)
· What have you achieved
High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、2021年
五、材料作文
39. 北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
提示词语:show, traditional, love, treasure, important
提示问题:In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing
Please describe it.
Why do you think it can be a symbol
I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
40. 现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。
提示词语:help, enjoy, new, challenge, take action
提示问题:What is the change that happened in your life
How did you deal with it
What have you learned from the experience
There are many changes in a person’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、2020年
39. 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法。
提示词语:lose, make up(弥补), buy, send
提示问题:
What happened to the book
What will you do to make up for it
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
40. “不积跬步,无以至千里。”积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获。
提示词语:accumulate(积累), read, keep, make progress
提示问题:●What did you do to accumulate knowledge
●What have you learned from doing so
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六、2019年
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语: design,safety rule,careful,protect,picture
提示问题: When should you hand in the poster
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email .
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined
What benefits have you got from doing so
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life .
朝阳区一模
文段表达(10分) 从下面两个题目中任选一题, 根据所给提示, 完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
38. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter最近在北京学习,面对新环境,他感到有些不适应,并发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复。告诉Peter你收到邮件的感受以及你的具体建议。
提示词语:sorry, change some habits, make new friends, join in clubs
提示问题:
How do you feel when you know Peter’s problem
What’s your advice to help Peter
Dear Peter, How is it going _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you a wonderful time in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“突破自我,我拼过”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对“突破自我”的看法,简单描述你为了突破自我而拼搏的一次经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:important, overcome difficulties, a sports meeting, a strong will
提示问题:
What do you think of breaking through yourself
How did you break through yourself that time
What have you learnt from the experience
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大兴区一模
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom向你发来电子邮件,想了解你在生活中有哪些处理废旧物品的做法。请你给他回复一封英文电子邮件,介绍你的相应做法及理由。
提示词语:waste, decorate (装饰), protect, environment
提示问题:How do you deal with the waste
What is your reason
Dear Tom, I’m glad to introduce my ways... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any other good ideas, write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua
题目②
39. “奉献、友爱、互助、进步”的志愿精神是雷锋精神的重要体现。
假如你是李华,你校英文公众号将推出以“弘扬雷锋精神争做优秀志愿者”为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言,介绍你曾经参加过的一次志愿者活动及收获。
提示词语:old people’s home, help, clean, skill
提示问题:What volunteer activity did you take part in What have you learned from the experience
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东城区一模
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,在学生会负责今年体育节吉祥物 (mascot) 的设计征集活动。你校交换生Peter对该活动很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问吉祥物设计的具体要求及提交 (submit) 的时间和方式。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关内容。
提示词语:creative, culture, colourful, draw, email
提示问题:● What are the design requirements for the mascot
● When and how should Peter submit his design
Dear Peter, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the mascot design for our school’s Sports Festival. _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with your design! Yours, Li Hua
题目②
39. 懂得退让是为人处世一种智慧。它能够帮助我们避免冲突,建立信任,促进合作。
某英文网站正在开展以“退让的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你主动退让的一次经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:project, different ideas, cool down, suggest, solve
提示问题:● What was your experience of taking a step back
● What have you learned from it
Sometimes it is necessary to take a step back in a certain situation. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________
房山区一模
文段表达(10分)
38.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语:school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题:When and where will the science festival be held
What activities will be done in the science festival
Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
题目②
39. 环境就是民生,青山就是美丽,蓝天也是幸福。
假如你是李华,你们学校英语社团公众号正在进行以“低碳生活(Low-carbon Life)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对低碳生活的看法和做法。
提示词语:important, save, plant, reuse, bicycle
提示问题:What do you think of low-carbon life
What do you often do to practice low-carbon life
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海淀区一模
文段表达(10分
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。 文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题 目 ①
38. 假设你是李华。你的好朋友Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动,他写信向你征求创意。请你用英语给他写一封回信,提供一些活动创意并说明理由。
提示词语:clean up, repair, garden, fun, responsibility
提示问题: ● What activities would you like to suggest
● Why do you suggest so
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day.
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I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
39. 学而致知,行而致远。
假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“学以致用”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享一次你运用所学解决实际问题的经历,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语: skill, make use of, connect, improve, meaningful
提示问题: ● What experience can you share about putting what you've learned into practice
● What have you learned from it
It’s important to put what we’ve learned into practice. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
平谷区一模
文段表达。(共10 分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter对近期举办的“近光讲堂”很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件,询问相关信息。请你用英语回复一封邮件,向他介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”,以及主要内容和你的感悟。
提示词语:invite, introduce, experience, change
提示问题:Which speech do you like best
What’s it mainly about
What have you learned from it
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the speeches given by some people with social influence.
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Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
39. 以体树德、以体增智、以体育美、以体促劳。随着平谷区“阳光·乐跑”活动的开展,学生们展现了朝气蓬勃的精神风貌。
假设你是李华。请你以“我的乐跑”为题,用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿,谈谈你日常的乐跑,对其作简要描述,说说乐跑给你带来了哪些好处,以及今后打算怎么做。
提示词语:relax, energy, build up, confidence, keep doing
提示问题:·How do you take part in the activity
·What have you achieved
·What will you do in the future
Everyone takes part in the activity of Fun Run.
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石景山区一模
文段表达
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Jim想给父母买一份具有中国特色的礼物,他发来邮件询问你的意见。请用英文给他回复,提出建议,并说明理由。
提示词语:tea, healthy, relax, present, culture
提示问题:
● What gift do you advise Jim to buy
● Give your reasons.
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to give you some advice.
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Hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
39. 沟通是解决问题的重要途径之一。假设你是李华,请给学校英文网站投稿,描述一次你与他人通过沟通解决问题的经历,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语:argue, phone, apologize, communicate, solve the problem
提示问题: ●How did you solve a problem by communicating with others
●What have you learned from that experience
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顺义区一模
文段表达(10分)
38. 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国学生的社会实践活动很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件,询问你们学校通常组织学生参加什么社会实践活动。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你参加过的社会实践活动,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语:the Science Museum, do experiments, interesting, knowledge
提示问题: What did you do in the social practice activities
·What benefits have you got
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our social practice activities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“用心交流,学会沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中一次有效沟通的经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:share a good listener, respect, helpful
提示问题:·How did you communicate with others
·What have you learned from the experience
It is very important for us to get along with other people. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
通州区一模
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华。你们学校正在举办北京建筑推介活动。请用英语写一封电子邮件向你们班交换生Peter介绍你最喜欢哪一个建筑物,这个建筑物是什么样子的,以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语:cultural, design, large, concert, event
提示问题:·What is your favourite building in Beijing
·What’s the building like
·Why do you like it
Dear Peter, How are you ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
题目②
39. 某英文网站青少年板块正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,分享你和父母之间发生的一个冲突,你是如何恰当地处理的,以及你从中得到的启示。
提示词语:disagreement, spend, cell phone, shout, communicate
提示问题:·What was the problem between your parents and you
·How did you deal with it
·What have you learned from it
Problems are often around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题05 文段表达(解析版)
一、2024年
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给的中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
38. 假设你是李华,你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访,届时举办一次交流活动,为此在校内征集师生的建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言,提供一个交流活动设计并说明理由。
提示词语:visit, performance, make, opportunity, culture
内容提示:
·What do you suggest for the activity
·Why do you suggest doing that
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
【答案】One possible version:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. For the foreign students visiting our school, I’d suggest a workshop on paper cutting. A teacher can first introduce its history and artistic value. Then we can help them to make paper cuttings. This activity will give them an opportunity to have a try at a traditional Chinese art form. What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture.
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,介绍建议什么类型的交流活动;
第二步,具体说明活动的内容以及建议举办此类活动的理由,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达希望方案能被考虑并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb an opportunity to do sth给某人一个做某事的机会
②give sth to sb as gifts把某物作为礼物送给某人
[高分句型]
①What’s more, when they take these paper cuttings back to their home country and give them to their families as gifts, more people there may enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture.(when引导的时间状语从句)
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。
提示词语:kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support
内容提示:
·Who is your best friend Please describe him/ her.
·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. Her name is Alice. She is helpful and always has a sweet smile on her face. She is really good at dancing.
Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. She encouraged me a lot and helped me practice the moves. Together, we gave a very successful performance. I will never forget this experience.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,介绍经历用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最好的朋友并进行描述;
第二步,分享你们之间发生的一次难忘的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①have a smile on one’s face面带微笑
②sign up for报名参加
③a large crowd of一大群
④a very successful performance一个非常成功的表演
[高分句型]
①Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. (There be句型)
②We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. (并列句)
二、2023年
六、电子邮件
38.假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事,如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语:invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library
提示问题:What activity do you plan to do
Why do you want to organize this activity
When and where will you have this activity
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题中包含的关键信息,写邮件告诉Peter活动内容、意义及安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写电子邮件的目的是邀请Peter参加活动;
第二步,介绍计划什么活动、组织这一活动的原因及具体安排;
第三步,期待收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②join sb. 加入某人
③stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
[高分句型]
①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.(as引导原因状语从句)
②I believe we all will have a great time.(省略that的宾语从句)
七、材料作文
39.同学们参加过各种各样的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。
假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿,介绍一个你参加过的社团,谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。
提示词语:take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress
提示问题:What club did you join
What did you do in the club
What have you learned from the experience
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I have been in the basketball club for three years. We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. I will keep playing and try to be good at it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息,写短文谈谈自己参加过的社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明参加了什么社团;
第二步,介绍社团中的活动;
第三步,谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②on the weekend 在周末
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
④be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.(and连接表等同关系的并列句)
三、2022年
五、电子邮件
39.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题:· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的,取得了什么效果。
提示词语:plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题:· How do you increase your efficiency(效率)
· What have you achieved
High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文1
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
High efficiency is important for a busy student. It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time.
By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life.
【解析】
例文1
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题,给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
例文2
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题,结合提示问题进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
四、2021年
五、材料作文
39. 北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
提示词语:show, traditional, love, treasure, important
提示问题:In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing
Please describe it.
Why do you think it can be a symbol
I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【答案】例文
I’m Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.
Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【详解】
1.题目解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求介绍北京文化标志,根据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志,并叙述原因。注意理由合理,内容符合客观事实。
2.写作指导:本文采用第一人称书写,时态是一般现在时。可使用宾语从句和非谓语动词,为文章增色,上下文多使用连词或副词,使行文流畅。
40. 现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。
提示词语:help, enjoy, new, challenge, take action
提示问题:What is the change that happened in your life
How did you deal with it
What have you learned from the experience
There are many changes in a person’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it and take action.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语和问题,写出自己在生活中的一个变化,以及如何应对这个变化,有什么收获等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
五、2020年
39. 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法。
提示词语:lose, make up(弥补), buy, send
提示问题:
What happened to the book
What will you do to make up for it
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
39.例文:
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的;接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失;最后希望你能原谅我。
2.例文点评:例文采用一段式;用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时,用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法,介绍全面,条理清晰,用连词连接并列成分,文章前后连贯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:borrow from;want to do sth;send…to…;look forward to。
句型:定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago;宾语从句that you can forgive me。
40. “不积跬步,无以至千里。”积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获。
提示词语:accumulate(积累), read, keep, make progress
提示问题:●What did you do to accumulate knowledge
●What have you learned from doing so
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
40.例文:
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本题属于材料作文,题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的?”和“你从中学到了什么?”这两个问题。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:as for;take lots of measures to do sth.;first of all;provide sb. with sth.;used to do sth.;at the same time;last but not least;in a word;step by step;make progress。
句型:who引导的限制性定语从句;that引导的宾语从句;so that引导的目的状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;what引导的宾语从句;以only开头的倒装句。
六、2019年
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语: design,safety rule,careful,protect,picture
提示问题: When should you hand in the poster
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email .
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required,you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend,I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost,the basic safety rules are of great importance,which should be included in your poster. In the second place,following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least,if I were you,I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness,considering that better safe than sorry. In addition,it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件,告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知,短文中应包括以下内容:首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间;然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容,学生们应联系自己的实际生活,展开合理的想象,将这些内容补充完整后,用正确的英语表达出来,这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意:首先要合理安排短文内容,叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语,如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达,英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的,因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应该从句式的整体考虑,先确定主干结构,然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次,应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意上下连贯,表达流畅。
题目②
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined
What benefits have you got from doing so
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life .
【答案】Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society,I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份,用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知,短文应包括以下内容:首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么?然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时;第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容,学生们应联系自己的实际生活,展开合理的想象,将这些内容补充完整后,用正确的英语表达出来,这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意:首先注意内容的完整、充实,学生们可以结合自己的实际生活,写一写自己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题,英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的,因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应该从句式的整体考虑,先确定主干结构,然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次,应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意上下连贯,表达流畅。
朝阳区一模
文段表达(10分) 从下面两个题目中任选一题, 根据所给提示, 完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
38. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter最近在北京学习,面对新环境,他感到有些不适应,并发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复。告诉Peter你收到邮件的感受以及你的具体建议。
提示词语:sorry, change some habits, make new friends, join in clubs
提示问题:
How do you feel when you know Peter’s problem
What’s your advice to help Peter
Dear Peter, How is it going _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you a wonderful time in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
How is it going
Wish you a wonderful time in Beijing. I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a difficult time these days. As a matter of fact, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.
In order to apply to a new environment, sometimes we have to change some of our habits and expand our social circle as well. If you feel lonely, you can make new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. Joining in student clubs is a good way of reducing loneliness, which will help you learn more about the local culture.
Wish you a wonderful time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明你的感受,表达安慰;
第二步,提出建议,注意包括提示词语,如改变一些习惯,结交新朋友,加入俱乐部等。
[亮点词汇]
①as a matter of fact事实上
②anxious焦虑的
③expand拓展
④reduce loneliness减少孤独
[高分句型]
①As a matter of fact, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. (时间状语从句)
②If you feel lonely, you can make new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. (条件状语从句;定语从句)
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“突破自我,我拼过”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对“突破自我”的看法,简单描述你为了突破自我而拼搏的一次经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:important, overcome difficulties, a sports meeting, a strong will
提示问题:
What do you think of breaking through yourself
How did you break through yourself that time
What have you learnt from the experience
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
There are many chances for us to try new things in our life. Chances come with trial and challenge. So we must be brave enough to take the first step.
Although I knew that sports were very important, I was not good at sports at all. Once the school would hold a sports meeting. I signed up for the 1000-meter-long run with the encouragement of my mother. My mother encouraged me to bravely overcome difficulties. So, one month before the competition, I persisted in running for 30 minutes every day. At first, it was difficult for me to persist in running down, but when I thought of my mother’s words, I had a strong will to win. Finally, I achieved the third place in the competition.
I am very good at sports and now I am also very confident. Through this incident, I have come to understand that as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve victory.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你为了突破自我而拼搏的一次经历以及你的收获,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,谈谈你对“突破自我”的看法;
第二步,介绍你为了突破自我而拼搏的一次经历;
第三步,介绍你的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①not...at all一点也不
②sign up报名
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
④persist in doing sth.坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①Although I knew that sports are very important, I was not good at sports at all. (although引导的让步状语从句)
②At first, it was difficult for me to persist in running down, but when I thought of my mother’s words, I had a strong will to win. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I have come to understand that as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve victory. (that引导的宾语从句,as long as引导条件状语从句)
大兴区一模
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom向你发来电子邮件,想了解你在生活中有哪些处理废旧物品的做法。请你给他回复一封英文电子邮件,介绍你的相应做法及理由。
提示词语:waste, decorate (装饰), protect, environment
提示问题:How do you deal with the waste
What is your reason
Dear Tom, I’m glad to introduce my ways... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any other good ideas, write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to introduce my ways to deal with the waste. I often cut a waste bottle in half, and then I can get a special container which I can put my pens and other things in. Besides, I also try to make them into art pieces to decorate my room. In these ways, I not only improve my DIY skills but also help protect the environment. The most important is that I turn these waste things into useful things and give them new lives.
If you have any other good ideas, write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍是如何处理废品的;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①cut sth. in half把某物切成两半
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I often cut a waste bottle in half, and then I can get a special container which I can put my pens and other things in. (定语从句)
②The most important is that I turn these waste things into useful things and give them new lives.(表语从句)
题目②
39. “奉献、友爱、互助、进步”的志愿精神是雷锋精神的重要体现。
假如你是李华,你校英文公众号将推出以“弘扬雷锋精神争做优秀志愿者”为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言,介绍你曾经参加过的一次志愿者活动及收获。
提示词语:old people’s home, help, clean, skill
提示问题:What volunteer activity did you take part in What have you learned from the experience
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
Last summer, my classmates and I went to the old people’s home to do volunteer work. In the morning, we cleaned their rooms and made dumplings for them. In the afternoon, we taught them how to use smartphones, especially how to buy daily supplies online. I’ve improved my life skills and got a better understanding of helping others. I do value the experience and I have learned a lot from it.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文一篇小作文,为记叙文;
②时态:“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:提示词语和提示问题已给出,考生应结合所给提示再作答,适当添加细节,言简意赅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,通过时间和地点介绍什么时候去做了志愿者;
第二步,介绍做一天志愿者的内容;
第三步,通过做志愿者收获了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①made for 为……做
②got a better understanding of 对……有更好的理解
[高分句型]
①I do value the experience and I have learned a lot from it. (并列句)
东城区一模
文段表达(10分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,在学生会负责今年体育节吉祥物 (mascot) 的设计征集活动。你校交换生Peter对该活动很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问吉祥物设计的具体要求及提交 (submit) 的时间和方式。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关内容。
提示词语:creative, culture, colourful, draw, email
提示问题:● What are the design requirements for the mascot
● When and how should Peter submit his design
Dear Peter, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the mascot design for our school’s Sports Festival. _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with your design! Yours, Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the mascot design for our school’s Sports Festival.
The design is expected to be creative. It should show the sportsmanship and our school culture. Colourful and attractive designs are highly preferred. You can create your design in different ways. Both hand drawing and computer drawing are acceptable.
You need to submit your design by next Friday, June 15th. Just email it to mascotdesign@. Please make sure you include your full name and class in the email.
Good luck with your design!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出有关体育节吉祥物设计事宜;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从创新、文化和颜色等方面详细介绍了吉祥物的设计思路;
第三步,表达希望设计方案能被选上愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in different ways以不同的方式
②both…and…不但……而且……
③need to do sth.需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The design is expected to be creative. (一般现在时的被动语态)
②Please make sure you include your full name and class in the email. (祈使句)
题目②
39. 懂得退让是为人处世一种智慧。它能够帮助我们避免冲突,建立信任,促进合作。
某英文网站正在开展以“退让的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你主动退让的一次经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:project, different ideas, cool down, suggest, solve
提示问题:● What was your experience of taking a step back
● What have you learned from it
Sometimes it is necessary to take a step back in a certain situation. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Sometimes it is necessary to take a step back in a certain situation. Last week, we had a group project, but the other members and I had different ideas on it. Soon our discussion turned into a heated argument. I tried to cool myself down and listened patiently to them. I realized there were some good points in their ideas, and suggested that we put our best thoughts together to make our plan. All of them agreed. In the end, we completed the project successfully.
Taking a step back not only gives us time to calm down and think carefully, but also helps us solve problems effectively.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你退后一步的经历及收获的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“某些情况下有必要后退一步”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体讲述写作内容。从“时间、地点、事件等”几个方面重点描述退后一步的经历;
第三步,详细描述主动退让的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①have different ideas有不同的想法
②turn into变成
③in the end最后
[高分句型]
①I realized there were some good points in their ideas, and suggested that we put our best thoughts together to make our plan.(含有that引导的宾语从句)
②Taking a step back not only gives us time to calm down and think carefully, but also helps us solve problems effectively.(not only ..., but also...引导的并列从句)
房山区一模
文段表达(10分)
38.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语:school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题:When and where will the science festival be held
What activities will be done in the science festival
Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival. I’m glad to invite you to take part in it. The event will be held on January 19th in the school hall. There will be a variety of activities for you to enjoy. Our headmaster will give a speech. You will see amazing inventions and videos about them, which show the latest developments in science and technology. Also, you’ll have the chance to attend interesting lectures on different scientific topics. If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. It’s going to be a great opportunity to learn and have fun at the same time!
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“邀请Peter来参加科技节,活动时间,地点和内容”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一个好消息。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“邀请Peter来参加科技节,科技节举办的时间,地点以及科技节的活动内容”重点介绍科技节的相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我期待你早日答复。”
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival.(be going to do sth表示“计划做某事”)
②If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments.(if引导的条件状语从句)
题目②
39. 环境就是民生,青山就是美丽,蓝天也是幸福。
假如你是李华,你们学校英语社团公众号正在进行以“低碳生活(Low-carbon Life)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对低碳生活的看法和做法。
提示词语:important, save, plant, reuse, bicycle
提示问题:What do you think of low-carbon life
What do you often do to practice low-carbon life
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Living a Low-carbon life is important for everyone.
We should save energy. To help with the environment, I live a low-carbon life. I always walk or ride a bicycle to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. Finally, we should plant more trees.
If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. Let’s change ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我对低碳生活的看法以及为了低碳生活我日常的做法和我的建议”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“低碳生活对每个人来说都很重要。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我对低碳生活的看法和我的做法以及我的建议”重点介绍低碳生活的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“让我们改变自己。”
[亮点词汇]
①save energy节能
②turn off关掉
[高分句型]
①Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.(that引导的定语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
②If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.(if引导的条件状语从句,省略that的宾语从句)
海淀区一模
文段表达(10分
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。 文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题 目 ①
38. 假设你是李华。你的好朋友Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动,他写信向你征求创意。请你用英语给他写一封回信,提供一些活动创意并说明理由。
提示词语:clean up, repair, garden, fun, responsibility
提示问题: ● What activities would you like to suggest
● Why do you suggest so
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day.
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I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day. And I’d like to share some ideas with you.
First, I think it’s a good idea to organize clean-up activities. For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful. What’s more, you can ask students to repair the broken desks and chairs. It will be great fun. Moreover, you can arrange for students to water the garden. They will feel a strong sense of responsibility to beautify the school.
I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我想和你分享一些想法”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“清洁活动、修理活动、给花园浇水活动等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望建议能有所帮助”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① share...with...和……分享……
② What’s more 另外
③ arrange for students to...安排学生……
④ water the garden 给花园浇水
⑤ feel a strong sense of responsibility 有强烈的责任感
⑥ beautify the school 美化学校
[高分句型]
① First, I think it’s a good idea to organize clean-up activities.(that引导宾语从句,that省略;it固定句式)
② For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
③ They will feel a strong sense of responsibility to beautify the school.(动词不定式作定语)
题目②
39. 学而致知,行而致远。
假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“学以致用”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享一次你运用所学解决实际问题的经历,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语: skill, make use of, connect, improve, meaningful
提示问题: ● What experience can you share about putting what you've learned into practice
● What have you learned from it
It’s important to put what we’ve learned into practice. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文:
It’s important to put what we’ve learned into practice.
Last summer holiday, I learned some first aid knowledge such as CPR and Heimlich Maneuver. One day, my litter sister was choked by a candy and couldn’t breathe. Seeing this, I thought of what I learnt last summer holiday shortly. Then, I stood behind my sister and applied pressure to her abdomen. Fortunately, the candy in her throat was spit out. At last, I called 120 for further check.
From this experience, I have learned the importance of the combination of theory and practice, which not only enables us to have a better understanding of what we have learned, but also makes contributions to our society.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示问题完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己学以致用的一次经历;
第三步,阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②apply sth to sth将……运用……
③think of想起
[高分句型]
I have learned the importance of the combination of theory and practice, which not only enables us to have a better understanding of what we have learned, but also makes contributions to our society.(定语从句)
平谷区一模
文段表达。(共10 分)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter对近期举办的“近光讲堂”很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件,询问相关信息。请你用英语回复一封邮件,向他介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”,以及主要内容和你的感悟。
提示词语:invite, introduce, experience, change
提示问题:Which speech do you like best
What’s it mainly about
What have you learned from it
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the speeches given by some people with social influence.
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Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the speeches given by some people with social influence.
I like the speech given by Dong Yuhui. Its theme is reading and growth. Dong shares his own experience with us. During his speech, he puts great importance on reading. He thinks reading books can help people grow up.
From this speech, I know that as students, we should read different kinds of books to enrich our knowledge and improve ourselves. The more we read, the better we will be and the better we can understand Chinese culture.
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”,以及主要内容和你的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”以及主要内容;
第三步,介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②put great importance on非常重视
③grow up成长
[高分句型]
①I like the speech given by Dong Yuhui. (过去分词作定语)
②He thinks reading books can help people grow up. (宾语从句)
③The more we read, the better we will be and the better we can understand Chinese culture. (the+比较级,the+比较级)
题目②
39. 以体树德、以体增智、以体育美、以体促劳。随着平谷区“阳光·乐跑”活动的开展,学生们展现了朝气蓬勃的精神风貌。
假设你是李华。请你以“我的乐跑”为题,用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿,谈谈你日常的乐跑,对其作简要描述,说说乐跑给你带来了哪些好处,以及今后打算怎么做。
提示词语:relax, energy, build up, confidence, keep doing
提示问题:·How do you take part in the activity
·What have you achieved
·What will you do in the future
Everyone takes part in the activity of Fun Run.
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【答案】例文
Everyone takes part in the activity of Fun Run. So do I. This summer, I took part in this activity. Every morning, I followed the Fun Run team and ran along the sunny road with their rhythm.
I feel really comfortable when I listen to the birds singing on the road. Fun Running makes me feel relaxed, energetic, and physically strong. My confidence has increased because I often communicate with people while running.
In the future, I will keep joining in Fun Run and pass on this activity, calling on more people to take part in this activity.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,介绍我是如何参加活动的;
第二步,介绍我在活动中取得的成就;
第三步,介绍我将来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②listen to听
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
④keep doing继续做
⑤pass on传递
[高分句型]
①I feel really comfortable when I listen to the birds singing on the road.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Fun Running makes me feel relaxed, energetic, and physically strong.(动名词作主语)
③My confidence has increased because I often communicate with people while running.(because引导的原因状语从句)
石景山区一模
文段表达
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Jim想给父母买一份具有中国特色的礼物,他发来邮件询问你的意见。请用英文给他回复,提出建议,并说明理由。
提示词语:tea, healthy, relax, present, culture
提示问题:
● What gift do you advise Jim to buy
● Give your reasons.
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to give you some advice.
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Hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to give you some advice. In my opinion, tea is a good choice. Here are my reasons.
First, as we know, there are many different kinds of tea in China, which is fascinating. Second, drinking tea not only keeps us healthy, but also helps us to relax. Finally, in China, we usually give tea as a present to elders to show our respect, which is an important part of Chinese tea culture. I think your parents would love to enjoy a cup of tea and have a taste of Chinese culture.
Hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,提出自己的建议;
第二步,阐述自己的理由,介绍茶的种类多、喝茶的好处等;
第三步,书写结语,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②many different kinds of各种各样的
③healthy健康的
[高分句型]
①First, as we know, there are many different kinds of tea in China, which is fascinating.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I think your parents would love to enjoy a cup of tea and have a taste of Chinese culture.(think后接省略that的宾语从句)
题目②
39. 沟通是解决问题的重要途径之一。假设你是李华,请给学校英文网站投稿,描述一次你与他人通过沟通解决问题的经历,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语:argue, phone, apologize, communicate, solve the problem
提示问题: ●How did you solve a problem by communicating with others
●What have you learned from that experience
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【答案】例文
It is common that teenagers argue with their parents sometimes. Once, I argued with my parents when I was using my phone to play games. My parents got angry and took my phone away. I was really upset.
Knowing that they did so just to do me good, I finally picked up my courage and sat down with my parents. I told them I appreciated their help and apologized for playing with my phone for too long. I promised I would try to manage my time well. Surprisingly, my parents didn’t criticize me but gave me a big hug. They told me that I had learned to solve the problem and they were really proud of me. We were all happy that we worked out the problem by communicating with each other.
From this experience, I have learned that good communication is the key to solving problems and building trust.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括两个问题要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单叙述问题,从而引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍沟通的过程以及结果;
第三步,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① give sb. a big hug 给某人一个大大的拥抱
② be proud of 为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
① Once, I argued with my parents when I was using my phone to play games. (when引导时间状语从句)
② I promised I would try to manage my time well. (宾语从句)
顺义区一模
文段表达(10分)
38. 从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国学生的社会实践活动很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件,询问你们学校通常组织学生参加什么社会实践活动。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你参加过的社会实践活动,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语:the Science Museum, do experiments, interesting, knowledge
提示问题: What did you do in the social practice activities
·What benefits have you got
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our social practice activities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our social practice activities. Our school often organizes us to go to science museum, nursing home, park and so on to do social practice activities. We just went to the Science Museum last week. We met at the school gate at 8 o’clock in the morning, and then we went there by bus. We sang and laughed all the way. After arriving at the Science Museum, we visited many famous people and their inventions. And then we did some science experiments ourselves. They were really interesting. Through this activity, we not only learn a lot of scientific knowledge, but also broaden our horizons.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“很高兴知道您对我们的社会实践活动感兴趣”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你去过的地方、所做的事情以及收获、感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我希望以上内容对您有所帮助”。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for请求
②do social practice activities做社会实践活动
③broaden our horizons开拓我们的视野
[高分句型]
①Please feel free to ask for more information. (祈使句)
②Through this activity, we not only learn a lot of scientific knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. (not only...but also)
题目②
39. 某英文网站正在开展以“用心交流,学会沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中一次有效沟通的经历以及你的收获。
提示词语:share a good listener, respect, helpful
提示问题:·How did you communicate with others
·What have you learned from the experience
It is very important for us to get along with other people. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It is very important for us to get along with other people. It’s necessary to learn to communicate well wi